/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Is that a cock sock?

>>3958569
Would you want your john tohmas exposed to the elements with a blade swinging beside it?
An accident waiting to happen if you ask me.

>>3958559
That sword is unironically the most well drawn part of this piece

>>3958559
Who needs loomis anyway?

>>3958559
not enough ears

>>3958590

>>3958104
>>3958576
1?

>>3958627
2?

>>3958629
>>3958627
I think you've improved a bit since last year :)
Then again, it's not hard to improve on garbage. I'm not saying this because it's loli, but because it's fundamentally broken. Also, I guess this is actually toddlercon, not loli.

>>3958627
>>3958629
Lineart is the least of your problems. Your proportions are dogshit and ive had enough of this nonsense.
Head is too big and the anatomy is atrocious.


Overall,you've gotten even worse

>>3958629
Looks like an edit of the last few pictures you've posted. Why don't you work on something new?

>>3958654
>>3958655
Got it, and any other faggot replying is not going to be me.

Post this in last tread not realizing that it was over.

But is her nut goblin in the right place? I moved it around a few times and it just never seems right. I think the placement is correct now but a second eye would be appreciated. Just want the baby puker in the right place before I start detailing and laying color down.

Also this is my 1st lewd or whatever. Been lurking here for a few months and it’s about time I break my cherry. This thread has had some legit good help/crits and seeing people’s work advance to a final product is really great.

>>3958666

Post doesn't make sense, and her right leg is extended too far out.

She should also be making a different expression on her face altogether if she is riding a dildo.

I think its OK, but still has alot of work that should be done.

>>3958662
What did he mean by this?

>>3958671
*pose

>>3958674
I understood what ya meant :)

Thanks for the feedback. Legs are long cuz I wanted a “spidery” look. Face is boring so I’ll work on that for sure. But my biggest issue is her Taco placement. I’ve readjusted it like 6 times, so now and I’m at the place we’re i think no mater what I do it’s gunna look wired cuz I’ve locked myself in a “but is it ok?” Hole.

Yo before I fuck around and get banned, are centaurs depicted in sexual form considered "furry"?

>>3958709
I consider centaurs to be considered more like "monster girls" than furries. I like monster girls but don't like furry art at all.

>>3958559
I never get into porn threads but I felt violated by that picture, if that was the intention then congrats

>>3958712
I'll run with that.

Any pointers on color/value/shading? I've an extreme lack of digital practice in those terms. Any other word would be fine, too.

How good should I aim to be before I take commissions

Also does anyone have a guide on the best ways to set up a system for commissions? Should I just use paypal and patreon?

>>3958719
The whole image looks like it was squished horizontally or stretched vertically. Your lines seem messy and unapplealing, you should work more on them and instead of using straight black, use a dark color.
Your knowledge of horse anatomy of grotesque. Go google one and use it as a reference. The hooves are the worst offender.

Overall I think you did the face and breasts well. Good job.

sorry mod, I didn't see this thread tee hee

>>3958906
its ok

>>3958935
You have to post your own art o:

>>3958935
Modeseven I love you

>>3958935
No way this is the real mode posting.

>>3958935

>>3959025
That pussy is REALLY high up. Like, completely misplaced. I don't care how nice this picture looks, the anatomy just ruined it.

>>3959110
Not really. Probably would help if you seen one in real life buddy.

>>3959111
I have a pussy (cis) you fucking incel. Go have sex.

>>3959025
>stray pubes
>protruding steaming pussy
>used condom hanging out of vagina
my peenus weenus has been activated

>>3959114
I too have a pussy (cis)

>>3959120
Oh okay. Let's schlick then.

>>3959114
Dude I just basically told you to “have sex” so don’t be lazy and just regurgitate the same shit I just said. So one again go see a real pussy and stop acting like a chick just to try and win.

So ya

Get laid please

>>3959124
masturbating is a sin

continuation >>3954341

>>3959132
What a mess

>>3959130
>>3959129
>>3959124
>>3959120
>>3959114
No premarital sex anon...

