/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

It's no surprise for teeth that hide to find much prey throughout the day

give me ur phone

Fixed some of the perspective issues on the right hand side. Anything else?

>>4166819
i think the thumb is on the wrong side of the hand: it should be facing outwards, right?

>>4166881
man you are so much better than me
but this face was bothering me to the point that I attempted my first ever overpaint
big love to you

Any opinions on this style?

>>4166916
Looks like a tranny

>>4166916
Hey you're that shaggy dude from the porn thread

I like this style

new kyle

i get fanservice and shit but dont we have a porn thread for this?

>>4166944
hidden and saged

>>4166944
Kyle is getting so good. Great faces and hair this time. Love the composition and happy mood too.

>>4167096
>all this to say anime titties
okei

My big hands girl

Girl in the picture popped way too low and jumped too high, low tre 2/10

>>4167193
uh

>>4166944
Thick midgets. That's pretty hot actually.

>>4167181
QT

>>4167220
Very nice. Blog?

>>4167279
https://twitter.com/ElakanDraws

>>4166806
as someone who skates, that board should be closer to the feet

>>4167365
She's clearly fucking it up in the image so it's alright

>>4167181
gibe blog

>>4166944
kyle pls share your art workout routine. how do i get this good?

>>4167386
t. Kyle

>>4167379
fumi2moe on twitter

>>4166944
>>4167220
>>4167295

Back to your containment thread.

>>4166944

>>4166944
>>4167220
>>4167295

Back to your containment thread.

>>4157572

>>4166806
Pretty slow tonight...

Messing about with paint and apply in CSP.

>>4167193
>>4167365
You're right, now that I have the full composition it's still too high.

Posting this again, asking for critique on what aspects I need to improve.

https://medibang.com/book/e51909220023516110004378258/view/

https://twitter.com/merrivius

Trying colors again.

>>4167616
your characters always seem a little sleepy.
Might be intended

>>4167525
that's some fine rendering. Good job

>>4167627
i mostly draw sleeping characters

Around the corner

>>4166944
Dios mio...

I’ve been really hating everything I draw lately, I’m continuing this drawing that I started before my art block :’( hopefully it should help. Dun goofed on the hands though

Trying.

>>4167676
This looks good anon

>>4167676
How do you get those nice lines?

>>4167668
Finished it

>>4167694
sexy but where is her foot standing on?

>>4167677
Thanks man. I will probably destroy this when I practice coloring.

>>4167678
I zoom in when I do the lineart.
I also take my time, no rushing.

>>4167711
Thanks, I tried to make it look like she’s reaching it outwards to show off her thighs, but not necessarily resting it. I guess I didn’t push the perspective enough :0

sketch for new drawing

>>4167573
I quite like this, the composition is excellent in the way the staircase gradually leads you down to the barbarian. Though, my criticism is that the barbarian dude looks pretty stiff, I can't tell exactly what his head is doing either. Is he looking up, forward or away?

Hi, can someone help? I'm a little rusty and I don't really know how I should be shaping her clothing

>>4167782
Thanks, I don't usually draw human characters, mostly some kind of weird creatures but the story was inspired by Conan and He-man and stuff like that so I wanted to try something new. Got to focus more on anatomy in the future, I do tend to draw stiff characters.

Check out the whole comic in the link, it's about 25 pages for a manga contest.

>>4167694
yikes
>the foreshortening on the arm
>the hand
>hard edge on the breasts ruins any sort of satisfying shape (i assume this is because hatching is the only way you know how to render)
>perspective on whatever she's sitting on
>the foreshortening on the right foot and left thigh
>light doesn't interact with the skin at all

if you aren't gonna buckle down and improve your fundies it might be time to move to /beg/, fren

>>4167736
okay im finished

>>4167928
Wow! Do you accept commissions?

>>4167934
nice samefag nipplenoseposter

>>4167934
sure man message me on twitter at
https://twitter.com/dairenke_art
;)

>>4167616

>>4167934
classic /ic/ bantz

weekend's doodles

>>4168024
kys pedo

>>4168026
>not even lolicon
damn you sure do know who to direct your impotent rage toward don't you moralfag? i'm quaking in my boots thinking of all the action blind retards like you can take against me, a real pedophile.
keep crying ha ha ha

>>4168026
thanks for the insight, anon. i hope this version is more to your likings.

>>4168062
crab chan!

>>4168066
Dilate tranny.

