/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

posted at the end of last thread

>>3111435
Not aggain!

>>3110228

>>3111435
can I just ask, why?

>>3111329
What kind of font is this? Aesthetic as hell.

>>3111592
why what? why did i post at the end of the last thread? or why did i draw a sissy twink cross dresser?

Currently working on this

>>3111596
why have u drawn this exact same thing for god knows how long with no sings of improvement/want to improve

>>3111642
because i like drawing it, and to say i haven't improved is disingenuous, i've changed several aspects of how i draw and do my craft

>>3111641
Blog?

>>3111650
>i've changed several aspects of how i draw and do my craft
>how I draw
>and do my craft
is "your craft" low tier shitposting by any chance because the drawings haven't changed one bit

>>3111711
is this supposed to be a girl?

>>3111734
How did you come to this conclusion?!

>>3111734
yes

>>3111746
>anna
>that attempted clevage

point is it looks like a dude

>>3111750
not really, it doesnt look very girly but thats definitely not a dude

>>3111749
shoulders are too broad my dude

>>3111435
how long have you been drawing for?

>>3111764

>>3111786
Stop this shit aint funny no more you cock sucker

>>3111764
well i typically start drawing after your mom finishes blowing me, so ask her how long it's been since then and there's your answer

I painted Jenna Marbles in watercolor and gouache. Really focused on getting a nteresting colors.

>>3111725
damn, i've been found out

>>3111897
dude why you gotta be so salty? I was genuinely asking you nicely.

>>3111926
look at his trash art, he's an insecure retard

>>3111435
God how i hate the cut dicks man, draw your mouths smaller.

>>3111711
I LIKE IT LOTS
she look very tall cause of proportions which i tHINK IS NEAT, do you have a blogg
i like the colors too nwn

>>3112068
Blog?

>>3111899
Check 'em

>>3112068
rest of you shitters BTFO, if you aren't on this level go back to /beg/

>>3112068
need to learn some arm anatomy, anon. where tf does her elbow bend on her right arm?

>>3112068 brilliant design choice
>look left
>lift left arm
>lose left eye

>>3111926
ooh, sorry, thought you were trolling, tho i reserve the right to withdraw that appology if you're the same person who thought that the guy shitposting that other dude was me, i've been drawing for several years, but mostly just for myself and decided a while ago i wanted to get better than this

>>3111960
sorry you don't like the dicks, i can't draw foreskin well and so just don't do it, and i've been making the mouths smaller, the mouth lines up with the pupil in that one

>>3111329
>goomi_ftrop

what did he mean by this?

>>3111985
twxwx.tumblr.com

I come Back 8 hours later and there are only 2 more posts both completely irrelevant. What the fuck you gguys doing?

>>3112469
drawing, what about you?

>>3112473
I was sleeping. And I wont post until I start drawing digitally and I will only start doing that if I think Im good enough so that I would benefit from using Digital.

>>3112474
I just woke up, too, almost 30 mins ago. Don't give me excuses.

>>3111711
'mirin traps

>>3112491
Damn. Looks sick dude. How long did it take yout to do these?

>>3112496
Thanks.
If you meant to ask how long it took to draw it, about an hour.
If you meant to ask how many years I drew, about 4 years. I'm 23 now.
I'm not familiar with English I don't understood so answered both interpretation.

>>3112503
Thats great, you already answered my follow up question, thanks. Looks really cool

thoughts?

>>3112522
The face is fabulous enough for Gio, but the hair looks lazy.

>>3112522
I can see the Loomis influence good on you m8

>>3112509
Oh, turned out I read beyond your context after all... :))

>>3112491
really cool

Genetically engineered kouhais. I'm sketching and linearting way faster than before so I'm happy, but I haven't figured out colouring yet.

>>3112522
Love your colous anon, how do you learn to render like that?

>>3111750
You are right, her chest is too big to consider her a female.

>>3112775
Everything about this looks really silly.

>>3112654
>>3112657
thanks anons! and true the hair needs a lot more work

>>3112680
thanks! for me its just rendering a lot and experimenting, also analyzing painters who have pretty colors like fragonard for example

>>3112491
very cool!

>>3112503
damn only 4 years? I've been drawing 4 years and I can't even draw close this level.

