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Big painting

>> No.4327987

better than anything i could shit out this past week.

>> No.4327997

>>4327987
Thx!

Am I improving. This is a pretty big canvas. I am going bigger.

>> No.4328000

So?
I am getting REALLY good.

>> No.4328001

Unironically though I like you better than that MTP faggot and some other regulars who post here.

>> No.4328004

>>4328001
I am a good dude trying to make dope art. I think I am getting close. Y’all know my struggle.

>> No.4328025

waste of materials

>> No.4328123

>>4328025
Can you do better?....

I thought so. Stfu

>> No.4328140

>>4328123
not that guy but that was indeed a waste of materials, your art is shit.

>> No.4328144

>>4328140
Give me a critique

>> No.4328178

>>4328144
your edges are fucked, and the values are also fucked. Fromt he work I've seen you make I've noticed you always use too much earth colors (that's more of a personal preference) the background buildings would probably look better without the outlines, the hair was lazily done, you made her face look manly by using such strong tones and edges.

There's also some good things but if you want to actually improve you should probably make small paintings until you are able or willing to put some more effort to the paintings.

>> No.4328206

>>4328178
I am really trying to get better. Chunbum said it was my best painting. I want it to be but I am skeptical. The hair is the only thing I don’t agree with. That and the buildings. As far as the edges and values, what are some specifics? Her cheek IS too define. I need tutorials or something basic. As far as the loomis example, I am not trying to do that. My reference says otherwise.

>> No.4328736

>>4328206
Don't listen to them, illastrat. You tried to listen to these idiots before and your art lost its soul. This one of your best works. And your work will only get stronger and stronger as you go bigger. You will be able to play with composition, brushwork and texture more when you go even bigger.

Your art has something that these losers don't have, and it's soul and true original style.

Style and soul are everything in art. That's what moves people. Originality. You are trying to say something in your art through your original voice.

Maintain your line quality and choice of colors within your unique style, which has soul.

Listen to the people who actually know about art. I showed your work to my professor and he said your art reminded him of Walter Robinson. He said your work was very strong. He said your more "academic" paintings that ppl on ic said were good didn't have a soul but your older works (and newer works including this one) were very strong.

You keep your ship steady on the right course and you will make it big. These losers won't get anywhere by comparison. Their efforts are futile because they are shoving their head onto a concrete wall of a dead end. They had nothing to begin with and they won't have anything in the future. But you do.

>> No.4328745

>Being big means it's good
NGMI mentality in a nutshell.

>> No.4328750

>>4327944
Jesus fucking christ every time you post it just gives me aids. Not because your art is bad but because you fucking reply to yourself and act insecure and than get pissed when people don't compliment you. Just fuck off.

>> No.4328772

>>4328745
You misrepresented my opinion. Illastrat is limited by the small sizes of his canvas. He can't easily fit in a full figure or put the subject off center because there isn't enough space. His work will get stronger as he goes bigger because he can maintain his detail while adding narrative elements that couldn't be developed as strongly on a small canvas.

>>4328750
I am not illastrat. I am his friend. Stop deluding yourself into thinking illastrat would double post. His art is actually good. Your opinion is futile.

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>>4327944
I see your posts sometimes. I think the root of the problem is you diving into colours, composition, perspective, anatomy all at once. Why don't you really think about the stuff that you want to do and how to achieve it? Maybe the best way would be to gain more knowledge in drawing with a pencil the way peter han does, first a small preliminary sketch where you try to get the big shapes / proportions down and later on you refine it when you scale things up. Steve Huston once said that 90% of problems that you encounter in painting have a basis in the lack of understanding things in a drawing. If you focus on trying to achieve space with only lines and maybe some values, you could begin to understand your problems with painting.
cheers

>> No.4328829

>>4328807
He already makes good art. He doesn't need to sketch. Everyone has different ways of making.

The fact that you think of illastrat as an amateur makes me think you are an amateur and you don't know what is good art, as in fine art. You probably understand art as far as mere illustrations or cartoons. Stop lecturing illastrat. His art is already good and he is improving at a pace that he is comfortable with.

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>>4328829
who the fuck are you? his lawyer or something? He wanted an opinion on his art and I gave it. fuck off retard, you sound pretentious and lame. His art could be better. With a deeper understanding of reality you can manipulate it better. Hiding behind 'lol muh style' is cringy as fuck and do not try to say that you could draw it differently than you did. You cannot because you don't understand the subject you are drawing. My advice was sound. The background is weird and out of whack, the colours are jarring, the hair is lazy, the birds are symbols, the clouds arent convincing, the values are wrong, both hands are hidden, the signature is way too big and sloppy etc etc

this is a preliminary sketch for an idea I'm working on. Now you show me your art please

>> No.4328891

>>4328862
Yeah a sketch is all you will do all your life.

I am not going to show you my art because I must protect my identity.

He totally understands the subject and he has executed the concept and style very well. You are the only one who can't understand art with a soul. Sorry but your art lacks a soul.

I love his clouds. They are moving in a flurry by the fast winds that promise to liberate the woman and the artist (illastrat). The color choices are solid. They are very rich and beautiful. Your opinion is wacky. No one should listen to you.

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>>4328891
yeah you know what. you are an imposter and a faggot, you are illastrat. I will never again give my opinion to you, you do not deserve to hear it. Your professor is lying to you kid, your so called 'fine art' is a weak attempt at trying to convince people you are deep and artistic. Your art sucks dick man I'm sorry, it's trashy, kitschy and poorly executed. How many paintings did you sell kid? Come on now, don't be a bitch and show me your art faggot. Oh that's right, I already saw it and it blows. A sketch is all I will do in my life? Watch me, retard.

MUH SOUL LMOAAAA... go hide your shit or burn it or something. learn some perspective at least, jesus christ. it's blatantly obvious you are lost. I tried to help you but no more. Go choke on your own arrogance. This is my last post

>> No.4328915

>>4328908
I am in school. Illastrat is not in school. Stop deluding yourself. Your opinion is worthless and your art isn't great.

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>>4328908
To add to this, sketches are one of the most important steps in creating complex, thought-out and appealing paintings. My last post

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>>4327944

>> No.4328935

>>4328918
That's your way of working and I can tell it's not working all that great for you.

There are more organic ways of working where there is a feedback effect between the artist painting and the artist looking. But you wouldn't know.

Be quiet now. It's supposed to be your last post.

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>>4328935
Yeah you know what. I thought you were gonna be a man and show me your 'fine art'. I see nothing but an arrogant kid trying to bully people into his way of thinking. Show me your art coward so I can spit on it online. But you won't. You be quiet you arrogant, sheltered, pretentious piece of shit, if you would act to me this way on the street I would knock you the fuck out. Just because nobody punched you in your life does not mean nobody ever will

>> No.4328965

>>4328954
dude why are u wastin ur time and nerves on someone who just dont want to put in the real work to improve in art.

>> No.4328971

>>4328954
You are supposed to have shut the hell up.

I fought with 6 men who tried to sell their dumb CDs to me. A punch doesn't mean anything when you or your thuggish friends who know nothing about art will get pummeled with my leg shoving endlessly between your two legs. Just shut up you talentless thug. Illastrat's art is good.

>> No.4328980

>>4328965
you are right man, I got worked up over a nobody

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>>4328954
Dude. You are not good but I’ll take your criticism. I am not a ignorant douche. Lately I have been seriously trying to get better.

What do you think of one of my latest works?

>> No.4329021

>>4327997
When did you start?

>> No.4329073

>>4329021
I’ve been creating art all my life, I’ve been acrylic painting 2 years, oil for 7. I drop out of art school my junior year. I went to art high school, and I took a few private courses. I was in an art enrichment course in elementary school.

>> No.4329078

>>4328920
I paint black people

>> No.4329291

>>4329078
So this is why everyone treats you like this.
then only difference in shading a black person vs a white person is that the mid-tone is darker.