>>3958935
bros how do i get as good as modeseven

>>3959173
filename ;)

>>3959129
he mad

>>3959130
Not if someone else does it for you. >:)

>>3958935
modeseven you fat fuck is that really you

>>3959111
>>3959110
It's actually not the pussy that is misplaced. Check the asscheeks. Pussy is in the right place. It's the whole lower body that is misplaced - it is drawn as if she was bending in the middle and lifting it up but instead she lies almost flat on the chair.

>>3958588
Ah yes and that condom will keep it save from any damage. Sure, sure.
What about sensitive nipples? Don‘t they deserve some protection too?

>>3959346
Been a while buddy what you up to?

>>3958559
looks like brave heart's retarded tranny cousin lol

>>3959370
work, also had to get a new comp so i was slowrollin on the digital art

Please crit, tear it into shreads, besides horrible puss that looks like it has std, i know i need to work on that

>>3958559
Dios mio...

>>3958559
stop trying to make your ugly ass the norm, we feel disgust looking at this (you)

>>3959132
it's cute

Not to be fucking lewd or anything, how do ya'll draw kissing properly. That fucking head tilt is always such a fucking paint to practice

>>3959173
I remember someone asking Modeseven this question in his tumblr asks(FUCK)
He literally just said he drew what he wanted and applied practice and studies to things he didn't understand
He also showed a bunch of the books that are posted here constantly like Loomis and Bridgeman

>>3959025
>>3959110
>>3959319

>>3959114
>>3959630

Lol see y’all don’t know jack about the Vhole.

>>3959630
There's a clear break in the torso that's absent in the drawing, which is part of why it strikes people as wrong. If the character is meant to be lying more flat than the reference, that's fine, but the foreshortening and overall form of the pelvis is incorrect, and for a pose this unconventional that inaccuracy is unacceptable. The leg closest to the viewer in particular lacks convincing form; if one were to draw through the figure to identify the contour it would look like a Figma than a person. There is a gap where the leg meets the pelvis that doesn't follow actual anatomy. Similarly, the pubic mound leads into the figure's centerline, which breaks the illusion of form. The far edge should instead flow into the curve defining the turn of the belly away from the viewer, and the pubis overall should follow the curvature of pelvis (it is after all, situated on an edge between two distinct planes, the front and front-bottom planes of the pelvis). The way its drawn now flattens the form and adds to the feeling of inaccuracy other anons are pointing out.

Its an ambitious image and certainly well-rendered, but the lack of care in the initial figurative work undercuts the image.

>>3958588
You do not need to worry about it if your cock is as hard as diamonds!

>>3959652
If you don't see the difference between the ref and the drawing, and why the drawing is done wrong, then there's no helping you, /beg/

>>3959630
I see now. Well I was originally correct. It was either the pussy was wrong or the pelvis was wrong. One needs to be fixed in order to work with you other.

>>3959691
In general it was a difficult thing to pull off. There are many things that are off, such as the torso connecting to the pelvis, and the ass cheeks sticking up, with the vulva pointing upwards too much. But it was something I finished to a render for fun, mostly for the boner.

>>3959697
>But it was something I finished to a render for fun
>It was for fun!
>please no bully
>you're critiques are now invalid because it was just for fun
I find that hard to believe because of how much time it looks like you spent on it. Why can't you just accept that you fucked up and move on?

>>3959721
ego is a bitch.
also, why can't you just accept that he is defensive and move on?

>>3959721
Which is what I did :P But thank you for the feedback, it helps. I have more hentai if you want to see?

>>3959726
Nah

>>3959734
Great ! Thanks for showing interest :)

>>3959736
So wait, are her shorts supposed to be so fucking tight, that despite her femur being rotated forward, pulling her asschecks with them, they still bubble up?

>>3959739
Hell yeah :D Big boner time

>>3959652
That is a fucked up looking pussy

>>3959726
Your on the path to being a true artist. Your heads so far up your own ass you're suffering from a lack of oxygen.

>>3959736
Her legs are detached from her body, among many other things.

