/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4183042
cute OP pic, OP

>>4183056
I also redrew some weeb art from 2016, god I was so lazy

>>4183058
Ironically actually like the one on the left better. The right ones eyes look a little messed up.

Just been struggling to have ideas so I drew a character of mine as a pirate and ended up liking it.

Sorry my sketches are super scratchy, it's not meant to be viewed as a finished piece. I've been stuck in a rut of just drawing portraits lately so I tried to be a little more dynamic with this and I honestly have been looking at it too long and can't tell what's beyond fucked so idk. Help me.

>>4183056
>>4183058
please please work on your faces. the perspective of them is messed up more often than not

>>4183056
>>4183058
>>4183108
I think the right one's face isn't cute like an anime girl would be but the body on it is obviously better as well as the pose.

>>4183058
nice pen work as always, but the eyes look really skewed on the newer version,.

>>4183058
right's body with left's face and you got a nice stew going

>>4183130
>it from the came

>>4183130
If you're going to go for something retro like this you should follow a more similar color palette. Where it stands now, the bright colors with the texture you're trying to give it just makes it look unpolished instead.

The space to the right of her is REALLY empty because of your text placement too. Either find something to fit that space with or change the layout of the text.

In addition to that, learn more about character appeal and design. I don't know if the monster is something pre-existing but it looks kinda lame and the girl looks boxy when if this were a retro comic, her night gown would be more form fitting.

otherwise you have a lot of the elements there, you're just not fully utilizing them.

>>4183042
dang, my art made the thread pic
thank you!

>>4183130
baste merkavabro

>>4183157
blog?

halloween hobo

>>4183188
this is super cool anon, do you have an art blog

>>4183042

>>4183159
do you have a blog

>>4183130
I read it as
>IT, from the game "Hollow Night"

Take that as you want.

>>4183228
i post art at twitter.com/bongbai

This one was fun.

WIP

>>4183401
forgot file

Drew my wow character in dofus style

>>4183403
can't wait to see where this is going. Real nice work, anon

>>4183413
Thanks. All I gotta do now is add a line pass and put the colors to fit the tighter drawing and I'll be done with this in a couple hours

>>4183197
Insanely cute, your line weight is as good as always. No complaints here.

ehhh i polished a turd but had so much fun

made sum changes, done
>>4182389
thanks
!

>>4183556
No matter how you render you work is only as good as the drawing is.

>>4183567
i struggle with digital, sketches get too messy and linework (attempted) breaks forms :(

>>4183580
that's another reason to focus on that

>>4183562
Great style of coloring, very cute too

>>4183403
Would love to see this finished.Blog?

>>4183610
Working on a longer comic about modern demon hunters

no reference

>>4183349
Why can't I have any comments to my works?

>>4183728
lifeless and shit

>>4183700
soul

>>4183728
soulless

>>4183728

>>4178184

>>4183350
she cute anon

>>4183728
idk why all the anons are hating. I've seen and see much worse here. Face is cute, perhaps just work on the body a little bit?

>>4183197
holy shit anon, that's amazing. blog?

>>4183728
it's garbage

>>4183728
Be careful what you wish for anon
Next time, be more specific lol

can't communicate

>>4183728
Why should people waste their time commenting on trash?

>>4183728

excellent baiting

>>4183562
Are you just disabling layer with lineart? Also, blog?

>>4183941
I think I recognize your work from somewhere. Anyway, awesome!!

I can never get good lighting xd

>>4184047
Feels very tumblr

>>4184047
lighting should be the least of your worries lol

>>4184047
holly brown has migrated to ic, the end is truly upon us

>>4183778
Thanks, it was fanart of Brittany.

>>4183556
get your form and construction game on, based csp cursor tho

Some sketch I did waiting for bus gonna redraw in gimp.

>>4184091
child detected

Currently I do inking and lines with tools instead of by hand. Is this valid or do I need to get those variable line widths and shakeyness from hand linework to improve?

>>4184047
Look at the size of that schnoze!

>>4184062
Why did you post a picture of Sid from ice age?

>>4183126
Why is Jolyne a pirate

>>4183058
Soul vs soulless.

>>4183407
Nice, trolls have always been the most fun race to draw. Do you have a blog?