>>4167928
Kek

>>4168128
:(

>>4167942
>Replies to himself
>No (you)

>>4168175
i did not reply to myslelf it was anon who was making fun of me :(
but i replied just in case maybe he would give 2 dollars for a drawing i am desperate and very depressed

>>4167573
Really great, but the throne at the top looks tilted weirdly. Could the back of the throne be more parallel with the line of the back of the stair tower?

Did some Peppinos recently, mainly to test out Krita.

Of the same kin but not the same kind. I'll keep on searching for colors that match mine.

>>4167124
>Kaiji
Based

>>4167676
>>4167694
Blogs?

>>4168429
this looks like a scene out of Spore

>>4167648
I like this

drawing instead of going out

>>4167648
can a anon get a blog

>>4168618
Goddamnit stop making me want a grown up version of Yotsuba with her own animated series in a mixed style of Gorillaz and JSR

>>4168180
you dont need to stoop that low anon you're worth more than two dollars

(your art on the other hand...)

>>4168652
Im gonna get better i promise
The masterful design of that character fooled my eyes into thinking that Im drawing something good

>>4168665
i recommend

>>4168353
if you are that zach guy good job
also where is this from?

>>4166881
the highlights make it look like her mouth is open

>>4168702
It's the main character from this indie game called Pizza Tower. It's a platformer heavily inspired by Wario Land 4 and has fantastic art and animation. It's slowly becoming something of a hit, even tho only a few demos have been released so far. I recommend playing the latest demo from SAGE 2019:

https://pizzatowerguy.itch.io/pizza-tower-demo
Also Zach says hi

>>4167124
Bruh. Have a blog yet?

If not, give me at least a name I can put on the folder I created for your work, my dude.

I don’t know what to draaaaw

>>4168845
something cuuuuute nwn

>>4166899
thumbs can pivot about quite a bit

>>4168440
this is great!
do you have a blog anon?

>>4168622
twitter.com/junglevil
Im not very active though

Trying.

>>4168175
this is really cool, blog?

>>4168640
wholesome desu

>>4167124
>>4168799
Not yet but normally my username is ilovebeds or ilovebedsart

thank you i am honored you enjoy my stuff that much.

>>4168910
when i look at some parts, it looks great, but in others, it feels so weak. Sorry

>>4168940
Thanks, I understand. Can you point it out anon?

>>4168942
Torso and arms look solid
Hair, jacket look incomplete
Pants look weak

>>4168936
not that anon but i also love you work, keep going dude, your SOUL levels are astronomical

Where do you guys get reference for 16-18 years olds ? either boy or girl. Of course with clothes.
I'm drawing a webcomic with age like these.
When drawing, I look at older peoples attire on google and change it into younger ones and it's a pain in the ass.

>>4168959
Teen Vogue. Instagram. Pintrest: search teen fashion.

>>4168959
https://tips.fbi.gov/
Just put in your name and address and they'll email you the pics

>>4168936
you're gonna go far, kid

>>4169012
Is this homestuck? I don't know if this is homosuck, but this feels like hamsteak. It just has that homeskub aesthetic.

A project I'm working on will have very small and very tall people like gnomes and elves. This is my current WIP crack at the former.

>>4169048
oh huh, its not but i used to be really into homestuck

>>4167904
You’re completely right anon, I’ve been really unmotivated to draw in general so I drew that with little consideration and just went autopilot. I didn’t shade the skin with intention though, I genuinely prefer to leave it white. When I recover from being ill, I'll definitely spend some time studying ;;
>>4168520
Beholdnika on insta

How do you get a consistent style, I simply cannot. Btw any opinions?

>>4169531
>shes jaded an cynical on the right because she found out what the secret sauce is and the mystique is ruined for her

>>4167797
Looks pretty good, though you've made her head as big as her rib cage, and her ankle nonexistent.

>>4169424
This actually has a lot of charm anon, you should keep working in this direction but ground it with fundies

>>4167928
Felt that the first one to the right looked too different, so I made the middle as a mix.
You're trying to show too much of the side of the head, it feels like someone is pulling her ear and dragging her with it too far to the left.
While the nose circle is fine in the sketching stage, please don't let it show through on the bridge of the nose in the final version, that makes it look like a detachable robot part.

>>4169644
well my execution was bad obviously, but I was trying to draw a wide face actually, more round, like a child

>>4167928
Your final product isn't good to be honest, but your sketch >>4167736 is actually very much workable. Try sticking to your construction a bit more, especially for the cheeks which had the correct placement the first time.

Do you have any particular favourite anime artists? Try to study how they draw eyes.

