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Old Thread: >>3111778

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>> No.3171308

Roll

>> No.3171311

Reroll

>> No.3171651
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3171651

>>3171303
reddit

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3171653

tollro

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>>3171303

>> No.3171656

roland

>> No.3171676

rol

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3171719

>>3171676

>> No.3171738

>>3171303
Rolling...

>> No.3171792

rrrrrrrooooooolllllll

>> No.3171794

>>3171792
rerooru

>> No.3171796

>>3171794
>>3171792
FUCK i dont wana deaw towergrill

>> No.3171831

FUCK i love this thread!!

>> No.3171858

rollerino

>> No.3171878
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3171878

Roll

>> No.3171929

rrrr

>> No.3171979
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3171979

Here's my take on primeval. How's my line art and coloring?

>> No.3171987

>>3171303
roll

>> No.3171995

>>3171796
Just pick the number from another column, the last group really sucks, and nobody cares anyway.

>> No.3171997

roll

>> No.3172259

roll

>> No.3172545

Poop

>> No.3172657
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3172657

>>3171796
i got lazy

>> No.3172659

Roll

>> No.3172662

>>3172657
I like it.

>> No.3172716

Haha

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3173559

>>3171303

>> No.3173764
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3173764

>>3173559
Hey, another cute one.

>> No.3173885

>>3171303
Rollerino

>> No.3174176

rollolo

>> No.3174179

>>3173559
moomin!

>> No.3174221
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3174221

>>3174176
result

>> No.3174232

>>3171979
I'm not in the position to give critique but i will say that your take on that armour is pretty rad

>> No.3174234

>>3171303
Roll. Let's hope for something good.

>> No.3174256

roll

>> No.3174353

fk

>> No.3174409

rollz

>> No.3174416

>>3171303
roll

>> No.3174417

roll

>> No.3174421

roll

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>>3174417

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3174862

>>3171979
another one. Pls critique

>> No.3174871

>>3174862
I like it! The feets are too big and the arms a little too short though. Maybe making the thighs a little thicker compared to the tibia/calves wouldn't hurt either.
Also, check the femur/pelvis connection. Her right leg looks disjointed, it needs to "start" higher.

>> No.3175010

roll

>> No.3175410

>>3174862
the head looks out of place. Like it doesn't belong.

>> No.3176301
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3176301

I'll try to color it later, what are the go to resources on digital coloring? I'm shit at it.

>> No.3176432

rolly polly

>> No.3176487
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3176487

>>3176432
Done

>> No.3176626
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3176626

tada

>> No.3176629

>>3171303
rolllolol

>> No.3176640

>>3176626
b-blog?

>> No.3176867
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3176867

Crits on body anatomy very welcome.
Already know I need to learn drawing faces and hands tho.
1/3

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3176869

>>3176867
2/2
definitely fucked up on this one, but might as well post it.

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>>3176869
3/3

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3176883

>>3176869
woops forgot to draw the mouth

>> No.3177820
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3177820

yeet

>> No.3177949

>>3174862
>>3171979
So I tried not doing blending like a real painting and tried cell shading and I like it better. Is there a way to do better at blending paintings?

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3177950

>>3177949
forgot image

>> No.3178016

>>3171303
roll

>> No.3178018

>>3178016
reroll

>> No.3178057

roll

>> No.3178067

>>3178018
lets do another one

>> No.3178142

rool

>> No.3178155

>>3176867
you're slowly getting there anon, but some of them have bad proportions and are somewhat flat. A good exercise to do is to look at a ref for a couple of seconds, really capture the pose in your mind, draw it out from your imagination and then check how close you got by overlaying the picture in photoshop. The overlaying part is really important, don't eyeball corrections.

>> No.3179407

>>3171303
roll

>> No.3179411

>>3171303
roll

>> No.3179413

>>3179411
re

>> No.3179500

Rotate forward

>> No.3180503

>>3171303
roll

>> No.3180612

rrrroll

>> No.3180626

Rollentino

>> No.3180627

>>3180626
rerollando

>> No.3180660

Yup

>> No.3181805

aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

>> No.3183381

roll

>> No.3183568

>>3171303
raul

>> No.3185241

ROLLLLL

>> No.3185515

>>3171303
ROWL

>> No.3185566

lorr

>> No.3185604
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3185604

>>3171303
>>3183568
the ink on the fine tip is running out, might have to digitize her instead

>> No.3185610

roll

>> No.3185659
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3185659

>>3185604
bep

>> No.3185664

>>3185604
>>3185659
Very nice.