>>4183541
Thanks

>>4183805
twitter.com/wholesomeorenji

>>4183205
Thank you i do not have a blog tho

>>4184259
Thanks man. I'm more active on Twitter, since Tumblr is dead
https://twitter.com/Mr_Rockadopolis

Skyla fanart, /int/'s new waifu.

>>4184163
There are no rules. Is that what you want though? Do you want that look for your work?

I think it looks pretty cool and different, I like this piece. No reason it couldn't work if you continue to improve on your designs. It's really more about the design than the specifics of the linework, I've seen artists do lines in all sorts of ways and make it work because they have good design sense.
Some design elements you might improve here: the bird silhouettes don't read very well, especially the nearest, largest bird. The second largest looks much more like a bird, with a clear separation of wingspan from tail from head/beak, but it's also harder to see because it kinda blends in with the scythe. In general the birds are hard to see. Even though they're background elements, they fall too much "into" the foreground elements. The clouds are a bit dull, they look like speech MS Paint ellipses stacked on top of each other, or like speech bubbles. That might be one area where you do it by hand or at least vary the shapes more. And is that a yarn ball, or some kind of funky moon or what? Feels a bit large to me but that's more subjective.

I really like this piece overall. I assume you know about Imaishi. Probably Mignola and Frank Miller too. But Miller especially is worth studying for styles this. He does the "hard blacks shadows" thing so stylishly but readably.

>>4184022
I colour the lines the same colour as the flats and clip to both haha lole I cannot paint
@oshikoru

>>4183130
DONT DEAD OPEN INSIDE

>>4183403
nice atmosphere

character sheet

>>4184521
this was my first sticky note doodle of him

>>4184502
Yeah I can see your points there. And yeah that big dodgeball was supposed to be a moon. I dont think I have studied any of those people so Ill definitely check it out.

This post helps a lot thanks

>>4184603
To clarify Ive definitely seen all those peoples works but I dont think ive ever done an in depth artist study before

>>4183130
>>4183141
>>4183140
ok fixed it for the most part
whatever critique can be fore next time

>>4183403
The neck connecting to the skull on the guy on the left it's not working, I get that he has short hair, but no

spook

>>4184521
Very cute, but it feels too messy, too much unnecessary texture. Also his hips don't flow very much with the desing they go opposite of the cape and the torso,from far away look aight.
I like the concept keep going anon

>>4184710
Lazy

did some simple creature designs :P

1

>>4184729
I don't understand what this means

>>4184614
150% better

>>4184733

This one I prefer.

2

ok is this any better

pretty much finished i think

>>4184898
character looks neat, i like the armor enough, not sure about the rings on the left side, only cause they're just floating, but something should be there to balance it out.

>>4183058
You're gonna go far, kid.

>>4183042
>>4183042
>>4183042
/beg/+
So tonight after watching youtube I learned about fitting into a general artstyle by pros getting art done vs "dear special snowflake, draw this with your own style" for tumblrinas.

But also I remembered reading about that in keys to drawing. Is there any more comprehend guide, chapter of another book or videos on that to learn more?

I'd like to expand my pencil "stroke" variety generally of all sort of rendering methods and so on. I hope this is the right place to ask.

>>4183164
are you fucking joking? or are your standards for asking for a blog non-existent?

>>4184892
I can't tell if this is supposed to be a top down view and she's squatting or she's sitting or her knees and leaning in towards the camera. The perspective needs some serious work here.

>>4185140
I notice pretty much every post these days gets a "blog?" despite the quality. We might have a serial "blog?"er on our hands.

>>4184614
way better

>>4185201
I think some people here do it ironically for laughs. Kind of like asking the fat girl on a date as a joke.

>>4185256
i wish they would just tell me to fuck off to /beg/ (which i did) cause it fuck with my Dunning Kruger sin(x) progression :(

Happy hollow-een

>>4185011
i like these designs very much. inspired by mobius?
>>4183157
looks very soft, i like, some gestures before doing an imaginative figure would give this a boost
>>4183403
comfy, blog?
>>4184521
cute and very nice color choices

Happy Hallow-ween
One of these days I’ll remember to attach the picture on the first try

>>4185465
Is that hollow knight?

