/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4117210
I would reconstruct the cranium. Her face is a little large, and the brainpan area is extremely underdeveloped, it looks like a microcephaly baby. I'd reconsider the jaw area too.

Good structure on the eyes, nose and left hand (the hand in the foreground is lacking)

>>4117190
could I get some feedback on this before I develop it further? it's just a rough draft for values and rough form.

I hate the color of the torchlight and i feel like my value range is lacking

>>4117210
I tried a little edit but something still feels off. Remember eyes are half the way up, not 2/3.

Requesting critique on the rendering so far.

>>4117227
stop. just stop. go study perspective. then post again.

>>4117227
consider suicide

>>4117242
good. but the tone edges need to be blended together better.

>>4117242
The way the eye is drawn is making the perspective fall apart.

>>4117248
>>4117245
>sperging out over a rough draft

imagine getting mad over some gesture

>>4117256
oh wow here we go haha. cant take a critique? have fun being ignored.

>>4117256
>gesture

thank you for sharing your iq level.

>>4117258
it's called a metaphor, why would you criticize something that took less than 5 minutes to put together

>>4117258
I'm just going to leave this here

https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gesture_drawing

>>4117262
>>4117263
post something that's finished and stfu

>>4117262
it's called a noose, you should look into it

>>4117262
cry more little bitch

>>4117363
good perspective, nice soft render. continue.

>>4117228
this looks much better ty

>>4117190
drawing a chibi-ish garnet in perspective i kinda like it but something looks wrong. heeelp.

>>4117190
drawing a chibi-ish garnet in perspective i kinda like it but something looks wrong. heeelp.

>>4117227
i do like the colour that is coming from torchlight the only think that i could say its that should be interactin with the rest of the background due the reflection and the shadows that it creates.

>>4117460
soul

>>4117499
dont waste your time with that retard

>>4117502
>still being mad over a slightly mediocre sketch

it's really not even that bad

>>4117252
Will do.

>>4117255
I'll flip it around and rework it as needed. Thanks for letting me know.

>>4117531
it's terrible and should be destroyed. start something new.

>>4117502
Soul?

>>4117576
Soul means it’s beg tier garbage, soulless means you have ascended and sold your soul for your craft

Well? I had to use some Jesus pics a refs. Pretty sure the hands are fucked.

>>4117582
>pretty sure the hands are fucked
Yep, the left one could be better, saw this the other day on DeviantART's undisocovered artists page, keep working on that anatomy and you'll make it anon. I'll add that you could try and redo this and try symmetry, the windows and arch are off

here's something i'm working on. gonna try to do darker occlusion shadows as I paint with colors. anything I should fix?
I really admire people who can make something messy look good. I want to stop worrying about being clean, if nothing else it would improve my speed and would make art more enjoyable. i mean this took me like 5 hours on its own, i have some obsession with precise construction and doing things by the book to the point where i eat up most of my time trying to make it look perfect

>>4117545
pyw

>>4117592
sure. what difference would it make if I did though?

>>4117582
Fuck man, this reminds me of Junji Ito's work, good shit. Yea, your right, hand on the left looks like the goat dude got bit by the snake lmao.

>>4117582
>those scratchy robes
I want to like your posts but you always make one or two flaws and that kills me, same as last thread with the baby pic, it's like you do that shit just to fuck with people.

>>4117582
Is this a motherfucking Sakimichan reference.

>>4117605
N-no.

>>4117605
Actually keked.

>>4117605
He should just pretend it's swelling.

>>4117582
you need jesus.

>>4117612
Can we not brimg religion to the draw thread?

>>4117625
hell yeah. old school shit.

>>4117595
prove that you're not nealous that your garbage isn't up to par with that garbage

>>4117630
who the fuck would be jealous of that preschool-tier trash lmao fucking hang yourself kid

>>4117581
Oh i see, i'm in the middle of a crisis and recognizing that my work is really mediocre, so how do i start to study agin? I was watching a interview with vincent desiderio where he says that if you dont need to draw a hand than you dont need to learn, you should only take the tools that are useful, and so on. This coming from a guy who paints in that wonderful representational way. So im really lost, what should i do. Thanks!