>>3959763
From that perspective it looks like her cock is coming from her abdomen

>>3959766
>her cock

>>3959678
Ok /beg/ how bout you get laid and see a real one so you can get you head out of the clouds.

been trying to do stuff with some more simple shapes. another lalafell

>>3959799
cute

any comment ? :)

I feel like a literal clown for drawing this man

>>3959837
Those balls are too even. Give them some personality.

>>3959816
Complete garbage.

>>3959839
Bob Ross has reincarnated as a porn artist and gives advice in ic
>>3959816
Work on anatomy this hurts to look at. Are you just starting?

any help ?

>>3959839
Took a little while to make a slightly messy redraw of his balls (which I'll clean up in a moment). How does it look now? And thanks for the critique, by the way!

>>3959779
>doesn't know porn terminology

>>3959816
Interesting texture, you could make some weird stuff with this kind of thing. Put this style in your idea drawer for later

>>3959847
Thank you

>>3959866
I am

>>3959890
Isn't it already weird haha

>>3959901
Alright. It looks like you dont really get how the body and limbs are put together, I would suggest reading about and studying anatomy. Figure out how muscles make up the shape of an arm, leg, torso, and what have you and how they connect to one another. If you want to give boners you must learn.

>>3959934
alright thank you !

[spoiler] A gift for the bros of /e7g/
Radiohead is my favorite artist.

-_-;

>>3960292
I like this. Has a loose scribbly feel, but somewhat intentional and controlled.

any advice would be appreciated

>>3958666
i think the pose is a bit too ambitious right now for your level of fundamentals. i think you should heavily reference someone in that pose and really figure out how their joints bend and how their torso and head foreshortens in perspective. right now the pose is quite weightless and her upper body is incredibly stiff and flat looking. i think this is a fine attempt and your linework is pretty solid but theres drawing issues that needs some resolution before colorig

>>3960489
stop being a faggot is my advise

>>3960494
I wish

>>3959025
oh damn, blog?

>>3959132
Looks like Pointy Chins. Good though, dynamic pose.

>>3959346
The flow in your figures is good, but the faces are bad

>>3959883
Very stiff, looks like a lot of guesswork went into this, need more practice.

>>3960269
Disgusting subhuman

>>3958671
>>3960493
Thanks for the feed back fellas much appreciated. Mixed up expression. I will work on that a bit more actually since you where dead on with that.

Trying to figure out how to give just a tad of depth in her stomach area as she is leaning forward. Her stomach is not going straight up and down but hunched over.

I’m going to something different with the rendering/shades than I’m use to from some advise I saw in another topic so I’ll see how that goes

>>3961318
>>>/beg/

>>3959025
do you have any links?

>>3960292
Research how heads attach to necks and elongate the face. Otherwise I like this a lot. It's not perfect but it's appealing.

https://twitter.com/Ordnance20
>>3961340
>>3960540

More degen version. Critique appreciated

Broke my laptop in a fit of autistic rage now i can only draw on my ipad

Le fug me XDDDDDDDDD

Really wish i hadnt XDDD

>>3961415
nice

>>3961415
Fuck that image makes me laugh

how do i get into drawing lewd stuff without getting embarrassed? I sketched this but I can hardly keep working on it because I'm really embarrassed just by the fact that I drew it

I like this so please tell me why I should hate it

>>3961874
Style reminds me of MLP.

>>3961874
nigga is that a motherfucking cloaca?! that's not a pussy.

>>3961888
you're right, I should do more pussy studies. I've also realized that it should be more open considering the position. Thanks
>>3961880
Is it a critique or just a statement?

>>3961911
Never too little pussy studying.

>>3961911
It’s also positioned too low and forward

>>3959736
this is cool but the torso and legs are wonky. its still hot since its not that obvious. but the torso's bend is bizzarre

>>3961415
i managed to find your twitter thanks to the signature, you're good. sucks to see you have so few followers

goddamn i wish i knew how to draw in perspective and also not draw everything as lightly as possible so people can actually see shit from the thumbnail :'(

>>3958627
Is that you Mikufag?
>>3959346
Holy hell how did you two manage to draw for so long and somehow not taken a single step forward? It's almost depressing.

Am I ready to start a patreon yet?