>> No.4329299

>>4329007
>I am not a ignorant douche
hhahahahahaha is that why you tell everyone who tells you the truth that theyre racist you moron

>> No.4329317

>Incorrectly placed and disproportionate abhorrent facial features
>Faces look like made of wax and butter
>Everything that isn't a face has just a flat color
>Crude techinque all around
>Absolutely terrible choice of colors in every single part
>Every single time
As a black artist I'm offended you going all the way of confirming every single stereotype by refusing to take good advice on all the issues you have and keep playing the race card while being obnoxious as fuck

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>>4329291
I am saying I don’t know how to apply this to a nigga. Believe me I been working on my values—heeding what y’all say. The simplification is not going to be all “light” like the example. I don’t know what I am doing wrong? Also, I try to paint what I see from the reference. That is what I see. Some of the values ARE off. Instead of posting loomis tutorial and tips, teach me to a) see better and b) translate what I see. I hit a plateau for a minute but since switching to acrylic I am getting good quick (I think). I thank y’all for telling me how I’ve erred but if I am stuck you are going to have to elaborate. I don’t have someone here to coach me anymore. Again, I am just painting what I see. Thanks for the criticism. Also, I will never paint like Sargent or da vinci. I just want to build my own language. That’s my appeal. The dude who posted in my defense IS kind of right. I am so far from kitsch that at my best I am pushing the avant garde. Respect that.

>> No.4329332

>>4329317
You sound like you are trolling so I am just going to ignore you. Have a less condescending tone with redline and I will listen. I didnt call anyone racist. I could give a fuck if you were. If you want to help me out prove it. Or else I will ignore you. My legacy is at stake. It not global and national than just local.

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>>4329323

>> No.4329784

>>4328178
You sound like someone who just knows Anime and comic illustration and doesn't understand contemporary or modern art much.

>> No.4329785

>>4328736
Most of the art in here is more about illustration.

>> No.4329788

>>4328807
The colours are perfect.

>> No.4329792

>>4327944
Your drawing is better but I believe you are making things too defined in places with edges that are not as defined. Pleas don’t try to stylize. For instance, you can somewhat get away with painting the nose from the correct angle symbolically as what you know how a nose looks, but not the cheek as it merges with the jaw. The transition is too subtle to try to make a cheek and the a jaw.
Let this painting (op) be your underpainting and now make your edges softer where they need to be.
You are getting better so keep it up.
But I agree with the one poster...the hair makes this look amateurish. Sorry dude. You can do better.
I read Sargent taught to put the LEAST amount of info as possible to suggest hair.
Anyway, good luck.

>> No.4329793

>>4328920
That's advice is more aimed at illustration than modern and contemporary art.

>> No.4329799

>>4329317
It's not meant to be illustration.

You should look at artists like Klimt for example.

>> No.4329909

>>4329792
How should I do the hair?

>> No.4329912

>>4329767
I obviously didn’t blend for a reason. That’s one criticism I am not gonna accept

>> No.4329922

>>4329912
you dont accept any criticism faggot who gives a shit

>> No.4329926

>>4329793
what a retarded comment

>> No.4329931

>>4328736

Kill yourself Chunbum, your art is even worse than illastrat's and that's saying something.

>> No.4329932

>>4329922
I am open to listen if it’s legit criticism.

>> No.4329936

>>4329932
yeah but to you nothing you dont like is legit, just compliments

>> No.4329941

>>4328862

He is Chunbum Park, another notorious /ic/ namefag who can't draw or paint worth shit, but defends his trash with that he goes to some expensive art school and that his professors kiss his ass. Which of course they would, don't bite the hand that feeds you, etc. Cumbum has taken up the role of illastrat's autistic protector because they are both terrible artists and unlike the hoity toity art professors, /ic/ calls shit art for what it is: shit.

>> No.4329943

>>4329941
this 1000%

>> No.4329950

>>4329936
Isn’t that the nature of art. I ain’t gonna agree to every criticism. Telling me to blend (poorly in fact) is like telling Renoir , Monet, or Van Gogh to blend. That would sabotage the nature of the art. Obviously it was intentional. Y’all criticized my edges and I agreed.

>> No.4329953

>>4329950
forst of all you dumb cunt renault monet and vangogh all blended, secondly YOURE NOT THEM youre a fucking beginner with a massive ego who thinks he knows more than people better than him and so you ARGUE with fucking facts, so sit down and shut the fuck up.

>> No.4329957

>>4329953
The tone of your comments let me know you aren’t here to help me.

>> No.4329960

>>4329957
the tone of my comments lets you know i think youre a cunt faggot. the content of my comments is reality

>> No.4329962

>>4329960
How are u an authority on art? You are not here to help me. You just want to put me down.

>> No.4329964

>>4329962
god youre so stupid im way better than you, do you even know what this website is? why dont you fuck off to reddit if you want mommy to hold your hand. you came here and every two weeks you make your own thread to post your shit art, ignore all board culture, ignore all /ic/ unwritten rules, dont bother to even try to learn and then act like a child. fuck off, your girlfriend sucks too. maybe humble yourself and stop talking back and people would want to help you theres a reason youre a joke here

>> No.4329966

>>4329964
Cool

>> No.4329967

>>4329966
wrong again

>> No.4330013

>>4329953
And yet there is other art with lots of impastonthat doesn't blend.

>> No.4330033

>>4329964
>ignore all board culture
the culture that says you must be a 15 year old shit poster to be able to make threads? or you must at least this bitter about twitter/instagram/youtuber to make threads? have fun gate keeping this shit hole.

>> No.4330047

>>4330013
Thx

>> No.4330049

>>4330033
Agreed

>> No.4330056

>>4330049

Then please fuck off and take your chink boyfriend with you.

>> No.4330082

>>4330049
oh you agree with someone who's defending your shit threads shocking

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I worked o the cheek which was the main problem.

>> No.4330174

>>4329792
Thx!

Working on it. How should I do the hair? Like you quoted, I don’t want too much info.

>> No.4330369

>>4330174
Stop talking to these toxic losers who can't draw or paint. Their brains are too small to understand expressionism.

>> No.4330378

>>4330369
You know, I checked out the draw thread and I was thoroughly underwhelmed. Maybe you are right. Maybe I should go elsewhere and be great. My Are is fickle. Either you don’t get it and it seem like the worst thing on earth or it blows your mind away...like Van Gogh.

These niggaz got the gall to talk shit with the draw thread looking like it looks. Have you seen it?

>> No.4330381

>>4329007
Serious question, do you really not see the mistakes you're doing?

>> No.4330383

>>4330378
you suck dude the only people praising you are people who suck as well. you are technically bad at drawing and painting. and dont give me that "well I's dont want to be no good at technical art, the people i pay to compliment me at art school say im good"

you assume you can just jump from point A to point Z and delude yourself because you dont understand the fundamentals enough to abstract them successfully like the artists you look up to.

>> No.4330388

>>4330381
If I did, why would I ask for criticism? Nobody sees their mistakes dum dum. If we did we would be da vinci level. We all are not.

>> No.4330392

>>4330383
These idiots think that making a rocket engine requires a mastery of bicycle gear. They are going to try to master the bicycle all their meaningless lives.. illastrat ignore them and do what you do. Make the rocket engines that will propel you to the stars

>> No.4330396

>>4330392
post your work right now lets see you put your money where your mouth is.

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>>4330383

Lol...4chan is not some elite, credible guild. Most of us suck. Have you seen the draw thread. Also, artists I look up to aren’t technical artists. If you ARE a technical artist or strive for higher technicality, you probably will not like my art. It’s not for u.

Also...FYI, my art is not a technical achievement. But it’s got a reasonable level of technicality. You just can’t see it because you have been fogged by academia.

>> No.4330402

>>4330392

I hope you die of the Wu flu, Chunbum

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>>4330388
False, people can often see that something is wrong, but they don't know what. When you show the same level of skill and no improvement, it's a sign of retardation.

Your main problem is that you're painting in symbols, not only the facial features but the colors are symbols too.

Look at the old masters and see how they use color, see how the palette is limited to maybe two-three colors.

You are also painting like a child, just adding in blocks of color with no underpainting. I see no plan in your paintings.

>> No.4330411

>>4330398
take the eyes for example, they're completely flat and the sclera is painted with a white paint, are you retarded, do you not see the problem? You also add white blobs (on the skin too) to signalise a highlight, this is a beginners/child's mistake.

>> No.4330419

>>4330398
Deluded, making average the Joe believe that their art is worth seeing has been art's downfall. Even the person who doomed us with the current state of art was a prodigy, almost all contemporary art and modern art is Kitsch level of shit.