>>3112862
NAYRT, but just drawing alone isn't going to help you get shit done. You need to practice and visualize your goals.

>>3112973
any feedback about the process or how its going is welcome

>>3112991
fuck right off. If someone want's to give you feedback, they will. Stop begging you fucking attention seeking faggot.

Here's a critique: Your shit sucks. fuck off.

>>3112998

>>3112998
And this is how good artists are chased away. Take a good hard look and burn this example to memory.

>>3113007
good, they don't belong here.

>>3112998
>Here's a critique: Your shit sucks.
Not a critique

>>3113067
so youd rather keep
>>3112068 and
>>3112114
instead of him?
(No offense gguys yours just look quite amateur like rn. Youll get there)

>>3112815
tell me why and help me friend

>>3111797
they all look bad, no sense of line control, dark and nasty strokes. learn to draw with line, maybe some results will pop up.

>>3112114
Right boi, everyone is a troll except those who gave you help, those don't exist. At least that's how it looks like, because none of your pieces have changed for the better in the fucking slightest, and their nauseating contents don't make it better. But judging from your shit attitude i guess that's a given

>>3112491
Got a blog?

>>3111435
Drink bleach you fucking degenerate

Would love crit and anatomy help or a redline

>>3111757
>not really, it doesnt look very girly but thats definitely not a dude
>but thats definitely not a dude
You just drew a trans

>>3111797
Besides the chicken scratching hell thats present in the paper, looks somehow decent i guess

I'm trying to figure my style out. What could be improved?

>>3111930
THIS
>>3111926 Dont feel bad anon, you tried

>>3112114
If you fking posted stuff like this instead of that abomination that you posted before you would get a better chance at getting more critiques, instead you are just asking to get shit on and then replying with mom jokes

>>3113007
Seriously? People who are on the way of "making it" and want legit critique coming here are getting chased away to the point of deleting their post but this faggot >>3111435
keeps posting? 4chan at its finnest

>>3113270
No that was the bully who got holocausted by the mod.
>>3112973
is still here

Which one looks more correct and has the better gesture? Can I also get some pointers on how to improve the composition?

>>3112862
To me, this video helped me a lot.

https://www.ted.com/talks/eduardo_briceno_how_to_get_better_at_the_things_you_care_about

In my opinion, many people struggle not because of their way of studying, but their way of thinking.
Hope this helps.

>>3112678
>>3112833
I managed to be cool using only warm color. how so? :)

>>3113191
https://legochalk.tumblr.com/

not much to see.

>>3113283
I like the left one. The right (her) arm looks well porpotioned and powerful. It looks like it's actually supporting her frame instead of the arm in the right picture, which is just there without purpose.

Her stance looks powerful, as if she is presenting herself as the dominant power. The right picture looks like she might trip backwards.

Waht are some books or other resources to better understand manganime stylization for those who can't read moonrunes?

>>3113249

>>3113283
I prefer the right one. it looks like she lost her balance, and while she grips onto one building, the full force of her weight sends her other arm crashing threw another building.

>>3113283
my thoughts

>>3113263
It's very apparent in your art that you haven't learned the basics of anatomy and perspective. Go to /beg/, study Loomis/Hampton/Vlippu, learn to draw realism, then come back. Your style should develop while drawing realism.

>>3113263
Please for the love of god, learn how to draw first before thinking about something as "your style", stylistic choices are usually made after you are able to draw the original thing, i.e the human body, also calling a thing that is off and/or wrong as "style" is the excuse of the century for artists

WIP, thoughts?

>>3113473
outfit colours and background are too similar.
also, her laugh doesn't touch her eyes.

>>3113473

Demon concept

>>3113136
>>3113255

I know, I'm desperately trying to make cleaner sketches

Does this one look less scratchy for you?

>>3113673
I think thinner linework would suit your coloring more

>>3113693
the lower character in the middle looks decent, if it makes you feel any better.

prolly gonna lower down the top part of the hi-hat so it obscures less of the face, crash isn't drawn yet cause gotta solidify hand/stick placements first
(also don't worry, gonna put texture/grooves on the bottom of the shoe from the other sketch when i color)

I just rewatched Trainspotting.