>>3962120
If you don't care about embarrassing yourself, then go ahead.

>>3962126
I don't understand, explain.

>>3962140
Your stuff doesn't look like it has any market value, so technically and morally speaking you shouldn't ask money for it.
But on the other hand if you don't care about what others think, why not. You're going to improve eventually and creating exposure is always a good thing.

>>3961874
learn how to draw vaginas

>>3962058
>also not draw everything as lightly as possible
If you already have 100% opacity, you can still darken by copy/pasting your drawing multiple times on the same place.

That's the good thing about digital. It's so easy to correct mistakes.

>>3962351
yeah, that's fair. i just forget every time, but honestly, it would just be more appropriate to learn some lineweight skills

>>3962353
well, starting light is not necessarily bad, because it's best for sketches
often you just leave it at that though, and then you also can just make the sketch darker

Update: Haha gross

>>3962407
did he break his neck?

>>3962450
Nah he's fine, man's just half-octopus ecks dee

But yeah I'll admit, that angle really needs to be fixed. Thank god I made the head seperate from the rest of the body, though the hair is gonna be a pain to redo

>>3959594

>>3962643
help

>>3962706
You drew the horizon line, but nothing is affected by it. Anything below the horizon line should have the effect of like we're looking down on it. Anything above it would be the opposite.

>>3962761
Is there any redeeming it, also is there a good tutorial on how to set a grid to make perspective less hard on my pea brain?

>>3962766
Yeah, there's lots on youtube. Any one will do.

>>3962706
I think the proportions are a little goody- the legs look big- and that the biggest thing you're lacking is gesture. Everything looks a little stiff since the bones are completely straight (the naturally have a little curve). Also reconsider how her torso is positioned, again, it's completely straight when I would imagine it to be curved a little. I think the flatness could be remedied with sufficient shading.

>>3960292
Blog? Not that this is good, but the style has me interested.

>>3960269
Ok now, really. Tried to draw her properly.

>>3962539
thank you, anon

>>3961874
style is attractive, shading and color is acceptable, anatomy is stylized without a foundation leading to wonky vaginas and other mild anatomy issues like how the thighs should squish into the calves at that angle and the leg pointing at the viewer shows none of this

>>3958559

>>3962963
thank you very much for the feedback. What do you think I should work on regarding shading and color?

>>3958627
>>3958629
Gross ass pedophile. Kill yourself.

so much fucking is goin to happen in this room

>>3963235
i cant speak for your colors much, but you could try more directional and accurate lighting by shading in some missed planes properly. you only did the darks for shadows and theres almost no midtones otherwise. youd be able to push these planes and shadows harder with a deeper grasp of anatomy, but if you also just constructed properly in 3d you could probably see where its needed some too

while i can see where a light source exists on the body generally, the coat interior fails to represent that in some spots by being shaded despite being light or almost light-facing

>>3959147
looks like a giant dog treat with hair tbqh

>>3962120
google construction

>>3960312
pixiv dot me slash desgardes

>>3963400
This looks interesting. Is it for a game?

>>3963842
I want Creepy Susie to tab me in the chest while riding muh dick

Wip

I’d like to add some more items but I’ve hit a creative wall. I want her nude mostly but it seems her lower half is just boring as hell right now. I have zero idea what to add.

More jewelry? Stockings? I just don’t know. I dont want to slap color down till I tweek it up some more.

>>3959630
Where can i find refs Like this?

>>3964151
Hell yeah brother

>>3964166
Maybe keep it simple and plain by removing the crown and just keeping the rope. You can add more rope on her lower body and hips I'd you want, then have them attached to her hands as if she's broken free of them or have them chained that way, idk. Looks good though.

Huh? Okay then.....

>>3964166
First thing I noticed is that the saliva is not going straight down like her hair, which is all I can see now. To answer your question...Nipple rings, finger and toe rings, brackets, anklets and hip chains. Looks like your going for royalty? If so then adding those things make sense to show her power and place.

Seems I’m at the opposite end of>>3964177 with planing it up but I will agree if you can get some more rope and bondage in there that definitely spice it up more.

>>3964177
>>3964197
Thanks for the feedback.