>>4117629
:) !!

>>4117363
Is there a context to this piece, or is it just a study of the doll?

Shrimp thing

and a kstew portrait study

cant fix this. but i know her face is fucked. not qt at all.

>>4117248
??? what is wrong with you

>>4117502
>>4117271
>>4117267
>>4117258
>>4117268
actual samefag
what did that guy do to you lmao? did he fuck your girlfriend? god you are obsessed

>>4117190
where is the OP image from, I donm't remember it from the past thread

>>4117805
she looks like a ghoul because she has almost no eyebrows, almost no upper lashes, and her mouth is as small as one of her nostrils

>>4117848
Wow u almost were right, except last one. No im just disturbed. Beyond help

Better? Worse?

>>4117891
fix his eye dude. redline a skull and reconstruct the eye. that's like the size of a pea on a guy who looks like he's jacked like a strongman. imagine a pea on a basketball. or like a walnut but way smaller and next to a beach ball.

>>4117864
https://www.instagram.com/augcasarin/

>>4117456
it's too symmetrical, position her gauntlets and face more dynamically

>>4117605
holy shit

>>4117588
wth why does this look like a jacked isabelle?

Alright folks last time I was here I got some really helpful info on how to use digital better. I've been doing studies of light, clothing folds and asaro heads. I've been having trouble when it comes to blending different areas of the face so I used a more cell shaded approach. I understand this style is kind of autistic but when it comes to the highlights, how would I even go about blending them in? Every time I do I feel like the whole thing looks like putty and belongs even more on deviantart more than it does now. The main thing I like about this is the clothing folds but if those are fucked too let me know. If I should just go back to beg at least give me a few pointers before I have to wallow in that pit.

i was just wondeirng if i could get some critique on my inking.

The image on the left is my attempt (used a cloth because it was an easy way to make shadows)

and the image on the right is the style im trying to mimic

Linework + Flats

>>4117907
You better not have taken one of your drawings to be the OP pic, mang

>>4117190
lol i saw ur work on bate-papo ilustrado

>>4118356
OP here, not my art, just liked the big titty goth girl

>>4118439
yeah, lots of grils drolling over it on the coments... did you bang any of them? pls deliver, Augusto

>>4117190
>>4118439
>>4118529
>>4118530
aug here, once again i got featured in some thread. Well, i have a lot of fear of this random internet girls, i dont get envolved with them. But about delivering, i wll make NSFW now, since almost none of my followers became my patron. Really, really sad.

>>4118675
>i have a lot of fear of this random internet girls
lmao, are u gay

>>4118675
Sup, I'm a fan of yours, and brazillian aswell. Acho que tentar se vender a um público brasileiro é uma má ideia, já que não existe cultura de comissão por aqui.
Best of luck, my man.

>>4118690
maybe one day you will understand...
>>4118694
How i change my public? 60% of my public is brazilian, do you know some groups? I ll start do do NSFW, where i can post it to atract american pervs with money?

>>4117891
Good rendering overall

idk ive been kinda just like freehand/doodling
i dont do anime really

>>4118014
drawing a buff isabelle is a tradition i have to see my progress

>>4118698
From what I know, Instagram is not very good to advertise yourself to foreigners. I think Twitter would be ideal, though I can't help in terms of gaining visibility.

>>4118679
Are you a Hardstones mcflintcock wanna be?

>>4119024
was just thinking this
Did flintcock rebrand?

>>4117190
Yes.

>>4117190
yes

>>4117190
hello brothers,someone plz draw otto von bismarck chan

>>4117248
Lmao nice

>>4117581
You ass.

I drew stacey from goofy movie, found this interesting pose she did.

>>4117581
>soul meams it's garbage
Nigger please.

It's from a game I'm working on.

Painting lots of pet commissions! Trying gouache out for the first time this week- I painted this same cat in March and I think I’ve improved a lot. Maybe I’ll reply with the first painting for y’all to decide!