>>3113853
Love this concept
Some suggestions

>>3113770
Very cute
good understanding of form

>>3113853
why is the needle in her bicep

>>3113770
u could also move the head a tad. i like the layering, it gives depth. nice pic

>>3112522
still wip but slowly coming along

>>3112068
There are mistakes in here that oddly remind me of FiRez, but there are also some aspects that look like they would be improvements to his work... Have you posted on this board before?

>>3113747
what's wrong with the other ones, also the line?

what can I do to make cleaner sketches?

>>3113881
????? the original had the perspective right with the hand getting bigger.the only thing that was totally fucked in the original was her right hand not really grasping the syringe right. otherwise why change the head? you made it look uninteresting and that blueline of the jawline is terrible

>>3113930
exactly what i was thinking too.

>>3114057
>the only thing that was totally fucked in the original was her right hand not really grasping the syringe right
you also usually supinate the arm to make antecubital vein pop.
agree with the rest of your post though, the loss of perspective on arm and head "fix" were unnecessary.

>>3112077
the torso is off though

>>3113926

Are nude cartoony pinups allowed in these threads?

>>3114370
It's a red board, isn't it? Post em.

First time trying to do colors with Procreate

>>3113473
>>3113853
Blog?

>>3114408
Eyes look kind of dead. I would add some more color to them.
Unless that's what you were going for

>>3114418
Noted. Thanks

>>3114408
Did you put color over greyscale?

>>3114427
Yes, I guess I need to do more opaque brush work in order to hide better the base grayscale values

>>3114408
i use procreate too!

>>3114458
Got a blog?

>>3114459
kiahlsart on tumblr

>>3114458
>no cut dick
Now this is progress lads

>>3114504
i hadn't realized that i'd been posting so much porn, that's only like half of what i draw, but i guess it's been the dominant bulk of my output on here

>>3114458
>>3114459
>>3114506
I'm reminded why I haven't been visiting /alt/ as of late

>>3113573
Got it, I will adjust the values of the ocean and dress, face too need some tweaking
>>3113624
Appreciate the paintover, I should get the shoulder fixed. I wanted to make her body arched though but it's hard to show it through that puffy dress
>>3114410
I don't have a blog at the moment but thanks for asking!

>>3113926
>not drawing the superior zipper fag

Alright, so I've been trying to help out my friend here. She and a couple other Discord buddies are hell-bent on saying these circular boobs are right because of "clothing" and "bras," when basically everything else has told me boobs are never circular. How would I explain this to them? I tried to say that the boob don't connect to the armpit and posted a couple picture guides, but their shimmery basically amounts to "not all boobs are that shape bro."

(And yes I told her she shouldn't be monetizing her art at her level but whatever.)

>>3112680
Done with this, tried a different colouring process but I'm not quite sure I like it. Will try something else next time.
>>3112830
>just rendering a lot and experimenting
it is what it is I guess

This seriously needs improvement on many fronts (in terms of design and shapes) if I want to make myself a keychain out of this. Right now though it is just a rough draft (after construction lines removed.)

>>3114671
Also needs a way better pose, fuck.

>>3114638
I can't believe I'm saying this after two years of forgetting about this word, but, ayy lmao.

>>3114671
is this suposed to be chibi?

>>3114724
Yes. "Supposed."

>>3114506
This is so much more fun to look at jesus. Your faces and heads still suck but at least you can look at the rest. Your porn is either you have to look at a cut ween or you have to look at an ugly face. The armor even looks really cool desu.

>>3114727
I’m also planning a reverse drawing for the opposite side. Shrink film + pigma microns/copics for lineart & color, matte sealer for wear protection.

>>3112077
Uhhhhhh
Yeah, sure...

>>3114057
Ok
These were just my thoughts
You can make your own redline if you want

>>3114727
you need to look more sources , his face looks a bit more for a regular/normal body like it lacks the huge eyes and head . sorry for shitty engrish

>>3112077
Okay bahd.

I think I need some ref for this pose...

>>3114439
Thanks anon. That looks better.

>>3114408
face is concave like mongoloid

>>3114918
might as well start from scratch, and use this ref. abandoned for giant muscle loli's ;_;

>>3114918
B-but you're not the Giant Loli artist are you?

