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Post your current erotic drawings and paintings here and provide helpful criticism and advice to others!

Please make sure your posted image is clear, DOWNSIZED TO AROUND 1000 PIXELS WIDE, ROTATED TO THE CORRECT ORIENTATION, and that any unused space is cropped.

Reminder that if you do not want to see degeneracy*, please hide it by pressing the minus button or by right-clicking the thumbnail on the catalog and selecting "hide this thread."

Questions about references for drawing porn will be answered.

>> No.3226917
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3226917

This has gone through so many iterations it's not even funny, it's been 3 days now. Looking forward to illustrating the glowing cock though.

>> No.3226924

>>3226917
please make a version with a normal dick, otherwise looking good

>> No.3226925
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spent all night grinding this out, haven't felt so glad to just be done in a long time

>> No.3226933

>>3226925
good stuff but no nose

>> No.3226937

>>3226914
OP is amazing, blog?

>> No.3226941

>>3226925
good job anon, there are many isssues with anatomy/perspective but don't let it stop you, enjoying your work is very important. YOur subsurface scattering is too yellow, you gotta add more reds to the part where blood shines through, don't take the color info from weeb artists, trust your own eyes.

>> No.3226947

>>3226924
I can do this.
What do you consider "normal dick" btw? Honest question, I don't have a penis, I just started drawing porn, and I'm discovering that there's so much variety when it comes to illustrating genitalia. Do you mean normal shaped (human) or normal sized or what? Big cock, small cock, fat cock etc.?

>> No.3227000

>>3226941
Thanks now that I look at it again I can see some fucky stuff so I'll go back and fix it

>> No.3227066
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3227066

haven't been that active recently desu

>> No.3227088

>>3226925
nice

>> No.3227090
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I drew this. I like it but I need fresh eyes to tell me what's fucked.

>> No.3227098
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>>3227066
keep it that way bby

>> No.3227098,1 [INTERNAL] 

>>3226925
blog?

>> No.3227107

>>3227066
her head being much bigger then his head bothers me.

>> No.3227110
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>>3226925
blog?

>> No.3227126
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Been working on this for a month

>> No.3227130

>>3226925
feet too small,
they should be bigger because they are closer to the viewer..

>> No.3227157
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3227157

Reposting in the new thread.
I'm still unsure about my porn drawing abilities because (shaky anatomy aside) I ready don't know what people consider sexy, I guess? So I started with what I found cute.

>> No.3227169

>>3227157
>(shaky anatomy aside)
I don't know you seem to be doing well enough, you got a blog?
>I ready don't know what people consider sexy, I guess?
Just draw what you like

>> No.3227175

>>3227126
You show a clear understanding of form and you have gotten the teachings of Loomis down pact. I like your color choices and the way you render reminds me of the great japs. Only anatomical correction is that the left hand thumb doesn't bend that way. Do you have a blog?

>> No.3227195

>>3227126
>>3227175
Hehe, this is why I visit this god forsaken place!
Nothing gets my art-bone harder then anons flinging shotposts at each other like some stupid monkeys at a zoo.

>> No.3227254
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3227254

Rate my degeneracy, /IC/

>> No.3227266
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3227266

Anything need obvious fixing?

>> No.3227293 [DELETED] 

>>3227266
I'd like to have you fixed.

>> No.3227330

>>3227266
You have no idea what you're doing yet. Go practice basics.
It may seem good because you took so long, next week you'll look at it and be highly embarrassed.
>>3227254
Make it more poke' like and I'll fap to it.
>>3227090
The tits...
>kinda vector style
>not using vector pen
Making things difficult for yourself.

>> No.3227372

>>3227254
the design is fun but the quality of art needs obvious work

>> No.3227389

>>3227254
had a laff
approved

>> No.3227395
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wip sketch, going for stylized anatomy

>> No.3227530

>>3227157
Seconding blog inquiry.

>> No.3227549

>>3227254

wny no tail feathers?

>> No.3227585

>>3227266
I like it.

>> No.3227596

>>3227066
Love it, this is art

>> No.3227623

>>3226917
I think some fluid ,like clear precum ,would work well with this.

>> No.3227668
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3227668

Just finished this.
First time drawing a dick. How does it look?

>> No.3227684

>>3227668
have you ever seen a penis?

>> No.3227685

>>3227668
wow brutal

>> No.3227691
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>>3227668
Flat. Rather than tilting the face upwards you angled the features of the face up and kept the head separate in a forward 3/4 position. And that dick is horrendous.

>> No.3227694

>>3227691
yours is also bad

>> No.3227700
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>>3223501
Thoughts?

>> No.3227713

>>3227254
>>3227395
>furry

never gonna make it

>> No.3227825

>>3227713
Why not?

>> No.3227896

>>3227254
glorious art

>> No.3227983

>>3227694
get fucked anon

>> No.3228000

>>3227066
>incest
>underage
>rape
make a Patreon asap dude. you'll do great.

fucking reatrds, haha.

>> No.3228002

>>3227157
draw what you consider sexy, dumbass.
do you want to make a porn career, where you'll be drawing things you dislike, just to please some kind of crowd that doesn't share your same interests?
draw the things you want to draw and you find appealing, and you'll bring in fans that have the same taste as you.

>> No.3228007

>>3227668
you have no idea what fundamentals are. perspective, anatomy, lineweight. all these are bad.
put your shit together and stop rendering turds.

>> No.3228013

>>3227266
Her torso is facing one way while her hips are facing the other. It looks awkward.

>> No.3228022

>>3228007
I'll pay more attention, thanks

>> No.3228023

so why is there an unwritten ban on furry atrt here? weeb shit is perfectly fine, demon futas and shit, but furry stuff is "too weird"? wtf people.

>> No.3228030

>>3228023
Us losers need someone to look down upon to make ourselves feel better.
Ironically weeb-shit is even worse than furry.

>> No.3228033

>>3228000
I'd really love to but I think for patreon you need a big following (2000+ maybe?) and I can't promote underage incest rape on DA to my 500 somewhat followers.

But maybe I'm just making excuses

>> No.3228040
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3228040

>>3227796
Thanks, I made some adjustments.
The eye I'm going to have trouble fixing ...

and I'm also having trouble drawing the googles...

>> No.3228068
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3228068

Mainly worried about if my faces are good, not the colors

>> No.3228081

I don't mean to post this in the wrong thread, but does anybody know any good books or infographics that focus on genitalia?

>> No.3228085

>>3226914
>tumblr porn is the OP
rip porn threads

>> No.3228117
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>> No.3228121

>>3227713
thats not furry
t. furry

>> No.3228129

>>3227395
still hoping for some crit

>> No.3228133

>>3228129
>>3227395
Your anatomy and perspective are great, but I think not showing the face is a mistake making the whole sketch boring. And...
>furry
Please understand how off putting furry is to us normies.

>> No.3228153

>>3228023
For historical reasons mainly. Furries tend to be absolutely cancerous and used to spam their shit everywhere and then play the victim until ponyfags took their place. There's also the "culture" of making a fetish into a goddamn lifestyle that tends to alienate everyone else.

>> No.3228155
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3228155

i don't draw porn often because my style's weird. I'm trying to get better any tips??

>> No.3228157

>>3228023
Dumb rule enforced for no reason that only had the effect of making even more artists get away from this board, as if we needed that.
But I'm glad there are still a few anons posting their work even if it's furry and they don't seem to get banned, so idk if it's still enforced.

>>3228153
Bullshit, when did this ever happen on the porn thread? Everything was perfectly fine before that one mod woke up a day and decided to ban loli and furry.

>> No.3228158

>>3228155
Sorry made that super big, I can repost smaller if ya need me too

>> No.3228162

>>3228157
>on the porn thread
I meant on 4chan and the internet in general.