>> No.3185729

rollan

>> No.3186212

roland

>> No.3186741
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3186741

>>3185729
yes
>>3185664
thanks m8

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3186869

I drank coffee and fuck it's 2 am

>> No.3187333

roor

>> No.3187378

>>3171303
roll

>> No.3187433

roll

>> No.3187560

rolll

>> No.3189678

roll

>> No.3189679

roll

>> No.3189686

>>3171303
rrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr

>> No.3192238

>>3171303
roll

>> No.3192256

rôll

>> No.3192593

Roll

>> No.3192594

Reroll

>> No.3192610

rollin'

>> No.3192612

Rerollin'

>> No.3192619

roll

>> No.3192621

reroll

>> No.3192623

roll-a-reno

>> No.3192638

>>3171303
rollin

>> No.3192649

>>3173764
>>3176487
>>3176626
Damn you guys are really good.
How long until I can produce results like that you think?

>> No.3192655

Rolling

>> No.3192672

Rolling.

>> No.3192721

>>3192649
The answer is so simple... Fundamentals

>> No.3192727
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3192727

Pls critique, how can i improve on apeal?

>> No.3192731

>>3192721
wow you dont say gee thanks!
I asked how long not what to study dipshit learn to read.

>> No.3192739

>>3192649
hey thanks mate. im the guy who drew the dusk elf. ive been drawing all the time since i was a little kid but i definitely didnt use all those years constructively, i just fucked around. ive really only been seriously working on improving since the past year, some of the stuff i drew even just a year or two ago is a fucking atrocity. im sure you can surpass this level quickly if you do plenty of studies and draw everyday. if you want i can post some of my old garbage if you're curious about progression.

also, rolling

>> No.3192743

>>3192739
Oh cool that would be pretty great.
Thats really motivating to hear, I've been grinding for 2-4hrs a day for the last 2 weeks.

>> No.3192785
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3192785

>>3192743
here you go anon don't roast me too hard. the lesson you should learn from me is don't waste your fucking time by being a weeaboo.

>> No.3192788

>>3192785
Not him but...

>"ROFL"

You were better in middle school than I am now (probably)

t. 31 year old bald man.

You are fantastic, please keep working.

>> No.3192835

>>3192788
well, everyone has to start somewhere. if you're near the level i was in middle school that isn't bad at all, because in my case that picture is preceded by even more years of donut steal tier OCs and hamtaro fanart. i was probably 7 when i picked up a mouse and started drawing digitally (in mspaint of course)

sorry for the monologue but my point is, progression is really slow if you don't study. but once you start learning fundamentals and trying new things and challenging yourself, you'll feel like you improve every time you pick up the pen. it's ok if you started late as long as you work hard and learn effectively. good luck anon!

>> No.3192838 [DELETED] 

>>3192785
Do you have a blog or email by the way? I'd like to contact you about (SFW) commission work if you're interested. I think you have potential, and I have money, if you're interested.

>> No.3192847

>>3192785
>>3192835

Do you have a blog or email by the way? I'd like to contact you about (SFW) commission work if you're interested. I think you have potential, and I have money :O)

>> No.3192863

>>3192838
i don't usually do commissions, but if you want you can email coolthrowaway1@gmail.com and ill give you my discord or skype or something and we can see if we can work something out

>> No.3192901

>>3192863
sent ;O)

>> No.3192907

>>3192649
I'm the first one. I believe it depends from person to person. There are people who learn faster and others who go slower. I'm definitely on the slow side so saying how much it took me there would be discouraging, considering I'm average at best.

Here is a very clear example of what I'm trying to say:
https://comic.mag-garden.co.jp/result/
(17 years old amateur comic artist won against 20-33 year olders)

>> No.3192915

>>3192785
Thanks alot of posting that.
I deeply appreciate your advice.
Sorry for derailing the thread so hard everyone.