I think I will add some more restraints. Good catch on the saliva (going to be blood) I did not see that.

And ya a vampire queen is what I’m kinda going for.

>>3963963
no, an all day fucking imageset i have planned for a follow up to this>>3959346 pic

>>3959464
hey i saw u in the drawthread
hair is to straingly

>>3959885
better

>>3964177
>>3964197
Ok I’m feeling a bit better about where I’m going with this now. Thanks again for the ideas guys.

Aight, so this may be the last (or likely second-to-last) update I'll post 'ere till I finish it up and make 3 more versions of this with some variants. But if anyone has some background suggestions or more critique, be my guest! It's so much fun improving this thanks to some anons.

Oh, and >>3964258 thanks for the assurance!

>>3962407
looks even more better

>>3964269
np your face looks nice the heads a little weird/ to big

>>3964306
I wonder if that's the artist's touch or if the character is usually stylized this way. This does look like one of those drawings where something cartoony is given the porn treatment.
That said, I might steal the dress shirt/suit vest/thigh highs combo. It feels powerful.

>>3964350
very very

>>3964166
Add proper arms instead of this horror show.

Is the story clear even without words? Because I want put only the drawings without words

>>3964428
I'd say you should add a couple transitional frames from dinner to room. Also boobs don't work like that.

>>3964269
Not Bad you've got potential, Hell the fact your actually posting something already puts you in a better batting average than alot of us on /ic/

>>3964470
Thanks, and I'm gonna redraw those things

>>3964470
Thanks, and I'm gonna redraw those tits.

i've gotten 3 in and i realize i should come up with what the actual schedule will be for the fuck fest

>>3964515
Have you ever got beyond this stupid fucking sketches you homo?

>>3964483
Oh wow this is somehow even worse than OP.

First time drawing diaper stuff, do you guys like it? Should I make more?

>>3964650
>>3964652
>>3964657
>>3964659
That shit is niche. Better off with regular ol' panties.

>>3964662
Yeah you're probably right

>>3963400
>>3964515
I thought you were trolling for the most part, but from this one I can finally conclude you are completely autistic.

>>3962120
>>3962407
>>3962815
>>3963164
>>3963842
>>3964057
>>3964166
>>3964173
>>3964262
>>3964269
>>3964428
>>3964617
>>3964657
Garbage.
>>3963218

>>3964705
Have sex.

>>3958559
Do you guys do gesture drawing using pornographic images?

>>3964744
I doubt that will change how bad those artworks are.

>>3964771
Something like this, my time on these are limited to 2 minutes each.

>>3964350
It's kinda a mix of both, I guess. Though I don't blame >>3964306 for critiquing the head

And >>3964483 while I'm sadly too far into the artwork to make any of those changes, I'll keep those critiques in mind for future artworks!

First attempt at digital art (using a 6" smartphone and a 7$ stylus), I traced the pose but added all the rest myself, I don't really like the color, roast me or give me some feedback anything would be appreciated

>>3963842
>>3964173
cute
>>3964657
oh i hate this

>>3958559
>tfw no imagination

>>3964837
oh i get it now

>>3964999
no skill either

Anyone willing to help me with a redline?

Any feedback on this? Tried a bit to make this sketch/solid coloring piece a bit interactive.

Ok, last update until I finally finish the damn thing because I don't wanna be bothersome:
I just wanna say that not only is the face actually harder to draw than the hair, but the tentacles are sooo much worse to draw without them looking off. If anyone could help me out on that, I'd greatly appreciate it

>>3964772
weeb piece of shit.

>>3964773
Hey, this is actually a good idea! I am glad you mentioned it. Do you have any social media or a user of any art websites?

>>3958725
I believe you should practice more with:
-Expressions
-Anatomy, the body do not feel that right
You should set up your prices according to how much time you take to finish a piece, your ability, and your number of followers
Definetily use PayPal at first

>>3959464
Uh..i kind of like it
The problem is the lineart, it's so weird everything feels like it's blended all together, kind of a mess

Want to see more?

>>3965540
No, no one wants to see your ugly fat sow art. Stop shilling here as though you’ve made something worth looking at.