>> No.3228164

>>3228162
Well then sure, I'm just still pissed about that ban, that kind of rule doesn't belong on a board like /ic/

>> No.3228345

>>3228033
I called you retard for a reason, retard.

stop drawing that shit and learn to actually draw.

>> No.3228347

>>3228030
>being such a retarded normie
only thing that counts around here is the skill put into the art, not the fucking subject matter.
idiots like you can just GTFO. saying weeb shit is worse than furry has no fucking meaning when art is being criticized.
kys, seriously.

>> No.3228349

>>3228085
keep flying that retard flag high, autismo.

>> No.3228454

>>3227694
the idea is right. That fellows redline does a good job at showing what is wrong. It doesnt need to be perfect.

>> No.3228457

>>3226917
blog?

>> No.3228467
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>>3228068
I would make her more fem, and the side of her head a little off. Here's a rip'n'tear.

>> No.3228469
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>>3226925
fixed some stuff, added more red in places, got rid of the blur cause her feet aren't THAT close to the camera

>> No.3228479

>>3228469
What program are you using my good fellow?

>> No.3228481

>>3228457
I've actually only just started using a tablet so I haven't really put anything out there yet, but if want to follow me I'll be trying to update as regularly as possible from here on it. Taking my sweet time cause I'm still getting used to digital.

http://eromal.tumblr.com
https://twitter.com/er0mal
https://www.hentai-foundry.com/user/eromal/profile

>> No.3228512

>>3228479
I use SAI for 99% of the work except the shit it can't do like blurs

>> No.3228525

>>3227066
i love this kind of x-ray pls do more

>> No.3228546

Whre do you guys go to porn stills and nude photoshoots for reference?

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>> No.3228565

>>3228563
This was my second ever attempt, any tips?

>> No.3228729

>>3228040
outside of BBC when he shows up you got potential

who are you?

>> No.3228827
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3228827

I'm not a porn artist and I don't know if I will be, but sometimes I draw something lewd. I did this a month ago.

>> No.3228870
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>>3228729
lmao that's the cuck from the last thread who traces Japanese softcore ero models, draws disembodied gorilla heads floating behind his subjects and ignores literally everybody's advice and critique whenever he posts.

>> No.3228979
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3228979

I tried doing a difficult pose with no reference. Rip me.

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3228999

>>3228979
notbad.tiff

Don't forget though, where the rump is concerned, that fat distributions alter dependant on muscular movement and tension, so bending over like this with all her muscles stretching would cause her fat to become taut and her bottom to 'round out' more.

>> No.3229000

>>3228870
I'm beginning to think that there are some underlying mental illnesses in some folks like the Gorilla moron you talk about.
It sounds a lot like this autistic deviant art guy who constantly draws vector graphics of some fat animals with floppers.

The same, irrational obsession with some degenerate furry fantasy shows in that Gorilla guy.

>> No.3229007

>>3228999
Youre totally right about the butt area! Thanks so much anon

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>> No.3229014
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character concept - Teen half-succubus and her pet tentacle monster "Noodles"

I've got a huge thing for super casual porn, So the idea is that since she's parly a succubus, she'll be almost entirely apathetic to lewd stuff and the whole pesky concept of public indecency, at least relative to humans.

>> No.3229017

>>3229011
This is bretty neat.

>> No.3229052

>>3229014
I dig it. Reminds me of some short comic going around about a little goth girl with some octopus monster thats addicted to videogames.

>> No.3229073

>>3229000
I'm new here, and don't like to draw furry.

I thought about drawing the gorilla's hand, but you guys just kept talking about the facial expression, and I did not want to change her face.

The gorilla's body was also missing, but I did not want to continue drawing it.
As I said at the time, I just wanted to draw Tracer, not him.

But okay, I'll post my drawings elsewhere ...

>> No.3229075

>>3229014
do you have a blog or something I could see more from? Your style reminds me of Doxy

>> No.3229077

>>3229073
no please by all means, post them here. I wasn't in the thread where you showed your drawings. Just seen the autist works posted in here. You aren't autistic, that's a mean exaggeration. But maybe you trace too much and are afraid to try drawing the Gorilla body on a whole page, because of lack of reference.

>> No.3229082

>>3229077
I do not have much experience and I'm trying to do what I can for now.

I prefer to draw women, not men, so the drawing was aimed at Tracer, but as I had to put something in the background, well, I put the gorilla.

I am not very patient to finish drawing, if I stay 3 days in something, I finish and start a new one. I did not want to continue that drawing, and I went to make a new one.
Now I'm tired of this new one, which I posted before here, I think I'll finish it and start something new, even with all the mistakes it still has.

>> No.3229084

>>3229082
Try to vary your drawing speed. Take some cheap paper and just draw quick sketches in between. It's like a massage after sport, you will losen up and not be so uptight with just one drawing that you want to put a lot of work into.

>> No.3229098

>>3229052
you mean The Crawling City? that's partly where I got the idea from.

>>322907
not anything active right now, plan is to kick start a blog with this and some other drawings of her. As for the artstyle, doxy is a huge inspiration art-wise so I've borrowed a lot of design elements from his stuff.

>> No.3229104

>>3229098
after a quick google search, yep, that's the one.

>> No.3229126
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3229126

Can somebody help me with her asshole?

>> No.3229130

>>3229126
I can't, but would you mind telling me what brush you're using + settings? Your lines are very attractive.

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>>3229075
Might be Toxxy, but idk if they use /ic/.

>> No.3229134

>>3229098
Doxy is a total lad. I'd love to see what they could create if they spent an excessive amount of time on a single piece.

>> No.3229150

>>3229130
I use the normal hard round brush in PS.
I also have shortkeys on my tablett to easily adjust pen size wich really helps to work faster.

For settings I mostly make it so the pen line opacity goes down when my pen pressure goes down. And if I want a certain part to be darker I change the setting from that to just lines with no opacity changes. I hope that makes sense, my version of PS is not in english so I don't know all the setting names.

>> No.3229159

>>3229150
>for settings I mostly make it so the pen line opacity goes down when my pen pressure goes down

Ah, I see. I only just started using a graphics tablet, and whilst I'm able to produce decent art already, I don't really know how to mess around with tablet settings yet. Thank you for responding!

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>>3229159
That feature isn't a setting for the tablett. You can just toggle this button in PS (if you are using that programm) It's at the top of the window when you have the pen tool selected.

>> No.3229320

>>3228870
IIRC pretty much the only reoccurring complaint was people not liking Tracer's expression, which isn't so much an objective complaint.

>> No.3229344

>>3229320
This is a thread for critique, tips and advice. It's not a showboating thread to show off your shit. Disembodied gorilla head-kun received about 5 identical critiques to which his response is p. much "It's pretty, I don't give ashit". He obviously has no desire to improve or change, and thought that posting his shit here was just a platform to promote his garbage. If he wants praise he can take it to Deviantart or Reddit.

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>>3226917
I'm almost finished with this save for the hands, nipples, feet and abdomen, but ngl I'm having a really tough time painting the abdomen.
I'm not sure what it is exactly I'm doing wrong, but something just doesn't look "right", and I can't put my finger on it. Any ideas?

>> No.3229361

>>3229346
Where is the light coming from? Put a marker where it's at so we can give advise on how to shade because right now it's like 3 or 4 directions.

>> No.3229365

>>3229361
The moon/halo above her head is supposed to be a light source originating from above and behind her, whereas the primary source is directly in front /below her (no idea how I'd mark that out sorry), with a man kneeling in front of her, hence the shadow being cast.

I only started drawing digitally 2 weeks ago and I think I've made decent progress, but I'm still not good at all with some of the more technical aspects such as lighting. I probably should have started with b&w first.