Your art is shit, not because of your artstyle or because I don't get it, it's shit because it isn't appealing to my eyes because of your lack of more technical abilities that just make your "art" school project tier.

>> No.4330422

>>4330404
>>4330411
These idiots think rendering and layering are everything and it's still 1523. It's 2020 for God's sake. Stop thinking your outdated concept of art will get you anywhere. I promise you won't get anywhere. I promise.

>> No.4330428

>>4330404
Lol...idgaf about the old masters, I don’t like the old masters, I think their shit is VERY boring...they are camera obscura using faggots. To compare my art to there’s is retarded on YOUR part. Obviously I am not pursuing them. Give me the techniques of Van Gogh, Basquiat, Miro, Matisse, he’ll even Frida. I want to do something different than tracing on canvas and using seats like the “masters.” To me, they were the ones that sucked because they could break out of realism—conservative faggots. Tell me something that could enhance me expressionistically other than nigga I don’t even want to paint like.

>> No.4330436

>>4330422
nobody is hiring people only capable of doing children's art to design videogame worlds, the only way you can make a living by making degenerate art today is by getting an art degree and becoming a teacher in one of these schools teaching degenerate art. In other words, the chance is slim. If you instead learn from the old masters and realise hard work is the only way to get better you can make it.

>> No.4330439

>>4330428
work better on the bait, you almost had me.

My art teacher in middle school told me "mountains are not nigger tits with cream on top".

Take his advice.

>> No.4330447

>>4330436
That’s not true. My art is huge throughout my city and we have a vibrant art scene fill with people that actually bite off of me. When I post on this site I love for ways to make my art better. Not more realistic dummy. Chunbum actually is good at giving this type advice.

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>thinking so highly of himself
>expect to be praised based on effort and not results
>not accepting criticism
>this >>4330428

My God this guy makes me laugh

>> No.4330466

>>4330462
I accept criticism but y’all are obviously lost.

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>>4330466
>thinking that he accepts criticism

>> No.4330472

>>4330466
so arrogant that youre unable to accept that youre the one in the wrong here. if 20 people are telling you the same thing maybe everyone else isnt wrong, its you

>> No.4330482

>>4330472
The grounds are unjust. On a board where I am repeatedly called a nigger, draw thread is complete ASS and the fact non of y’all take your art seriously , how can ANYONE take y’all fucking serious. This board is incredulous, ignorant, and unlearned. I draw AND paint better that most of y’all regardless. Absolutely deplorable.

>> No.4330492

>>4330482
baby gonna cry? did the meanies call you names?

> I draw AND paint better that most of y’all regardless.

hahahhahahahahaha most artists here are shit and youre STILL a meme here because youre worse

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>>4330482
>calls /ic/ "incredulous, ignorant, and unlearned"
>posts there anyway

Also
>thinks he paints good
>posts ugly shit

And also
>justifies his lack of skill by muh style and muh expressionism
>painting doesn't even express shit

Do it again, do it again!

>> No.4330513

>>4330503
I’ll art battle any of y’all.

>> No.4330521

>>4330513
hey remember when you posted a piece of shit attempt at painting a girl and I asked for the reference and then made a way better version in 15 minutes?' Remember how your only reply was "Fuck you" and then you left?
Because I remember. Anyway if anybody took you up on this and BTFO'd you all you would do is go "W-well m-my art has more Black Soul!!!!!!" like a bitch sore loser

>> No.4330527

I hope all y’all die of the coronavirus. I am out

>> No.4330528

>>4330527
run bitch

>> No.4330543

>>4329799
Have you seen klimts early work? He isn't a master for nothing, he made classicist paintings before doing is art nouvau stuff, he could draw a human body with eyes, closed, using him as an excuse to this artwork is not the best

>> No.4330554

>>4330521
do you have a picture of this? I want to see it

>> No.4330555

>>4329950
I'm sorry, but how can you say you are bordering avant gard if you use examples from centuries past? The thing is the paintings in here seems to evoque a kinda mix between Basquiat and those kitschy paintings of 70s afro art... Nothing that really stands out in the modern art world, at least europeanly speaking

>> No.4330566

>>4330555
Well it’s not meant for you

>> No.4330594

>>4330566
Yes but it still is passé

>> No.4330598

>>4330594
Your mommas pussy is passé faggot

>> No.4330612

>>4330598
Dude I'm not disrespecting you in either way, just stating an opinion. also learn to be humble, listen to all the shit that everyone tells you, it can be shit, but you can turn it to originality...

I'm sorry but this style isn't really something new, you can make fresher art, but you need to take your head out of your ass.

I do agree with you, that anatomically, perfect realism isn't really the way to go in the modern art scene... But your stuff lacks life, seems what it is, an attempt of copying a photo painterly with a Basquiat backgroubd

>> No.4330639

>>4330612
Thx

>> No.4330673

>>4330566
>ITS NOT MEANT FOR YOU

LOL
THE FUCKING EXCUSES THIS GUY JUST CHURNS OUT

>> No.4330972

>>4330673
The power of being disillusioned

>> No.4330978

>>4330673
This guy is comedy gold, I tell you

>> No.4331123

>>4330404
You think three colours can't just as easily be clung to as "mah style" as a full palette of 6-8?

>> No.4331211

>>4327944
you are a nigger
the white man enslaved your ancestors souls to the devil and that is why you cannot paint.

>> No.4331222

>>4327944
Size?

You are improving, so a pat on the back for actually posting work. But the term "used canvas" comes to mind.

Keep trying.

>> No.4331234

>>4331222
I am not sure how big. It’s impressive.


What do u mean by “used canvas”

>> No.4331280

>>4329073
>9 years painting
OK man, I thought you were a beginer like me, you should have gotten better by now, but Im not going to just criticize you, let me tell you something useful:

this and other works you posted look like they are based on a photograph, not natural, distorted like a phone camera would distort the person, and then you painted based on the photograph/
So just take better photos, and don't paint celebrities, just don't

>> No.4331308

>>4330521
Post for the lulz

>> No.4331318

>>4331280
When I paint or submit for a criticism, I ask, “what could make this photo BETTER?” Y’all think I am asking “how to make it more technical or realistic.” There is a great disconnect on what y’all think is good art and what I think is good art. None of y’all are going to make it simply y’all are painting an application that takes four years to learn IF you have a Knat. What I am doing is looking for a higher truth. When I ask “what can make this painting better” I am speaking in terms of an idiosyncratic asethetic. As far as me being a beginner, beginners don’t paint like me. I am an anomaly. Simply it will be harder for you to understand what I do than grasp academic art—the epitome of kitsch. My suggestion is learn to innovate and don’t fall in to the trap of these overt racists.

>> No.4331437

>>4331318
No, actually. I did not expect more technical stuff and definitely not looking for realism, where is the style?

If anything you should move away from "trying" for realism because it is not your thing, it is also, not the thing you want anyway, look at the thumbnails of your art, maybe squint a little, they look like someone trying to copy a photo in a realistic way but failed, smudged dirty color mixes and shadows in weir places.

Stylize more, move away from that shitty photo look, don't stress about realistic shading or anything, it is YOUR world, make something beautifol on it, doesn't matter if it will look like a black lady in real life, as long as it is one in your mind.

>> No.4331441

>>4331437
And to add to that, if whatever you end up with is criticised for the subject matter or anything related to race, yeah you can dismiss their opinion, but that is not what you got here (mostly)

And more importantly, keep painting even if you change everything, it's still you, and you are an artist.

>> No.4331449

>>4331318
Bruh you're painting mediocre portraits of niggers, there's no "higher truth" there.