>>4117582
Despite the hands needing some work this is really cool! I would love to see you using some kind of screen tones- maybe traditionally ours interested or maybe someone has made a brush that simulates it? One anon says they don’t like the line work in the robes but I think it’s very haunting and makes the figure seem like it’s vibrating with energy!

>>4117803
I like the expression but I wish you’d render the nose further!

>>4117805
Commendable that you went for such a dynamic pose! Proportions/anatomy are all off but I mean, you’re pushing yourself to try something really hard! Did you reference a real skater? One thing I’d say is that the right arm is particularly rough and that the shirt doesn’t make sense- I know you want to show the bobbys but it should make sense w gravity.

>>4119283
the entire sketch was a mistake. yes i used a real skater. the sketch was fine at first but it quickly became a polished poopling. added tits in from memory(oh nonono) yea its fucked and i trashed it.

>>4119286
I’m not sure, because I didn’t see your reference but I might approach it again like this? I might be completely off but these are the fixes I’d make. I think you shouldn’t give up on this piece- it’s a super cool and dynamic pose! Be proud you even tried to go for something so tough!

>>4119299

Working on drawing tiddies.
I can draw EVERY other boob size including completely flat all the way up to ginormo-huge but for some reason I find B cups in particular really hard to draw...

>>4117190
Request from /v

A bit more clean up, but happy with how this is coming along.

>>4119444
Always nice to see your stuff. Keep it up, anon.

>>4118529
>>4118675
>>4118694
Brazilian /ic/ when

WIP and rough.
Rate my Kaiser.

>>4118675
>But about delivering, i wll make NSFW now,
Hory shet
On what account? I wanna see this

>>4118675
Tell us right now: do you actually want to draw porn for a living? Cause your new audience will tell.

I'm telling you right now to try engaging with your current audience first to see what kind of content they'd like from you. Don't go down the rabbit hole of degeneracy. It's a short term adrenaline addiction that will burn you out long term.

>>4119389
i like face

>>4119594
90% of them would not mind, i did the poll in facebook and instagram with similar results. Its doing great so far, i didnt lost followers and i increase 200 R$ in my patreon while i was sleeping.But i will go really slow, justo some tits here and there for now.

some exercises from references

Another try at combining animu with my own style.

>>4119708
Oh wrong thread.

>>4119078
>>4118675
how do girls lust and drool over a guy that posts nothing but paintings of girls with big tits? Are you extremely handsome or something? If you were anything but both attractive and passionate, you would be seen as a creepy loser in someplace like America

>>4119544
https://www.patreon.com/augcasarin

>>4119841
i guess im just cute anon.

>>4119665

I recommend paying attention to the other 10%. That number may be higher than you believe. There are already concerns certain people are trying to turn this entire site into one huge porn ad.

Where do you draw the line in terms of content you will not do? Once you start this, they will test your principles. If they sense desperation, they will attempt to convince you to throw your talent away on increasingly degenerate shit.

Basically done, maybe some more touch ups on the face but idk, critiques?

>>4119529
Oban Star Racers?

>>4118675
I love the kind of girl you're drawing,just make more

how do i make this more cohesive
i dont like the color localization. im going to add more interesting stuff in the treasure like statues and stuff

>>4119925
i recognize reference

>>4119927
because she is a QT and my waifu

>>4119861
not really, you're just pale and skinny, and the profle picture goes together with the art to create this mysterious persona
>>4119841
in a tropical and upbeat contry like Brazil he makes these paintings that are very moody and atmospheric, and some emo girls(?)arthoes(?) think it's all so very deep and relatable.
the majority of them isn't very good looking, tho
t.brasileiro

>>4119942
>upbeat country like Brazil

90% of urban Brazil is an open wound

>>4119942
oh, ok

Made 2 attempts

I tried this with a hard brush, blending stuff was fucking impossible. I kept getting ugly streaks to matter how much I went over it
2nd (this one) I tried a different brush, much easier to blend. Tons of inaccuracies though.

