/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Any good reference for weeb animu hair?

Fucking shoes/feet.

Continuation from >>2823459 struggling a bit to give the dress and intricate design.

>>2823748
Thanks!

How do I draw as good as Ejiima Eri? She's the apex of anime artstyle desu.

>>2824217
Draw them strand by strand, don't make them too close to each other. Then connect them when you think the strand amount is enough. It's that easy.

>>2824225
And to color it, just give some shading that goes inline with the hair strands. Use both darker color and immensely lighter color to represent shadows and shiny reflections. Most anime artists utilize shading as a method of abstracting the hair strands, but Ejima Eri as you can see here draws a lot of strands as well. Finally, make their fore hair glisten more than the rest of their hair.

>>2824217
>>2824225
>>2824234
Also, my suggestion is take reference from real life hair, because most weeb hairstyles looks like. Most anime characters may have sameface, but their hair must contain a lot more characteristics than their faces as a compensation, so don't fuck it up.

>>2824238
*look like SHIT

>>2824222

study their art

>>2824407
Can you give some more details for how to study art? It'd be nice to hear a few approaches that anons have used to get a better understanding of their favorite artists.

>>2824439
look at the proportions and think about what makes the style distinctive. for that piece, I'd say long eyelashes, glittery eyeballs, rodent mouths, and baby hands on top of a generic anime body. the coloring is saturated and shading is minimal and soft.

improving in art means learning how to problem solve, so really think about what makes it identifiable.

Im not sure if i like this or not and i wanna go ahead and color it already

>>2824512
Look good to me mate. Really like how you did the shadows.

>>2824512
So good, blog? Really like how you did the shading.

>>2824512
Ayo whats your blog famalam? Really dig that rendering brev

>>2824512
nice rendering blog?

>>2824512
kiwi desu

>>2824512
blog?

>>2824512
>those abs
>that leg
>that pit
Nice

>>2824516
>>2824520
>>2824523
>>2824533
>>2824549
>>2824557
>>2824559
Thanks to all of you, got more positive feedback than i was expecting really.
And Sorry no blog or whatever, dont upload my stuff anywhere.

>>2824588
*i dont

>IP number doesn't change
Fucking samefag.

>>2824602
>I've never gotten positive feedback before s-so it must be samefag! heh...

>>2824608
>Admits he samefagged
Wew

>>2824616
He didn't admit anything, what are you on?

>>2824616
I understand you're deprived of any formal feedback or recognition, so how about it champ? Post your work.

>>2824619
>I was only pretending.jpeg
>>2824624
> post your work meme
You first.

>>2824626
>posting your work is now a meme

I know it's a late reply, and no your trump card won't work post your work faggot.

Well this thread started out great

>>2824225
>>2824234
>>2824238
Late reply but thanks for the tips. Animu hair has been my weakness for months.

>>2824217
Yes this. Any good resources?

OP of that animu 72 here, hopefully this'll end the argument

http://imgur.com/a/8sYYf

>>2824217
>>2825019
I cant be bothered to upload individual pictures so here

>>2825074
thank you

i'm not sure about the colors

>>2825200
work on your understanding of fabric more

Critique me lads. Be as harsh as you can please.

>>2825200
work on your understanding of bulges more

>>2825302
Here's the computer colored version. I converted the lines into vector and colored with mouse. I think it ain't ok but I have no idea how to fix it.

1 dollar chan

>>2825305
>>2825313
autism

>>2825313
do you draw with your left hand or something? everything you draw looks lfucking smeary and ugly

>>2825313
Cute, but don't know why you put that green on her breasts, kind of gives an ugly color.

>>2825321
Thanks, I needed that.

drawing the body is hard

>>2825343
>tfw suck at drawing and try to cover it up with rendering
You and me both anon

>>2825313
>>2825322
Ja, the inking is a mess imo. Not a well thought art direction.

>>2824512
The shoulder looks flat and too dense. The hair (both the drawing technique and hairstyle) is shit. The smug is disgusting and out of place (overall the facial structure and gesture need a lot more idiosyncrasy, you're just parroting generic anime art style). Nose looks flat. Shoulder to ass ratio could be better.