>>4169669
Okay, but I don't think an overly cute head would fit very well together with such a body.

>>4169691
well this IS one of my problems with digital yeah, after the sketch phase i mess everything up what little good there was

>>4169695
yeah thanks, I used a reference for the body without much thought

>>4166905
You turned his work of art into westernized pre-teen tumblr shit, good work!

>>4169746
it's my favorite style

>>4169644
You should probably just retstart that entire left shoulder, the anatomy is so amateurish degrades the entire portrait

>>4169746
What are you talking about? It looks better

>>4169424
real swell. saved

>>4169746
honestly his style of faces are punchable

>>4167928
Can we take a second to discuss this
What makes the human brain unable to notice how wrong what he produces is?
Literally happened with my sister 2 days ago, she was almost ready to argue that her stickman head was an accurate reproduction of Joker's head and she's 17.

>>4169913
don't understand how you can have such solid lines and be piss at every other fundamental
>>4169923
very cute

lol

>>4169929
What fundies is he lacking? looks good to me.

>>4169924
im sorry man
that other anon said that my sketch was less terrible, so maybe my brain was still remembering how things were supposed to look like as opposed when I did the ""lineart"" and ""rendering"", which covered it all up
like say for example her arm, when i sketch it, I at least try to imagine it as a 3d form and in the messy sketch my brain projects that form, but later when I try to solidify it, it visually dissapears but my brain still remembers that form that I had in my head during the sketch

that is why i think when someone else sees it, he notices all flaws instantly, cause he never saw that form

but that is why i have you guys :))

>>4169913

why do you draw like 10 pictures at the same always

Rando dark elf gal

>>4169012
>>4169531
>>4169923
cuute

>>4170113
Is that drawn on a plate?
Why?

>>4166881
>>4166905
I like both. No homo, kings.

>>4170015
anatomy is completely fucked, not even worth redlining
no sense of gesture
perspective can be good but is static as fuck here
and i promise you the render will look plasticy as hell and have an extremely boring basic color palette

theres no point in trying to crit him on any of it though because he never learns and makes the same tasteless mistakes over and over no matter how many anons call him out. the downfall of an iron ego ig

>>4170199
Anatomy looks fine to me.
Gesture looks even better.
Perspective looks good.
And the render is subjective, and also irrelevant since you made a claim he had bad fundamentals.

I know you're just baiting for yous but it's okay. You're probably depressed/not feeling any purpose so your trying to get some replies. That's cool, much love.

>>4170227
lmfao the anatomy is broken af.
ex: it's impossible to hold the pose the swordswoman's upper body is placed in. seriously, try it.
the only reason the pose even looks plausible is because the direction of her grip isn't consistent with the downward direction of the sword.

next time use ref.

>>4170178
was watching thing with friend an was too anxious to ask him to pause so i could get my sketchbook an the plate was jus there so ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

>>4170260
Who cares, as long as it is appealing, it works and does the job.

Don't fall for the bait anon, you're doing good.

Study

Quick drawing of a lamia girl

gonna work on a full body version soon

>>4170066
left arm too large while right arm looks fucking horrible. legs heights do not match, the overall figure doesn't seem to feel right.

I just keep redoing the same pages

Revisited an old drawing

>>4170325
I like<3

>>4170360
>>4170348
>>4170347
beautiful

>>4168910
everything below the face looks solid. It's just the nose and mouth..

Been studying UPA style lately

>>4170412
Wtf gains goblin, your infiltrating /alt/ now too? Shoo shoo, this place is too good for you!

>>4170446
Midoriya cheeks

>>4170486
I think you could do with some thiner shading lines on clothes to make them look softer. As is they look indistinguishable from rock.

>>4170492
yes i see that now, i'm still trying to figure out the best way to hatch things.

okay guys what about this new sketch? :)

>>4170612
That is a really heavy rotation on the torso, even if you can pull it off, you need to change the midline below the rib cage to make a sharper turn.
The foot coming towards us is also rotated quite bit more than the knee, this will look broken when you clean it up.

Do the left 2 look in perspective?

>>4170622

>>4170348
oh, new panel and it looks sick!
Thou I thought you mentioned you wanted to rework the character designs?

>>4170670
You've gotten so used to the big that the big toe is in the middle, that you managed to swap both feet, as well as a lower leg.

>>4170672
oh fuck haha
ok see you in 30 min

okay hah

>>4170746
SHO SHO GAINS GOBLIN

>>4170747
That's not double G.

>>4170746
Try making some perspective lines for the top and bottom of the, as well as the eyes, they currently don't line up.

