/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

I cant fucking stop polishing it for days.

this isn't the chico thread
sage

>>3734385
The Chico thread is for cucks
Unsage

>>3734377
stop polishing it and practise anatomy, this is a cool concept but falls short because ur anatomy is bad.

>>3734434
I am overprinting my old work and I'm not going to redo it entirely from scratch.

Besides what is it that looks so BAD to you? Hands?

>>3734377
A couple things make it look lifeless up close.

The best way to add a bit more life would be to add some reflected light by the deepest shadows. Cast shadows also tend to grow more blurry the more distant they get from their source. Also consider places even less light than usual will reach, namely the armpit and inner thigh, directly below her groin. Since you were using one particular deepest tone, it's kind of hazy and blends with similarly dark areas. If you make those just a bit deeper, it will feel much more solid and volumetric. Think of how exponential curves apply to making things look round and use the same principle for shadows. Nice work on the shoulders. Although they're drawn asymmetrically, the shading is solid.

The hair also looks kind of flat, especially around the bangs. In addition to the other stuff in moderation, adding slight highlights can make it look much more round. That aside, the dark side is much brighter than the abdomen, for example. Since Rei's hair curves inward, you may wish to darken the bottom as well/instead. Consider where the hair is rooted and of what type to maintain order.

I highly recommend checking out Nekopuchi. That artist is one of the few I know of who also goes for a no-lines look and does it excellently. Keep in mind that Nekopuchi doesn't necessarily do what I've described so far, but still maintains a great sense of volume. Part of that is a healthy understanding of life drawing and probably photo references. Stay conscious of space.
(1/2)

educational baby show to help jp girls learn about animals

>>3734377
Nice.
This looks good so far. I don't really see any glaring anatomy issues. It's stylized but still appealing.

>>3734377
>>3734474
For the eyes, you can make highlights look more glossy by putting them in their own layer, duplicating it, then blurring the one underneath and remerging the two. That way you can get a shiny look around the edge without losing its solidity. You'll also rarely see solid black eyelashes. Most Japanese artists will do some variation of making the center dark but loosely based on color of the hair or eyes, dark, but with highlights like in hair, and with the sides fade into a reddish-orange as they grow distant from the sclera. I haven't quite pinned down a solid pattern, but there are some artists, like Houtengeki, who use all three inconsistently, so it seems to be based on the type of lighting. So long as it's not one flat black shape it's okay, though.

It's kind of hard to tell the angels are lowering the crown on Rei's head like in the original because their hands are completely obscured and the crown is just low enough that you might think it's already supposed to be on her head. The similarities in the curves create tangents. The wristbands are usually also depicted closer to her wrist in official art.

As always, keep up the good work, anon. You don't want to turn into polished turd, though, so stay wary of symmetry problems like in the plug suit's design on the shoulders and beneath the breasts and the tangents in the crown. I'm pretty sure I've seen this composition before, but I can't put my finger on it. It would help a lot if you posted the original, especially to make sense of the weird anatomy and stiff pose.

>>3734479
>>3734474
Thanks Anons, solid advice, I'll try and implement that.

>>3734479
>sure I've seen this composition before, but I can't put my finger on it. It would help a lot if you posted the original,

It's a canonical "Mother of God" icon

hi

>>3734479
He's doing a Theotokos impression, lol.
https://www.google.com/search?q=theotokos&newwindow=1&hs=nOp&source=lnms&tbm=isch&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwiIvu6C3rjfAhXMqIsKHSNBBkUQ_AUIDigB&biw=1536&bih=756#imgrc=t_0OCH78cNC22M:

>>3734489
I really like how broken the spine is. It looks monstrous.

>>3734377
Shrink the size of her head a tad, and it'll look pretty great, anon.

What is she expressing in the last pic?

>>3734377
Shrink head
Fix left eye

Make face lining more expressive

>>3734823
the eye on her left or on our left?
>Make face lining more expressive
Explain?