>>4119993
just use a soft brush brother

>>4120013
Was trying to blend like this anon was
He even attached a video but I still have no idea how he's getting it to behave/blend as nicely as he does
I'll mess around with it a bit more

>>4119925
wtf it came out way darker....shit i thikn the computer im working on is miscalibrated..

>>4120087
The rendering is not that good, and the value is off. People here shit on Ruan Jia but then try to replicate this? For the love of good, if you're so desperate for a figure rendering guide, Sakimichan's ones are way better, and her stuffs are all over internet.

But desu, get NMA course.

>>4119993

yeah not sure what to do if your monitors color is off, this is coming out way darker and over saturated on other monitors. i tried to adjust it to what it looked like when i was drawing

>>4119993
create temp layer
paint in large big stroke and erase lightly into shape you like
merge down
etc etc

Shit quick animation i did last night. I rarely draw let alone this is one of the first animation attempts i done in years.

Hey I'm looking to push my art to the next level let me know whats beg.

my study of this damn fabric

>>4120314
beg

ngmi

Not drawing right now
But take a look at this guy I drew yesterday

>>4120316
Hahaha, go back to your /beg thread young one.

idk

>>4120314
gut gemacht

Not exactly a drawing but since people are posting digital paintings... here's a gouache painting I did yesterday.

>>4120437
Anon that looks really good

>>4120403
You've been rused, I was merely pretending

>>4120438

Thanks! Maybe watching all those James Gurney videos is finally paying off.

>>4120437
Remind me of pusy

>>4120437
nice tones. very nice.

>>4120451
k

>>4120478

Thank you very much.

>>4119472
very nice, though it feels too perfectly symmetrical

>>4117612
Ok but I already do bible art.

>>4120570
yoooo that's good duude.

>>4120583
>that attention to detail
Holy fuck dude how long did that take? But have to say, that deer looks like he's seen some serious shit.

>>4120583
comfy

>>4120583
NIGGER DID YOU DRAW EVERY SINGLE ON OF THOSES LEAVES ONE BY ONE!?
You deserve this (you) good fucking job.

how are the values on this? I'm just trying to figure out the shape and value for things before polishing

>>4120601
it's all garbage, kill yourself beglet

>>4120583
Hey anon, do you have some kind of mental disorder? Not trying to be offensive but I want to check on the theory that some mentally ill artists put alot of attention to detail in artworks they male.

>>4120604
based and begletpilled

>>4120616

Why don't you be honest about your question and ask him if he has autism? We all know that's what you're thinking. That's what normies always assume about anyone who has the patience and concentration to put a lot of detail into their work.

>>4120601
retard.

>>4120633
>good at drawing
>assumes anon is autistic

kill your self

>>4120604
>beglet
kek

>>4120601
stop posting

>>4119102
>otto von bismarck chan
No you fucker

>>4120590
A little less than a day, and yea my animals could use work, the wolf is funky looking aswell now that I look at it harder, I'll go back later on this year and edit such when I get better at them.
>>4120596
Thanks bruv
>>4120616
Not sure, but I used to have seizures as a kid after having bacterial meningitis as a toddler. I could be on the spectrem but I never got tested

>>4120651
At least you can see your mistakes unlike this nigger >>4120601

>>4120636

Reading comprehension isn't your strong suit, is it?

>>4119078
values dude, fix them.

Studies on (cross)hatching with different brushes. I've been avoiding any kind of rendering for too long.

>>4120658
wrong anon.

>>4120604
>>4120634
>>4120646
>>4120654
>anon asks for help
>attack him instead

do you not just simply give constructive criticism because it's completely beyond your skill level to improve upon something? if he's so much worse than you are, why not prove how instead of just telling him to kill himself?

>>4120663
bartosz detected

iunno what to name it

Heya folks,
I'm a props-buyer and had the brilliant idea of commissioning some copyright-free art here to put in a movie, since you guys like to draw and some of you are even good at it.
All I'm after are a few character sketches that display a meager amount of creativity and artistic skill on par with pic related, and I'll pay for your time.
If you're interested, shoot me an inquiry at djjizzyjazzman@gmail.com

>>4120601
can I please get some help with this instead of shitposting

>>4120786
Two right hands.