>>4185484
ye

>>4185318
Going to draft the whole character using the first variant, then do the remaining three once everything is done.

piss and fury

>>4184892
What is the camera angle?
What is her pose supposed to look like on that angle?
I think you have to determine these first.
If you used a reference can you post it so we can check.

Predecessor to the "Uranus" unit. Equipped with Old War enhancements and artillery, she's stationed up in the cold north to stop potential flanks.

Crit for my big tiddy creation?

First time poster. I wanted to draw a cool looking staff/wand but my imagination failed me so it’s just a ball on a stick lol.

>>4185635
Feet and hands don't have any structure. Seems like you focused too much on the breast, but it all falls flat because of how poorly everything else looks.

Not that this is particularly horrible, but you got lazy Anon.

Anyone else do obligatory h alloween drawing?

>>4185653
You are correct I spent a disproportionate amount of time on the breasts because I couldn't figure out how to get them to sit properly, do those at least look decent. and yes I need to practice hands and feet and anatomy in general more. do you mind clarifying what you mean specifically when you say "how poorly everything else looks" please. thank you for the feedback

>>4185650
The face looks great and unique the anatomy below however are not.

>>4185663
On mobile, and break is about yo end. But rq, you already know about the hands and feet. Her far shoulder looks displaced, think about how it would fall behind the breast, pull out some references.

Also, her head/face looks awkward. Chin is sticking out in an weird curve and there doesn't seem to be a solid jaw.

Last big thing is lighting. Her hair shows different light sources, which contradict the picture, and that isn't even including how the body is lighted, which contradict the hair.

>>4185674
thank you much anon

>>4185673
Thank you! What about the anatomy should I improve?

>>4185679
I'm an ESL so I'm not that good at explaining but I can see the mistakes.
I think mostly all.
The tits is symbol drawing. I recommend looking at references.
The arms is also symbol drawing. It's like noodles.
The neck should be like pic-related.
That ball thing has inconsistent perspective.
I think the ball thing should be in front not behind.
And the legs are thick. I don't get the perspective.

>>4185461
Thanks man, yeah mobius really inspired me, i mostly look up to him when it comes to technique, hatching and whatnot, but some of my peers have had a greater impact lately

Trying.

>>4183108
>>4183129
>>4183132
>>4183133
>>4183137
>>4184255
These are all really legitimate criticisms, I’ll try to work harder on my faces because I think I brush them aside as I don’t see them as challenging. Thanks anons! <3
>>4185101
I’ll make u proud

>>4185884
Nice work anon I like it. The boobs are a placed a little too low I think

>>4185513
beautiful line work, wish the subject matter weren’t so boring

My most based piece so far.

>>4185513

she looks like she peed herself and is realluy embarrased

>>4185921
based

>>4185122
Any chance of getting help here?

>>4183567
keeping it loose is good, but the forms doesn't feel very solid, not because of the linework though. Work more on drawing solid shapes, even if your anatomy is all wacked, it will at least have a bit of dimension.

>>4185650
Very appealing abstraction. The anatomy does have some hiccups like the neck and the distance of the legs in relation to the hands. It looks like she's pretty tall despite having pretty short arms. Got a blog?

>>4185650
the rod positions are impossible , theres no reason for it to be behind her head

>>4185884
Blog? Your work reminds me of Tim lochner

Anything I can improve on this before I call it quits? The lighting was pretty tricky.

>>4185947
Read the sticky

>>4185555
Cool skelebro,but legs are kinda weird.

Also working on this. I still have a bit more lining to do for the flowers, but is everything else fine?

>>4186106
wow that looks great
can I ask what canvas size and line size you use? I'd like to know how people get such nice thin lines and not have them be jagged

>>4186111
Thank you, lineart is one of the things I pride myself on, though in this picture in particular only half of the flowers I drew myself. The rest were from Clip Studio Paint and then edited because I need to save time.

I'm using 3600 x 5400, or 12 x 18. Program is Paint Tool SAI 2, and I'm using a line stabiilizer at 15. The character is fully drawn with each line, and then I use tricks for background details or for things like threads on dresses.