>>3114957
Look at the face. It's him

>>3114958
But it looks better than usual. A way harder pose than usual, the whole thing looks better. You go boy, keep improving. Ganbatte!

I was laughing a lot as I was drawing this.

test

>>3114761
Made an attempt at improving.

>>3112991
you made it look like he has super long torso the first thumb was more correct.

>>3115184
Perhaps though the ears might look a bit better if they were bigger?

>>3115239
The cat ears*

>>3115240
aren't her human ears a bit too high and smashed for that angle , also i think you have some problems placing the features of the face like the cheekbone is too high , and the chin to low for a chibi at least . im not a chibi expert or something just trying to help

>>3115253
I have constant problems with that with both normal size and chibi pics.

>>3115184
Would you mind if I tried to do a redraw/redline type deal?

>>3115272
Sure.

>>3115253
I did attempt to fix some of the issues that you mentioned.

>>3115275
Dunno if this helps at all but this is how I'd do it

>>3115305
That is cute as fuck. Thanks! I’ll see what I can do with that.

>>3115314
Np man, glad to help

>>3115305
That is terrifying as fuck.

>>3112090
i dont know, fucking elbows men, but thanks for the critique
>>3112094
i thought the design was fucking boring, dont know if you are sarcastic right now
>>3113930
yeah, i have been here posting some portraits, i do not often draw things like that with gestures.

something that i did today.

>>3115518
dam dude you need to start drawing bodies. you're shooting yourself in the foot

>>3115520
i do some studies of bodies, but im kinda lazy to make them and polish? i really need to put the effort in this. I bought some books on anatomy to push myself in drawing these things. In reality, i just wanna to draw cute females with huge tits highly rendered doing cute stuff with nice values and colors, in a paintly way like the chineses. And study other things to get a job.

Any crit is welcome i guess

>>3115566
smaller eyes and smaller hair esp on the left side it seems to go past his head too much

>>3115566
needs bigger nose

>>3115566
start sketching construction anon you can see how off the landmarks are

>>3115572
Will try, althought i thought this size was good for anime-ish stuff
>on the left side
I think its the right side that has this problem, not sure, thanks tho

>>3115590
Thanks for the kek

>>3115617
I did go for a simple sketch construction before starting but it deviated from it when i started adding stuff so i kind of ignored the base construction, i will try to stick to it in future drawings tho, thanks

back to trying different concepts and processes

one roast pls

>>3115733
Her left leg isn't in perspective. Make her eyes look at the map. There is nothing to the side of her so compositionally it's pointless to have her look there.

>>3115743
Blog?

>>3115743
very good work. but iam confused. Did the guy fall into the log ? or did the spidergirl turn and hit him.?

>>3115743
http://touchfluffytail.org/?page_id=9004

all my other blogs are linked there too

>>3115743
>>3115745
>>3115749
How long have you been drawing?

>>3115748
guy slipped, i'll probably add more motion lines once i start coloring

>>3115750
lost track, only recently started seriously drawing. before that it was an on and off thing because normie life ree

>>3115745
mouth is a bit too far to the right and the neck as well

Can't help but feel I messed up the gesture a bit, but I'll try to see this one through to the finish

something done this morning.

>>3111329
People keep saying i never draw, but i also draw on paper. What do you think?

>>3116303

2 faces on the left almost reminds me of Jesus and Mary.

>>3116042
looks alright so far

>>3116303
>tfw NoseBro is better on paper

>should have spent more time on composition.

Resumed this sketch from some threads ago

>>3112068
I'm not sure if you are Firez or if you're someone new...
Feels like you're trying to rush into the rendering stage. Slow down and think about drawing form before you start to paint it. Also try to think aboot what she's doing. I don't really know what she's trying to do/ what kind of character this is/ what kind of emotion you're going for here. The other anons pointed that out as well.

>>3115532
try to commit to your lines more. It's like you're hesitating. Same goes for you brush strokes.
Have you tried drawing in pen traditionally, or without using the undo button/eraser? It's a really good exercise for building line confidence. Painting without pen pressure is also helpful.

>>3116051
shouldn't the knees point in the same direction of the feets?