>>4169644
>>4169695
>>4167928
>TFW I look at that face and am reminded of Tumblr from 2014.

>>4167928
>>4170670
>>4170746
>–hey nipplenose work on your faces
>–haha okay :)
>still does the same thing
Are you pretending or something?

>>4170793
what about now?
i really wanna impress you guys im sorry :(

>>4169923
so this is the power of japanese line weight

>>4170746
is she dabbing lol

>>4170796
Don’t feel bad anon, I think it’s BECAUSE you have a lot of potential and are close to being good that the other anons are very eager to call out errors. I think at the moment, your major flaws will only improve with experience and self-reflection

>>4170671
Thanks, I still plan on changing the designs but I’m just treating this like a pilot for what I’d actually like to make

>>4166819
Construction anon?

>>4170342
Thank you anon! Been hungry for some actually useful critique. Mwah

>>4167573
The composition is boring to me, it's uneven which is nice, but you could change the camera's position to show what the viewer is supposed to be feeling, rather than this regular level shot. It makes it feel too static to me. Who are we viewing this interaction from, who's the more powerful one here, is this a dramatic confrontational interaction or something less confromtational and more of a conversation?

>>4170714
She looks a bit too twisted to me in the lower half but I still appreciate the psp fanart.

>>4170714
>>4170751
Everything you make except the faces is reaaally good

>>4170857
thank you anon
okay im dropping this then

>>4170798
How do I learn line weight damn it

>>4170940
i see you like baki

>>4170940
No, no. Keep going, this is good.

>>4171107
why are you drawing like 20 pieces at once and you never finish anything

>>4171112
he finishes about more than half of what he posts here, judging by his twitter.

>>4170940
sometimes its just better to stop and redraw the pose with what you've learned trying to fix it. she very much looked like she would fall over in that position, her center of balance was real wonky

>>4171147
thanks man
i got lost in drawing the muscles and whatnot

>>4170291
I was going to ask if you were the same guy who drew deku pissing himself on a paper place that one time

Amazons

>>4171328
Are you ever going to make anything more than these 1-off illustrations?

Not trying to offend - I love your stuff. I'm just curious!

>>4167410
Still cute as ever orange.

>>4171377
Oops meant to reply to
>>4169923
>>4168640

I still really like this zombie chick I doodled as well

which one is better?
I am trying to make my drawings stand out more by messing with levels and such. but I am not sure how it is working.

B-day gift for fren :^D

just 2 more sketch commissions and I'm done for oct

>>4171448
Cute!

beeline

>>4171408
they all look bad

Just trudging along

>>4171408
The first one, I suppose.
But you should focus on them looking good on their own rather then after a few filters.

>>4171575
i love this

going nowhere

>>4171723

>>4171216
>guy

>>4168618
blog blog blog

>>4167410
This is really good!

>>4171685
ok. thanks!

>>4168640
>>4170486
Love the ambience in these
>>4171575
Very cool design
>>4171683
Looks like a very challenging angle but you did a great job on this... The trees all have shadows, I think the standing warrior could be casting one as well.
>>4171773
Is this traditional? I quite like this

I made a kids-style illo for halloween... Any thoughts on this?

sketch for new drawing

>>4171683
Instagram really does not make your art justice. It looks way better than I thought when I first saw it there.

>>4171926
I love the cats post this on twitter so i can publicly nut all over it

>>4171926
not really digging the proportions or the arms on that witch chick, but the cats are fun. shorten the arms a bit and enlarge the head just a tad.

>>4171975
In a minute
>>4171978
Is it a little better now?

>>4171978
>>4172013
Uh yeah I forgot to shorten the arms. Wait

>>4171953

>>4172015
>>4171978
No perfect but it'll do ;\

>>4167365
>not jumping as high as possible everytime

>>4171448
>17
underage posters please leave

>>4171381
Turn down the opacity on those planks in the background. It's hard to focus on the character.

This is what I'd push it towards. You basically fixed the head issue but I still think those arms were too long

>>4172023
bardzo ładne

>>4172052
Yeah I tried to do some hatching to create some value but didn't quite get her to pop. I think I might've been better off doing smaller strokes to get it to read as a darker value instead of a texture

>>4172060
Dziękuję
>>4172058
Thanks Anon
Yeah they were. I'll try to watch out for this in the earlier stages of the drawing, at this point it's super clumsy to fix.