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>>3229014
cleaned up the sketch a bit, added some colors, tried shading for the first time and regretted it immediately ...

>> No.3229368

>>3228565
I'd say, bigger nipples and let them sag a bit more. Oherwise they'd look fake.

>> No.3229373

>>3228007
Holy shit, dude.

>> No.3229374

>>3229367
Do you have a blog/HF account I can follow? :)

>> No.3229395

>>3229367
>>3229374
Seconding, unironically asking for blog.

>> No.3229442
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3229442

I'm a stupid retard.

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>>3229442
Being a cuck is worse.

>> No.3229455

>>3229344
My point is though he obviously for whatever reason liked that expression and was asking for critique on things like anatomy and perspective you wouldn't sat somebody's drawing of an orange is bad because you would rather see a drawing of an apple would you?

>> No.3229465

>>3229444
>Implying I'm white

>> No.3229467

>>3229455
He also got critique on anatomy, which he pointedly ignored, i.e. Winston's disembodied head floating over Tracer's shoulder (because he had traced his pose and didn't know how to go about correcting it).

>> No.3229468
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3229468

>>3229367
Attempt two. I learned from my mistakes last time and just skipped trying to do realistic point lighting altogether. Just throw highlights on it until it looks decent, right?

also, got the lineart done.

>>3229374
>>3229395
got nothing active right now, sorry.

>> No.3229472

>>3229468
It's super cute Anon, and I would have followed something inactive just so I could get to see more of your style. It's so 'clean', something I lack in my own stuff but would love to emulate.

>> No.3229491
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3229491

Well this might be as good as I can get it

>> No.3229494

>>3229491
I like it. Got a blog?

>> No.3229502

>>3226917
I remember you from the last thread. I like how professional it looks but the balls look a little squished which hurts my balls from looking at them, and the penis itself looks so red that it makes me squeamish. I can't help but think there's just blood pooling in all those veins.

>>3226925
Is that really yours?? That's amazing. It honestly looks like you just swiped it off of gelbooru. There's not much to criticize

>>3227066
I think the faces are a bit weird, especially the smaller boy's. It is kinky and hot but the art kind of detracts from that. I recommend you redraw the boy and make the sink a little bit more detailed, it just looks like she's washing plates on the countertop.

>>3227090
I think the upper body is waaay too small, but I like the style!

>>3227126
Lol

>>3227157
It's drawn really well, i like the tumblr style, but for me it's just a bit unappealing. But that's just my personal taste in porn, the drawing is great

>>3227254
Can I just say I love your handwriting first? The art itself is pretty decent. I like how active you draw the character, if that makes sense

>>3227266
The hand is on the wrong side, and it's a bit blurry/the lines are rough, but just redraw that arm, reoutline it, and it'll be great

>>3227395
Really nice linework on the penis and legs. You should finish it

>>3227668
The penis looks weird, and it's too saturated (the colors are really garish.) I'm also not a big fan of the font. The girl looks nice though!

>>3228467
It's alright, just keep working at it and study from real life, I like the linework

>>3228117
The boobs are a bit far apart but otherwise good :)

>>3228155
THAT FACE IS SO GORGEOUS!! I also love the lines on this one. My only complaints are, they of course aren't finished and as for the girl on the left her vagina should be less wickedly stretched and father up her torso. Her breasts are also lopsided

>>3228563
Boobs are off and I recommend you reline, I like the hair

continued in part 2!

>> No.3229504
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>>3229467
The arms in the small drawing are super big and no one has said anything.
They only complained about her face, the gorilla's face, or that she is a lesbian and should have drawn a woman with a penis, something I would not do.

Btw, here is the uncensored drawing.

In the small drawing she has a nose, but the photo was not good, and lost many of the details,especially with the colors.

And it's just erotic drawings, I do not know why you guys imply so much.
If it were to draw something with quality, I would be drawing something better, not porn.
This is just for fun.

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>>3228827
I'm not a big fan of the subject material, but as for art, I think you should make the lines more dynamic by adding shade between them. Also on her elbow, the tattoo needs to be lifted to make it realistic. Lastly on the left of her lower body you added some strange bump there that shouldn't be there (see pic). Good

>>3228979
The vagina looks off, otherwise good

>>3229011
The penis is drawn and shaded really well and it's artistic. Good!

>>3229014
No complaints, this is awesome. I love soft lines

>>3229126
The left buttocks should be lifted more, up to the right, to make it look normal, i like the hair/face

>>3229468
yep looks nice
>>3229346
as i said before i think the penis is a little too red and thats a bit of a turn off :( im sorry.

>> No.3229535

>>3229504
Because this art critique board in a porn critique thread? lol Everything is fair game even design and style choices. Don't take it so hard keep posting and take peoples critique into consideration.

>> No.3229546

>>3227684
kek

>> No.3229586

>>3227700
It's just not exactly right. A lot of little inconsistencies mostly in perspective the characters tend to be at different angles along with some body parts in every drawing. Everything here has a very uncanny feeling.

>> No.3229766

>>3229506
>as i said before i think the penis is a little too red and thats a bit of a turn off :( im sorry

Oh don't apologise! I'm posting here for critique in order to make it better, so your advice and suggestions are really, really valuable and I appreciate that you took the time to help me! When you work on this kind of stuff for so long it's very easy to start missing small things like that, so outside opinions are very necessary.

The penis is super red because I'm trying to make it look like it's glowing (magic succu-cock idk), but I guess I got the effect wrong. I'll work on the colours /effects more and try to make feel more appealing. Thanks for letting me know Anon.

>> No.3229775
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3229775

Can you guys help me with something? is this torso too long? it seems a bit weird to me now, but i don't know if it's just me looking at it for too long

>> No.3229782
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3229782

>>3229766
"Red elephant" : a person who stands up to the elephant in the room.

>> No.3229803
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>>3229502
Thanks! I decided to color one of those sketches. It's still not done, so I would love anymore tips you could give me

>> No.3229809

>>3229782
Was there an elephant in the room?
Am I the elephant in the room?
What the nani.

>> No.3229810

>>3229803
Her breasts are far too apart and her vagina is extending into her abdomen, it needs to be drawn much lower. Apart from that pretty dece.

>> No.3229843

>>3229506
I'm sorry, but what do you mean by "adding shade between the lines"? I don't understand.

>> No.3229860

>>3229468
Seconding the other anon about the clean thing, it looks lovely. Would definitely follow your blog if you had one

>> No.3230303

>>3228133
>> Your anatomy and perspective are great, but I think not showing the face is a mistake making the whole sketch boring.

thanks for the feedback!

>>3229502
>> Really nice linework on the penis and legs. You should finish it

Thanks! I will.

>> No.3230326

>>3229502
>her vagina should be less wickedly stretched and father up her torso.

>>3229810
>her vagina is extending into her abdomen
which is it

>> No.3230344

>>3230326
Both? They are saying the pussy is not located so high up. An actual pussy is located right below the torso and isn't visible at all from the front, in order to see it you'd have to look at it from below.

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3230362

>>3230326
>He's never seen a vagoo.

>> No.3230396

>>3229843
I guess that's not really what I meant, I just mean I think the lines stick out too much and look meh. Maybe try coloring them?

>> No.3230410
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>>3230362
o no my secret! don't tell anyone o-okay??

>> No.3230441

>>3230362
That's like saying someone who draws a shitty misproportioned face has never seen a face.

>>3230326
I should not be farther up the torso. It's too high up into her guts and facing us too much. Given the rest of her body it would be facing down, we'd just see the top a bit. The dildo would be right under her butt, not as far forward as her knees.

Alternatively, if you want to be able to see more of the cunt, you could try to foreshorten the whole torso so it;s going back into space, but I think that's beyond your skill level.


Basically, your anatomy is insane, look at some reference.