Mfw people can't recognize Firez

>>3116423
holy shit lmao

>>3116433 I literally almost choked to death I laughed so hard

>>3116430
im just genuinely surprised he stopped using his name

>>3116427
yeah that was my mistake

>>3116424
thanks for the drawover, im not firez, but you are right about the painting, i just painted whatever without thinking in these things, though i put some good time on it. Im trying to slow down more, construct more, even in my studies. This is because i guess i watched so many speedpaintings on youtube by pros that i just got this bad habit. But the result is me strugglying with semi polish turds in the end.
>>3116426
i tried but not too much. Yes, usually i change so many things in my process, even in the final stage, erase, undo so many times. Sometimes i fear flip the canvas to not see what is wrong. But im working on that, thanks for the critique

>>3116423
always nice to see you posting
>>3116411
sick

>>3116303
There's nothing to say. Why don't you actually put effort into something instead of posting quick doodles?

>>3111797
I dig this style

>>3114635
on a more interesting note did he ever get a penny from this

>>3116603
Thanks anon!

Saw some chibi stuff in this thread so i made this, any crit is welcome

>>3116693
found firez

>>3116704
found jellyfagnoskillmcgee

>>3116693
Please tell me that you are girl

>>3116712
why?

>>3113770
blog? I love cartoonsy shit.

>>3114635
Kind of possible, but it's better to avoid drawing boobs like this because it doesn't feel natural and might distract the viewer.

I drew goku referencing Toriyama's original manga artwork of Goku's Kamehameha against Picolo. Will post original next.

>>3116750
The original in the manga.

banner stuff

>>3116718
apologies, those are gifts for a frien, i normally draw more like this :c

>>3116423
glad to see you continuin outside your comfy zone, especially by drawin one of the comfiest zones. right now tho the close bub looks much larger than the far boob. even if you're usin a ref, remember sometimes you gotta bend things so that they look right even if it isn't always technically right

>>3116751
>6
youre studying from a mediocre reference.

>>3113881
thanks for the input, sticking your thumb joints reveil veins too, at least to my understanding.

>>3114410
https://twitter.com/yunkie101

>>3116411
amazing, anything I can follow you on?
also the black columns should distinguish themselves a bit if they are not one with the background circle.

>>3115698
Great rendering, I wish I could do this. Jaw is a bit fucked judging by nose and mouth.

>>3116761
Gotta be bait.

>>3116411
Gibe blog

Hey, all, I do animations.

But I'm a bit fucked on knowing my light sources. Does anyone know any good reads or references that would help? Also, how can I fix the lighting on the figure in this image? Still working on the post and the background, but the light source on the character is bugging the hell out of me.

>>3117060
>>3093799

>>3117061
Really? It's a still frame asking about a light source, dumbass, not a series of moving pictures.

Source is too high for the shadow, if you want it looking like that then lower the light source until it's pretty much perpendicular to the side of the face. But if that's where your light source is, then adjust it so that there's more of a glow towards the top of the head and not the side of the face.

>>3117060
shouldnt it be more kicklight-ish since the light is behind her or am i missing something

>>3116767
im 100% serious the hands are fucked.

>>3116423

that's a big ass arm

>>3116754
still love the style. gimme the blog brah

>>3117205
>im 100% serious
That's even worse

>>3116411
updated...

>>3116763
>>3116800
g8 m8
https://legochalk.tumblr.com/

>>3117506
The style reminds me of a more refined retro Sinix. Noice work m8.

can't finish anything lately

Attempted to improve/redraw based off of what I did before (>>3115239) and >>3115305

>>3116697
when drawing chibi i guess there isn't a golden rule to follow about proportions since is sd , but if you you make some things bigger or smaller you can fuck up your whole drawing , like putting the eyes too close making it look more like a childish face rather than a exaggerated moeblob , try too look at more refs about chibis . also theres another mistake about the eyes the pupils don't go in the middle/centre of the eye/sclera when looking straight they go a bit more inwards since they are focusing on a point in front of the middle of both eyes , and something more about the chibi stuff the eyes usually are pretty close to the border of the face , learn more about the eyes there's more errors but my shitty english is limited , hopefully it helped you.

pic kinda related , see right corner looks more okayish and the other with the eyes closed to the center looks worst , left how usually looks a eye when is looking straight

>>3117578
and here's a better ref when the eyes are looking straight

>>3116423

>>3117591

bah gawd

>>3117573
Needs work on the jacket at least.