People really underestimate SAI only because they don't know any tricks to the program. So all the trees, leaves, weeds and those smaller flowers all stem from 1 trick- you draw the shape you want, select the layer, downsize the selection by 2 pixels and ctrl+x all of it away to leave just lines. Then you can go back and add lines if needed. Kinda like fringe or other settings you'd find on photoshop but easier. This guarantees you clean lineart EVERY time, without needing to actually do the lineart little by little and allowing you to focus on shapes.

>>4186117
Oh sorry, line size is also 3.5
I use the thinnest lineart possible that still shows up in the drawing and also doesn't give me trouble when filling/selecting colors.

>>4186117
>>4186120
thank you for the detailed reply
downsizing a layer for sharper lines seems really useful and I'm grateful for the tip

>>4184909
i see your point, i tried to re arrange the rings to have some movement and not take away from the main char, just about to call it finished.
ty,i forget some ppl give actual feedback on this board, it's just scarce and buried in shitpost lol

>>4186164
moar

>>4185011
Very cool, saved

>>4185555
He's falling over, but this is super dynamic and fun to look at

>>4183413
>>4183637
>>4184512
>>4185461
>blog
twitter.com/subudraws/
twitch.tv/subudraws/ has links to my other blogs and is where i show my process sometimes.

>>4184698 Tried to mess with the shape a bit, and I think I got it looking ok

>>4186553
Damnit, I forgot the file again.

>>4186554
it looks nice in the thumbnail all the colors and stuff

but the actual figures and those motorcycles look horrible
im gonna guess this is photobashed or even a single photo and you just added anime heads
im sorry but this is /beg/ tier in my opinion

got ps on my new pc and this is the first thing i make.

>>4186558
Nope, just messing around with doing colors first then doing drawing on top. It makes sense though, there was a couple drawing things I didn't know how to quite fix as I finished this. If you could show me some redlines of how I could fix this please feel free.

>>4186576
I will not redline cause I am also /beg/. And that would be too much redlining anyway
Here is an image from your twitter
your drawing skills are pre-loomis tier I'm sorry
I am criticizing your for something I did not realize about my drawings aswell
but I am working on that, the fundies right now. please also do

>>4186587
....yeah i don't really care for people who can't explain themselves. Fuck off.

>>4186587
kek

>>4185897
the face is one of if not the most visible aspect! the emotion/expressions you want to show can be really delicate and people pay attention to it immediately which is why so many people noticed it.

I think if you put more time into faces, not just the logistics of how the planes and perspectives work, but also develop your own style for them (at least for traditional media, your current one feels like it hasnt evolved much from your earlier days compared to every other aspect of your drawing), you would be able to achieve really great things imo

Update. After dinner, I'm going to hunt some references for the strings of jewelry attached to the dreas. Want to experiment with some different designs.

>>4185913
I am taking suggestions for future promo images.

>>4185555
Fun character concept. Like the other anon pointed out, he looks like he's about to fall forward. It does convey a lot of personality, and just that adjustment can go a long way. Keep it up!

>>4185608
Loving your mech girl designs, though I the steel beam hovering above looks like it lacks support. Much like the previous anons, the beam would fall over. That being said, the pose looks great and looking forward to seeing more of your work.

>>4185658
Cool character concept. The main thing is the perspective of the piano and the character seem to be on different planes.

The horizon line for the piano looks like it's about to touch the top of the page. Whereas for the character, it looks like it's at eye level.

As you work out your next sketch, draft out the basic shapes of everything you want and make sure the perspective is consistent. Then once everything looks right, go for it.

I'll write up a few more after dinner.

>>4184710
I like the shading under the neck area.

>>4186589
What do you mean can't explain themselves? He's right, there is no structure. Your drawings are not really good. Learn fundamentals like he said

>>4186589
It looks flat as fuck. You have no sense of form and value. The joints, especially the way you draw heads and neck, connect in an very awkward angle. It shows a lot in your yuyu hakusho work.
And don't expect everyone to spoonfeed and redline your work. Not everyone has the time to do that

>>4186033
Nothing much to see here @nayanderu.

Tim lochner is @timbougami right? I actually follow him. I like his works maybe that's why my drawing looks like his.

breaking off the rust from not doing digital for awhile

a sketch i did a month ago for a friend lol..