Overall, there's no special appeal about this pic save for the racks, which are admittedly well drawn and shaded although they look awkward proportionally. But that's alright, I prefer cute tits over accurate tits.

>>152491080

Teach me how to be this good.

>>2825369
What did he mean by this?

>>2824220

>>2825366
Thanks for the feedback. I knew something was off about it but couldnt put my finger on it.

I am probably not gonna change the expression and definitely not the hair but can you help me out on the shoulder and facial structure a bit more?
The part about shoulder being flat and dense completely went over my head i dont get it.

Would be nice if you could redline it or something, well obviously not red in this case

>>2825432
Sorry, I drew with mouse. Also, what I was saying is, the face is largely okay but it needs more personality. What you made is bland, but I can't give you much tip on that. It's something you need to develop by yourself.

>>2825470
And as for the eyelashes, it's also a matter of stroke weight other than strand amount.

>>2825509
>a red comic
This is the oddest thing ever. I like it.

>>2825385
Cute! keep up the good work

>>2825385
>no ass

>>2824512

>>2825586
You fixed the arm proportion, but:
>losing a good portion of her skull
>shoulder still has no anatomy
>hair is even worse
>belly abs gone
>fridge fat

critique please

>>2825675
wud fuck desu

>>2825675
kawaii

>>2825675
love i t

>>2825675
Her feet are at the wrong angle and her hands are flippers. Maybe change "her right" arm? But still cute.

>>2825675
Abomination t.b.h. Look at that lifeless stare, washed out hair colors, head that's about to come off, and ghastly hands. Dayum bruh, you made a creepy cumskin look even creepier.

>>2825675
look up some references and fix up those hands
feet look off too

>>2824207
I've been trying to make these panels based on feeling. It's damn hard to point out feelings based on single image, animation would do wonders.

>>2825878
have you tried playing around with color to help?
I'm not sure what you're trying to convey but right now it seems serious

advice on this new style im trying out

One i started to color

>>2825887
Thanks, thats what I'm after. I've been playing around with simple colors, but keeping it serious is hard with bright tones.

>>2825900
you dont need bright colors but sometimes adding a blueish or redish or whatever tint to it might change the mood a little

I wanted to clean up this sketch but now it's time to sleep

>>2825805
>cumskin

>>2825906
cute!
the face doesn't look like its in the same perspective as her body though
also the hat kinda feels like its floating above her head a little

some bird stuff

>>2825940
I like your shading, but I think you should work on feather texture and accentuating the breastbone; those are things which really define birds

>>2825940
line stuff

>>2825948
I like your ideas and how you construct the form in sketches, but I feel like you might need to add a bit more expression/liveliness into the forms; they seem very neutral (apologies if that's what you were going for)

>>2825948
last

>>2825675
looks like she's just staring into your soul, kinda creepy. maybe a 4/10 at best.

>>2825675
I like the palette. I like the line colour. Don't like the noodle arms and lack of wrists or feet that point down into the ground tho.

?

Minor fixes here.
Made the bust less cartoony, made the hips a bit bigger. Added a little life to the hair. Moved the expression around a bit.

>>2825470
and thank you very much for the shoulder and the face
And just for the record the eye-lashes wasnt something i forgot its just something i do late into the drawing, but i added them here anyway.

Also changed the nose slightly, very slightly

>>2825675
line
ыыыы

>>2826166
hands lost their visual appeal and just look unnatural, hold a stick and look in the mirror

>>2825302
>>2825305
The linework to the bg of this piece looks good even if some stuff looks a little slanted. It looks like this picture really took a shit when it came to the coloring and rending. Look at more reference to see how the lighting works. Keep things consistent too, it looks like you started doing the grass in one way and then gave that up to use a brush in a really unconvincing way and it looks off.

>>2826047
nice

>>2826012
update

>>2826233
>her hands are flippers
>and ghastly hands
>and fix up those hands

>hands lost their visual appeal and just look unnatural

I'm a little confused(not little)

Rate

>>2826430
2/5 not because it's bad but just not much of anything.