>>3117573
Looks much better man. Keep going

>>3117573
i think the head and face looks more like a regular one , usually chibis have really small jaws and the nose is almost at the same height with the eyes giving them that pancake head also you should keep the proportions on the neck it looks off compared to the rest of the body

see pic how is the neck proportionally to body

/spoiler/ i didn't think the death note movie was all that bad and i want to see a sequel. I used loomis head for this did it work?

>>3117341
if you dont believe me find someone else over your level. clearly you are unskilled.

>>3115575
>>3116042
>>3116411
>>3116423
>>3116754
>>3117506
These are bretty good, here are genuine (You)s to fuel and inspire you lads.

Bleh

thoughts or crits?

thoughts?

aaa, thoughts please

>>3117711
Don't be lazy on the hands. His left arm's bigger than the right, and both arms are too short. Check your proportions again. Also Everything's just flat, widen the range of your values to better imply form. Furthermore, your lines need more variation. Use thicker lines as muscles near their insertion points. With that out of the way, I'd like to commend your head. It's bretty good and it really shows your understanding of forms (of the head). Keep it up.
>>3117831
Study more neck/collar bone anatomy. Her cloth's too thick. And the top of her bangs should be higher; right now her forehead's too small. Also, should have went with the fading effect on the ends of her hair. With all of that said, it's bretty decent. Choice of colors isn't half bad.

>>3117956
Hands are too long. From the angle of the nose, it appears her is slightly tilted upwards and so her chin shouldn't appear like. Overall, it's bretty good. Not a fan of the choice of colors but hey.

>>3117978
His right eye's larger than the other. Lovely choice of colors though.

>>3111329

>>3118024
Blog?

Can I get some feedback? Regarding maybe the angle views ? The flow and the movement of the camera ? Even the drawings , although they are only sketches but i wanted to be more dynamic so i didn't clean it that much. I recently started drawing comics since i wanted to get the basics on point first and now i feel confident enough to start making them.

>>3118053
i would put more saturation in some parts and add more contrast between light and shadows. Your piece looks boring

>>3118039
Where did you learn such good camera movement and framing?

>>3118089
I read alot of manga and watched alot of animation movies.There's alot of documentaries out there about how certain animation movies were made and documentaries about mangakas and their workflow , how they arrange their panels and camera angle and so on. Most of the time ,when i make comics ,i like to imagine everything as an animation movie of sorts , each and every panel technically would be a animated sequence. I also did some animations before starting comics , so i think that helped a bit . I'm not that good tho , this is why i came to ask for advice.

Trying to do a drawing a day.

>>3118126
I like it anon. So this... is the power... of construction.

>>3118126
You look like the kind of artist who's done life drawing.

>>3118128
>>3118130

Thanks, and yeah I try to go to sessions regularly. Or croquis cafe if I don't feel like driving.

>>3118126
not a fan of the motive as such, but skill wise pretty damn nice anon

>>3117578
>>3117580

I see, thanks, i will take into account the advice about the way i drew the eyes, drawing chibi didn't gave me the same satisfaction as drawing more "realistic" stuff so i will give it up but this advice is useful even if isn't chibi stuff so i will try to remember it anon

How do I render clothing like this?

>>3118387
paint tool sai, default marker tool

>>3118126
the face is incredibly ugly, yuck

>>3118438
post work

>>3118486
All this anatomy and its all in vain because of the heads. Study some other artists already and look at how they draw their heads already !

>>3117678
Looks like you know what you're doing. Watch out for those tangents against the BG though. The way the hat, hair, and heels are lined up with the BG confuses my eyes.

>>3111329
Taking what I learned from those manga practices, I'm now doing urban shots from photographs and trying to stylize them in manga style.

Still not fully satisfied with it, but I'll keep working at it. I gotta fix my "sloppiness" I think that's my biggest weakness thus far.

I'm gonna ink some characters, then go back to doing more studies and manga practices before tackling some full OC pages of my own.

>>3118553
Looks very comfy, I dig it.

>>3118614
Tokyo is a very comfy city.

>>3118618
yeah, there's no cultural enrichment

>>3118625
Indeed.

Which is why I hope to move there with my brother and best friend once we've made it.