>>4186994
Why are you posting something from a month ago? This is a crit board

>>4187007
Maybe he wants crit on it? are you retarded or just constantly looking to get in arguments

>>4187007
Sorry anon, it may be a little less than a month. It's just that I haven't been drawing that much lately, and I don't really have any other art to post.

>>4185884
left hand needs work. the rest of it is nice

>>4187013
Why are you being so hostile?
There's just not much reason to ask for criticism on an older and irrelevant piece when you can post something recent and more demonstrative of your current skills and flaws.
>>4187017
Draw something bro

>>4187028
You are retarded

>>4186994
There's more angles than front ffs. draw any other angle, ANY AHHHHH

>>4187040
Whatever makes you sleep better at night, anon

>>4187028
How about this - he doesn't HAVE something more recent and that IS demonstrative of his current skills and flaws. you have a single digit IQ fucking god damn retard. I hate you and genuinely hope you die soon

Rough sketch for a bigger thing, but I will probably not pursue this any further until I practice anatomy and composition ? I think?

>>4186763
That's actually gorgeous. Blog?

>>4187097
spooky

>>4186413
honestly this was stronger/read much more clearly in b,w. you should grind up your rendering and color. still gorgeous regardless

>>4187097
>on
i like the sketchy style

>>4186994
>month ago
Are you sure not three years ago? I swear looks the same.

Any clue about how to draw appealing pic? every shit i draw looks like fucking product blue print no emotion at all

>>4187377
bige bobs

>>4187377
Can you post samples of what is appealing for you? From you favorite artist or something.

>>4187384
https://www.pixiv.net/member.php?id=1684486
https://www.artstation.com/migo1942
https://www.pixiv.net/member.php?id=4798022

i feel dead inside

>>4187100
Thank you very much. Here you go.
https://twitter.com/WhiteBox_Studio?s=09

>>4185608
Pretty cool concept but maybe make the armaments more "mechanical"? The cannons kind of just look like construction girders mounted on tubes. Better shape language and mechanical design would go a long way. The girl is pretty good though her head looks a bit too big to fit in the helmet.

wip

>>4187122
i know what u mean, if it were up to me i'd just leave everything in b/w but i need to learn to color, just have no clue how to go about it, i feel like when something clicks with colors it's random and not a conscious decision and idk how to improve on that.

>>4187730
he qt

>>4187736

hat not fit head

>>4187802
im the dude who posted this
I'm shit at clothes fold. Do anybody have a decent video tutorial for folds for different types of fabric? Pinterest tutorials look super nice, but most of the good ones are in Chinese or Japanese and I can't read spooky moon runes.

>>4187806

>>4187806

https://poshuanotes.tumblr.com/post/59945546692/how-to-draw-folds-notes-on-how-to-draw-folds-back

http://characterdesignnotes.blogspot.com/2010/10/famous-artists-cartoon-course-lesson-9.html

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=H2O2ixGzJD0

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Wz7SdRoMhT4

another shuten drawing

>>4187694
Thanks for the feedback, anon, I wanted the rocket ramps to be reminiscent of the Katyusha rocket launcher, but I think it does need more detail.

had idea for drawing, realized I can't draw male faces. i feel like a retard

>>4187730
photostudies photostudies photostudies. work closely from life and take time to observe light and it's interactions with objects of varying colour. look at simplistic art/graphic design/iconography and note which colours are used for immediacy/what can direct a message pointedly, appeal to a casual viewer. do master studies. working in oil especially helped me level my coloring ability, you can get a visceral range of depth that you might miss with a digital colour wheel. take on challenging subjects with diverse color patterns, once you spend enough time 'colourpicking' with your brain, it becomes rather ingrained and automatic. you'll be able to build appealing color schemes without overthinking it.
your other fundies seem up to scratch so it shouldn't be a detriment to niggle in on one aspect of study

also if you havent already, check marco buccis vids on ambient light and color notes (https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gwLQ0cDb4cE , https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jFoKmX0LfCs))

best of luck anon !!

>>4187806
>>4187802
You don't really suck at it though.
You should improve your other skills instead.

How furry can I get before being banned

>>4188026

? :(

>>4188028

>>4188030
I kind of want to add a background to this one later

>>4188026
gimme your blog before you get banned

>>4188034
https://twitter.com/NessieFynn

Just remembered this guy, did he ever finish his comic or give a blog?