>>2826415
Ignore what he said about the visual appeal they look better but still not natural or in the right posistion. Look at more references.

>>2825385
>>2824512
please stop posting

>>2825509
this sucks but i still wanna read it
where are you uploading it?

>>2826098
it was shit before and it's still shit
>>/beg/

>>2826451
>>2826455
nah

>>2826460
>asks for critique but refuses to learn fundies.
not gonna make it :^)

>>2826468
>doesnt critique and sprouts /ic/ memes instead
also i dont plan on >making it
art is just a hobby and i already make money doing something else

>>2826166
shes a qt but the hands are still bad senpai

>>2826472
if you're not looking to get better, why not hugbox in >>>/i/ instead of dumping your garbage here?

>>2826166
>tfw don't see anything wrong with the hands
>not sure if people are funposting again

>>2826482
theyre just... positioned together really awkwardly. like the artist was thinking too hard about it

thumbnails for a commission
im kind of afraid to start drawing her, the outfit is intimidating

>>2826487
looks like shit, can't even tell what's happening.

>>2826496
I like this dogo very much.
Will you give it some colour or leave it as it is?

>>2826496
is there such thing as uncanny blending? cause you nailed it

>>2826501

>>2826478
whats wrong with dumping garbage in a garbage dump?

Also i do plan on getting better cuz if im doing something i might as well do it right.

I just dont plan on >making it in the sense that im not gonna make money off of my art (even though i have multiple times in the past) or go fulltime pro with it

if i need some help with a drawing i'll post it and ask. If you dont like it then feel free to keep sprouting memes and i'll just ignore you.

If you do however provide some useful critique then i'll be glad to listen to it and i am trying to work on my anatomy a bit more. Last year i got better with coloring and this year i plan on getting better with anatomy.

working through this study. still kinda new to digital im sure im skipping important steps.

hmmm durr

>>2826544
he looks like a lightbulb.

>>2826551
rekt

>>2826544
gay

>>2826544
B L O G

>>2826551
wat

>>2826557
actually youre right

>>2826576
I can smell gays from miles. I swear I saw this somewhere.

>>2826541
you could add a bit of rosy shades around her cheeks maybe

I can never draw these stupid fucking kneeling poses no matter how many references i use

>>2826582
But it looks good to me.

>>2825385
this would have looked so good had you just given her an actual body

>>2826587
it's now 10/10 with this ass

>>2826591
Wow, really like this style. Is this what you call line economy? Time to master study you. What character is this though?

>>2826544
I think his neck is way too thick for this style.

>>2826468
>"stop posting"
>critique

Id really like a critique on my overall consept for my consentration in my class before i hand it in
Obviously plants and people but i feel like im missing something

>>2826608
Ugh sorry

>>2826583
i appreciate that but there is def something wrong but i can never figure out what

>>2826610
It's probably by too big head, I think

>>2826610
head is too big and also where are her feet? from this view the stage-right foot would definitely be visible.

Go go gadget, get that booty

>>2826581
once i upped the vibrancy it got a little rosier. gonna call this done i dont have any more patience for it

>>2826618
I'm spooped by this for some reason.

>>2826618
brian for the love of god, please learn to blend

>>2826618
leave the girl alone already for fucks sake.
forever damned to mediocrity, not much more to say.

>>2826587
its even better composition-wise

>>2826576
youre gonna make me reverse image search you ass :'(

>>2826616
????this maybe seems better

>>2826617
I realize this board is slow, but I'd appreciate crits

>>2826592
I don't really think this is a good practice, mostly drawing like that because i'm lazy as fuck.

>>2826632
whaaaat she likes me leave her alone. dont let my shitty art reflect on her taste in men.

>>2826618
Brian does digital now? Impressive.

what's some good material to read and look over for exaggerating faces? I'm not really going into caricatures, but I didn't want my people in my animations to look boring.

>>2826687
plz blog??

>>2826640
midorimakuns on fb or twitter, rokujuukyu on tumblr there u go

>>2826694
http://sladkiy-pirozhok.tumblr.com/

>>2826743
any finished pieces? how long have you been drawing?