>>3964470
I change the boobs a little, what you think?

>>3964428
And I don't really know how make the transition between the date to the bed, this was the best I thought

>>3965253
Thanks for the (you) i suppose
atleast i got some sick trips

Still tweeking some things but it’s moving along. Still debating if I want to add a transparent lower dress type thing. Might widen her hips as well.

I think I will actually add background too this but I don’t know what.

>>3965627
Also do some mid shading

>>3965627
This looks like a too close to model trace.

>>3965627
It's me or the arms are too long?

>>3965632
It is absolutely a traced model.

>>3958559
I have mixed feeling about seeing my "art" on the original pic of this thread, considering I hate it myself, and so does everybody else here.

>>3965540
I hate the way you draw mouths, I'm sorry, but I absolutely despise it for some reason

>>3964837
>>3965458
Nice choice of character. I don't think I've ever seen r34 done of him before. Your work shows a lot of potential, interested in seeing what the final product will look like.

>>3965571
>>3964428
Use reference for boobs seen from the top. Even anime anti-grav torpedo tit wouldn't look like this. You have your characters arms lifted up but your boobs look like they are air balloons with support under them. They also start too high.

On /gif/ there is a thread that periodically comes up "flashing boobs" or whatever. Where you can see a lot of videos with girls removing tops. Study it.

>>3965464
instead of crying git gud, dumbass.

>>3965618
just draw

>>3965627
>tracing
>absolute turd polishing
just stop and learn some god damn fundamentals already.

>>3965890
still going?

>>3958935
>that filename
Absolutely fucking based.

Anyway, here are a couple of prelim sketches for something I wanna render. Not sure which one is more "correct", for lack of a better term. Pardon the potato-cam quality of the sketches.

An ATLA drawing, where Aang and Toph were sparring/training and Toph got trapped like this in an incautious moment.
What would she say in this situation?

>>3965985
just fucking draw already.

>Draw a highly attractive figure with the highest standards of appeal
>Only to get plowed by a disgusting subhuman hairy blading fatfuck
Are normies really attracted to this shit? Why is it that half the times we don't have the same appeals towards the Males when it comes to a sexually orientated illustration? What's the fascination between the beauty getting corrupted by the beast?

>>3966294


So its easier for their target audience to self insert into those characters.

>>3966315
kek

>>3966294
>>3966315
Im /fit/ but have guilty pleasure with this kind of stuff. But it depends on how ugly/fat the guy really is.
It didn't always use to be like this.
I somehow memed myself into enjoying this shit.

>>3966337
Tell us what's so alluring about a hideously disgusting slob having their way on someone at their peak performance? I genuinely want to know.

>>3966294
For me it's the fact that something beautiful is being tarnished by something disgusting

>>3966351
>pure girl thinks she's going to lose her v-card to someone special and handsome one day
>loses it to some disgusting homeless man with a warty cock that gives her an STD as well
schadenfreude

>>3966352
Would you feel the same if the beautiful person was a male and the disgusting one was female?
>tfw no hideous femcel fugging a cute fuccboi

>>3966351
I honestly have no idea, but i think it may be tied to one's self esteem. Despite being in great shape, I can somewhat identify more with the fat sleazy bald guy.
>>3966357
yeah,no, that's going too far...

I draw the line at fat HS coach blackmailing the fit brown tomboy into sucking his dick so she can keep her sports scholarship.

>>3966360
You mean like an old hag raping some young Captain America looking Chad?
No. Thinking about it now, I feel nothing.

>>3966381
No, I mean a complete reversal of roles as in the Female would be the dominant and unpleasant one to look at and the Male would encompass as the most feminine and submissive one in that scenario.

>>3966390
eugh

>>3965771
Ey thanks! I hope it turns out well in the end. And honestly, it feels like I'm the only person on Earth (and in 2019 no less) to draw porn of him
....and admittedly also drew a bunch more of his father

>>3966294
Degenerates have degenerate tastes.

>>3966294
>What's the fascination between the beauty getting corrupted by the beast?
It feels dirtier. Dirtiness and degradation can be hot, depending on your tastes.