>>4120791
what if his right hand is his left hand?

i dont usually do digital lineart, feedback appreciated

>>4120829
beglet shitter

>>4117190

>>4120087
you mean this guy?
I think I saw he use a hard brush but he also use soft eraser and some smudge tool I think(the vid quality is pretty bad)
So I guess he is use a similar method to ctrl paint guy

The bike has gotten away from me. I would appreciate a quick redline or creative insult. Thanks

really hate how the bike line width is inconsistent with her body, idk maybe thats your process.

>>4121032
Yeah the bike is roughed in but the line isn't the issue, it just looks like off balance dog shit. I've jacked it around to no avail so I'm looking for some fresh eyes. Thanks

>>4119693
Good work anon

>>4121027
>>4121034
Do you have a ref, or have you tried sketching the bike from the side? I'm having trouble figuring out what's bad perspective, and what's just a dumb looking bike (no offence).

>>4121070
I have a pile of references, but decided to "synthesize", stupidly. I think I bit off more than I could chew. I'll scrap it and start over.

>>4120601
that light source needs to be brighter that's for sure. all of your darks/lights stay constant, they need to be blended and pushed more

I'm very new to drawing, and this is the first year I've tried to draw seriously and have been in an art class for around three weeks. Hopefully, there isn't too much wrong with it. I'll try to find the reference again if I can because I just found it really quick on Google. Also, yes, it is a fanmade JoJo stand.

Aaaaand my picture is sideways because I am a dumbfuck. I'm sure it's fine hopefully.

Is the sky too grey? It looks different on my phone

>>4121371
this is legit cute as fuck

>>4121371
Wow Anon, I really love your style of rendering! Especially on the trees and grass. This piece is super cosy and cute. As for criticism I think you might benefit from doing some more less rendered, sketchy studies or just drawings in general. Your anatomy and clothing folds could use a bit of work as well as some minor construction improvements. The legs in this kill me. In general the character's lower half has a lot less detail and it kinda detracts from this otherwise alright piece. If you're still working on it my suggestion is redlining this girl to SHIT. what are her legs doing? What's going on with her right arm, etc. Just establish what you want her body to be doing a bit more. Also add more shading into her torso for sure. I'm a bit a bit confused about the light source but that could just be me being dumb. Over all, pretty nice, this makes me want to see more from you anon. And the sky's greyness depends on the mood you're going for/kind of weather you want this painting to have! I like it as is, I think it compliments the girl's dress and little cottage well.

>>4119942
have you seen pics of him? idk this just seems like a random hate post

>>4121371
legs are super fucky

>>4121450
yes
speaking as a lonely guy, of course some jealousy may shine through. my observations are sincere though

>>4121461
I'm not jealous at all, just curious of how women would desire somebody who paints things like that. I wish I could paint like that but I'm sure it would push women away.

>>4121111
too much details for fur and hair, u also shouldn`t use white on the right curve of the face, it occures when the light source is backwards, instead use highlights on the surface where light reflects straight into ur eye

>>4121600
I think the mouth looks off putting my guy, I’m loving the way this is turning out though.

>>4121618
Thank you. Made a few fixes.

>>4121635
The jaw is too pronounced, it's a matter of structure
I don't draw anime, but hopefully you can see on my example

>>4121635
It looks great so far, but I think you might wanna rework the head a bit more. Something about it is off, I think the face looks as though it's slanting off. The eye on the right looks wonky— flip the canvy and you'll see it when you flip it. the mouth doesn't really feel like it's in the right place, it looks like it needs to be tilted up a little bit I think? (Tilted up from the right side.) Also, because of the way the face is, it looks like the jawline is way too long. I think the hair on the right is not covering up where it should be. It looks like it's getting pushed too far back in space when it would actually be covering the eye, but I get wanting to be able to see it.

