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What is /ALT/?
If you're looking for a place to post your cartooning then you've found the right general. This is /ic/s 1st and only merged hub where both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully, hence the double title. However, by community demand and long history, this is favorably an Anime general.
>Rules & Guidelines
(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others. (2) Please resize your images before posting. (3) Share your knowledge and (4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique. Most importantly I encourage you to keep discussion at a civil level, but you're more than welcome to share your opinions.
>I came for anime. Why does the image OP say cartoons general?
To distinguish from the anime study thread (janitor supported). Please post your studies there and personal work goes here.
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>Community Resources
Hitokaku Index
>http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~zm5s-nkmr/
List of active livestreams
>Use twitch #art
>yoshikadu2011 https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCUx5dpO6d5gQ4KWNPc24CKw
FellowBro's Book Collection
>http://mediafire.com/?i44dwzkf9j9n8
Tutorial & Reference Collection
>http://pinterest.com/characterdesigh/
Japanese Tutorials & Documentary
>http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=59317 (0033)
>http://iradukai.com/
References
>http://www.onairvideo.com/croquis-cafe-photos2.html
>http://www.eggazyoutatsu.net/eng/atarichan.html
>http://senshistock.com/sketch/

>> No.4076593
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>>4076572
lol i'm falttered for the thumbnail,
did this a few weeks ago when i came back to digital drawing, something for warm up

>> No.4076603

>>4076593
Nice colors m8

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>>4076037
Tried reworking them a little, is this any better? To be honest I'm pretty lost when it comes to shape design, would you happen to have any resources or advice on it?

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>>4076037
Tried reworking them a little, is this any better? To be honest I'm pretty lost when it comes to shape design, would you/anyone happen to have any resources or advice on it?

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trying to figure out how to use layer groups in a consistent way

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>>4076661
Very very cute! :] I played around with some pencils

>> No.4076696

These are great, what are they for?

>> No.4076702

>>4076666
>>4076696
>I don't know why enter made me post

I was gonna ask if you had a blog, too?

>> No.4076743

>>4076661
I'd say it's pretty good as is man

>> No.4076759

>>4076593
Using the lines as shading is really working. Nice work.

>> No.4076776

>>4076593
you make rust look sexy!

>> No.4076777

>>4076696
I've been writing scripts for visual novels for a few years now. Doing sketches for characters and setting as I develop a story helps with visualization, and in theory it should make achieving a cohesive aesthetic for the final product that much easier, though I have yet to make it to that point.

>> No.4076870

>>4076666
These are charming, I feel the colors could do with a little more contrast, though, and I feel like the super-soft shading style doesn't quite mesh with the rough lineart style.

>> No.4076885

>>4076661
You did good, though you should probably still clean up the messy edges on the tree trunks.
Composition is one of those things that are really difficult to nail down. I don't think any resources that could explain it in-depth exist, so you'll need to do a lot of experimentation to figure out what works and what doesn't, but these videos might be a good starting point:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EiyA8Qsl3c0
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RJIWllIMHsg
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZluGXgpdJj4

>> No.4076930

>>4076593
I like your stuff. Blog?

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>> No.4077082

>>4076692
>>4076743
>>4076885
Thanks, I'll give those videos a look.

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4077275

too lazy to clean up ahaha

>> No.4077279

>>4076666
captain of the guard looks like projared

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>> No.4077291

>>4077275
I like the color scheme, anon. It's very striking, i feel if you re used these elements with a more impactful composition you could make a really great piece

>> No.4077743

>>4076692
Looks nice, are you going to finish it?

>> No.4077757

>>4076661
i really like this desu,
my only thought is you could be getting more out of your foliage design although it certainly isn't bad or anything.
just offhand, millais comes to mind as someone who does that really well w/ limited values in this kind of green composition

>https://www.wikiart.org/en/john-everett-millais/ferdinand-lured-by-ariel-1850

>https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/9/94/John_Everett_Millais_-_Ophelia_-_Google_Art_Project.jpg

>> No.4077813

>>4076661
Blog? I really like this and would like to see more of you