>>3734377
id move on mate

>>3734451
not the guy but the head looks off. It looks like a lollipop, usually when you draw a body the shoulder should look like it can support the head with the same amount of balance where the head is attached to in which is the neck, in your drawing you failed to deliver good head anatomy so that it looks like a lollipop. Also the coloring that you are having is unequal for an instance when you compare the head to the body, the coloring seems off, yeah its latex but keep in mind that you could have do the coloring in the head part as the same with the angel wings. Cloud looks super realistic but the head looks animated, what a shame.

>>3735559
Well bruh picrelated is my old work from which i started this time.

This whole thing is just screaming clashing style since in one hand I am just better and more comfortable with rendering shit than cellshading it. I cant cellshade for shit, and I enjoy autismally rendering in the same time.

Now looking back at it, I think i made a significant fucking improvemment.
As for the hair - I just cant make any better.

>>3735574
Keep working on it
Clean up the muddy colours and use some MANY more references. (Including the art you love that isn’t from the show)

It might need like 5 hours and your biggest push out of your comfort zone ever. Yet it should be worth it.

>>3735574
For me the face is too flat compared to other areas like her clothing.

>>3736156
Blog?

>>3734477
Pornography

Drew this for my friend

>>3734488
Cool ref

>>3741266
Anon, I...

>>3741266
you gave up everything...

>>3741266
it's definitely better.
but your line shows that you do not draw as frequently as you should.
keep going.

>>3741364
What?

>>3741266
I like 2013 better.

>>3741266
damn

Perspective if yikes

If anyone has time, I'd really appreciate any crit for this sketch before I start getting into the final draft and lining.

>>3733801

>>3741750
Fix the hand/wrist more and use more elegant strokes I guess.
The skull's molars have messed up perspective.
The far shoulder seems too far forward, mostly because the chest is sunken.
If that's supposed to be some kind of mask/headdress then you should make the entire skull larger.
The back of the cranium looks slightly too big with the angle that her head is looking at.

i need to move past sketching and actually get somewhere with this drawing but backgrounds are hard and people are hard too. drawing is hard.

>>3736156
blog?

>>3741787
Awesome, thanks dude!

>>3741795
Just remember it's ok if it doesn't come out perfectly. You'll never get better by just staring at it. It's more important to just dive in and try.

Also I think it looks really cute so far!

Anyone like cute robots?

>>3741930
That's not yours

>>3737678
the right hand is backwards...

>>3741266
And yet you didn't learn how to resize your shit

>>3741950
What a compliment!

>>3741869
thank you for the motivation!! i'm keeping on working on it

i blobbed some colors on it to make it easier to see stuff, ignore that.

i drew some clothes, her face is bothering me and i don't know how to fix it though or what i wrong even and the feet are stressing me out but i'm making progess so i'm happy.

>>3741744
I think you can do a planned projection of that. Just think of as turned on its side

>>3741930
>>3741997
not a compliment, rather a cheap rip-off of spudonkey's style
you got no originality

>>3742057
Her left foot's toes should be tilted up as it looks like shes at the point in her stride where that foot first strikes the ground.

Her left eye is positioned as if her head was almost in profile, but her right eye is positioned as more of a 45 degree at most. Recheck where your center line is and make sure everything matches up to that (including jaw and mouth / nose if needed)

It is very cute so far.

>>3742148
Oh, thank you for linking these! How inspiring!

>>3741780
please explain, Brian

>>3741930
pretty gud

>>3742069
What's a planned projection?

>>3742761
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V8LeIg3s8yY

You create some sort of flat plan and then project it over the picture plane into a perspective drawing. Books might go into more detail about this technique. I think architects use it mostly

>>3742791
igram? these are comfy

>>3741266

I think that the 2018 is more "correct", but the 2013 is more interesting to look at. The hair is all flowy with more gesture, the folds on her clothes are much more pronounced, the face is more expressive (because the feature are bigger). also the line work is more clear, more easy to read.

I would say that you need to exaggerate a little more, be more expressive, and change the brush.

redline this meme off the face of the earth

>>3742921
work on your anatomy/proportions those are whack.