>>4121565
if you analize the painting, the only aspect of sexual conotance is her big tits. The face is doing nothing, the mood is totally assexual. The pose is totally natural. There is something to woman to look at, and ignore the boob aspect. I guess this is the way to get away with it.

>>4118350
check your values. Shes lacking occlusion and cast shadow. heres a really shitty edit

>>4120829
The lighting has no source so the shading seems pretty random.
Nice line confidence, I suggest pushing yourself by using a smaller brush, that will usually show you any things you were having trouble with that you were subconsciously hiding by using thicker lines.

>>4121446
It's far from finished, I seriously I would be able to get it done in a week but the details increase the workload exponentially

>>4121083
thanks for the feedback, you are the kino of /ic/

why do i never get any you's

>>4117190

>>4121880
ugly, not just her face

hellboy, looks kinda doodoo

fuck this guy useless feedback
>>4121894

>>4121880
i think it's good you need some stonger storytelling in the body language though she looks bored instead of exhausted. also support her weight better, that's a very hard position to hold casually, lot of ab work. the armor design around her midsection makes her seem a bit dumpy as well

I’m having fun sketching rn, college started though so there’s a bit of pressure for what I do with my free time :c

>>4121962
make sure youre not covering up a lack of understanding of lighting with stylized rendering

>>4121965
It’s something I’m specifically trying to avoid, hope it doesn’t come off that way

>>4121975
it does which is why i mentioned it
also its fine to use pen but it locks you into the first iteration of an idea if you arent willing to be messy

>>4121652
>>4121785
Reworked it with a Loomis head as a guide. LEt me know if it still looks off or not. If everything's good, I'll start finalizing the sketch's details.

How are my values looking here?

>>4121980
You’re right ahh, I’m gonna try to rewire my brain a bit because the idea of getting messy makes me tense. I’ll try doing some exercises, thank you anon

>>4121982
You actually managed to make it look worse. Stop for today and come back to it later with fresh eyes. Your proportions from the first one was correct and now it is out of proportion with a long face.

>>4122003
this

>>4122003
Also forgot to mention that her face is still skewed, you have a bias and its okay everyone has it, Learn to flip your canvas horizontally until it becomes second nature to correct these skews as you go.

>>4121987
Your values don’t matter since you don’t understand the Asaro head. Proportions off and so are the rhythms. Get the placements right before rendering.

>>4121879
Post something good and you will

traditional sketches from today that I colored digitally
>>4121591
I feel like there are a lot of very weird proportions going on here? Particularly in how the legs meet the torso- it sort of seems like you wanted to show the inner butt cheek so you exaggerated it? I do love the color palette though!

>>4120583
I love your work! In the best way possible it reminds me of Henry Darger!
>>4120437
Really beautiful- is it all just watered down heavily? I think the only thing that could improve it is if you used some of the gouache in a more opaque way? But that might just be personal preference.

>>4117588
Lol. Nice interpretation of Isabelle.

I'm just a beginner, but her right fist (right from her perspective) looks wierd to me. It looks sort of flat. I think the thumb is what's throwing it off. Maybe try using a reference to fix it?

Other than that it looks really good, and it made me laugh. Keep it up! Where will you post it when done?

>>4117582
haha le epic satan :^)

My favorite drawing! Curious what everyone thinks!

>>4122136
Are you able to draw two eyes?

>>4122110
Yeah it does look like the thumb is too far down the forearm, or maybe it's just the foreshortening's messed up

https://twitter.com/HonHearthy
I only draw nsfw furry stuff though, this isabelle is an exception.

Going through the piece. Added some purple tones on an overlay layer to add some color to her face. How's her expression read? Any facial mapping issues?

>>4121896
Would’ve went bolder on the shadow shapes on hellboy for full mignola bite.

>>4121880
Her crotch is kinda off it should be tilted counter clockwise a bit more. Also her right thigh is too long

>>4121453
>>4121446
I don't see anything obviously wrong with the legs, maybe it's the skirt

>>4121371
the value structure is pretty nice desu and i like how you handled the trees. the sky is fine.
the raised leg looks very oddly attached & the grass is the foreground feels sloppily done compared to the rest of the painting

>>4122324
I'm still experimenting with the foreground

Just opened up an older character concept thingy I might finish now. Trying to go from Alchemy silhouette scetch to posed line drawing. I'm really bad at sci-fi stuff...