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>>4331318
HE'S TRYING TO JUSTIFY HIMSELF BY THROWING IN LARGE WORDS NOW OH MAN

>>4331437
>>4331441
HE EVEN MADE HIS OWN POSTS BACKING HIMSELF UP, IT SOUNDS JUST LIKE HIM LIKE HE'S NOT EVEN TRYING TO CONCEAL THE FACT

I CAN'T TAKE IT ANYMORE, THIS GUY'S SUCH A JOKE JESUS

>> No.4331463

>>4331437
You are stupid. For the past 5 years on this site y’all stressed that I climbed onto what y’all said “muh style.” My older work was so stylized that y’all claimed I was using it as a crutch. Today, yes, I am striving for MORE “realistic” style. But, ultimately I am looking for great art, not cookie cutter photorealism. Every body ain’t gonna paint like Da Vinci but I buy my canvas and paint. You can tell me not to paint whatever but I do not have to listen. You faggots are some of the most racist, delude, untalented faggots I’ve ever chatted with. No, my art isn’t perfect. But it’s my art. If you can’t tell what I am striving for by now after my 5 years on this site don’t critique. I have certain habits that are constant in my art that I am not willing to break. I just want people to help me achieve a expressionistic standard. Anything else I don’t care. Yes I want a few technical tips but like I said, I will NEVER be Da Vinci and I don’t want to. If all you care about is realism fuck off.

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>>4331441
Most of y’all harbor the sentiment that blacks are lesser artists or y’all are overtly racist. Truth is most of y’all arent even good/better than me. That is the 4 Chan secret. Get off my styles nuts. I have the most soul on 4 chan.

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>>4331450
He did do that alter ego backing him up angle earlier in the thread but this time it was actually me, I really don't think he should be hellbent on realism quietly in his mind, producing this pieces and pretending NOT to strive for realism, it's a shame because he has the drive to actually pick up a brush and see a painting throug, he is an artist, wheter we like his art or not, I JUST HAPPEN TO THINK HE SHOULD SPEND HIS TIME ON A STYLE THAT FITS HIS NEEDS AND ABILITIES, RESULTING IN SOMETHING MORE BEAUTIFUL FOR EVERYONE.
But just look at the answer he gave me, treating me like a retard even though I tried to actually help him.
(Caps bcuz he is listening close by)

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>>4331463
Fuck, man, he's trying to disagree with himself to show that the other guy isn't him

But I'm going to try to be a bit serious for now.

Look, I don't think you get what's going on with all these standards and why people keep telling you to study the classical masters.

I think pic related is something that /ic/ would agree is good, and is something that we're actually after. It's not classical but it does show great technical skill.

I agree with you, classical masters' works are boring. but that doesn't mean that they have nothing to teach -- it's the opposite, even. The trick is to see beyond the boring things they are and appreciate everything it's trying to accomplish rather than just throwing it away without processing it.

You're like those animefags who only want to do anime, except you're not into anime. Your arguments are just as dumb and you don't want to work hard into nailing realism before straying away from it. Stfu, your work is mediocre, no one cares if your shitty little town or your shitty little inner circle likes your work, your "higher truth" doesn't exist beyond your delusional supportive friends.

Yes, 4chan is racist. Yes, they'll say works with black people are trash. But your work happens to be trash irregardless of the black person you're painting. You don't have the technical skill to pull off whatever it is you're trying to do, which is why everyone is saying so, even if they are racists. So stop being in denial and start listening to them, except if they start talking about black people.

I'm going to say it once again, shut up about being expressive, shut up about the "higher truth", shut up about whatever bullshit you spewed here >>4331318. Your works have none of it and you're never going to achieve any of it if you don't first learn how the real world works visually.

Now give me something to laugh at again.

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>>4331494
Nigga. That’s what I been doing. That HATE everything I dish out. You are talking about somebody that sells art for hundreds of dollars consistently meaning it has value. No, for THIS particular painting I want to be more realistic but this is the FIRST painting I’ve ever shown on this site where I’ve done such. These people HATE me.

But yeah, I am gonna get a sketch pad and brush up.

Ps: you’d be surprised how technical my art is if y’all actually knew what y’all talk about. But y’all all are future failed artists limited by yalls lack of soul.

>> No.4331512

>>4331502
You see, I think that “paint” you posted is sterile, boring, horrible and if I ever had to paint like that because my academic background destroyed my art appreciation I would consider my career a failure. Like, all that shit y’all be posting is CRAP in my book. With that being said, I will be drawing more but I stay in my lane. You call me mediocre but if what you posted is considered good art by this site I would say that it’s advantageous for me to say in MY LANE. Post some Van Gogh—infinitely better than ANYTHING y’all post.

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>>4331463
BRO!
Listen here you little shit, I did not tell you you suck or that your art is shit, I did not come to this thread to see what was up, I did not come looking for a fun time or to demoralise you and you don't even know what race I am so what the fuck is up with that, why say that when responding to me?

YOUR ART IS STILL VALID AND YOU SHOULD KEEP DOING IT IF YOU ENJOY IT AND WANT TO GIVE IT TO THE WORLD

BUT YOU ASKED FOR WAYS TO IMPROVE and OPINIOS!!
YOU ABSOLUTE SHIT FOR BRAINS, INSTEAD OF DELETING YOUR ART FIND SOME BLEACH AND DELETE YOURSELF YOU NARCISSISTIC, GOD COMPLEX-HAVING LITTLE DEFENSIVE FAGGOT.

IF YOU EVER WONDERED WHY SOME DON'T MAKE IT, IT'S BECAUSE THEY ARE LIKE YOU. IT IS NOT YOUR WORK, IT IS NOT YOUR PERSONAL LIFE, IT'S THE FACT THAT YOU THINK YOU ARE A GOD AND ARE SOOO OVER LEARNING ANYTHING.
SO YOU POST THIS THREADS TO DO WHAT EXACTLY?? YOU ARE ONLY GOING TO TELL EVERYONE IN HERE TO FUCK OFF AND THAT THEY ARE UNTALENTED "HATERS" AND RACIST (?) FOR SOME GODDAMNED REASON.

YOU ARE NOT THE PERFECT EMBODIMENT OF ART THAT YOU THINK YOU ARE, GET YOUR HEAD OUT OF YOUR ASS, BECAUSE YOU KEEP THIS UP AND YOU WILL NEVER FIND ANY SATISFACTION, WE ARE NOT GOING TO BUILD YOU A GOLDEN STATUE AND NAME YOU EMPEROR OF AFRICA.

"bUt yOu dOn't uNdErStAnD, i aM ThE OnE AnD TrUe oNlY InNoVaToR In aLl oF HuMaNiTy, I DeSeRvE It "

SHUT UP!!!
"Y'all just jealous of my success and painting superiority"
SHUT THE FUCK UUPPP!!!!!
GET THE FUCK OUT OF THIS BOARD, THIS IS SUPPOSED TO BE FOR PEOPLE THAT CAN ACTUALLY GIVE A SHIT ABOUT GETTING BETTER, NOT TO RECEIVE UNIVERSAL PRIDE.

"But I changed once and people still told me I needed to improve further!"

COMMIT MASS SUICIDE!!


Have a nice day.

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>>4331514
this guy is being supportive and even he is sick of your shit

>> No.4331523

>>4331514
>>>4331503
>Hey I like this one, the only thing I would add is some sort of backdrop, not really much needed, but a world for the head to exist, maybe suggest a window, or a lamp next to the person, either way that portrait is good, has soul, unlike awkward beyonce up there.

See? I am not trying to hate, still raged tho

>> No.4331526

>>4331514
One thing....I am a god.


....so are you.

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>>4331526
I have never needed so many of these laughing memes oh my God

>> No.4331528

>>4331503
you look at the old masters and say "boring". You do not realise what makes them masters, they could create something timeless and beautiful with very few strokes, because they are in full control, unlike you who hides behind "style".

When you can look at painting from 500 years ago and feel like it was painted yesterday or 500 years from now, you are dealing with a master.

I see a hopeful future because there are many talents today who are trying to learn from the eternal and not some degenerate art movement who set us back 1000 years

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>>4331523
How do u know it’s Beyoncé?


Also, that is one of my oil paintings. I am just learning acrylic.

>> No.4331538

>>4327944
Can we just ban this baiting shit already.

>> No.4331558

>>4331529
This painting has soul, realism did not hold you back, and it helped in the parts you needed, i like it.

And I know the other one is beyonce because you got parts of her, I don't think any particular part, just the combination of them, the problem?
imo it feels like you treated it like a glamour shot or a magazine cover, something to show her fans. That is what it feels like, maybe you stuck too closely to a photo reference and the background feels like a set piece for said photoshoot. All those things can be fixed without changing your style, just give her something else, something a camera couldn't do.