>>4188026
>>4188028
>boy

>>4188056
based, finally not a shit piece on this Godforsaken board.

trying to regain the spark after soul crushing wage slavery

>>4188111
He has wide shoulders and a bulge for a reason

>>4188032
>>4188028
>>4188026
nessie pls stop trying to turn me into a furry. im not strong enough to handle these qts
im not strong enough for this

>>4188032
>>4188028
>>4188026
AAAAAA STOP TRYING TO TURN ME INTO A FURRY

Going with a more anime style of shading with this one.

>>4187806
It gets better after you study how other artists draw folds

Update

i relly tried on this one guys

>>4188167
i like this anon, do u usually draw robos?

>>4188531
Wow, you've improved so much! Faster than anyone in a while. You're so talented.

>>4188621
you're being sarcastic right? i fucking hate this thread

>>4188531
>>4188624
no worries, i slapped this redline up for you in ms paint

>>4188694
almost forgot, slim down that other leg

>>4188694
This redline is awful

>>4188696
wrong, she has appeal now

>>4188702
>scribble red lines in ms paint
>it's better now
I legitimately can't tell if you're shitposting or not

>>4188694
holy fuck. every time a beg redlines something it makes me wanna shoot somebody. jesus

>>4188705
the redline is a guide, i'm not doing your drawing for you bucko
if you'll notice her face has a nicer contour because i cured her mumps and duck lips, and her head fits with the style of eyes now

>>4188707
I'm not the op, and it's pretty sure you won't "do the drawing" for op because you don't know how to draw. Feel free to post work to prove me otherwise.
This redline is just massively bad, please don't be so arrogant to not recognize the faults in it, you're just going to lead op down the wrong path.

>>4188716
don't worry. i don't think op or anyone else will take this seriously

>>4188716
i drew this smug face just now, thank you for waiting

I havent drawn in a while and i need some tips

>>4188755
>No body
>Chicken scratch

>>4183728
Wonky shitty artstyle with no appealing shape design

midgets!

First time Ive taken a paint job to any sort of finish.

>>4188805
wow anon that is epic (not sarcasm)

>>4188601
Yeah, I've done plenty of them in the past

I feel like getting popular by doing what you love is pure luck and RNG, still won't stop me from drawing what I love

>>4188898
Was dumb enough to save stuff as png in the past.

>>4188898
was dumb enough to save stuff as jpgs back then

Drew this for my friend.

>>4188910
This has an incredible amount of appeal anon.

>>4188910
This is solid, what I would work on is your values.
There's not a lot of contrast between your base colors and their shades

>>4187736
can you draw a pirate character some day?

>>4187736
pretty good. Can you draw a pirate character some day?

Does the perspective on the right one look wonky to anyone else?

>>4187740
Fugg u right
>>4188956
Thank you, yeah I’d love to! I’d be a chance to practice environments too since it’d be cool to draw her on a ship

>>4184522
Reminds me of hollow knight

>>4189068
Also blog?

>>4189033
Yeah it does to me I think it’s the legs

>>4188805
Blog?

>>4189033
How do I into lineweight like you?

>>4187837
>>4187842
>>4188385
Arigato very much.

>>4188023
What other thing should I improve on? I sometimes look at my art and can't really tell what is making it kind of mediocre but after a while after drawing it, it looks pretty meh to my brain and changing what I think looks wrong never really change that. Any tips?

new drawing >.<

>>4188898
Do u have an insta? I really dig these

Lemme shill here also

>>4189254
I saw this on /i/, I like it, anon
It’s cute

>>4188903
I think jpegs are acceptable for detailed pieces, as long as you don’t have to look unrealistically close to figure out what a certain piece is. Detailed means the artifacts are harder to notice. While with simplistic stuff you should go with png, because jpeg artifacts on simple stuff is painfully noticeable.

While I was drawing this it felt like something clicked in my brain and I reached a small milestone in my art, thought I'd share :')

>>4188696
>>4188694

The face is better now at least.

>>4189353
I tried a more challenging angle!

>>4189182
Polishing your art, doing finished illustrations rather than sketches, doing backgrounds.
I wasn't saying you're bad when I said you should improve your other skills instead. So I guess just draw more.