>>4122175
I like this one, adding it to my sweet collection.

>>4122082
blog?

>>4121450
>>4121371
uhg, fuck yes the legs are fucky, very cute, but fix it

>>4121600
looks like she punched a bowling ball with her face

vidya study

>>4117190
why is this so fking hard to paint

>inb4 paint something less hard
no, im figuring out my weaknesses.
lineless, shapeless stuff like this is what Im the worst at

>>4122040
Thats retarded though this thread is for critique on what youre working on if my art was good i wouldnt show you bitter fucks

>>4120253
the face and hair is the best part
You have good value steps in the shadow of the face that are nice and clearly defined.
The arm in front has really bad wrinkles
clothes just don't work like that
The pants could be nicer too to match the quality of the face.
I would work on clothing folds if I were you

>>4122411
I tried

>>4121600
like other anons said, mouth's position is weird. i tried fixing it.

>>4122511

The thing that fucks with me concerning the legs/feet is that we can't get a proper read for the leg to our right coming towards us in the Z-axis (towards the camera). Both of her feet are basically the same size and the one coming towards us should also be a completely different shape since it's from a different angle. You might even want to show a little bit of her heel and have some light hitting it since it's probably not obscured completely by her skirt since it's closer to the "camera". I'm too drunk to do an overpainting.

GJ on the rendering anyway! Are you using the pencil tool or something to get dem pixely edges? It's an interesting effect.

>>4122531
It's not necessarily that much closer to the camera.

I'm using MS paint with a mouse

>>4122538

>>4122405
I don’t have one outside of the IG I use for commission work- what blogs do people usually use? Twitter?

Trying to copy ilya. I still can't draw any decent line on the tablet. Any tips? I'm using a small wacom intuos, i think the pencil sensitivity is fucked

>>4122547
I prefer IG honestly.

Wish it had a folder/sorting system though

>>4122531
>>4122538

Decided to do a quick one anyway before I get to bed. Take this with a huge bag of salt though.

I'd move the hem up a bunch just so we could get a better read of her legs. I think the pose is more important than the exact design of her dress in this case, but that's just me.

I'd also move the sun just a tiny bit to the right just to help with the read but I'm not sure if this is a good idea artistically. Kinda like the idea of having some soft highlights on her forehead though.

>>4117625
I always rly like your stuff. At least, I think it's your stuff I would look at!

Live class today. What should l focus on in the next class?

>>4122585
That doesn't look right to me

>>4117228
Better, but you've neglected any depth in the face. yes the nose protrudes but the eyes exist in sockets. I'd look into proportion for the facial structure, and then compare head size to the hand and torso size.

>>4122477
Woah

>>4117190
both my computer screen and tablet screen are off and i don't know if i should even trust my phone for how it'll show up on most peoples screens

this is supposed to be a very dark and brooding painting but not this dark, fuck

>>4122082
>is it all just watered down heavily?

I mean... it's not laid on very thick. DESU, I have more experience with watercolor so my approach is probably influenced by that, but I like the increased freedom and ability to make changes on the fly that gouache provides.

The one I'm working on now is a lot thicker because the subject matter has a lot more specific detail that I have to capture, which causes me to add a lot more paint. I'll post it as soon as it's done.

Thanks!

>>4122589
That means a lot to me if it is me you’re talking about haha :’)

>>4122559
>lol, look at this Ilya wannabe

>>4122650
testing some stuff out, it's easiest to compare images on different screens through 4chin

>>4122650
testo

>>4122650
nibber

>>4122650
okay this is it

>>4122673
Learn how to use meme arrows stupid newfag ledittor

>>4122712
this is very cool

For a /tg/ drawthread request

>>4122437
>>4122439
>I want the firez fan base

>>4122010
What do you mean by rhythms? I know about the reilly method but how does that work with asaro?