>>2826764
Been drawing for almost two years, but i wouldn't say i started from absolute zero. Yea, maybe i have one or two pictures which i can call "almost finished", but they are heavily referenced, so i didn't post it anywhere.

courtesy of /a/ drawthread request

practice. tried to make it look like a manga cover

practice. made it into a manga cover.
had the barcode rotated the wrong way.

>>2826808
You got a manga, anon? Where's your work?

>>2826820
no i don't. i was just practicing foreshortening and thought it'd be fun to make it look like a cover.

>>2826617
Inspector gadget looks really good to me, but i don't know a shit about art.

>>2826658
those are some SHORT hands

>>2826665
exaggerate the gesture even more

>>2826859
the hands aren't the issue at this point, it's the hideous tumblr face..

>>2826574
*watt

>>2826856
looking quite good, are you going to put some variance in that blank swath of blue shadow? Some shadows and highlights from the light of the fire on tall grass would add depth to this, maybe a bit of subtle light on the trees too.

>>2826859
>>2826869
Sorry you dont like the face, i think its cute.
Is it the palms that are too short or the fingers or the entire hand?

>>2826906
Not those anons, but the hands overall are quite small.Really I think the main problems I'm seeing are proportions, do you ever do studies of models?

>>2826840
you weren't practicing shit, look at those legs, it looks like you used the transform tool and called it a day you lazy fuck.

Fite me.

>>2826237
Thanks. Coloring has always been my weakest point. Part of it is due to me coloring with mouse, but I really do have a bad grasp of how colors and shadows work.

Btw, what's the difference between this thread and /beg/?

>>2826928
delete this and never post it again

Scratchy brush. I need to get back to drawing.

>>2826906
the face looks fking retarded like a hobbit holy shit how can you be so blind.

>>2826930
Rape my dead body.

>>2826544
>>2826576

I really need to learn how to make attractive bishies, goddamn it

Long as fuck neck but I like your style

>>2826940
I have no critique to offer, but damn that's nice anon

>>2826940
Are you new here? I don't think I've seen this style before.

>>2826940
Why are her panties pulled down?

>>2826955
That's just your lewd mind reading it wrong. That's obviously the top of her thigh highs.

>>2826958
That's a load of shit.

>>2826504
Thanks, If I find a proper way to color it I will but at the moment, I fear my way of doing things will destroy the drawing and will take a lot of time

>>2826512
mmm...you are probably are into something, I started it trying to do a chibi but the hatching and other rendering details made me change that original idea, at the moment I am still making stuff up

>>2826928
I honestly don't think there is any difference at this point.

>>2826963
I literally haven't done anything to improve my technique.

>>2826940
excellent

>>2826968
not talking about your drawing m8

>>2825915
Thanks mate! will fix those problems too

I think I'm gonna fiddle around on this general until ny skill is decent enough for /beg/.

>>2826981
Okay, go for it. Post your work.

>>2826982
that one -> >>2826928

>>2826988
Who are your inspirations?
You know, favorite artists or art works.

>>2826991
I don't know. A bit of this, a bit of that, the pose was inspired by Adolphe Bouguereau although not a recreation in any way.

>>2826940
love it!

>>2826940
That's gonna go to the next thread collage, if we even make it that far

>>2826906
I can tell you're trying hard to copy Mikeinel's style a lot, but you need to understand better construction on faces, looks shit.

>>2826906
>>2827133
And honestly, adding to this
>>2826582
>>2826610
>>2826658
You really need to go back a step after doing proper head construction and actually follow your own outlining of your first rough, you fucked up the face direction and making the face awkwardly try to face forward, making the face look even more shit as a result.

>>2826047
Lol'd. Sorry.

critique?

trying some movement and again spacial feel with lights.

>>2827205
Get a better looking model.

>>2827278
didn't use ref

dddddddddddddd

>>2827317
that explains a lot

>>2826098
You gotta listen to the flow and learn a lot of fundies to make appealing shit & have fun, bro

>>2827205
Did you tried apply Pointy Chins to your characters?