>>3742930
that's not a very good redline

>>3742890
blog?

>>3742921
Yikes it's getting even more malnourished

her left knee looks kinda funky but i cant figure out exactly why

>>3742890
good shit bruh

>>3742921
fuck me, why is everyone regressing.

>>3742921
God damn that torso is fucked

>>3742921
this is what happens when you study more anime than real people/masters

>>3743063
what a stupid thing to say

not every piece ends up perfect even for experienced artists

>>3743134
this is as far from perfect as you can get, it's all trash.

>>3741755
a couple of practice drawings of forearms and hands will do you some good. keep practicing!

>>3737678
Her right arm is broken. Hands don't do that

>>3742931
You're just a jerk crab alright, you piece of shit you know nothing about art and you're NGMI so you should just shut up

>>3741744
Just remove the head lmao

i feel like the shading is all wrong, light confuses me. going to work on that stuff for sure.

>>3742858
I'm flattered that you would ask but no I do not have an igram. Ty though.

>>3743353
idk anything about shading, but this looks nice af

i just made this for my comics readers for the sake of the new years eve.
>nothing in it is even slightly associated with 2019.

i think i should have drawn her more feminine. i see her upper torso too pronounced. my intention was to draw her low angle but perspective turned out kinda shallow and wonky. i also tried hand but still nothing about hand is near decent.

>>3743353
The shadows in the feet are wrong so it's looks like they are floating.

>>3743705
Yeah that perspective is screwed as fuck, but damn I love it.

Does anyone know any artists that do nice magical girl illustrations, like the more dynamic ones?

>>3743353
>>3743705
>>3743333

garbage just fucking stop.

also resize your picture idiot.

I need some help figuring out my anatomy mistakes. The one on the left is my first sketch , the one on the right is the second one where i try to fix it but ultimately fail.

>>3742148
you think spudonkey invented simplistic mech design with a focus on shape relationships and tangents? what are you, a complete fucking idiot?

>>3742962
It got purged. I am @ac120rfw now.

>>3743062
Thanks, friend.

>>3743705
I really like your color choices here, but those arms and hands poses could probably use some sort of reference.

>>3744250
Sure there's lot's of simplistic mech design but this one is almost based on spudonkey's style. Don't get your panties up in a twist faggot.

one more sketch before the year ends

>>3742982
the knee is facing the wrong direction, should be facing more outward. do you have a reference image?

>>3744359
No reference, finished it anyways, back to studying female jamones

>>3743876
care to elaborate? I'm still learning

>>3744338
Lol you got issues bro

>>3744623
Maybe you're the complete fucking idiot here huh. I just gave the guy my comment and you get assblasted on behalf of him

B U T T
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>>3743705
Is the grainy look just a filter?

>>3744458
dont use filters man.

Working on a comic that I hope to have done in 2019.

Hope y'all have a Happy New Year.

>>3744357
Cute!

>>3733801
Should build off the sketch or go with the lineart? That and general help with anatomy and perspective would be nice

>>3742554
Do you have a blog?

>>3743717
definitely!

>>3743705
yeap. that rifle across her body were confusing as fuck to think it as a 3d space object.

>>3744935
gray(50L 0a 0b) fill layer on soft light mode with 25% uniform monochrome noise. i adjust opacity for varying effect.

>>3743717
definitely!

>>3744329
yeap. that rifle across her body were confusing as fuck to think it as a 3d space object.

>>3744935
gray(50L 0a 0b) fill layer on soft light mode with 25% uniform monochrome noise. i adjust opacity for varying effect.

>>3741744
>>3743333
give her a snip snip

Latest attempt in progress. Going to pop out of the panels more, hopefully address that eternal issue. Line weight continues to plague me.

>>3745351
this is just my opinion and i don't know your intention; but generally people find it more appealing to see tapering in the end of the line strokes. however your lines does not or too minimal to distinguish it. i suspect you don't have tablet pen or don't use pressure input. many people establish great artwork without tapering lines but i don't think your art is having it.