>> No.3230488
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>>3230441
>but I think that's beyond your skill level.
mmmmmmmmmMMMMMBITCH
I could do without the superiority complex. I scraped it and redrew. This a little better? (of course still not done, but I'd rather hear it now than when it's too late, u kno?)

>> No.3230502
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3230502

>>3230488
Your side view is god like what's going on here?
Her shoulders are a tad too wide for her leaning back away from view.

You see anything wrong with mine before I throw this shit into clip studio?

>> No.3230524

>>3230410

i won't if i can get sauce on this gif

her eyebrows

>> No.3230539
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3230539

reposting from the last thread
Been working on this on and off for about a week and a half now. Its driving me crazy.
Ive made some adjustments since then even though it doesn't look like it and just want some feedback positive or negative idc(preferably positive)

>> No.3230563

>>3230539
It's looking nicer than the last time I saw it (which was better than anything I can do.)
I think you're going the right direction.

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3230660

>>3230502
Thanks man! I'll fix and post soon with the finished product. I like the composition on the shot , I redlined any area I thought could use a touch up. Really cool!

>>3230524
Mai hime
https://ww4.gogoanime.io/category/mai-hime
http://mai.wikia.com/wiki/Mai-HiME
Have fun

>> No.3230681

>>3229365
In that case remove the heavy subsurface scattering on her cock, it makes no sense.
If you know how light works and believe in what you know, you'll be rewarded with a believable look.

>> No.3230692

>>3230488
Huehuehue maybe its just reverse psychology.

Just an honest opinion, but hey, prove me wrong.

It is better, you still aren't using reference are you? Main problems for now are the head is way too small, chin is too small for the face, she is missing her neck... (haha, are you hiding it with the hair?) though that may sort itself out if you enlarge the head. The vag is at a much better angle, but it still looks fake, pasted on to her body, maybe the labia majora isn't formed properly.. man just get a pic of a dildo going into a pussy.

>> No.3230893
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3230893

>>3230692
You don't need reverse psychology to get me to fix my porn. I asked for advice. You just don't have to be a dick man. (did get a ref pic for her pus) Happy now?

>> No.3230938

>>3230893
It's more important you not be a pussy than I not be a dick. I'm just razzin ya.

I'm still miserable, but the painting is better. So I think what was missing was space between the stomach and start of the vag. Angle in last pic was fine if you wan't to show more interior thru the dildo. This way is also fine, looks like she's more on the downthrust, but maybe doesn't sell the foreshortening as well.

>> No.3230995

>>3227395
KoogsMedd right?

>> No.3231006

>>3230938
Thanks, i'm done with this picture for now. I am in pain. see ya round the bend

>> No.3231107

Newbie porn artist here, about the do my first commision ever. I wanted to know if there are any guides on how to hide your actual sensible info (real name and that stuff) on paypal or if it is necessary at all to use that kind of information, could you just use a made up name? Would paypal know why I am getting paid for, would they cancel the payment for such reasons? How do I avoid that? I know these questions are common as fuck, but as I said I'm new to all this so I want to know if any experienced artists here doing commisions could give a little insight.

>> No.3231124

>>3230995
yep

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>>3227395
Here's an anatomy practice I did today, non-furry. Any crit?

>> No.3231263
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3231263

I drew a post I saw on the ol' e6 because I wanted to see how it would look in my style. What do you think?
>Original: https://e621.net/post/show/1387706/

>> No.3231267
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3231267

how am i doing?

>> No.3231268

>>3231263
Arms are way too small especially compared to her head/neck area. Also you shouldn't cut off the legs like that, draw the whole thing.
For what it's worth I think if you just had some more fundamentals, your character would be very appealing. You just have to work on that anatomy and gesture

>> No.3231274

>>3231107
You would have to upgrade to a business account to change your name to your 'business' name, and even then I think that there was some payment method that reveals your real name.

You'd have to write your customer an invoice, or tell them to select "no address needed" if they want to pay you by themselves. I've generally seen people recommend the invoice option, because there's scummy people out there who sometimes request for a chargeback a few days or weeks after a completed commission if they paid through the goods service.

Tell a customer to write "Thank you" or "for the commission" in the message box. Writing shit like "for the femdom commission" or "threeway commission" will get everyone in trouble.

>> No.3231313

>>3231267
stiff gesture with unnatural/weird pose and very flat perspective. keep grinding.

>> No.3231494

>>3231313
yeah i still need alot to more improve. i’ll go look for more references then to see if that helps. thanks.

>> No.3231519

>>3229346
thats not at all how shadows work. shadows follow the form. but otherwise okay. Except for the part where u draw a girl with a penis.

>> No.3231569

since when is porn art

>> No.3231580

>>3231569
Always?

>> No.3231582
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3231582

>>3231569

>> No.3231699

>>3227157
Going by this drawing, I'll say you've got a pretty good grasp on it already. Expressions matter a lot to me, and that I'll say is one of your stronger skills.

>> No.3231702

Do you guys steal colors from photos? I find when ever i try to make regular flesh color I get it slightly wrong and it looks awful. If i take 3 or 4 tones out of a photo and blend them together it looks so appealing.

>> No.3231713
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3231713

>>3228085
You are even more stupid than I could ever imagine. These people dont even know their own memes.

>> No.3231716

Client here. How do I tell a artist the final product is really awful?

>> No.3231718

>>3231716
Did you look at their past work before you hired them?
Did you provide an example of the level of work you are expecting?

Just tell them its not good enough.

>> No.3231777

>>3231702
If it works to create a good piece, that's great. But you will learn how to do it on the fly faster if you practice and use trial and error.

>> No.3231896 [DELETED] 

>>3229468
I'm not into tentacles but that is pretty good.
Better than some pro artists I see.
Just wanna know how long did it take you just to color and shade, cuz it always takes me a really longass time whenever I try it.

>> No.3231903

>>3226925
I'm not into tentacles but that is pretty good.
Better than some pro artists I see.
Just wanna know how long did it take you just to color and shade, cuz it always takes me a really longass time whenever I try it.

>> No.3231966

>>3229011
like it do more

>> No.3231974
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3231974

Any glaring issues with this before I go forward with line cleanup and colouring?

>> No.3231979

>>3231974
Her thighs look a bit too big.

>> No.3231983

>>3231979
100% intentional my friend, I like 'em thicc.
Although this is a stylisation choice, do you think it detracts from the overall composition? Cause I can change it if so.

>> No.3231993

>>3231983
Not necessarily detrimental, but it would do if they were more fleshed out into the leg at the bottom.
Other than that it looks nice.

>> No.3231994

>>3231993
Ah, I see your point, I'll fix that up and put a bit more detail into it. Thanks for the critique!

>> No.3231995

>>3231994
No problem, just glad to help.

>> No.3232012

>>3231994
What'd ya do with the succ? Is it finished?

>> No.3232014
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3232014

>>3232012
Wow you recognised me based on my style?
And yeah I finished her, I guess. idk, looking at her now I feel like I could have put more detail into the shading, but I'm very new to digital art and was getting to the point where if I had to look at it any more I'd have just ended up scrapping it.

Ignore watermark, it's on all my finished stuff.

>> No.3232035

>>3230893
her body is leaning back?? but the nipples on her tits are pointing the same way they would point if her body wasn't leaning back

also dont hide the arms or hands in your poses, make up objects if you have to so you have more options for posing, to practice drawing those

>> No.3232056

>>3232014
Eyes/mouth/expression are similar. Usually how it goes.
Not bad, reminds me of Disney's Gargoyles.

>> No.3232103

>>3232035
Wanted to focus on torso and puss aspect, it’s just a study. I did a side view of her pose on a previous post, u can look back thru them. It just made sense that her hands would be behind her. Some women have high nipples, but yes nip too high I agree.