PS. I struggle with backgrounds because I start focusing on the person/char, then by the time I start coloring and rendering I have a flat background, so it's best to have the whole concept in mind in the initial process, it may change during the making, but it will be better than starting with the character or person in front of nothing

>> No.4331567

>>4331503
>>4331529
Are these 2 acrylics? Then I think that is your forte, keep it up

>> No.4331571

>>4331558
Thx! I don’t know if you are new but there is a racist agenda on this site. I am underestimated, ridiculed and insulted on a consistent basis. As for my art, I’ve been oil painting for 7 years. The ones you like are oil painting. Believe it or not, acrylic has been a struggle. Niggas on 4chan love to hate me because I challenge their racists sentiments. However I am in the top 10 percent.

Keep your backgrounds basic mane. Painting should be fun.

>> No.4331629

>>4331571
I recommend you try Gouache some time, and skip acrylics, imo they are good for drawings and old school animation but not for painting, i liked that they dry fast and that you can paint a color on top of the other without it mixing, but gouache is like that, except it also works like watercolor and it blends too if you want it too.

I get it about the racist words, I am not new but I am not a regular of this particular board and well, at least the focus was on your artwork, even if both parties came here with the mindset of past threads by you, you read everything as coming from a racist 13 year old, and they come here expecting you to bait or get confrontational, if we can get anything out of this thread is that doesn't have to be tha case.

>> No.4331641

>>4330521
I remember. post it

>> No.4331713

>>4331503
I'm really new to /ic/, been here for 2 weeks or whatever, so I believe I can say something without being tainted with the 4chan culture (this is the thread where I was presented with your work).

You say you posted this 5 years ago, and you are an abnormality in terms of painting, but the truth is you really didn't improve much between 5 years (I understand this work is oils and the other is acrylics, but it still doesn't excuse you from being this shitty)

Before you say I am an anime fag or an illustration guy, I am not, actually one of my recent works was in acrylics in that kinda impasto way you're painting

>> No.4331717

Imagine referring to /ic/ in your artist bio
https://aspiringartists.fandom.com/wiki/Chauncey_Covington_(Illastrat)

>> No.4331729

>>4331629
>but not for painting,
disagree. acrylics are the most versatile, you can use them like watercolour, or really thick. why buy a dozen different mediums when this one works in so many places. because colour shift? gouache has that too. because dries glossy? get a brand that dries matte. blending? get a medium that keeps them open longer. or learn to dry blend.

>> No.4331741

>>4331717
What the fuck is that wiki? How the fuck does a guy like this get to have a page? Do you write your own entry?

>> No.4331744

>>4331717
Also I love how he keeps saying that the problem /ic/ has with him is that he paints black people, while everyone here is just saying that he sucks lmao

>> No.4331747

>>4331729
I agree with you, you can use a wide variety of acrylic paints, from ink to acrylic gouache, you can blend it easily if you want>>4331717

>> No.4331760

>>4331729
Yeah you are right, they just dry way too fast for me, and while I like blending colors and then applying them, blending on the piece itself works better in other mediums, if you like acrylics do acrylics, it is not the tool after all, it is the mind using it

>> No.4331764

>>4331741
>https://aspiringartists.fandom.com/wiki/Chauncey_Covington_(Illastrat)
All written by Cumbum, same as the stuff ABOUT Cumbum on there, I'd imagine.
i.e. bloody nonsense.

>> No.4331772

>>4331764
Imagine having to make a wiki for yourself and your friends to keep your ego in check

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>>4331713
If I was painting at a certain level then all of a sudden had a marked decrease in are quality upon switching to acrylic, what does that tell you? The mediums are not transmutable. Some are easier to grasp than others for certain people. You see one painting by me that is a work in progress and you automatically write me off. What is wrong with that culture?

>> No.4332099

>>4332092
I can paint the same painting in oils, or acrylic, and you couldn't tell the difference or which is which. You'll tell me to PYW but it's dark here and tomorrow I'll see about taking a photo of them side by side.
A poor craftsman always blames his tools.

>> No.4332127

>>4332099
Nigga that’s you. A novice bowler can’t bowl a perfect game his first time.

>> No.4332129

>>4332092
Dude you've posted in here a bunch of work, so no, they're not work in progress. I'm the one who posted the wiki link, so I've seen a bunch of your work, to be honest I really don't see any difference between acrylics and oils, learn new techniques, apply values and stop copying from photos... The lack of soul comes from that

>> No.4332133

>>4332099
I'm pretty sure that wouldn't be the case if you only did one medium for years and then did a little bit in another medium.

>> No.4332140

>>4329323
>Believe me I been working on my values—heeding what y’all say.
Regardless of what your artistic progress is looking like, at least you seem to have progressed on a personal level. I'm proud that you take criticism nowadays.

>> No.4332144

>>4329784
If it looks like a sick tranny, walks like a sick tranny and painted like a sick tranny than it is probably a portrait of a sick tranny and not a woman. Contemporary, modern or anime doesn't matter if everyone who looks at the painting a man in a dress.

>> No.4332149

>>4330157
Why do you use white highlights on the face? When all the other ones are yellow, and your light source is yellow too.

>> No.4332167

>>4331478
Alphonso Dunn is a good artist. You are not. No one gives a fuck about your skin colour until you start flaunting it here. It's a fucking anonymous board.

>> No.4332199

>>4332149
Because I wanted to. It’s not finished

>> No.4332241

>>4332127
You've been painting longer than me, AND apparently you have soul, so what is your excuse now?

>> No.4332244

>>4332133
But I hardly ever paint in acrylic. That's because I find them pretty annoying with the value shift, but I can still get the same results if I want to.

>> No.4332248

>>4329784
Wrong, I've never drawn anime or comic illustrations I paint whatever I want, for someone to be a good modern/contemporary artist he needs to know about art since a lot of it is based in the deconstruction of it. But how are you going to deconstruct something you aren't good at or understand?

>> No.4332252

>>4332199
How can you ask for criticism, when someone actually gives you constructive criticism and feedback, and the first thing you say is "I wanted to fuck up everything because I wanted to"

>> No.4332394

>>4331514

Incredibly based and critique-pilled.

>> No.4334308
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Is this better

>> No.4334330

>>4334308
Hey it's me your friend. It's worse now. It doesn't have the aggressive experimental quality that it used to have. Stop trying to appease these idiots here! Be courageous about your own style!

>> No.4334344

>>4334330
I got you. However, I was trying to make something less experimental. I spent 8 hours on the face to create something aesthetically pleasing and not innovative. I understand what you are saying though. But that’s not the point.

>> No.4334745

>>4334308
Looks better.
>>4334330
Just because you're claiming to be his 'friend', doesn't give you the right to boss him about. Guy's trying to achieve what HE wants, not be experimental to placate airheads like you.

>> No.4334772

>>4334745
It’s cool. I was unsatisfied with the experimental look so I changed it to more “aesthetic.” I can’t placate everyone. There are two camps. I think it’s cool that I have dexterity between the two.

>> No.4334781

>>4327944
Why would you ask for opinions here?

Most of the users are shut in cunts that would rather shit on people than encourage them?

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>>4334308
Yes, this is definitely a step in the right direction if you're going for aesthetics. There's a couple changes I would make:

>The form of her nose is a bit confusing due to how high up on the tip the dark shadow is. Bringing it down and adding some highlight on the tip will make the form more apparent.

> Outside of extreme lighting situations, sudden dark/light transitions can make a face feel more blocky than it would be in reality. Smoothing out some of those transitions (esp on the lit side of the face) helps the figure feel more soft/feminine

>Nasolabial folds aren't traditionally considered beautiful and many women are actually pretty self-conscious about them. You don't have to ignore them entirely but if you're going for beauty I would play down the contrast in that area so as to not make it a dominant feature of the face.

Hopefully those comments are useful to you, they're pretty small changes over all. I actually like some of the more experimental work you posted in this thread more. You've improved a lot over time and should be proud of yourself.

>> No.4334827

I’m not going to lie OP, but this isn’t nice or interesting for a few reasons.

>it looks like a man. The face is not aesthetically pleasing for a beautiful woman of any standard

>the background is outlines and symbols as if a child drew it

>hiding hands

The best part of the painting is unironically the clouds.