>> No.3193034

rolle

>> No.3193038

I'm roll

>> No.3193124

>>3171303
roll

>> No.3193207

roll roll

>> No.3193246

>>3171303
rollen

>> No.3193254

rolllll

>> No.3193256

>>3171303
Roll

>> No.3193269

>>3192727
> face looks too angular
> overall very flat-looking

Are you drawing from imagination, or did you start with a construction line sketch? It just looks like you did it on the fly without knowing what you're doing.

>> No.3193457
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3193457

ROLLING STAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAART

>> No.3193466

rock and rollan

>> No.3194356
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3194356

>> No.3194783

>>3171303
rolly

>> No.3194788

>>3194356
needs bigger titties

>> No.3195051

roll

>> No.3195052

roll

>> No.3195077

rollin'

>> No.3196468

rolling

>> No.3196479

roll

>> No.3196514
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3196514

>>3196468

>> No.3197386

rolling

>> No.3197388

>>3196514
muh egyptian dik

>> No.3197408

rollsroyce

>> No.3197466

>>3171303
rolling and maybe actually replying this time

>> No.3197518

rolling

>> No.3197528

roll

>> No.3197548

>>3192785
Pretty good goin my dude

>> No.3197557
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3197557

>>3197466
fox girl

>> No.3198277

roll

>> No.3198279

roll for friend

>> No.3198296

>>3171303
i'll do one

>> No.3198868
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3198868

>>3171303
dragon 1

>> No.3198886

>>3197557
Where her chin at tho

>>3198868

That is adorable.

>> No.3198887

>>3198886
thanks friend!

>> No.3199137

>>3198868
I'm loving the brushwork on this one

>> No.3199244

>>3198868
please let me kiss the dragon

>> No.3199395

>>3171303
rollin

>> No.3199460

roloomg

>> No.3199682

roll i guess

>> No.3199686

roll-a-reno

>> No.3199934

rollin'

>> No.3200360

>>3171303
röll

>> No.3201606

röllern

>> No.3201640
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3201640

>>3201606

>> No.3201642

rolllllll

>> No.3201645

bebeb

>> No.3201849

>>3171303
Roll

>> No.3201854

>>3201849
Negative. Reroll.

>> No.3202092

>>3171303
roll

>> No.3202155
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3202155

>>3202092

>> No.3202218

rolo

>> No.3202242

>>3202155
Unf

>> No.3202435

>>3171303
rollin rollin rollin

>> No.3202498

roll

>> No.3202519

Roll

>> No.3202597

imma roll

>> No.3202919
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3202919

>>3202435

>> No.3202946

>>3171303
roll

>> No.3202972

reroreroreroll

>> No.3202977

>>3202919
kinda creepy desu

>> No.3203007 [DELETED] 

>>3202919
Amazine

>> No.3203231

roll 8)

>> No.3203232

>>3171303
ok

>> No.3203338

>>3171303
rolls

>> No.3203357
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3203357

>>3203338

>> No.3203377

rukkkaids

>> No.3203408

>>3202919
I can appreciate the effort that went into this but it does appear a little uncanny for whatever reason. Keep trying!

One thing that might help is that her frame appears masculine because, if she does have any curves at all, it's being covered up by the pan pipe. There should be a pronounced diop between her ribs and hips at the very least, she appears right now to be shaped like a cylinder or rectangle, with her shoulders and hips having about an even width which looks masculine.

>>3203357
Cute, I feel like the form on her breasts could be done better. Though the breasts don't stick out straight forward at the same time I feel like the one on her left side pointing towards us should actually project further out from her body. Looks flat atm.

>> No.3203431

Ro rolling

>> No.3203495

roll

>> No.3203797
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3203797

i got sleepy towards the end

>> No.3203929

>>3171303
Ralling my dick

>> No.3204087
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3204087

dart frog princess

>> No.3205091

>>3203797
Nice work!

>> No.3205098

>>3203797
Nice but take care, her eye on our left appears larger by volume than the other, when her eye on our right would actually be closer given the angle of her head and shoulders and if anything that's the one that should appear larger-but just barely.

>> No.3205104

>>3204087
Niiiice

>> No.3205199

>>3205104
thanks

will rôll again

>> No.3205227
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3205227

Roll

>> No.3205237

>>3205227
cute

>> No.3205542
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3205542

>>3171303
ooga booga

>> No.3205787

Roll

>> No.3205847

>>3171303
Rolling.