>>3743705
I know some references you could get the have tons of low angle shots. I could link you if you want.

just relax and have fun sometimes

>>3745488
of course, anon! as a matter of fact i was about to draw another low angle shit right now. it would be very helpful to me.

>>3745502
I like this, do you have more?

i'll learn clothes properly one day

>>3745710
*unzips*
*pulls down your pants*

>>3745710
Stop sexualizing children

>>3745716
why though

>>3745716
its not sexualizing if it's just barbie doll anatomy

>>3745716
t.furfag jackin it to isabelle porn on twitter also complaining about underaged nigs

>>3745710
Got any tips on getting as good as you?

Wanted to do something for her birthday, took about 2 hours for this one

>>3745758
i'm not really a smart learner, so i'm not sure if i can give any useful tips, but one thing that I used to really neglect is good silhouettes. i'm still not good at it, but it still helped me a lot once i learned about it

>>3745783
you say that but her head is slightly large

>>3745620
not more of that particular drawing but i have a blog at https://twitter.com/PheranMilam

>>3745776
I-is that a skyscraper inside her strap?

>>3744357
Give the girl a mandible

>>3745848
NICE

i fucked it up

>>3745776
I could one shot

>>3745776
there's something very off about this

Tried to shake things up and go traditional today.

Does anyone see any problems with this? Its kinda a difficult pose and I have flipped it enough I think it might be right.

Something real quick I did for this thread >>>/co/105023961

Crit? I might work back into it and do more poses of this character, and probably refine the design.

I've been really hating my art lately, so I'm thinking about starting this year by doing only copies of other artists for at least a month before I try something original. Do you think that is worth it or a waste of time?

>>3746117
Yeah her animu mask is lopsided

>>3746280
hahaha I took all of October and all of December off and just grinded study after study and it was a big boost man. So my suggestion is grind what you hate. You hate drawing feet, you hate gesture, you hate rendering? Force it till you love it.

Alternatively if its the style about your stuff you hate grind some master studies. I studied and drew my art all year last year and saw the biggest jumps in skill in the periods after I grinned studies. Also come here and post those studies and we will help you with that too.

>>3746294
It's not so much that I hate a particular aspect of drawing. Rather, whenever I work from imagination, I overlook glaring mistakes and never get the outcome I want. I hope to gain the vision of those I look up to.

would you read a comic with this artstyle anons?

>>3746327
A zombie comic

>>3746327
Seems pretty good. Yes I would

>>3746233
Have you drawn a perspective grid on the ground?

>>3744329
Hi Rococo! I saw you on /co/
Sorry about your blog. That robot looks amazing!

>>3745776
Hi giant muscle loli anon!

>>3743353
You should change the color temperature of the shadows, make them blue/violet

>>3746377
>/ic/ - hugbox & asspats.

>>3746327
No, cuz "not japanese" = trash 99%of the time.

>>3746392
i honestly don't understand how people can handle japanese scriptwriting and pacing. But now that i think of this shit westeners aren't any better either.

Luckily im european

>>3746327
I'm not a fan of so much hashing for an entire style. It serves a purpose, but when every page is covered in hashes it kinda makes things look cluttered and messy, even when done right just because of how much you're overdoing it to set those tones.
Some people like it, but imo it makes things too hard to read when its done as a comic.
Large amounts of basic tones and negative space is really what comics thrive on, and hashing works for single things like a character on a white background, but if you threw in a bar or city scape with that style it would be a mess. .

Just my opinion

>>3746402
yeah gotta make sure i get page composition right so not every panel is lines and shadows, thanks anon!

>>3746369
No. That would have been a good idea though lol.

>>3746392
haha what an ignorant post must suck to live in a world like that

posted in the wrong thread like a moron

hello all, how would you have approached the cast shadows for this? not sure about the way i did it

>>3746233
Here's my 2 cents. Also just noticed her left thigh looks a little off/longer than her right since it looks parallel on the bottom half but on the top half it's tilted towards her body a little and appears taller

>>3746781
her vertical proportions seem off. like, her legs seem too long. making them wider to compensate mostly emphasizes this. as best i can tell, if her knees were brought as far up as they could go they would reach her shoulders, which is too high.