To put it simply, I’m done with this study. I’ll do something else and post later.

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3232194

is it an improvement? or should i change a few things?
open for more suggestions.

>> No.3232235

>>3232194
She looks pregnant. You went from way too much ab definition to no ab definition.

>> No.3232247

>>3232194
Her right breast should be squishing more against the thigh. Right now it looks like it has to be dense and fake as fuck cause the physics aren't right.

>> No.3232263

>>3232235
oh i can fix that.
>>3232247
oh yeah now that you mentioned it.

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3232279

Is there anything here that looks really wrong or off?

>> No.3232280

>>3232279
besides the fact it's Martian Queen x Pearl?

>> No.3232281

>>3232280
It's a gift for someone who likes these two characters.

>> No.3232291
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3232291

>>3232235
might ad abs later
>>3232247
you think this might be to little of change or should i try something else?

>> No.3232360
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3232360

more with this character

>> No.3232362

>>3232360
Wow, so energetic! Do you have a blog?

>> No.3232363

>>3232362
>not knowing jjfrenchie

>> No.3232365
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3232365

Any feedback in terms of the pose/angle? Is this too boring?

>> No.3232366

>>3232362
Thanks! thatfisher.tumblr.com

>> No.3232380

>>3232363
I rarely use /ic/.

>>3232366
Thanks familia, OH, you're the guy posting the horse stuff from a few days ago you said were inspired by deerchip. I saved those because I liked the lines so much.

>> No.3232389

>>3232366
I just saved your entire gallery. Your work is so fluid!

>> No.3232394

>>3232366
Can't access it without an account. Do you post anywhere else/

>> No.3232397

>>3232394
Not him but I just made an account to be honest, I just used a fake 10 minute email, and other bullshit info. It only takes like two minutes
Some artists post pretty much just on tumblr so eventually I just had to make one.

>> No.3232405

>>3232363
he's not jjfrenchie, dumbass

>> No.3232414

>>3232405
well he apes his style pretty well and I kind of figured that out after he posted his blog.......bitch

>> No.3232415

>>3232414
>"NOT KNOWING JJFRENCIE LMAAAAO"
>"YEAH WELL HE'S JUST COPYING HIM ANYWAY, NOT MY FAULT, B-B-B-ITCH!"

>> No.3232417

>>3232415
Are you ok O___O;

>> No.3232418

>>3232414
sorry for calling you out on being stupid.
let it go now. shhhh.

>> No.3232419

>>3232418
You need help.

>> No.3232420

>>3232194
while there a few issues, the one major thing you should fix is the abs and obliques, those are WAY off. The rest of your anatomy could definitely do with some work, but for now it looks ok. I'd suggest for this piece really trying to fix her abs (the belly area basically)

>> No.3232430

>>3232417
retard

>> No.3232440

>>3232417
>>3232419
>>3232430
Fucking kek the disguised salt

>> No.3232443

What's the correlation between tumblr followers and patreon shekels?

Can I expect to make 1k$ on patreon by the time I have 5k tumblr followers?

>> No.3232445

>>3232443
there probably is 0 correlation.

>> No.3232460

>>3228563
people still remember KLK?

>> No.3232461

>>3232430
calm down autst no one cares about your little itnernet war.
its not a big deal

>> No.3232481
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3232481

i am just now learning how to draw on a tablet, why am i so late :(

>> No.3232492

>>3232481
You using a stabiliser? If not, get a stabiliser (Sai has one built in, for PS you can get Lazy Nezumi). It will change your life.

>> No.3232519
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3232519

>>3232443
Nah. Tumblr isn't where you'll find so much core audience.
Also, it really depends on your patreon model.

My Patreon model for example is based on commissions and personalized art, so people are willing to pay for higher tiers.

Most of my core audience (fans that are willing to stick with me and support me financially) comes from tumblr and Hentai Foundry. Others found about me on picarto and via word of mouth.

I have 34k tumblr followers and 8,5k HF watchers. Of these people 210 are supporting me on Patreon right now.

I attached a survey I did not long ago about where people found out about me. You can see for yourself.

Anyway, out of cca 30k fans (I'd say 10k are spam bots) 200 people support me.
That's 0,6%

Now do the math for your situation.

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>>3231974
She got re-purposed.

>an oni girl jumps into the way of your path brandishing a spiked club
>she turns around, bending over slighting, and informs you that you must pay the toll or suffer the consequences

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3232647

>>3231974
She got re-purposed.

>an oni girl brandishing a spiked club jumps into the way of your path
>she turns around, bending over slighting, and informs you that you must pay the toll or suffer the consequences
>wdyd

>> No.3232755
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3232755

how many tentacles are too many tentacles?

>> No.3232762

>>3232755
more like what kind of foreshortening is good foreshortening. fix those legs, famalino.

>> No.3232776

>>3232762
I can't see what you mean, it looks fine to me, but maybe I've been staring at it for too long and gotten used to it.

>> No.3232791

>>3232014
What hardware and software do you use for your art? I'm interested in trying to do some digital stuff myself. Currently I only draw traditional and have to scan things to my harddrive.

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>>3232365
I'm guessing from the lack of responses that it is too boring. Is this better?

>> No.3232866

>>3232844
The first one was good as well, what's up with the face?

>> No.3232867

>>3232844
why is there only one face? Why is she bald?

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3232873

>>3232866
>>3232867
Still need to work on the face. Also I don't like drawing hair until the pose is done.

>> No.3232881

>>3232844
I actually like the other one more. I like the way you do the lines and the subtract from then if they need to be thinner looks rad.

>> No.3232889

>>3232755
I'm just gonna continue drawing on it as is and hope >>3232762 is just messing with me or something because I can't for the life of me see what's wrong with the foreshortening, if anyone wanna redline the problem that'd be nice.

>> No.3232911
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3232911

>>3232844
You wouldn't be down to trade art would you? I learned how draw vaginas from behind better from looking at your work.

>> No.3232951
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3232951

>>3232791
I have a Wacom Intuos Medium, Photoshop for linework (but I had the pressure for opacity turned off for those lines, so they look really bad) , Paint Tool Sai for colouring, and I use Lazy Nezumi for line stabilisation. Definitely get a stabiliser. Sai has one built in but desu I prefer Lazy Nezumi for my lines.

Lots of people say they prefer Photoshop for colouring since it's the industry standard, but for me I prefer the results I get from Sai since I'm a slut for the watercolour brush.

(bls don't laugh at my layers /ic/, I like to tweak the colours on "everything")

>> No.3232978

>>3232951
Oh... anon. That's tame. I work with folders of layers in Sai...

>> No.3232994

>>3232978
Really? Okay that's a relief. Thought I was gonna get roasted.

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3233023

>>3232755
>>3232889
okay I'm gonna leave it at here for today. I drew rest of the body and I still can't tell if the perspective is off. to me this looks good, there's isn't supposed to be much foreshortening going on so I'm not sure if the anon maybe just assumed her proportions were me trying to do foreshortening.

anyways, critique it to hell, and if the perspective sucks, let me know.

>> No.3233038
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3233038

drawing a porn comic. loose sketch. in general is my anatomy okay enough to make comics? paneling? (faces are zero effort at this point)

>> No.3233056

>all these actually good artists posting here and revealing their secrets and what programs they use and shit
kill you're selves

>> No.3233057

>>3229468
Is this nigga doxy??

>> No.3233061
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3233061

I tried to make the penors reflect light onto each other but i could not get it to work. if i try to put a little brown reflected light on the white penus it just looks like its dirty

>> No.3233065

>>3233056
If you're referring to me >>3232951 (>me, >good, kek) I'm not into gatekeeping.
I come here to get critique and be critiqued. I wouldn't be at the stage I am now without the help of others, so I'm not going to withhold my own knowledge from others cause I'm not an asshole.