>> No.3205882 [DELETED] 

rollin'nillor

>> No.3205883 [DELETED] 

niaga gnillor

>> No.3205891

rrr

>> No.3205898

>>3171651
>I'm le cool kid

>> No.3205970

>>3171719
Missed this one. Cute style famb

>>3173764
Gorgeous. Her hand on our left seems a little small.

>> No.3206042

a

>> No.3206105

Roll

>> No.3206670

rewl

>> No.3206747

roll

>> No.3206750

dgsf

>> No.3206792

rorru

>> No.3207018

>>3171303
roll

>> No.3207293

BOI

>> No.3207684
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3207684

>>3171303
Roll Anon with a present.

Updates include:
Jiang-Shi
Elephant
Raptor
Mimic II
Elemental

>> No.3207806

Roll

>> No.3208501

>>3207684
Too many
Straw that broke the camels back

>> No.3208724

>>3208501
Its the same amount, only the art was updated.

>> No.3208798

R O L L

>> No.3208826

>>3207684
roll

>> No.3208848

>>3171303
Rolling stone

>> No.3209053

>>3192727
Use thiccer lines

>> No.3209232

>>3207684
roll

>> No.3209299

>>3171303
roll

>> No.3209320

Roooolllllll

>> No.3209445
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3209445

>>3209320

Probably should have made the sword bigger

>> No.3209477

>>3171303
rollerino

>> No.3209479

>>3171303
roll

>> No.3209487

>>3171303
Who is the author of rolling chart designs?

>> No.3209498

Rollin

>> No.3209607

roll

>> No.3209663

>>3171303
Roll&draw

>> No.3209703

roll

>> No.3209756

>>3207684
roll

>> No.3209759

>>3171303
Roll

>> No.3209897

Rollin!

>> No.3210113
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3210113

>>3209897
I ended up with elemental princess so I used a mix of both designs.

>> No.3210535

>>3171303
roll

>> No.3210538

>>3210113
qt

>> No.3210594

>>3210538
Thank you

AND ROLLING AGAIN!

>> No.3210827

Roll,

>> No.3211254
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3211254

>>3210594
Trying to cover his butthole,I was iffy on drawing a horse dick.

>> No.3211451

road rolla da

>> No.3212067
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3212067

>>3171303
P'orc princess

It's trash but I'm used to it. I was prepared to make a futa version of it.

>> No.3212201

roll

>> No.3212341
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3212341

>>3207684
Eversor updated Jabberwock as well so I am adding her in.

Unless Eversor updates more, should not need another update until Gen V is done.

>> No.3213135

>>3171303
ReRoll

>> No.3213473
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3213473

Plz redline me sempaiiii kyaaaaaa

>> No.3213484
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3213484

Did this lich a while back. Roll.

>> No.3213630

>>3212341
rollin rollin rollin

>> No.3213703

rroll

>> No.3214440

>>3171303
roll

>> No.3215084

>>3171303
roll boy

>> No.3215107

>>3171303
roll

>> No.3215136

>>3171303
rol

>> No.3215149

>>3171303
rolling

>> No.3215157

>>3171303
Roll

>> No.3215159

>>3171303
rolllerino

>> No.3215167
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3215167

This was back in October but I thought I'd just post this since why not. I know, arms and breasts are shit. Eyes could use some volume around it.

>> No.3215184

>>3205970
>Her hand on our left seems a little small.
O-oh...And I made it bigger because I drew it way smaller before. Thank you for letting me know!

>>3171303
Roooooooll

>> No.3215217
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3215217

>>3215184
For a moment I thought I had to draw squid princess and I was happy but it turned out to be the imp one. I will try to fix her arms tomorrow.

>> No.3215362

>>3215217
thats pretty dope OP keep it up

>> No.3216242

beep beep lettuce roll xd

>> No.3216244

>>3171303
rawlins

>> No.3216290
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3216290

>>3216242

>> No.3216386

roll

>> No.3216412

>>3171303
rollerinero

>> No.3216991
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3216991

>>3216386
WIP

>> No.3217009

Roll, it will look good enough to post some day.

>> No.3217042

here we roll!