>>4189100
Study artists better then you. That's what I did.

>>4189409
I also want to draw guns.
How did you come up with a gun to draw ?
I want a rifle gun that can be carried by a 16 year old.

>>4189429
this is sarcastic again i can tell :(

>>4189430
I wish I could unsee this.

>>4189433
A man and his dog

>>4189432
I'm not sarcastic anon. I do know that feel of being paranoid because of this shit board.
Yeah your gun is just a sketch so did you just randomly drew a rifle ? Well I didn't know. I'll just ask someone else.

>>4189449
nah I just used a reference for the whole drawing in fact
and the gun is really simplified, i got too lazy and made it all black

I don't know much about drawing rigid objects like this but I think I should perhaps use a 3d model and trace it?
maybe I should have either put more effort in the gun or remove it entirely from this drawing

>>4189449
I am not the guy that you are talking to, but I would suggest learning the anatomy of a pistol. Most modern guns when you look at them derive off the handgun. If you imagine a typical handgun, exaggerated the barrel by about 15 in, and then put a stock on it. It looks like a prototypical rifle. to me, the most crucial part is drawing a convincing pistol grip, because all of the subsequent parts Branch off of it. Just think try to think of everything as shapes. Don't worry about all of the switches and bolts and grooves until you can get the basic geometry down.

>>4189425
This is actually good advice. Studying artists you admire is a great way to learn.
Don’t get trapped into drawing hundreds of Loomis heads if you don’t like Loomis’ work.

>>4189455
>>4189456
I'm not really looking for how to draw a gun. I'm looking for different kinds of rifle. Like which rifles are light enough, has less firepower that can be used by 16 years old.
I'm drawing a comic with it so details like that matter.

Lilith cosplay request from twitter, i like how the legs came out

redrew a drawing/photo study i did back in july

>>4189498
the old version

>>4189480
P90
Sig 552/553
AKS-74U
Mp5 / mp5k (more of a submachine gun, but super light recoil)
Daniels Defense Mk18

Or you could draw something like pic related which is a custom AR15 I built for myself.

>>4189500
This isn't the porn thread! You can't post lewds here.

>>4189513
didn't see one up (i might be blind tho) so i posted here

>>4189480
>World of Guns: Gun Disassembly
Here’s a good reference material. Anything with .22 rounds are weak so just pick any of those. .45 acp and 9mm too.

>>4189518
>>4176250
It's been up for more then a week, pretty sure it's the slowest general.

>>4189522
huh, i searched up porn thread in the catalog and didnt find anything

weird

>>4189499
i like ur energy, if you add some variation and nuance with ur line weight and edge work it could add a lot

>>4189409
shutenfag this is actually palatable
good job

>>4189563
thank you i am working hard to improve and impress you guys

>>4189498
This is cool af
Great redraw

>>4189483
You seem to be pretty comfortable with this character now, maybe you could try bolder composition and poses to break the monotony.

>>4189081

@Okuusfabfacts

twitter.

>>4189480
>I also want to draw guns.
>I'm not really looking for how to draw a gun

Wot


I’m just fucking around. Good luck tho! I’d suggest a ruler mini ranch rifle. Semi auto, decent mag cap (depending on your location). Looks cozy, small caliber.

>>4189637
Ruger *

>>4189254
reminds me of this

>>4188032
I want to get back into painting more environments

>>4188230
You don't have to be a furry to enjoy animal characters, anon. They are sometimes more fun than humans

Which one?

>>4189800
second

>>4189800
right

>>4189803
>>4189805
Hm yeah, I'm sort of attached to that one since it's the original, but something draws me to how goofy the left one looks. Might just take a break from it and look with fresh eyes. Thanks for the feedback.

>>4189394

NEW THREAD

>>4189972

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=2mj5JrBxwqA
You're sipping all your coffee, pouring up some wine
Saying 'You can be my baby' if I gave you some time
Moving so fast but we could slow it down
I think I wanna hold ya but I'm not sure I'm allowed
'Cause you are gold to me
A piece of art to me

>>4184710
Blog?

>>4190036
I post here https://twitter.com/inkpleb

>>4189394
>>4189956
keep it up lass