>>3746743
They should be curving. And ideally don't make us look at it perfectly from the front.

Here we be. What should I fix before moving forward, other than the kinda janky left hand?

>>3746781
You're right leg should be lower. I thnk the trap being that high would make the neck too short right? Maybe not Ill play with it. I have reworked the legs since you posted this, im playing with it and will post results later tomorrow. Thank you for taking the time to review my work.

>>3746919
Both legs are on one and the same line at the moment. Think about weight distribution,

>>3746700
Very lovely, could use being a little softer if you want it to stay a line drawing.

>>3746213
100% on the level of 80s mangaka.

>>3745716
I'm honestly wondering why people are forcing this so much for the past 2 years or so. I don't understand these people that can't understand, much like being gay, people don't like shit forced in your face. Keep it to yourselves, and we won't bother you about it. I miss the days people had common sense.

fat miko

>>3746382
You're just jelly that I'm not being nice to you
I love you too anon, there's a little love for everyone

Someone tell me why I can't draw eyes.

>>3747266
why you can't draw eyes.

There, I told you. Giv cookie now.

My girlfriends really shy about her body but she posed nude for me for these quick sketches

>>3746700
Cute. Hand is a little narrow and doesn't seem like there's an arm inside the sleeve, but face is cute.
>>3744357
girl neck doesn't connect with torso properly...i see you put all attention to drawing tig bitters, didn't sketch ribcage. guy face vaguely shark like. overall not bad, no one would probably notice.

>>3747273
don't fuck ur dog dood

>>3747275
Fine. Wtf am I gonna do with all this peanut butter I bought though...

>>3747280
eat it on cheap bread when/if you're broke? not like the shit spoils homie

>>3747052
it's good

I'm very emotional today

>>3747333
AAAAAAAH IM SO LONELY AND HORNY I WANT AN EMOTIONAL QT ART BF AHHHHHHHH

>>3745710
cute wu my dude

I need guidance

>>3747273
goddamn this is cool how do you do shit like this? I feel like my sketches are so cramped whereas yours are so free. Reminds me of delacroix or rembrandt

>>3747333
listen to me brian, are you listening?

shit from yesterday.. idk

rough, no references for owl yet, any glaring errors before continuing?

>>3747379
I miss her

>>3747491
also turns out no one photographs owls from the back

>>3747014
Thanks. That was the sort of style that I was trying to emulate here.

Halp pls what's off?

>>3733801
posting whatever

>>3747555
>photographs owls from the back
why the fuck would anyone do that
More so, why the fuck do YOU want to draw an owl from the back
Why would an owl just look at a human face, and not scan the horizon or something being on profile
That's like drawing an invisible cow on the snow

>>3747698
He's right. Composition-wise you have no reason to draw Hedwig from behind. It's the same as if you were purposely trying to take a good bust photo with one of the subjects looking away from you intentionally--it's not actually picturesque.There are compositions where it could work, but a shot like this isn't one of them.

>>3747698
It's a magic owl. ain't gotta explain shit
actual answer hedwig looks at harry all the fucking time, and it's a lot sweeter a composition than both staring at the screen or into the distance like a bunch of autists. m8 wtf even
here, criticise the fact that i cant draw a nose or something

>>3747725
of course

>>3747725
>and it's a lot sweeter a composition
it looks like fucking shit, but whatever it's your time, waste it as you like it dipshit

>>3747728
are you alright anon?
everything in this thread looks like shit

>>3747266
You're not wrapping them around the sphere of the head correctly.

Mega lopunny vs mega medicham

>>3746857
oh duh, that makes sense. and yeah, i need to work on my composition skills. thank you for the help! maybe i'll redraw this one

pretty purple haired girl

Sup jerks

>>3747873
I painted cigarette girl

>>3747808
Thank you.

>>3747886
very cool, blog?