>>4169424
Going to keep posting bc i like the vibes in this thread

>>4171926
How do you build patience for lineart?
I love this drawing

>>4172086
Thank you Anon!
I usually take many breaks during drawing so I don't get bored or tired

haha i finished

>>4172081

>>4172122
Wut.
Ty going to look at this for ref.

>>4171720
very much thank

>>4171813
it really might have been a guy, i don't know
(unless it's you and ur gril, in which case, post more deku pee pls)

>>4172118
who's your favorite anime artist bro?

>>4172292
norasuko

>>4172293
ah ok

>>4172299
what :(

>>4172118
ok fuck this i removed the shitty colors and shitty rendering and I changed the face and legs

i could not live with myself leaving in that state
please help :(

>>4172058
i made a couple changes, mostly personal preference, hope they help

>>4168936
i didn't know you posted ITT
looks like im going to have to find somewhere else to share my shitty art without being recognized then.

>>4172058
I forgot to say, i fucking love these cats.
do you have a blog?

>>4170300
Why are you so evil. They're trying to help him

Cracked out on Vampire Savior.

Cracked out on Vampire Savior.

>>4172491

>>4172493
looks nasty. draw her peeing

>>4172493
You are good but your shading doesn't act like it has an actual point of light from which the shadows are created. Also the shadow is sketched in too loose. Beside that I looks great

>>4172451
Much appreciated
>>4172459
Yes, you can follow me on Tumblr, Insta and Twitter. It's @pyros0me. Thanks!!

Also I've got a WIP in the pic rel

im struggling

>>4172600
love this

>>4172600
Blog?

>>4172046
Who's underage

>>4172514
Love these lines. They're so fluid

please help

>>4172670
what the fuck

>>4169424
I likes this
Makes me feel warm
Keep improving

>>4172670
you have to look at a picture of an actual person eventually

>>4172670

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gvTsB7GWpTc

>>4172670
right foot should be bigger since it's foreshortened.

WIP

>>4170412
actually a pretty cool pose, perspective and construction seem solid. I think you would benefit from using thinner or even sketchier lines in your final version, your linework has a tendency to come out really stiff and i think its hurting what looks to be a good foundation. I could do some linework on top of this if you'd like

>>4172600
beautifully done

>>4172458
Im sorry you feel that way dont feel like you cant post cause of me im actually curious who you could be!

>>4173026
Sorry, I know it sounds dumb but you are one of my favorite artists.
I fills me with great anxiety knowing that you post here alongside a shitty /beg/ like me.

>>4168936
>filename
god you're right

>>4171926
Thanks for the crit pyro, didn’t even realise he wasn’t casting a shadow.

>>4171956
Yeah Instagram gibs my art pretty hard, but it’s the best I got to share my stuff :(

>>4173047
It is really a honor thank you but really dont worry about posting your stuff or putting yourself down

we draw to show the effort we put in to the things we love and believe in don't let me in anyway possible block your passion to others.

>>4172832
brutal

>>4173048
Yeah last year i stagnated cause i was too comfortable with the way i was drawing and with what i was drawing

>>4173129
kawaii

>>4173142
thank

>>4173129
Why would elfs have fast food?

>>4173129
Were those eyes an attempt at drawing Love LIve! -like eyes in your style?

>>4173326
that look incredibly painful

>>4171112


It's definitely a bad habit for him but you get better from doing medium grade work consistently, not from render fagging.

Genuinely, if you can pull off decent shit most of the time, over like 30 min or less you learn way more.

>>4172514
this silhouette is absolute dogshit, unreadable overlap

>>4173398
God I want to draw like this so badly

Requesting critiques on the lighting, forms, and color choices. For far, about two hours have been invested into the rendering.

>>4172491
>>4172493
What can you tell me about Akihiro Yoshida and Hideo Minaba ?

>>4173428
the drawing itself isnt good. the lack of perspective in the "z" dimension makes this character look like a midget

>>4173428
Poorly drawn and pillow shaded.

>>4173428
Eye level is above her head, the arm should be foreshortened to a point the hand is almost as big as the head. The body should be foreshortened way more going toward the feet.

>>4173479
Can you show an example. It would be funny to see.

>>4173289
creature comforts are universal

>>4173333
i dont understand, i just draw how i wanted her to look like

ive been doodling lineless stuff recently with my mime oc
idk its been years ever since i tried

>>4172638
twitter.com/wholesomeorenji

>>4170348
great art, where can i find more of this?

Just started with digital art (this is my second work)

>>4174750
Forgot the image hahaha

>>4173355
for you

>>4174754
sick photo trace and color choice

>>4170714
I really like this.