>>2827420
>no pointy tits
you had one job

>>2827358
no offense you made a good drawing but i like mine more. Your's just isnt what i was going for.

Though i like what you did with the shoulders and the arms and im gonna try to apply that in my own drawing, your character looks a lot fatter than mine and that face is not the face i want.

Still, thanks!

>>2827245
small changes and bit of tone, this will do.

Good evening, Sycra

>>2827449
>>2827420

>>2827420
Is this one of those trannies from JoJo?

>>2827442
lmao

>>2827442
So thin her out. I gave her curves so it'd be easy to see how things could be better positioned.
Fix the way your face slopes & shrinks and you're good to go with styling it whatever way you want.
Even if you're going for a skeletal girl, the tits are still mispositioned/misshapen and her hipbone starts too low. The way the side ponytail thing comes over her shoulder also makes no sense, and you need to give some acknowledgement to the fact that she has a ribcage. The ear is also fucked. Redraw it or preferably don't show it at all.
Cheers.

>>2827444
Love the colors and composition, looks a bit empty on the left side of the canvas but you know what you're doing so now I'm just looking forward the finished piece.
I think the smoke should maybe be a little more curved, following the road's shape, and convey a little better that the smoke is coming out of the exhaust.

>>2827444
That looks fantastic

>>2827462
just because you put cheers at the end of a message doesnt mean you dont sound super mad right now.

I just like my own drawing more

I appreciate what you tried to do but that doesnt even look like the same character

I'll take the hip bone thing into account and fix the ear a bit
you go take a chill pill

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>>2827481
wtf? I didn't type that

>>2827444
I don't particularly get the chicken scratchiness of this one. Draw from your shoulder more, bud

>>2826362
flats looked better desu

>>2827477
dude are you autistic lmao

>>2827501
Hey, if he doesn't want to learn let him be.

Plenty of autistic artists here that has undeveloped eyes, thinks their art is the best.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eWRF9GpRCNI&t=1128s
Been watching this guy's stuff and contains some really good info especially at the end where he talks about magnification of foreshortening. Felt like dumping it here after seeing the lack of fundamentals you guys have.

>>2827477
How stupid can you be? Do you realize anon used up his time to help you for no gain whatsoever and this is how you react to it?

Grow the fuck up or go to another website because you clearly don't belong on an anonymous one.

>>2827540
i said i appreciate it, what more do you want me to do?
i dont want to draw a fat fucking character like he has

And the fact that i dont belong on /ic/ is a compliment

>>2827505
i never said it was the best. But it was better than the other one.

>>2827544
>>2827545
is this guy exceptionally autistic or a troll

but no, yours is without a doubt infinitely worse

>>2827549
at least it doesnt look like an anorexic american

>>2827477
justcolouring in the eyes should make it better please don't get pissed off at me now for doing something to your drawing o.0 we are just here to help desu

>>2827556
Not that anon, but it's completely fucking different. Get your blind ass the fuck out of here.

>>2827544
>i dont want to draw a fat fucking character
Google "ru model". Those are your references from now on.

>>2827556
Hammerhead strikes again! Didn't know you were still here man

>>2827560
no thanks

currently working on this

>>2827569
dem titties tho lol

>>2827569
>>beg

>>2827567
Okay, what about "preteen ru"?

>>2827578
nah im good

>>2827561
hehe xD

>>2827545
Jesus Christ, just stop you mouthbreathing ESL faggot. Regardless of your """"artistic vision"""" the other dude did overall better work. Just shut up, man up, or gb2 /beg/.

>>2827583
/beg/ is one step above this general.

>>2827544
>what more do you want me to do?
Perhaps not type shits like these and understand what anon wanted to convey aside from fating your character?

>just because you put cheers at the end of a message doesnt mean you dont sound super mad right now.
>I just like my own drawing more

Your drawing has perspective issues and is far from being perfect, you aren't at a stage where you can discuss whether you like someone's change or not, not before you get the fundies right. Last reply from me.

>>2827583
oh my bad i thought i said it earlier but turns out i didnt.