I tried to fix the proportions a bit

>>4122718
absolutely ebin, i like it. what's /tg/?

reminds me of some sixth house dagoth ur shit

>>4122721
>>>/tg/ The traditional gaming board. I like to fill requests there

>>4122724
Gaming board? like board games?

>>4122728
Yeah or games like d&d or warhammer

>>4122717
thank you

>>4121987
>>4122720
i've been studying the asaro head lately. Values look fine i guess (not so easy to tell without the ref), the thumbnail reads well at least.

the reilly rhythms are a guide to navigate the planes. You use the rythms as a mental map to tell how the planes change/intersect. That way you don't need to rely so heavily on the model or reference for construction. The asaro head is based off of the reilly rhythms, which means that the design of the planes follow the rhythm lines accordingly

>>4122082
P cool. You do tattoos?

>>4122713
Sorry anon i dont use meme arrows often to quote people in imageboards :(((

>>4117190
would love any advice here. I have an idea but not sure with how the pose or what i could change to continue with this, thank you!

>>4117907
>>4118675
>>4119857
>>4119861
I stalked your pixiv and other accounts to try and find more pictures of skinny pale black haired girls with mega milkies. I love your stuff dude.

Your painting of Rei is great, the green of the moon is stunning.

>>4122771
Why is he holding the weapon backwards

>>4122779
I would kill millions to be able to have a pale, thin, dark haired mega milkies gf that is always brooding and moody

>>4122746
Hey thanks for the info, I always wondered if the asaro head had anything to do with the reilly method. That makes sense.
I'll try to figure out the reilly method and then give the asaro head another shot.

>>4122489
Okay this was harder than I thought.
You're not seeing the forms and shapes correctly, and you're inventing textures that don't match in scale. Try this: Shrink your ref down so you can only make out the big shapes. Then paint those just using the lasso tool, a soft brush and perhaps a blender. If you think you're got the general read down, zoom in more and go for details and texture.

>>4117582
Careful anon, that satanist church sued Netflix when Sabrina copied their statue.

>>4122855
I don't think they can sue and win by someone drawing a basic preachy pose.

>>4117190
Doing a bit of stylistic experimentation after finally getting my tablet back in working order. Feels like it's been ages.

Bit of plein air, the colours are perhaps too intense.

This one feels a bit weak and scattered

>>4122949
The cadmium red in the water is a bit much but nice otherwise
>>4122953
Falls apart a bit in the lower sixth. Maybe if the values were a bit more organized but there are groups of different hues with close values that give it the scattered feeling

1hour (maybe more)
fucked around with this A LOT, the belly shadow really messed me up here
>>4120111
>>4120204
Thanks a ton anons, that's really helpful and I'll try to be more mindful of the forms

>>4122836
That looks much better. I was trying to mostly just use a hard round (with opacity transfer) but maybe it really requires a softer brush.
either way this is not my strong point

The part that I think is really really getting me is the one in the far back. I just can't understand how the colors work back there.

>>4122779
Thank you anon, i dont post in pixiv though, my most recent stuff is in instagram only and in my patreon
>>4122787
who wouldnt

>>4122756
Thank you, I’m a tattoo apprentice. It’s funny that it comes across so easily out of context.

>>4122655
I guess I’m just used to seeing it used kind of like acrylic and blended out a bit like watercolor. But a medium is what you make of it, you can use it more like watercolor if you want! I can’t wait to see the next one.

>>4122584
It does have a "bookmark" section now that you can make folders in- it’s super useful!

New thread? I’d make one but I’m on my phone

Here's another.
Just trying to learn about color temperatures.

>>4123335
new thread here:

>>4123380
>>4123380
>>4123380

>>4118675
make an artstation and put some of that good shit in there, that could possibly boost your following count.

>>4120601
Awsome!

>>4117460
Gorgeous. I love your use of cross contours.

>>4117227
Maybe darken the shadows and light on the rocks or reduce the glow of the torch? AS of now it looks like it's daylight and a torch wouldn't glow that bright in daylight I think.