No better motivation to git gud than wanting to avoid the inevitable civil war that's gonna hit Europe.

>>3118627
No, Japan is for the Japanese. Stay and fight in your homeland. Die for your queen.

>>3118631
An anon must fight for their dreams. not for their queens.
He is going to make it and so will we.

can someone help me decide i dont have a style and im stuck between stuff

>>3118657
These or...

>>3118658

>>3118658
This one is a much better style than this >>3118660

It's no contest. Former has way more appeal.

>>3117506
berry cool

what even is written in this pic?

>>3118681
it says stfu and draw

>>3118663
Thank you, ill continue to work on it :)

Probably not gonna finish this but crit please anyways ig

>>3114057
Not him but I the chin should be raised. Done well it would communicate mite tension.

i really like dowman sayman style and i want to do something similar to him, is there any tips? or is just copy and paste all he has done like an autist till i get good?
pic is my work, i know im shit

>>3117326
>thedickonlymakesitbetter.jpg
I like it

>>3118801
Seriously can you take some fucking criticism and work on your fucking heads. Seriously please just stop posting your shit every day without ever actually listening to any feedback. It's honestly fucking infuriating seeing someone who has a clear passion for drawing yet has no ability to take and apply criticism. No one cares about the subject matter, I love drawing my own embaressed naked anime girl fetish. But please...
EVERYONE.
IN EVERY THREAD.
TELLS YOU TO FUCKING WORK ON YOUR HEADS.
PLEASE FOR THE LOVE OF GOD JUST TRY TO IMPROVE ON IT.

>>3118935
Holy shit I honestly can't believe my eyes.
I JUST finished writing my previous comment and you already come along and post THE SAME FUCKING CRAP AGAIN!
HOW DO YOU LIVE!?
READ A HEAD CONSTRUCTION BOOK.
EVERYTHING IS NOT BAD.
BUT THE HEADS ARE ABSOLUTE GARBAGE.
PLEASE!!!

>>3118938
>mfw

>>3118954
Though that guy's criticism isn't worded the best (it's /ic/ what can you do), there is some truth there. The heads are definitely the main thing that takes away from your artwork. Improving the head shape could change your art from "shitty kid on deviant art" to "sexy anime art"

>>3118966
i just realized that in this>>3118954
it seems like i was trying to detract from what they were saying, i just drew it and it seemed like a mfw face, i agree that my head shapes could use work, i've been working on them for a while now, since this is what it kinda started as

>>3118974
R u gay m8??

>>3118974
they all look a little brainless

>>3119032
no, bi

any concrit welcome. having fun with some styles but i feel like my colors are kind of muddled looking (although admittedly this oc has an awful color palette)

>>3118681
It says don't draw a completely symmetry face.

any concrit welcome. i feel like my colors can be really muddled, although admittedly this oc has a terrible color palette

>>3118974
>my head shapes could use work
No they are completely fucked

>>3118903
I love his style, too. Apparently, he is into Mike Mignola. Japanese manga mixed with western cartoon flavor.

>>3118686
cool design

>>3118974
Draw from life, seriously. You don't know enough about head proportions to manipulate them like you would prefer.

Take some portrait photography if you don't want to do that, emphasize construction.

>>3118126
May be intentional but the perspective of the log shes sitting on seems off. It makes her look like shes raising a leg to fart.

>>3119042
>>3118974
>>3118954
>>3118935
>>3118801
Can we make a thread only for him or something so we dont have to see his shit anymore? Instead of letting this faggot spam this board with the same fking shit, not listening to the slighest criticism, being passive and actively aggresive even when someone "compliments" him or shows interest about him (surprisingly there was this one anon who did)

>>3119425
>>3119192
>>3119063
>>3119038
this level of reading comprehension and context awareness is why i feel safe in writing off what you have to say

>>3111329
any thoughts on this?

>>3119491
You stylization doesn't work, people are trying to help you...what exactly are you posting for?

>>3119666
almost every image name from them is either a tumblr or twitter image url, i have a nagging feeling they aren't actually the artist of what they post

Am I decent enough to start taking commissions?

>>3119731
Yes, Nile, you've always been decent enough. You're just a tad slow.

NEW THREAD WHEN?

>>3119746
I was asleep and forgot

new thread >>3119771