Anyway i agree that the guy's drawing is much better than my own, his is more consistent and much more anatomically correct. Also looks really nice.

I didnt mean to come off as someone who thinks his work is the best, I will be trying to apply to my own picture what i learnt from his.

The mistake i made was saying i like my own drawing more and that still holds true, its just personal preference.

>>2827569
The breasts feel very packed, but I don't find anything too wrong with the rest, I like it, keep it up.

/beg/ here. Looking for someone to redline it/ critique it.
I posted it a few threads ago, this is my progress so far.

>>2827596
>just because you put cheers at the end of a message doesnt mean you dont sound super mad right now.
>just because you put cheers at the end of a message doesnt mean you dont sound super mad right now.
>just because you put cheers at the end of a message doesnt mean you dont sound super mad right now.
are you at least 18?

>>2827601
im actually only 11

>>2827602
RIP

>>2827602
Nice b8.

>>2827602
MODS

>>2827607
Holy fuck,I forgot how smooth Disney's animations used to be when Disney was actually still keeping things quality

>>2827612
This is why 2D animation>3D animation imo

>>2827477
Is this supposed to be a satirical post?

>>2827618
>he can't take criticism to his criticism

>>2827620
>Anonymous (77)
Do you know what an id is newfag?

>>2827616
Live action trumps all. Babe and Babe 2 shits on literally all disney flicks.

>>2827622
Should I get one so you can filter me? To retreat back to your hug box?

>>2827627
>should I get an id
worse than a newfag

>>2827599
im shit with anime hair dude sorry

>>2827464
Thanks, left side sure is empty, but I'm thinking it might help with keeping focus on that curve. That smoke is just general smoke stating the path of motion, I didn't think about it too much.

>>2827489
Definitely with you here, I was kinda bummed when I realized that I've been just scratching all over. It was supposed to be a sketch, but it grew bigger and cleaning it up felt too much, since I've been using dull pen.

Pic related, these are from the same page.

>>2827677
Thanks, i appreciate it.

Did sort of a pitbull mook right here

>>2827477
>animu weeb
>sensitive underaged shitter
checks out

what is wrong with her head!

>>2827829
The eyes don't match the skull, I think. Which lead it to seeming like the head is tilting to the side but the hair and everything else don't follow.

>>2827834
so the major problem is the eyes? i really have hard time placing them does anyone have a simple tutorial placing the eyes when tilting?

>>2827841
>>2827829
>>2827829
>>2827829
>>2827829
>>2827834
loomis
Loomis
LOOMIS
LOOMIS GOD DAMNIT, WHY DOES NOBODY KNOW HOW TO USE LOOMIS, LOOMIS IS LIFE
LOOMIS IS THE SECRET AND ANSWER TO LIFE THE UNIVERSE AND EVERYTHING

>>2824608
>New canvas.jpg

>>2827829
Yeah, her head is squished, mostly: transform it and plump out the back of her head a bit for healthiness. Everything on her face is a little dislocated.
Also rounded the pupils out a bit out of preference and fixed some quick things with her body/clothes (shrank down her head, stretched her body, made her arm positioning more comfy, enlargened her hand, fixed the way her turtleneck wraps around her neck etc.)
Really cute though.

here my work

>>2827866
Do you do bodies

>>2827866
Boobs are too high on their chests.

>>2827858
Tell me there isn't a hidden Loomis or else I'll look all day.

>>2827873
There is, just got the wrong file

>>2827869
Yes I do.

>>2827871
The tits and the hips are my trouble, pal.

Check this out.

>>2827848
Did an image search and this is what I got
https://iqdb.org/?url=http://i.4cdn.org/ic/1485118122886s.jpg
Loomis is best girl confirmed

>>2827889
What the hell kind of pose is that?

>>2827889
Nice, got a blog? Liking your stuff. Hope you have fully rendered pieces.

>>2827891
And if for some reason the link doesn't really work just image search it on the iqdb button yourselves and see the anime girls that pop up

Does anyone have any advice for shading? I'm not used to stylized shading at all.