>> No.3233069

>>3233061
Those look more like the mouths of tapirs than dicks

>> No.3233072

>>3233069
not kosher obv

>> No.3233079

>>3233057
I fucking wish.

>> No.3233084

>>3233072
Not human either

>> No.3233105

>>3233079
you can't really take that as a compliment. you are emulating the style of someone else. be original, ffs.

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3233115

Did he quit because no one likes his bland lifeless art anymore?

>> No.3233116

>>3233105
Doxy didn't invent that style and nor does he own it Anon, he just popularised it.

>> No.3233119

>>3233061
nigger

>> No.3233120

thanks for the motivation guys. instead of going to bed i felt compelled to draw a little more.
actually considering getting into porn for reals cause it is fun

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3233122

>>3233120
oops wanted to attach this

>> No.3233129

>>3233105
I'm sure you've got a one of a kind art style without any influence from anyone else, anon.

>> No.3233154

>>3233061
Giant ship worm.

>> No.3233170
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3233170

doing some color and lineart practice. Thoghts?

>> No.3233187

>>3233116
sure, but by the response of that anon, I can tell they are stoked to be compared to another artist. makes very little sense imo.
>>3233129
nah, I don't, but I never tried to emulate a particular artist. instead I try to develop something of my own, even if it's influenced by many things.

>> No.3233211

>>3233187
I'm obviously gonna be pretty flattered if you wanna compare my stuff to someone who's been drawing for like 10 years when I'm barely past my first, but you're the one assuming I'm trying to "emulate" him, because I never claimed I did.

I'm not trying to be doxy, dude. I've taken quite a bit of inspiration in how he draws bodies and shapes, but there's a lot a could do differently if I just wanted to be a doxy clone.

>> No.3233307

>>3233170
she looks kind of retarded.

>> No.3233320

>>3232647
give her a "deposit"

this is pretty good now

>> No.3233390

>>3232881
I guess I'll stick with the first one. This is actually the first time I've tried doing line work this way. I normally just have a pencil-like brush but I figured I'd try something different.

>>3232911
>You wouldn't be down to trade art would you?
I'm not able to right now because I have a big backlog of stuff I want to work on, but I might be able to at some point in the future.

>I learned how draw vaginas from behind better from looking at your work.
That actually makes me feel pretty happy, thank you.

>> No.3233408

>>3233061
Looks like two turds

>> No.3233481

>>3233211
you look just like a doxy clone tho.

>> No.3233483

>>3233481
No they don't. It's a very popular and aesthetically pleasing style, so ofc lots of people are going to use it. You just associate it with Doxy because that's the artist you see making use of it.

>>3233211
Ignore the faggot saying you're a Doxy clone senpai. Doxy is a very accomplished artist and I think you'd have to be an idiot not to take reference from his ability when drawing porn. The dude puts out tuts for this precise reason. Fuck, I look at Incase's stuff "all the time".

>> No.3233488

>>3233483
>No they don't. It's a very popular and aesthetically pleasing style, so ofc lots of people are going to use it.
of course a lot of people use it. a ton of people are doxy clones. just like your senpai (fucking kek) here.

>> No.3233500

>>3233488
I'm sorry for you that your own ability is so lacking that you can't comprehend that it's necessary to learn as much from others as it is from yourself. It must be suffering to be so mediocre :((((

>> No.3233514

>>3233500
nah, that's not the reason.
the problem is that when I look at this anon's work ALL I see is copying another style.
I see anatomical and perspective problems hidden behind copying other people's polish.
and this is bad. very very very bad.

>> No.3233517
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3233517

>>3233514
That's fair enough then, I agree that there is a perspective problem with the thighs, but you weren't critiquing their anatomy, you were critiquing the perception that they had somehow stolen what is already a very popular existing style.

It's not like Doxy doesn't take inspiration from existing artists either. This is a much older piece of his that, without the sugnature, could easily be mistaken for a Dmitry sketch.

>> No.3233522

>>3233517
ok, I'll have to agree with you that this style hasn't been invented by Doxy, tho it's obvious doxy was this anon's huge influence. willingly or not. it's not just the style, it's also the forms and proportions.

anyway, my point is, invent new things by mixing and matching existing stuff you like and it's appealing to you. and try to put in your own twist instead of recreating something that is already out there. use real life as inspiration and break it down. don't use other artists' stuff for studying. don't just copy something. understand it and recreate it instead.

>> No.3233529

>>3233522
I'm of the opinion that an artists personality will gradually bleed into their own work the longer their practice and develop their skills. I don't know how long this person has been drawing, nor how long they've been referencing Doxy's style. Even so I can still see quite a big difference between their style's and Doxxy, specifically with line weight and use of vibrant pastel tones.

>> No.3233548
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3233548

I realized I have no idea how to combine more detailed shading with anime.

>> No.3233551 [DELETED] 
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I'm doooooone ʘʘ

“Halt, human!” she bellows, “if you wish to pass then you must pay the toll, or suffer the penalty of your death!”

“God’s no, please no” - it’s the one day you’ve forgotten your coin-purse. You begin to open your mouth, perhaps to plead for some slither of mercy, but you silence that thought in an instant. The oni women that roam this land accosting travellers weren’t known for their clemency, and were well renowned for their absolute brutality. Instead you go to raise a leg at some chance of escape, but instead find yourself rooted to the spot. Frozen in terror, you raise your hands to cover your head and wince in anticipation. Head lowered in submission, you stand trembling, waiting for the impending blows to come raining down upon you… only to be met by silence. None arrive.

You raise your head tentatively and peak out from beneath a shielded arm.

“Well, human? I haven’t got all day y’know”.

Ignore the watermark, I'm not trying to promote here, just not taking any chances after my first submission was spread everywhere with credit removed.

>>3233548
Whoa that's still pretty damn good shading. I would argue that with a few touchups that it's fine as it is. I always adored the contrast between simplified anime style lines combined with detailed shading. I would love to see this finished.

>> No.3233552
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3233552

>>3233522
Shapes is more splashbrush inspired actually, colours and shading look nothing like doxy's or splashbrush in my opinion, I just went with the first thing that looked pretty. proportions, does look a bit like doxy's, but last time I checked he doesn't own exclusive rights to that. I draw them like that because that's what I find hot, not because doxy draws them like that.

if you had critique on how I draw perspective or anatomy I'd been more than happy to hear it, I'm posting here for critique after all, but your accusations are starting to piss me off.

>> No.3233555
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3233555

>>3233552
>>3233522
and here is one of doxy's off twitter in a pretty similar pose.

>> No.3233563

>>3233552
>>3233555
All the porn artists in this circle bounce off one another Anon in different ways, I wouldn't worry about it. I think your style is distinct and v. cute, that's why I wanted your blog.

>> No.3233570

>>3233548
Why don't you make her face anime style but not hyper moe shit..

>> No.3233619

>>3233552
>>3233555
>accusations
kek
chill out famalino. I didn't say you are copying artists. I'm saying you are copying artists' styles.
if you are okay with having a generic style where people go "woah, looks just like doxy", then, by all means, keep doing it.
also, your stuff doesn't look like splashbrush's in any way.

and, sorry, but I really don't have the time for a redline right now. keep posting, and maybe next time I'll throw one your way if time will allow it.

>> No.3233623
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3233623

Ahh, I'm finally done, but I feel like it's half-baked. Does anybody else find they start to hate their work they SECOND they publish it?

(ignore the watermark btw. I'm not trying to promote here, just after my first piece got reposted places with the credit removed I realised I had to start stamping that shit onto everything I create :l)

>> No.3233640

>>3233623
how is she holding that weapon?