>>3747987
SKAGSKAGSKAG on INSTAGRAM

worked on this some more

>>3742982
god damn that blade perspective is fucking cool

>>3745236
https://klinckfoster.tumblr.com
Insta and Twitter links are in the description

How do I improve this while still maintaning my cartoonesque style?

>>3748550
I tried to scribble something together to give you an idea of some things that I thought may make it more interesting. Mainly just angling things away from the viewer, showing the feet so the char can maybe feel grounded (I struggle with this) and indicating some more anatomical landmarks, because the arms seem simple in a way that I thought seemed less suggestive of intentional style and more suggestive of dealing w/things you don't know style. If you like it hopefully you can figure out how to make the changes work for your style.
Also there's a lot of more western sexualized cartoon artists you could maybe check out, mickimatsu comes to mind as someone who stylizes heavily while maintaining some decent form, perspective and gesture etc -- the two aren't mutually exclusive at all. Good luck anon.

>>3733801
I dont know what im doing anymore havent drawn in like a freakin year..

>>3748681
also this weird ass thing

>>3748473
This looks very cool, what is the story behind it?

>>3749121
It was originally a big awful painting of a girl that was making me angry, now I'm trying to make it into something a bit more meaningless

>>3741869
>>3741930
>>3742174
>>3745084
>>3747274
>>3747360
Look at these cute comments uwu.

>>3748550
Anatomy.
Her body is pretty messed up anon.

>>3747635
What a shitty fetish you have

>>3746004
i like the right hand face

>>3747835
I like the action in this, good shit.

Latest three pages of muh webcomic. I think I'm finally breaking through on better paneling, letting art pop out more. That's my hope, anyway.

>>3745386
I must be disabled, because for as long as I have posted this shit someone has had that say about it. I must be fundamentally not understanding my tablet and pen, because I know that I am changing my brush size for most panels--maybe I need to blow up my brush by a dramatic amount to make a difference? Or maybe there's a pressure setting I'm just not aware of? Frustration.

>>3749934

>>3749935

Happy new year - study time

>>3749934
>>3749935
>>3749938
Hmm, the lighting from the windows seems to help, but maybe make characters contrast more with the general background? To show that it is dark you can drop the contrast on characters themselves.

>>3750150
Now I’m stuck, maybe I’ll do a full study instead of these quickie studies

>>3750150
plz, blog?

I wanted to draw Nia's outfit so forgive the static pose/lack of planning here but,anyone draw anime animals?
First real try at drawing a lion and I'm having a lot of fun with it so far.

>>3750392
tableguyic on tumblr

>>3745710
those arms are a bit short

>>3747555
if nobody photographs an owl from the back maybe drawing one from the back is not a good idea.

>>3750526
yeah i noticed that. tried fiddling with it several times along the process but still couldn't get it quite right.

>>3747555
literally first result you fag

open for c&c, i am only at start of progress, but am hoping to finish colour by ending of tomorrow :)

>>3747491
>>3750578
>>3747725

Maybe try something like this? They can still stare lovingly into each other's eyes but it makes more sense to the eye. It's like actor blocking, both actors usually don't stare right at each other. It'd be weird irl but in media its the best approach to show two characters

did this in /i/'s mech girl thread, what do you guys think?

>>3750642
Head too big

>>3750684
you're a nice anon, thanks for sketch
just gonna draw something else now

>>3750841
Good luck brotha

Tried to draw anime

Hello im new here.
Tried to do a little demon/goblin character. Im still not sure on the body type so its only a face so far. So here are some questions:
-Are the colors too obnoxious?
-Should the background be a different color?
-Pupils or no pupils?
-Is there any way to make my drawings look "sharp" like this without disabling antialiasing?
-I like using flat colors, but it can be a little boring. I tried using gradient before but i cant use it well, it looks like a 2000s era flash cartoon when i use it. Is there any way to make the colors look "texture-y"?(idk if this is a word, i will elaborate on what i mean if it doesnt make sense)
-And finally; does it look good design-wise? How can i improve it?

bully

>>3751601
i like it

>>3751721
i want to throw this into a trash bin and light it on fire

>>3751601
clean your fucking chickenscratch lines. It hurts to look at.