>>3966421
>I hope it turns out well in the end.
It won't. You are polishing a turd.

>>3966569
Agreed it’s total garbage

>>3966569
>>3966576
Sorry I'm not Da Vinci or Van Gogh

>>3966588
That's not the point, dumbass. Stop polishing that piece of garbage and start working on your fundamentals. Pick up a book or something and start from scratch with simpler stuff.

>>3966604
Aight, fair enough

>>3964705
Pearls before swine

>>3966040
I didn't get any feedback on this one, so I'd like to ask for some. I'm having trouble with the dude getting fingerbanged in particular: not sure how to position his legs.

>>3966794
Learn your fundamentals and your line work is total garbage. Start over because if you continue to try and polish that turd it’s going to be a waste of your time.

>>3966794
They're both equally incorrect. The smaller guy is clipping into the larger guy as drawn.

>>3966807
Ah. I see. How do I fix this? Or should I just start over?

>>3966067
Torso is a bit long, looks disconnected from the ass. Cut the dark area of the clothed torso by about 1/4 and add in more indication of the hips going from the ass to the waist.

>>3965694
You are the one responsible for that monstrosity?

>>3958935
Now that's a porn artist whose patreon I would support.

Giving this picture a second try, the perspective is kinda fucked

Alright, I finally got it done! While the normal versions are okay (shadows suck though), the tentacle versions could be better, but the shadows are worse. Might consider scrapping those versions idk

Also don't really feel like posting them on other sites yet. Maybe tomorrow(?) or the next day after

>>3966869
The face would look a lot better if you fixed the mouth. Maybe make the eyebrows more emotional too, she just came after all.
Boobs are a little high, but other than those things, you did pretty good.

>>3965694
why did you do that

>>3958559
This should be an OP image for an unappealing art thread

>>3965694
Congratulations, you should feel proud of the fact that you've appeased a small but loud vocal minority from this board that throws a bitchfit each and every time someone draws something which appeals to the general populous.

>>3966872
aw they look like great pals

>>3966872
Shoulders aren't wide enough. At first I was gonna say the head was too large, but I'm sure its just a shoulder problem.

>>3965443
maybe try to boost your shapes and simplify some stuff
i feel like everything is too jiggly and it's hard to find more consistent shapes

>>3966294
It's about contrast. You can't have light without darkness. So if you paint a beautiful girl surrounded by ugly things, she becomes even more beautiful.

>>3966294
>normies
Why would normies be attracted to it? The more vanilla porn gets, the better the guy tends to look.

Part of a commission for an anon

>>3966294
I really ironically enjoy elf or cute girl gets oink by orc, monsters really. I'm big into teratophilia (humanoid to abominations) but not really ugly human bastards. That might just be my callous misanthropy.

>>3967703
nice

Question for NSFW artist here, I have a growing audience on my SFW account but sometimes I really want to draw some NSFW content to satisfy myself and my target audience. However, I really don't want people to recognize me and draw the connection between my SFW account and NSFW account.

I tried changing the way I draw the face but I fear that it's not going to be enough, may I ask for additional tips on this?

>>3967941
n sei viado

>>3967954
kkkk

>>3967941
Draw faces in anime style. Nobody will be able to tell you apart from the other 4538394853498 anime artists.

opinions/critique anons?

>>3968130
You are the hero /ic/ deserves.

>>3968144
a title i accept gladly

>>3968125
The eyes are too big and too close to each other. The whole face in general is too high. He lacks a forehead.

>>3968130
Improve your hand writing along with your drawings please.

>>3968161
how would you like me to improve this drawing? as for the chicken scratch, i do it over in the final

>>3968165
the heads are really wierd, like horizontally long, and some anatomy problems with shapes that you can overcome with practice and study.

>>3968172
ah, thank you, which areas are the most problem, i do always want to try and improve my technique, as for the faces i'll give em another pass, tho fir (the big guy) is supposed to have a larger pointed nose, i'll see if ican scale it back to still have the same effect with less horizontal

>>3968176
you arent considering the proportions of the face even a little bit. please read loomis before its too late

>>3968182
Dude don't bother, this guy has been drawing the same bodies and faces for years. No amount of tips or critique has gotten him to improve. The anatomy is still just as awful as it was years ago...with maybe hes gotten better at drawing the bad anatomy with cleaner lines and thats about it.