Pack it up, use reference from photos and artists and keep trying OP. You’re not a lost cause

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did a quick paintover hope you dont mind

>> No.4334834

>>4334828
yikes

>> No.4334842

>>4331318
>When I paint or submit for a criticism, I ask, “what could make this photo BETTER?” Y’all think I am asking “how to make it more technical or realistic.” There is a great disconnect on what y’all think is good art and what I think is good art.

why the fuck do you ask for criticism on this board then you dickhead

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>>4334834
srry a bit big

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>>4327944
Wow!

You're improving so much. You are doing such a good job. You have so much work I bet you could probably attend a local art show and try selling your paintings. I'm pretty sure you could do that online, too, but I think it would be interesting if you tried.

Also, I think the only issue I am having is with the background, a bit. Look at what happened after I turned your image grayscale. the green and red are literally the same tone. That means that the read as the same thing. For all that you could have just made the background one single color and gotten the same effect. In fact I would argue the tones of the background match her skintone at times.

Playing with the tones, not just color, would give you way more depth into your paintings. This would create a visual hierarchy for your viewer which would help them enjoy your work even more and give them much more depth. Such as if you have a dark green try something lighter that would stand out from it.

One more issue is that big ball of light. While I do understand that you want that to be the sun as it's pouring light onto her, I find it to be kinda distracting. You need another area in the painting equally as bright to balance that out. Those could have been her highlights or even her outfit and/or jewelry.

I would recommend taking some of your favorite artists work and turn them grayscale to see how they play with tone. Hell, take your own works, turn them gray to see how you play with it. I would definitely recommend doing some black and white studies to help you learn more about how to tackle tones and values.

>> No.4334868

>>4330157
Her face looks way better here.

>> No.4334877

terrible

>> No.4335284

>>4334877
?

Can I get a FULL critique

>> No.4335288

>>4334811
Thanks. That helps out a lot.

>> No.4335289

>>4334843
That looks scary. No offense

>> No.4335313

>>4334866
Thx

>> No.4335314

>>4334827
The hands are hidden in the reference

>> No.4335318

>>4327944
you stopped doing the weird dotting shit so I guess its better

>> No.4335321

>>4328920
what book is this from?

>> No.4335328

>>4335318
heh, that was/is Cumbum, his mate.
>>4335321
Famous artists course, I believe.

>> No.4335330

>>4335328
cheers

>> No.4335352

>>4334308
Im the guy who was shitting on you before, about the afro art and talking about the european modern art scene, also the one who's in here for 2 weeks.
At least in my eyes, you really improved on the face/figure, I also like not showing hands

I do agree about the background being in a different value range rather than being in that sap green state, maybe just sparkling some more saturated greens? The clouds are really cool

Also, kudos for you to listening to some of the more constructive criticism and trying to work upon them.
I just think you should polish it a bit more.

>> No.4335355

>>4334843
sorry, this just looks bad, I think it lost the little soul it had

>> No.4335369

>>4335352
Thanks. I try my hardest to improve. I want to be more than a “soulful” artist. I want to be GREAT!

>> No.4335381

>>4335369
well first you have to be a soulful artist

>> No.4335386

>>4334843
>>4335289
>>4335355
Some might claim this is better than OP's version.

>> No.4335393

>>4335386
We are not judging the op. That version is dead. We are judging the revamped version which is good imho.

>> No.4335524

>>4335393
Well of course you think your own work is ~good; You come here asking for critiques, but anyone familiar with /ic/ knows you just want plaudits and ass kissing.

>> No.4335529

>>4335524
I reworked it based on initial criticism. What’s your problem dude?

>> No.4335700

>>4335369
What's this? You stopped arguing and started actually listening instead?

I'm the guy who laughed at you the whole time. Now I think you're moving in the right direction. Good job, guy

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>>4335700
Thx. I listen a lot. It’s just that I don’t typically agree with your notions of how my art should evolve. This is a big canvas so I can’t fuck it up (too expensive). Also, I’ve been consciously try to make my shit more technical but not academic. Thanks so much.

>> No.4335780

>>4335779
okay glad youre listening at least but that looks FUCKING awful dude

>> No.4335786

>>4334330
Fucking kill yourself Chunbum, you are the worst retard of them all and it is an embarassment for Illastrat to associate with you.

>> No.4335789

>>4335780
What’s wrong with it

>> No.4335929

>>4335779
jamie oliver?

>> No.4335934

>>4335779
I think the eyes and mouth are to small compared to her skull and nose

>> No.4335962

>>4335934
What about the background designed by a 4 year old in kindergarten class?

>> No.4335963

>>4335934
What else?

>> No.4335969

>>4335962
That’s intentional. Y’all know my style?

>> No.4335985

>>4335969
hmm why would you choose shit as a style? could it be that youre incapable of painting anything else? how convenient

>> No.4335999

>>4335985
I have built my own Iconography that epitomizes my mental space. You are right though, I should expand. Any suggestions?

>> No.4336013

>>4335999
you've built your own iconography in the same way that a small child is amazed when he hears his name on TV. youre so inexperienced that you dont understand that your personal breakthroughs regarding style have been done billions of times before, very rudimentary and generic. block buildings and just writing 777 on shit is not unique or creative at all.

>> No.4336039
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>>4335779

Don't worry, thee moment you took a brush to the canvas you fucked it up so carry on doin' your elephant thing.

>> No.4336053
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4336053

(:

>> No.4336060

>>4336053
i'll reply as Illustrat to save the trouble

"Not what i was going for, i have soul in my paintings *rips massive shart*"

>> No.4336065

>>4336013
Cool.

>> No.4336070

>>4336053
THAT.....is fucking horrifying

>> No.4336080

>>4336070
maybe the problem with your paintings is that you have a poopy brain, sorry cant help you then :(

>> No.4336088

>>4336080
I am just saying, making a redline worse is not the point of em. That shit is TERRIBLE...and scary.

>> No.4336143

>>4336053
I like the colors, but other than that, big yikes.

>> No.4336150

>>4336143
That’s what I am saying. Sloppy CRAP. And I bet he is one of the ones saying they are better than me. Try harder.

>> No.4336161
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>>4336053
Better resolution right here

>> No.4336164

>>4327944
trash/10

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4336169

>>4336150
man youre really hostile. i think if you just sat down and worked on your fundamentals instead of posting here every time you made a piece you could realize your vision in higher resolution. from what ive seen you just argue and get mad when people dont like what you post and then leave and repeat like 3 weeks later.

>> No.4336176

>>4336169
A zombie woman? Cool. Now post a beautiful woman. I can and have. “Dark” is a real justification for poor aesthetic.

>> No.4336185

>>4336169
Wait. Fuck that. I don’t wanna compete. This board has the potential to be a good thing. I wish y’all all the best.

>> No.4336187

>>4336176
okay well stay where you've been for the past 3 years, not really my problem just trying to give you some sound advice.

>> No.4336194

>>4336187
You are right. I want to evolve. I am not going to let the neo nazis and trolls distract me. Some of y’all are really trying to help me. From this day forward I am all ears.

>> No.4336195

>>4336194
dont have to convince me just do it

>> No.4336196

>>4336194
> I am not going to let the neo nazis and trolls distract me
I'm a literal nazi and I hope you make lots of gains Illastrat. I'm just glad that you aren't ignoring everyone and insist on being an infallible art god anymore.

>> No.4336201

>>4336195
I will. I feel I made a lot of progression on this painting alone. I think it is wrong to say I’ve not progressed but if y’all think I haven’t maybe y’all are right. I just wish y’all could admit I am not that bad.

>> No.4336204

>>4336196
Ima buy a sketch pad and draw even though I hate it so much.

>> No.4336207

>>4336201
you really arent as good as you think man, people who dont draw or paint are very easily impressed and will compliment you to be polite. h]w did you even find 4chan? you dont seem to understand the atmosphere of this site

>> No.4336210

>>4336207
Oh know, a literal racist. I can already tell by your tone. I know how 4chan works. 95% of y’all are anime nerds that are ngmi/hobbyist. Quite frankly, yes I suck, but this 95% isn’t better than me.

>> No.4336213

>>4336210
LMFAO what the fuck are you talking about. this is what i mean youre so incapable of taking any criticism that you call me a racist for no reason because youre so upset. didnt you LITERALLY just say that you were going to be open and start taking advice hahaha. god youre fucking hopeless man.