>>3751896
>i want to throw this into a trash bin and light it on fire
ok but why? What did I do wrong?

My first attempt at coloring. I got bored of practicing line art, so I traced a pic to practice some coloring instead. Its actually not done (theres some shadow leaking and lots of bad lines), but I completely lost control of my layers so I gave up trying to fix it after spending half an hour looking for the nipple layer.

>>3751998
loli isnt allowed

>>3752001
Its saber. She has a small chest. or is it because she has a large head that this is 'loli'? where the fuck is the cutoff for loli these days? and if this isnt allowed where the fuck Am i supposed to post this?

>>3752001
This above the arbitrary loli limit?

>>3752018
she has loli proportions and small boobs, if you count the heads she makes up it's 3 which is way too little for a grown woman. the character might be an adult but you've clearly drawn her very childlike. just fix your proportions, give her a shirt, or don't post. it's blatantly loli.

>>3752024
this is just boku no pico.

>>3752018
Don't listen to >>3752001. Most likely from rebbit. Anything is allowed here.

>>3752025
3 is normal for a late teenage to young adult anime character though. I think you mean 2.5.

>>3752032
these are my reporting options but okay whatever pedos really are smoothbrain huh

>>3752025
>give her a shirt
here, gave her a ventablack shirt. the 2 pics together should show everything anyway.

>>3752032
static IP and just got back from a ban for posting a sfw anime pic on /g/, so id rather not take the chance right now.

>>3752034
you're right. i just put my fingers over my screen to figure it out. i didn't want to save the image

>>3752036
a plain nude pic, especially on an art board, where its specifically art, isn't 'porn'. Pics of *real* nude children, paintings , photos, anything, doesn't even count as CP in the real world if it has artistic value, you can find it on google, in art books, in museums.

>>3752036
>drawings
>pedos

redditors need to back

>>3752045
blog?

>>3752138
N/A

Sketch before I go to bed

>>3752024
>>3751998
You've done well.

>>3747635
Redid it

Can I get some crits?

>>3753004

>>3750642
Digging it, a couple things to note though. The feet don’t really line up with the shins naturally, try the pose yourself. While your ankles can twist that way, it’s definetely not comfortable. The way the nostril is placed would make sense for either an upturned nose at the viewers eye level, or a normal one from above the eye level (seen from below). However she seems to be below the eye level, so for that to make sense her nose would have to be completely upturned

>>3753009
Learn how to use more than the soft brush for coloring. It looks very cheap.

>>3750444
You probably want to give that lions face a second pass, it’s not a bad face form wise but it’s also not much of a lions face, more doglike. The girl came out great but the legs seem a bit rushed, and the lion and her aren’t standing on the same plane. Nice stuff

>>3750444
whats wrong with her face

Can someone help me understand the specifics of the style in Spiderverse? Like how it's stylized? I really suck so I understand things better when explained.

Ok, i'm trying to learn how to draw again. Please redline or redraw so i can see. Thanks

plateauing hard on my usual anime shit so I tried photoref-ing this out

>>3753041
Damn you're right, gotta look at their head shape a lil better. Thanks for the feedback.
>>3753044
I goofed her eye up lol

Shit, I forgot how I used to paint now i'm not sure if I will be able to finish.

>>3753099
No eyebrows looks creepy. Even if the hair is supposed to hide them, there should be at least a hint of them.

Also she has a huge mouth and very prominent wide lower lip.

>>3753073
first things that come to mind looking at it are Disney and ZBrush's hard surface brushes

>>3749934
I think your comic could really benefit from the bold use of heavy black values on top of your existing lineart, to sell your style and bring your drawings to life by increasing the visual contrast and make the fine details have more impactful definitions.

Here's an animated gif for easy comparison.

>>3753226
Jesus Christ, that looks so much better. I must do this. Thanks so much, man. What are the things to keep in mind if I want to do exactly that?

I feel like this is a revelation of destiny I'm looking at right now.