I have a challenge for this guy if he reads this....i want you to find a picture of whatever you want...some fag with his balls out if it pleases you....and literally just copy it as best you can, do not trace it, but copy it side by side including the face. Don't do the retarded pointy nose shit and grin....actually give effort and try to replicate a real persons face. It will be hard, but this is how you can break out of these disgusting symbols. Do this and i'll try to help you, because if not it's a complete waste of time to try to help you with your normal garbage.

>>3964262
It's just so weird and ugly. Work on the face what is that expression

>>3968176
I'd say stop drawing flat images and actually use perspective. I know you can do it. If you actually start to care about lineweight/shading it would be even better but I won't hold my breath - I think I've seen one of your pictures around a year ago and your lines almost didn't change since then.

>>3968329
funnily i've been working on improving my perspective as such, i'm just doodling this up as some fun simple porn featuring a friends oc

>>3966929
I really despise this drawing, it's absolute garbage

>>3958559

>>3968391

>>3968392

>>3968393

>>3968172
>>3968182
>>3968322
The man's been drawing the same goblin faces for ages. The features completely ignore the confines of the face but he won't change or even do studies no matter how many people tell him to.

It's a wonder why he continues posting here like he wants critique

>>3968125
Torso is too short which makes the perspective super flat. Penis is drawn too high.
You have no idea how to stylize stuff.

Just draw.

>>3968510
Seriously they have been Gob Face Making as long as I can remember coming here.

>>3959813
This is adorable

>>3968176
Shingeki no Kyojin porn?

>>3968807
no, tho firnez is very tall

>>3967467
Thanks, good call

>>3968944
they probably meant your characters look like those demented giants and the art is just as bad as the one in the manga.

>>3968125

>>3969774
>>3968156
>>3968675
ok tried to fix all you said plus a few things more, how is it looking now?

>>3967703
Crucification of the Deflowered

Rembrandt 1643
Digital Paint on Canvas

>>3969849
not him but the whole upper torso is as a weird sloping angle along with the arm and leg closest to the camera, hope you can decipher my quick redline

>>3968176
Ive only seen your porn on this thread, I never actively look for your other art especially sfw. But I do have a question.
But how does Fir wear pants? Does he just have a comically large bulge?

>>3969944
i explain it with a magic imbued pair of underwear made by his and thanes wife, so they can go out

Hi there
Original artist of:
>>3968391
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>>3968394
Just wondering, does this this turn ANY of you on????

I'm trying to determine whether or not I should reexamine how I approach pornography whilst
going through my wips and noticed alot of stuff I make seems to be pretty niche and unappealing.
( Although these were made out of boredom, I am studying the fundies inbetween)

>>3970355
As a fan of this fetish it does not turn me on. Especially if some of these just look like 3 minute doodles

>>3970355
Honest - your drawings suck. They are just bad. They don't have form, they don't have gesture, they don't have any rendering or story. There is just nothing to appeal right now.

>>3962055
you mind posting it because i i get hit with is sigourney weaver

>>3970392
>>3970591
Thanks for your valuable feedback

>>3970810
>he types while screaming and rolling around on his bedroom floor

>>3970663
https://twitter.com/SigJpg/media

>>3966360
I'm thinking more of a bald ugly old men gangraping a cute twink

>page 8

What are the most used programs to draw hentai?

>>3958559
What causes a person to draw like this?

>>3971819
2D Hentai Master Pro - Premium Edition

>>3972037
very funny, I am talking about real software like Sai, PS etc... I am just asking which one is the most used.

>>3972132
Mate you can make hentai with anything if you actually put the effort in. Don't be one of those guys who talks about different art programs but doesn't actually do anything with them in the end. People have made porn with nothing but a goddamn typewriter.

>>3972232
Thanks

>>3958559
Gross please don’t share your artwork