>> No.4336225

>>4336213
I can tell in your tone you are not here to help me at all. Contrary (and you probably know thing) there is a huge stigma of black artists. Prove to me you care quite frankly. If not, I’ll just go back to listening to my baby’s mama who I ganruntee is better than you (makes beautiful art). Don’t give me this shit nigga. You know I am not THAT concern with photorealism. I want to know how to evolve regarding my style. I am the black Van Gogh....treat me as such.

>> No.4336233

>>4336053
>>4336169
Dudes these are seriously atrocious. I know it's very appealing to think you're dunking on Illustrat because he's a twat but you're honestly worse than he is.

>> No.4336234

>>4336225
> I am the black Van Gogh....treat me as such.

LOL maybe youre so concerned with the color of your skin because youre the type of black guy that gives other black guys a bad name. peace loser, have fun learning from your baby mamas" shitty acrylic paintings.

>> No.4336238

>>4336233
nah

>> No.4336245

>>4336234
You know I am telling the truth. You are trying to break me because deep in your heart you view me as some kind of of threat. Deep in your heart you know I am in the top %5 percent and I am a nigga. It’s the soul nigga.

>> No.4336251

>>4336245
>IM NOT BAD AT ART IM BLACK
>IM NOT BAD AT ART IM BLACK
>IM NOT BAD AT ART IM BLACK
>GUYS IM BLACK DID I MENTION IM BLACK

whatever helps you sleep at night. if you think you're in the top 5% then youre fucking delusional kid. your ego is so fragile, good luck making it as an artist being that insecure.

>> No.4336261

>>4336251
Remember....the BLACK Van Gogh

>> No.4336264

>>4336251
I don't think Illastrat is in the top 5% at all, but let the man be proud of being black ffs. Humans are tribal and no amount of reading Locke or Marx is gonna change that. I'm having a big brain think that everyone left of the real nazis are the real nazis :^)

>> No.4336303

>>4336264
Okay...everybody in this thread, post your art. Let’s be real. Take off the veil. Because right now, there has been two artists that posted their art besides me and I shitted on them. That’s what I hate about this site. Everyone is a know it all but don’t stand by their. I unrelentingly stand by mine. I am in the top %5 percent/the Van Gogh of 4chan.

>> No.4336459

>>4336303
Why would anyone post work when you're just going to shit on regardless of quality?

>> No.4336494

>>4336459
See. That’s a cop out response. Three people posted their art, I shitted on them. How can you give adequate critique and you r worse than the said artist. Most of y’all shitting on me because of my attitude. Y’all are intimidated by me.

>> No.4336496

>>4336303
>and i shitted on them
LOL no bro your shit looks like fucking TRASH. post your ref and ill do a better version. post it now cunt you need to be taken down a peg

>> No.4336500

>>4336494
>intimidated
You wish.
>I shitted on them
That's my point, thanks for proving it, and doing so in a way that shows you can't even handle basic english.

>> No.4336535

>>4336303
>>4336496

cmon pussyboy throw your ref up you gonna talk all that shit and then bitch out?

>> No.4336543

>>4336494
typical black intimidating people and disrupting the order, keep making your graffity nigger, nobody cares

>> No.4336570

>>4336535
Just post your art. It’s that simple. Completed work. I have hundreds of completed pieces of art.

>> No.4336575

>>4336570
nah post your ref i want to rub it in your shitty face. do it coward.

>> No.4336579

>>4336303
I spent 3 hours on a painting yesterday, 8x10 inches, oil. Gong to upload a pic in a min.
You won't like it because it realism, but that's exactly what I'm aiming for. Other work I do is Tonalism, for example, but this piece is to show some of us do know how to execute a work, at least.

>> No.4336589

>>4336579
Cool

>> No.4336600

>>4336575
Never

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>>4336579
>>4336589
Bit dark, but there you are.

>> No.4336629

>>4336623
lmao nigger van gogh bfo

>> No.4336632

>>4336600
PUSSY
thats what i thought you cowardly punk bitch. talk big shit flinch when someone steps up punk ass niggggggaaa

>> No.4336690

>>4336623
Nice work man. Your post is wasted on this crab.

>> No.4336721

>>4336623
That’s dope

>> No.4336723

>>4336721
iM iN thE tOp fIvE pErCenT

sit down and shut the fuck up stay humble

>> No.4336724

>>4336623
I could tell you are good because you are humble. Doesn’t negate that fact that all these pussies that rally behind you like you are the great white hope are trash. 6 niggas posted. One is better than me. 1/6th is not a good ratio.

>> No.4336726

>>4336723
I am waiting for u to post. 1/6th

>> No.4336731

>>4336726
im waiting for you to give me the reference you used PUSSY BITCH hurry up faggot or are you that scared

>> No.4336732

>>4336731
I didn’t use a reference

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>>4336732
im better than you also

>> No.4336744

>>4336732
Why are you lying?It's not like we don't know, you've done this in the past, you've posted the ref in the past. You're not fooling anyone.

>> No.4336745

>>4336742
Keep working on it. You’ll get there. Your modeling is good. Too bad she looks like goku

>> No.4336749

>>4336742
I had to look at this again. God she’s ugly.

>> No.4336751

>>4336732
fucking liar ive seen your reference before retard

>> No.4336752

>>4336210
to be honest, this is the realest comment in here... This is a crab bucket

>> No.4336753

>>4336732
>lying on the internet

>> No.4336754

>>4336745
>>4336749
says the artist of OP image LOL

>> No.4336756

>>4336742
kek illashit btfo

>> No.4336762
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>>4336754
<<<<<<so beautiful

>> No.4336764

>>4336225
Van Gogh wasn't treated as a God when he was alive why should we?

In all honesty, you are trying to emulate a guy from 150 years ago, with that mindset alone, your art is 150 years way from the modern times and modern se sensibilities...
This was an advice I was told from my art school teachers when I showed them something my art, they would say I was 500 years behind the times... It's not because the drawing was academic or stuff like that, but it was stiff and was already made, it didn't deliver anything, just tried to emulate...

You have something more than most people in here, you have drive (but you still don't have soul, and shitty attitudes won't make you any friends or supporters)

>> No.4336767

>>4336762
NO LOL looks like a wax corpse with spaghetti hair

>> No.4336768

>>4336756
Too creepy

>> No.4336770

>>4336768
bro all of your shit is worse are you blind or retarded

>> No.4336773

>>4336764
You forgot to mention Van Gogh was a pioneer.

He was painting out in the fields at a time when plein air painting was a new thing, and he was painting in a way no one ever had before. He took advantage of the new technology to make something new.

And then you have this poser acting like he's hot shit using an old medium in a dime a dozen manner. The comparison is disgusting, he's not even close to being a Van Gogh.

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>>4336303

I'm the guy of this posts
>>4335352
>>4332252
>>4332129
>>4336764

This is the closest of your art style that I have, made with acrylics and watercolors

>> No.4336781

>>4336773
Before he started doing plein air, the impressionism movement already begun... After he met monet he started doing impressionism and when he moved away from Paris, then he pioneered painting, because he was using bold brushwork, taking the stylization of Japanese woodblock illustrations and also getting that impressionism feel of light

>> No.4336787

>>4336764
My art looks nothing like Van Gogh’s. But bye golly my spirit, my life....photocopy. I live a life of Van Gogh in an urban, postmodern setting. My art though, has never been seen before throughout all of history. I will never be the top, until I die a course, but honestly I strive to be the BEST. Do you know the difference. People don’t know genius when we see it. Usually it’s adamantly opposed. Only a select segment of society probably even fully get me on a general level—lifestyle, personality, dreams. Van Gogh wasn’t treated like a god, but he was GOD in flesh. People literally shat on his art. They missed out. I am the second coming. I know this. If you don’t get me, it’s your lost. My life is comparable to my art—complex, rigorous, hard. I know this. Fuck anyone who don’t accept it.