>>2825675
>>2826166
what a cutie

>>2827866
here's redline, sorry im on a mouse.

Thoughts? Critique? I wish to improve on my faces.

>>2827947
proportions.
perspective

>>2827960
Elaborate.

>>2827921
Good work, anon.

I'm more of a classic artist, but this is something I whipped up in 15 minutes

>>2827444
I like your use of open space.

>>2827899
I'm working on that...

Here's more that my stuff...

>>2828003
Something from a project I'm working on

>>2828052
A little rough but I'll clean it up later

>>2828052
Where the fuck can I read your comic. This looks interesting

Is there anything terribly wrong about this that I should change before I continue with it?

>>2826496
You are drawing the top of the head too tall. Pay attention to that.

>>2828187
The pose could be a bit more dynamic... make the foreshortening stronger, maybe bring her knees up a bit so the butt pops out more... if that makes sense

>>2828202
>>bring her knees up a bit so her butt pops out more
anon for president 2020

>>2828188
I swear I had my pants on a minute ago.

>>2828188
got a blog? would honestly love to see more

>>2828052
loomis

>>2828202
Better or worse?

>>2828034
Loomis

>>2826906
looks like it could be good, but the proportions are too off to be appealing

>>2827197
KEK

>>2827442
>>2827477
>anon offers decent redline while keeping with original look
>"its not ANIME enough REEEEEE FUCK OFF"

if you cant see whats wrong with yours and whats right with anons, you need to dive into an anatomy book instead of crying about muh style. otherwise enjoy drawing shit form & low-tier waifus that no one will notice

>>2827612
I'm pretty sure that's rotoscoped tho.

>>2827544
>tfw too skilled for /ic/

>>2828296
Still, the animation back then was pretty smooth. Better than most animation nowadays even with computer shortcuts that animators now have

>>2828255
>>2828284
Nice memes m8s. Now actually give good critiques or post your own art instead of contributing nothing to this thread eh?

>>2828308
I think you overestimate how much actual good help /ic/ has to offer. Most of the people who had the patience to offer redlines or specific pointers have already wasted all of their extra time on this guy >>2827477
(who ironically didn't even accept the good advice from anons anyway).

>>2828302

>>2828313
>>good help
>>/ic/
>>top kek

>>2825200
Morty?

>>2828313
>all these people mad just because a person is actually replying back
You faggots need to put away your ego

muh pastel art.

>>2828327
The green looks revolting

>>2828188

Stop teasing me you whore.

>>2828327
I'm impressed at your level of control with pastel. That shit just got everywhere when I was using it.

here is more

>>2828260
I can only use mspaint atm so this is all I could do, just tweaked the foreshortening to maybe improve the composition, but make sure to do an anatomical revision before you move onto the lineart/rendering.

>>2828302
Amazing.

headshots yay

>>2827205
work on that symmetry, eyebrows, eyes and lips are asymmetrical and makes it look derpy

Did some lurking around and it seems that for cartoons, anime, etc. that the Fun With a Pencil approach seems much more practical for constructing heads. You only really need the "full" version of loomis heads from "How to Draw Heads and hands" for more realistic styles and to understand the planes of the face. The way the Fun With a Pencil simplifies the head construction is pretty easy to master and has a lot more room to play around with than the latter version. Just felt like mentioning it for some of you anons who are struggling with the loomis meme

>>2828441
Fuck, why can't more people be like Andrew Loomis and make drawing fun like he does. When I read his books it makes me think I can actually make it

sup

>>2826610
YUNO!

>>2826526
He did actually point out shit you need to fix? You do know that these specific threads where MADE for people to get critique right? Like holy shit just cause some fucking scrubs suck your dick does NOT mean you get to just pass of assholish, but legitimate crit as "meme spouting"

You know what fuck this board. You and many others are literally going no where and only seek to blow each other over your less than mediocre art. No wonder everyone worth a shit has long left.

a nyuu thread >>2828729

>>2828457
People dont remove panties like that anon

>>2827921
fucking cackled

>>2826940
I like you anon.

>>2827919
wolf rain ??