>>3753446
>What are the things to keep in mind if I want to do exactly that?
Pick a brush with large max values but small minimum values (=a lot of line width variation), then the rest is up to pen pressure control and precision.

Do note that I don't brush up all the areas with thick lines, on larger areas I use very thin lines to mark up the area for the bucket tool instead.

>>3753791
The edge between dark and light on her left boob seems off.

Where do you guys upload your work now that tumbr doesn't allow nipples anymore?

>>3750684
jesus holy fuck

>>3753918
The skeleton ribs and weird eyes remind me of corpse bride.

>>3752045
How do you render but also have the values have contrast without them being hard edges? I struggle to paint anime girls because the brushes I use have weird blending properties that I don't understand

>>3753849
what :(
you don like my bird?

>>3753073
>how it's stylized?
they did everything in CGI then painted on top of it. For anything more specific than that you'd probably have to get the art book.

>>3754249
Christmas is over retard

i have no idea how foreshortening works but i'm giving it a go anyways, i'm pretty sure her torso/legs are fucked pls help

>>3754274
If you missed a comma, we use the Gregorian calendar for traditional holidays over here, my dear Navel of the World.

If you didn't, I can agree that Christmas is pretty dumb.

Send all your help before I start renderin pls

>>3754191
I just did exactly what is shown here.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ijiNJaQI8Fs
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=f5CmbYObH_w

I've no idea what I'm doing.

i really need to learn how to color and use value more... maybe painting without lines would force me to?
1/2

>>3754649
2/2

trying to get back into drawing again

>>3754649
idk, maybe do b/w value studies(paintings). And study color theory. From what i've heard, you can pretty much just make up colors if you know what your doing.

>>3755068
thanks. i plan on reading james gurneys color/light book and watching videos from marco bucci, i heard hes great for beginner/intermediate artists. cheers

>>3754930

>>3754279
If you clean up your lines, it should be easier to make sense of.

>>3755104
i know its stylized, but necks too thin. also the bodies arent bad but theyre a little lumpy and their style doesnt quite match the more cutesey faces, but could just be me

>>3755179
*(what i mean is it might be better to simplify the bodies a bit more or make the faces more detailed to match the bodies, just feels like a mismatch of styles)

>>3755104
blog?

>>3741780

I get you, this is good. Keep up.

I know the proportions are realy fucked but I can't pinpoint what precisely, any help ?

>>3755104
really cute but right girl's legs could use more work, her face doesn't "face right" and her upper body seems distorted but it doesn't look anatomically deranging

>>3750444
You accidentally drew Dan Warren...

>>3741780
Reminder.

>>3755605
>>3741780
I don't understand the comic.

>>3755782
I think the idea is that the native women are just as uncomfortable with a new woman being around as her husband is with her being around native men.

>>3749938
Honestly I despise your style so much.
Is it supposed to be a serious comic? I feel like the style works as a gag comic with the dumb faces, but it just looks stupid in an action scene which seems to be all you post.

>>3755789
I thought it was something sexuality related, but the children in the frame threw me off.

>>3755790
The intent is about 80% serious, 20% mostly serious, if you get my meaning--so while it is by no means a gag, it is not meant to be total grim all the time. I personally enjoy making and looking at exaggerated expressions, but I think I know what you mean, and I truly am working on shoring up the goof. Just in this thread, some kind anon showed me a wonderful method of improvement that could dial down cartoonishness in favor of more disciplined grit.

As for why it's all action so far, I only get to make 2 pages a week, more or less, so for the past month I've been hammering out this one ~10 page fight scene. They take a while, but they are a fast read.

>>3755802
It being all action so far is fine, but the style just doesn't mesh with it. You be cartoony and serious to an extent but your style specifically isnt serious. And it's not just the faces, it's also their overall body language in scenes are just too overdone for a serious story and it looks goofy.

Plus the color palate really needs and update. The backgrounds are basically the same color as their outfits and it makes things extremely hard to see
The reason manga gets away with white on white is the black and grays contrast well with white background. Slightly dark gray on slightly darker gray doesnt.

>>3757319
new thread
>>3757319

Need help