>> No.4336789

>>4336777
Without the fish that would be Garbo

>> No.4336794

>>4336787
>But bye golly my spirit, my life....photocopy. I live a life of Van Gogh in an urban, postmodern setting.
You eat paints, try to marry prostitues, cut off you ear, ect? Van Gogh was a nutcase, and while you are, it's a different way.
>My art though, has never been seen before throughout all of history.
You should try the local flea market. I've even seen stuff like this in front of the Met.
>I will never be the top, until I die a course, but honestly I strive to be the BEST.
Bullshit. You paint half-assed poratraits that you don't even care about. Look at it man, you phoned that hair in, that background in, you didn't even try and it shows. It says you don't care about this painting, so why should anyone else? Van Gogh cared about every single stroke he put down but you clearly don't.
>Do you know the difference. People don’t know genius when we see it. Usually it’s adamantly opposed. Only a select segment of society probably even fully get me on a general level—lifestyle, personality, dreams.
Prove it. Get the MacArthur genius grant. Because if you can't this is just you talking yourself up and not actually being a genius. Words are cheap.
>Van Gogh wasn’t treated like a god, but he was GOD in flesh.
Fuck no he wasn't. Van Gogh was a deeply, deeply damaged man who spent time in and out of mental asylums because he could abrely fucking function.
>People literally shat on his art. They missed out. I am the second coming. I know this. If you don’t get me, it’s your lost. My life is comparable to my art—complex, rigorous, hard. I know this. Fuck anyone who don’t accept it.
More talking yourself up. No one cares bro, everyone does this shit. It was the whole modern art thing, it's old hat at this point.

The only thing you're top at is being a crab. You come here because you're banned from everywhere else, so you can talk shit because no one else will listen., so you can boost your ego without actually working on your art. It's fucking pathetic.

>> No.4336796

>>4336787
Cmon man, although I'm rooting for you as I'm rooting for anyone to be successful in the art world while not selling their soul. But man, tone it down with the God complex and stuff like that, it's easier to not write down full paragraphs that will only result in a shitstorm from other anons.
Just ignore everything, if you think you have nothing to prove, why write? Why try to prove to an audience that you believe is not worthy? Let your art talk, post it here, ask for advice... There's no need to start fights and holding grudges

It's an easier way to live life and get what you want if you know where and how to focus your drive and energy

>> No.4336797

>>4336794
>else
You don’t know me will enough to make any of those claims. I am the second coming...deal with it.

>> No.4336798

>>4336796
The truth is VERY hard to handle.

>> No.4336800

>>4336798
It shows, if this is your only reply to anon, you aren't handling it very well

>> No.4336801
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>>4336794
If only y’all could walk a day in my shoes. Van Gogh is my only friend.

>> No.4336804

>>4336800
Nigga the art world is a shit show—it’s not about talent. Hell artists don’t even love their art. My passion for my art goes deeper than you might understand. I am obsessed with the process. I am going to do this shit no matter what. Recognition or not.

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>> No.4336808

>>4336801
is that nicky minaj?
good God, just because you are a nigger doesn't mean the world owes you recognition in whatever discipline you decide to perform my friend.

>> No.4336812

And what’s so crazy about it, my music is greater than my art. Ole boy was talking about selling souls. It’s manetory for art and MUSIC.

http://www.soundcloud.com/digitalmolly

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>>4336797
What claims? all the stuff about Van Gogh is a matter of public record.

The part about you half-assing your painting? I don't need to know you to know that, the painting itself is evidence. You put the most effort into the face and then just blasted through everything else you didn't care about. It's all there on the canvas. You say you're trying to be THE BEST but your work doesn't reflect it. Look at Kehinde Wiley's work - he cares about every inch of the canvas. It's why he's hot shit your and you're not.

The genius thing? I didn't make a claim there, you did. I challenged you to prove it. So do it, faggot.

You being banned? That's been discussed here before, screenshots have been posted. public info.

You being pathetic? Man this whole thread is proof of it. You wouldn't be here if you weren't a pathetic manchild with a desperate need to prove to someone, anyone, that you're as great as you say you are. Otherwise you would leave and never come back.

Be real, man. Drop the arrogant posturing, the only person you're trying to convince is yourself.
>>4336801
>only friend in imaginary
See, you are fucking pathetic, thanks for proving it. Go outside and talk to some real people.

>> No.4336814

>>4336808
I ain’t doing this for recognition at this point. I am doing it because I HAVE to. If any person does it for recognition they should give up. You will never be happy. I wanna be the BEST not necessarily the TOP.

>> No.4336816

>>4336813
Khinde is the TOP...not the BEST. HE SOLD HIS SOUL TOO.

>> No.4336818

>>4336816
Whatever man, he's better than you. His painting shows how much he cares, and people respond to that passion.

You're just talking shit about someone better than you so you can pretend to be better.
F u c k i n g p a t h e t i c.

>> No.4336821

>>4336818
I never said I was more technical than Khinde. But if I had assistants too...

>> No.4336826

>>4336821
No man, stop it with the fucking excuses. That's weak shit and you know it. what he does doesn't require assistants, I'VE SEEN PEOPLE DO IT IN PERSON.

Stop being a bitch, be real.

>> No.4336833

>>4336826
Wait hold up. Who said I wanted to be like khinde???? I want to be like illastrat but I am influenced by Van Gogh. Stop being an asshole and check out my music.

Http://www.soundcloud.com/digitalmolly

>> No.4336848

>>4336814
>HAVE
thanks for clarifying why your art looks so forced and emotionless, it definitely shows that you are not doing it because you want to, what are you trying to prove by wasting such time and materials in a subpar result?

>> No.4336850

>>4336848
You are sofa king stoopid. When I say I have to I mean for my mental well being u fucktard.

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>>4336833
It's not about being LIKE him, it's about PASSION you bitch. He's just an example, I can use Van Gogh too. You see this shit? You see this shit, you fucking bitch? Look at all this passion. EVERY SINGLE MARK. He cared about EVERY SINGLE MARK. Have you seen this shit in person? Go to MoMA, fucking look at it and despair. You aren't even 1/10th of what Van Gogh was, and he was a mentally deficient paint eater. You say you're influenced by him but your work doesn't reflect it at all. You just want to use his name to prop yourself up, and it's fucking pathetic. Van Gogh genuinely had drive and passion, which is why he painted a whole canvas every day, while you agonize over a single canvas for fucking ages and end up with shit that no one cares about so you come here to make yourself feel better, and it's fucking weak.

>music
This is the visual arts board you brainlet. Is even that too much for you? Why don't you go post your paintings on /lit/ while you're at it, so everyone there can tell you what a fucking idiot you are.

>> No.4336863

>>4336851
I seen starry night...he’s my influence but I am not him. I can only process him as it relates too me...my influence. I’ll get there though...and deep down, u know it. You are terrified by it. I am close. Paradoxically, you are probably so far.

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>>4336863
Terrified? By your passionless dibbling? Pathetic bro, fucking pathetic. There's nothing to be terrified of here, you've been doing the same shit for - what, ten years now? A fucking decade of stagnation, senpai. The very fact that you continue to post here undermines everything you claim to be, and neuters you on the spot. You wanna be scary go and be successful, but you aren't, and that's why you're here. It's why you'll always be here. Fucking prove me wrong, DO IT FAGGOT. Leave this place and make it, or you're just a bitch talking shit.

>> No.4336881

>>4336875
Maybe that’s what I need to do. I have a very unique voice. Maybe I need to leave. This forum is toxic and counterproductive.

>> No.4336884
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>>4336881
Yeah right. You keep coming back here because you have no one else you to. You're gonna be here forever.

PROVE ME WRONG, BITCH. You can't, you'll be back with your same pathetic whinging next month, just like always.

>> No.4337006

illustrat as a fellow black artist, you disappoint me, seriously.

>> No.4337039

>>4331529
muh neck

>> No.4337379

>>4336789
>it would be bad if it was an entirely different painting

>> No.4338635

All of you are sad and disgusting pile of dirt except for illastrat who can make genuine art.

You guys can tear each other apart in this dark hole while I recommend illastrat to every curator and collector that I know. Illastrat, make art that is experimental, not just with a pretty aesthetic. Go bigger so you can play around with the composition and narrative elements. Then when you are ready, when your art is ready, I can show your art to the people who actually matter. Not these hyenas in the middle of nowhere who will get nowhere. You are the one and only lion here, so ignore these bastards and step up your game my friend. You shouldn't be arguing with these know nothing's and wasting your energy and reducing your morale. Talk to me instead. We have a lot to talk about.

>> No.4339443

>>4338635
lol @ cumbum and his echochamber