>> No.3217146

rollinga

>> No.3217147

>>3217146
cofagaincof

>> No.3217151

>>3217147
well fuck it im gonna try my best

>> No.3217241

>>3171303
troll

>> No.3217247

>>3171303
roadarollada

>> No.3217744

roll

>> No.3218380

>>3171303
Where are the other charts with the male warriors?

>> No.3218583

Would anyone be up to take a request on drawing a NEW towergirl Idea I had?

>> No.3218593
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3218593

Tried some dreamgirl.

>> No.3218933

real

>> No.3219428

>>3218583
depends on how hard it is

>> No.3219489
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3219489

>>3216991
Done with this for now, tried a bunch of stuff with coloring, think I learned some stuff by the end.

>> No.3219490

>>3219489
Looks a lot more washed out after uploading, how do you avoid that?

>> No.3220103

r0II

>> No.3220105

>>3171303
rorru

>> No.3220242

>>3171303
Rall

>> No.3221445

>>3171303
rrrlololo

>> No.3221632

Roll

>> No.3221937

>>3171303
benis :DDD

>> No.3222059

>>3171303
Lets see

>> No.3222095
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3222095

>>3171303
This is trash tier, but still gonna post it.
was fun

>> No.3222113

>>3171303
Jesus the key's gotten larger since I was on here last, rolling

>> No.3222359
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3222359

>>3222113
Rolling again I suppose

>> No.3222435
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3222435

picked this back up, changed a few things, but it feels a bit too compact. hopefully some values will help later on.

sad assassin in the middle of immortal old fucks.

>> No.3222545

>>3192649
I'm the 2nd and I don't know.

>> No.3222603

>>3205542
>cat is fine too

>> No.3222933
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3222933

>> No.3222945

>>3222435
You've been gone for a while man, I feel like I remember you working on this way earlier this year. Looking good!

>>3222933
Cute mousse

>> No.3223007
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3223007

>>3222435
Compositionally, it's very claustrophobic, and the piece flows into a dead end after covering just about half the subjects when read from the top left. If read from the centre, the keikogi hem leads you to the bottle to the sushi and straight out of the piece with the sword. Her hair stands out but doesn't flow to anything (same with foreground old dude), and you can't pick out any features on her face which makes it hard to read. Point is, I don't know what I'm supposed to be focusing on.
That can work sometimes, but each element needs to be easy to read. Sword dude's trouser leg is hard to read when it's lines are so parallel to everything around it, he's missing a foot, and placing his existing foot right behind her knee kills the scale and makes him a midget.

>> No.3223023

>>3222435
this is your worst illustration ever. Jesus christ, what a fucking mess.

>> No.3223053

>>3223007
Indeed, I think the biggest problem on this is it started off as just some quick character design to an illustration. I made the mistake of eyeballing the perspective and now there's way too much to look at in a small angle. As for the guy, i came to the same conclusion, tried different feet positions but that one is the most natural, unfortunetly it's too tangential. Tried to thicken the girls lines but doesnt help much, Unlucky.. I'll probably give up the background to clear up so space.

Thanks.

>> No.3223061

>>3222945
Godamn time flew by. Had a busy year.

>>3223023
Yeah don't worry, I know it's just a polished turd, but polishing is fun. You should try.

>> No.3223176

>>3222435
lol his hand is broken, not possible to hold that katana that way with this angle

>> No.3223178

>>3223061
thats not what a polished turd is moron

>> No.3223197

>>3223023
>>3223178
>>3223176
>>3223178
>x-whatever his name is shows up
>his loser samefag stalker arrives on cue

Get a life you pathetic twat lmao

>> No.3223208

roll

>> No.3223370

>>3171303
A man harbors no ill will to any maiden.

>> No.3224130

>>3171303
rollo

>> No.3224992
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3224992

>>3223208
Really messed this up, but I post it anyway so I might at least get some useful roasting so the next one wouldn't suck so bad. I can't draw hands, the proportions in overall are fucked and i lost the track of my shading at some point so the shadows also suck. I guess I should study the fundamentals before trying anything this finished? I'm really new at this.
But at least I drew a ghost, and they are supposed to be ugly in some cases.

>> No.3225093
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3225093

give me a number

>> No.3225098
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3225098

HEY

>> No.3225112
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>> No.3225118
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3225118

>> No.3225647

>>3171303
roruuu