>> No.3233643

>>3233623
Her genitals look way to red, like they've got blood smeared all over them or something, which is a pretty uncomfortable thought, her arms seem to be a bit too short, and her butthole is way too far out. Her face also looks really unattractive to me, but I guess that one is subjective.

overall though it's a nice enough drawing, I wouldn't have been bothered much about any of it but the face if I weren't trying to critique it. The torso is really nicely drawn.

>> No.3233645

>>3233623
>>3233643

I like the butthole personally

>> No.3233646
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3233646

I started now, still need to fix the face.

>> No.3233649

>>3232755
>>3233023
This is very nice and appealing imo, the only thing I would "fix" is draw the feet in a better position, maybe have one of them show a bit of sole to the viewer
Then again not everyone is going to care for that, probably. But personally I think every bodypart should receive attention from an artist.

>> No.3233658 [DELETED] 

>>3233640
When I sketched out the arm to see where to position the weapon I realised that it was almost completely eclipsed by her body. You should actually be able to see her elbow peeking out around her waist, but when I drew it in it detracted from the smallness of her waist so I just crapped out and didn't draw it at all. I should have really just repositioned the arm but ngl I'm tired and want to move on from this. I'll do better next time.

>and her butthole is way too far out
Yeah, you're completely right. This is actually my first time drawing a butthole and a vagina. I realised the butthole was too far out myself but I wasn't skilled enough to redraw it in a way that illustrated depth.

>>3233645
M-me too.

>> No.3233661

>>3233640
When I sketched out the arm to see where to position the weapon I realised that it was almost completely eclipsed by her body. You should actually be able to see her elbow peeking out around her waist, but when I drew it in it detracted from the smallness of her waist so I just crapped out and didn't draw it at all. I should have really just repositioned the arm but ngl I'm tired and want to move on from this. I'll do better next time.

>>3233643
>and her butthole is way too far out
Yeah, you're completely right. This is actually my first time drawing a butthole and a vagina. I realised the butthole was too far out myself but I wasn't skilled enough to redraw it in a way that illustrated depth. I guess using darker tones should do the trick?

>>3233645
M-me too.

>> No.3233677

>>3233661
Actually, I'm gonna go fix some of that shit. It'd be a shame to upload something so halfbaked just because I'm tired.

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3233694

>>3233623
nah dude, have it more covered by the butt cheeks like this, went a bit overboard on the redlining here, drawing butts is too much fun.

>>3233649
I'm not sure what you mean, but I've cleaned up the feet a bit and made them less angular looking. posting in a bit.

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3233696

>>3233694

>> No.3233723

>>3233623
>>3233694
Your art is pretty good. I liked the one you posted before as well.
Checked your Patreon, did you just make it?
You are really good so I'm sure you will get more support.
I will support as well once I have the money.
Soon I will start one myself once I feel more confident in my stuff.

>> No.3233757
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3233757

>>3233623
OKAY I FIXED IT UP HOW'S THIS

>>3233723
Aw that's very sweet man, thanks for checking me out. I did make the Patreon a few days ago but I've only just started creating content for it so I'm not very well known. I don't want you to feel like you have to support me or anything either, the fact you say my stuff is good is very motivational. I too am very unconfident in what I create, but I think it's natural for artists to be extremely critical of their own work because where other people only see the finished product, we see every line and stroke that went into building it.

I don't what your level is at, but I am planning to start posting WIP/process breakdowns and stuff soon, so if I can help you in any way feel free to ask (eromal.tumblr.com).

>>3233694
Fuck I just saw this. FUCK.

>> No.3233813

>>3233757
I started like 5 or 6 months ago when I got my drawing table so I have a lot to learn, but I legit like your art. Its pretty much close to what I wanna draw too.
One thing I dont like is wasted potential so I will make sure to keep your Patreon so I can support you whenever possible. Wanna help other artists keep going doing their stuff.

Anyway, I would post my art but I dont feel it yet so I will follow you on tumblr and maybe send you a message so you can check my stuff if you want.
As help at the moment what I'm struggling with is with perspective and proportions, but I guess I just really need to practice to learn that?
Also really need to find a brush that I can settle with. Everytime I draw I feel like my lines are stiff and rough, I want them smoother like yours.

>> No.3233906
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3233906

I was wondering if this pic has shown at least some improvment over some of my older attempts.

Been thinking of doing this but with the room in a tilted 2 point perspective to better illustrate a scene such as this.

>> No.3233938

>>3233757
I thought the club was a horse dick from the thumbnail and was disappointed.

>> No.3234083
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3234083

I'm giving up on the previous picture because I just don't like the way it was turning out. I'm thinking of going back to something more cartoony.

>> No.3234123

>>3233906

Just go to /beg/ and learn to draw. It's unappealing and you don't know what composition is.

>> No.3234129
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3234129

This might be boring (cover page for comic), but is it fappable? Hair is unfinished

>> No.3234131

>>3234129
butterface

>> No.3234132
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3234132

Did i fuck this anatomy up? Don't worry about the retarded face, it's just so there's something there

>> No.3234179
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3234179

>>3234131
? In what way? Please show me.

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>> No.3234274
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3234274

This one's a commissioned image I finished recently. I wish I had something I was working on that was my own, but its just been commission work for the past 2 months.

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3234280

>>3234132
Fixed the legs and almost everything actually, but the feet are irking me A LOT, maybe it's the size?

>>3234274
Really like how you use cellshading with really subtle smooth shades, but isn't tracer's left nipple a bit too high up?

>> No.3234351

>>3226925
I love Aqua, got anymore?

>> No.3234356

>>3233646
Fix it! I wish you would do more full bodies with more than just frontal view!
>>3234179 The issue is the 90s animu style not your own personal ability, the lips though find a reference. The jaw really throws off the younger crowd.
>>3234280
Twist the right foot 10 degrees counter clock (you'll have to adjust shape to compensate the new angle) and the left is close the shape is off slightly but it's unnoticeable to anyone who's not looking at the feet obsessively. Overall great job.

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3234441

>>3227090
>>3227330
I fixed the tits i think. How is this?
>>3229502
Thanks.
I'll try and make the upper body a little bigger for the next one.

>> No.3234443

>>3234441
oh and i also added them eyebrows visible through the hair... Do you suppose they add anything good to it? or should I just trash them?

>> No.3234454

>>3234280

Damn you're right. I'll have to fix that when my brain isn't shit. Just woke up after sleeping for 4 and a half hours.

>> No.3234486

>>3234441
A trick I use for shaping breasts is to use an upside down heart. I don't think the upper bottom is a problem ( the waist can be widened though), but her legs look too cylindrical with the left thigh widening as it connects with the knee. Curving the thighs and calf can help her legs look slimmer but keep her ass from looking flat. The vag is also off to the right. Drawing a ling down the center of her anatomy can help when forming the body.

>> No.3234487
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3234487

>>3234486
forgot to add this.

>> No.3234513

>>3234487
You didn't redline the missing right arm...
>>3234441
Why aren't you using a vector layer for line art my friend?

>> No.3234524

>>3234513
you didn't redline it either...

>> No.3234528

>>3234524
I'm not the one who created the issue he had the arm hidden.

>> No.3234531

>>3234528
Neither was I, so I guess we're both wrong.

>> No.3234544

>>3234123

Well it was supposed to be a piece focusing on the woman giving birth with other people being complementary to the scene.

I wanted to add some extra details to make it look not as dull.

This isn't even the first time I have tried this specific drawing with not much success at improvment.

>> No.3234552
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3234552

>>3234528
I redlined the arm, anyways. Now back to work.

>> No.3234555

>>3234274
this looks really nice well done, though one point of criticism is that the celshading on tracers belly is to pronounced compared to the rest of the drawing, so it draws too much attention. Try thinking more about the design and flow of the shading in relation to the rest of the body.

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3234560

>>3233548
I ended up going back to this after all and starting from scratch.

I'm pretty sure the guy in the back is fundamentally broken but I'm hoping nobody notices. I basically have no idea what I'm doing in that regard.

>> No.3234612

>>3234555
Yeah, I'll have to fix that with her nipple. I kinda liked how it looked, but now that im looking at it again, it looks like she's sucking in her belly.

>> No.3234616

>>3234560
masterful, very solid style imo. I like it.

>> No.3234621

>>3234356
>90s animu style
Really? First time I've been told that. That looks 90s to you? Alright, I'll see what I can do.

>> No.3234656

>>3234555
I went back and added simple shading to her stomach. I tend to go more detailed since I do more realistic stuff than cell shading.

>> No.3234657
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>>3234656
I keep forgetting to add the image.

>> No.3234688

>>3234560
yo imma need that blog

>> No.3234781

>>3234123

Yeah.

Tried posting on /beg/ and it is not fucking helping.

Most of the time people get ignored there.

>> No.3234815

>>3234781
There are far to many issues with it even for beg.
Try searching composition and how certain aspects of a scene are appealing and why like anon said.
Then search up popular artists and steal their style shamelessly. Come back here afterwards and show us something good.
I believe in you anon, don't let me down.

Oh, and learning gesture from the basics is far more important than you can ever imagine, please look into that too.

>> No.3234822

>>3234815

I tried looking up basic composition with some videos with Jazza. Which is a huge No for this board.

The only things I have gotten for what makes a scene appealing or at least striking is how to use the Golden Ratio in your drawings and the Rule of 3rds.

I may use the latter for that one.


As for gestures.....I only have real life pics as references to give me an idea on what to go with whilst I am clearly winging the rest.

At 28 years I do wonder if I can improve enough at such an old age.

>> No.3234824

>>3234815

I would also add how the fuck can I make a feishized birth look appealing.

I can admit to my own degeneracy and all but to be frank,it is kinda hard to take the subject matter of my drawing and make it appealing in a general sense.

>> No.3234878

>>3234822
Is this trolling? I swear to god I'll cut you if you're trolling me. Look brodude, I don't know how to make it anymore simple, do gesture exercises everyday for 2 hours, the rest of forever. Google it.
Forget the birthing thing style, perception, gesture, and scene composition are all fucked from the technical standpoint. It doesn't matter whether you showed me this or a nugget loli torture farm with shit all over the walls I would still tell you the same thing the character is unappealing and stiff perceptions off ect.

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3234891

>>3231966

>> No.3234913

>>3234878

Alright.

Im not trolling.

I just am unsure what to do other than look up videos and try to see what the methkd for doing so is and how it can help me get better.

>> No.3234916
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>> No.3234919

>>3233906
It looks exactly the same as all the times you posted in the last thread.
Stop coming here and go practice what everyone told you already. Fuck.

>> No.3234930

>>3234891
Draw Jormundong.

>> No.3234970

>>3234919

You know what?

Fuck it.

I want to see any of you guys do any better.
It really sounds nice to have all these wannabe degrees in art just to shitpost and shit on others on this board and all.

I really have made a mistake coming here for actual critiques.

>> No.3234974

>>3234970
What the hell are you even going on about this time?
You always do this.
People told you everything you needed to do several times and have critqued your shitty artwork.
You refuse to listen and keep expecting immediate results over night.
It doesn't fucking work that way.
Fuck off

>> No.3234985

>>3234974

28 years of my life and the only thing I can remotely say that I am good at is a fucking waste.

Yeah,my own life is pretty much that. A fucking waste.

>> No.3234989

>>3234985
Ok???

>> No.3234998
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3234998

>>3234930
Jormundong and Shub-Niggucock

>> No.3235004

>>3234985
That number of years only means that you have been very slow on the development of your art skills. It's time to change that.

Or do you want to waste even more time? I doubt that.

>> No.3235013

>>3235004

Dozens of people have already tried to help this guy. He doesn't listen/understand anything.
stop replying to him ffs

>> No.3235070
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3235070

>>3234998
My man. I'll award you the benis award of finlan.

>> No.3235073

>>3235013
I dunno, I find him quite entertaining. He's one of the highlights to these past few threads.

>> No.3235074

>>3234916
every time the same lifeless expression. you really suck at this shit, dude.

>> No.3235076

>>3234985
tho you aren't remotely good at drawing. you are pretty much beginner level.
either do as we said and go study fucking fundamentals, or give up and find an easier hobby.

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3235126

>>3234487
>>3234552
Thanks for this, I see it now.

>>3234513
>Why aren't you using a vector layer for line art my friend?

I am very intimidated by them.. I only made tthe move to digital drawings a few months ago.

I have sai and illustrator but the vectors both confused me and scared me when i tryed them. I should stop being a baby and learn it i guess.

>> No.3235185

Does anyone have a good procedure for drawing flying cum strands? I've seen guides for rendering but not for gesture.

>> No.3235222
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3235222

>>3235126
>I am very intimidated by them..
>both confused me and scared me when i tryed them

>> No.3235285
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3235285

Is there anybody on here who's more established/experienced that can give me a rundown on commission pricing?

I've only been doing digital art since November and I guess I'd say I'm "okay". Decent enough, not brilliant, and I still have a lot to learn.

I received a request for a commission earlier. This will be the first commission I've ever taken in my life and I've no idea what to expect in terms of fair pricing. I think the person requesting my services wants a full colour piece and I really want to go above and beyond for them, create something really beautiful. Any ideas on what I should charge?

Here are some examples of my stuff >>3233757 >>3232014 plus attached is a futa recolour I finished today. I don't have a lot of pieces completed yet since most of November went into me practicing with my new tablet.

>> No.3235295

>>3235285
Don't be a pussy, charge out the ass.

>> No.3235329

>>3235295
I don't even know what amount "charging out the ass" would be even if I were to. How much does a person charge for a full colour piece? $50? $70? $100?
I wish there were some way to objectively assess what your abilities were worth in conjuction with the time and effort put into your work.

>> No.3235330

>>3235222
Thats cute how you made the ears go lower like a worried puppy.

>> No.3235353

>>3234616
Thanks

>>3234688
https://twitter.com/orenjipiiru

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3235602

Responding from >>3226809
How do people feel about people tracing from porn pictures for poses?

I did this request where the requester wanted it based off a picture they posed for reference. I mean the angle of the reference picture, to be honest, is my most hated sex pose. I hate that reverse cowboy pose. It looks awkward in real life and it looks even more awkward drawn.....

Thoughts?

>> No.3235701

>>3235353
ayy thx

>> No.3235857

>>3235329
I saw a standard somewhere. Check the /aco/ commission thread for a general idea of what people are charging.
Here
>>>/aco/1931612

>> No.3235922

>>3227157
post blog pleaaase

>> No.3236230

Once professional porn artists finish a major piece do you think they jerk off to it?

>> No.3236323

>>3236230
It depends on the context of the inspiration,
when I draw memories from sex scenes of my life, sometimes I do it.

>> No.3236378

>>3236230
Can't jack off to your shit then it ain't no good.

>> No.3236860

>>3235922
>>3227530

I forgot the password to my old blog so I made a new one that has nothing but that latest drawing and some reposts of art from a year ago

https://goatnips.tumblr.com/

>> No.3236897

>>3234657
Stop tracing 3d models.

>> No.3236997

>>3236897
No anon, Tracer is in the picture.

>> No.3237011

>>3236997
Make it less obvious don't float the hands. Half the pictures on HF have hands floating above body parts and not resting on.

>> No.3237026
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>>3237011
I'm not the artist I was just making a terrible pun about her name I'm sorry.

>> No.3237085
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here was something i was using to get back into painting again