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Autistic Improvement Thread

>> No.2768574

The left side at least looks interesting, 2016 is about as generic '10s cartoon as you can get

>> No.2768580

>>2768574
would you rather be shit or generic?

>> No.2768582

>>2768574
>The left side at least looks interesting

It's not interesting at all! It's just fucking disgusting

>> No.2768587

>>2768580
Well, they are both shit, it's just 2016 also happens to be generic

>>2768582
Oh it's ugly, but still interesting.

>> No.2768588
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>>2768545
>those paws with fingernails

>> No.2768593

>>2768587
>interesting
are you a fucking masochist?

>> No.2768594

>>2768545
>Eyebrows over hair

I fucking hate this "style"

>> No.2768610

>>2768593
As a traditional animation fan in 2016, yes.

>> No.2768622

>>2768594
but anon it's just like muh animes

>> No.2768666

>>2768594
It's actually a pretty smart choice for really simplitic characters because the eyebrows are such useful and minimal indicators of expression

>> No.2768672

>>2768545
Does it have dicks as fingers?

>> No.2768873

>>2768574
2006 was about as generic '00s cartoon as you could get.

>> No.2768985

>>2768545
the left side's fingers look like when you're pulling back the foreskin on your dick

>> No.2769059

>replies are about toons
>not the 10-year difference

>> No.2769086
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2769086

A classic.

>> No.2769103
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>>2769086
Every dime.

>> No.2771044

>>2768666
cheap you mean

>> No.2771055

>>2769086
2016 and he still draws like that. So sad

>> No.2771062

>>2768545
I think it's cute.

>> No.2771384

>>2769086
this is my nightmare. how can you not improve at all in that much time?

>> No.2771388

>>2771384
Not practicing enough or learning the fundamentals.

>> No.2771396

>>2771384
always drawing the same things without ever inching out of your comfort zone, and no instruction whatosever

>> No.2771397

>>2771384
You remember that first time you posted your art to /ic/ and you got your ass ripped to shreds, even though you worked SO hard on whatever you posted? Then you decided to git gud? This guy missed that step.

>> No.2771399
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2771399

Found this on Instagram. The amount of compliments this person got was astounding.

>> No.2771419

>>2771384
If you stay in your comfort zone and don't try to improve you don't improve.

>> No.2771510

>>2771399
Bullshit. Post a link. I can't believe someone would be impressed by this.

>> No.2771511

>>2769086
>>2771384
To be fair to this guy, he's really just having fun drawing. I don't think he actually think he's good or anything. I know this is a foreign concept to /ic/, but it's probably true.

>> No.2771528

>>2771399
Did they draw once every two years?

>> No.2771533

>>2771384

Gotta agree with it >>2771511. It's a nightmare for you because you want to git gud, that person is just posting scribbles of their favorite animu and doesn't give a fuck for anything else.

These aren't really cringe because of that. People, especially teens, who are posting art for the sake of fandom or just expression without a desire to ever move forward to a career are hardly worth laughing at when their skills are bad, they aren't aiming for anything.

Inflated egos who call themselves professionals while putting out terrible art and, in some cases, charging for it, are free reign.

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>>2768545

>> No.2772572

>>2772570
ZERO IMPROVEMENT
10 KEKS
K
E
K
S

>> No.2772573
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>>2772570
How could one be so oblivious

>> No.2772588
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>>2768545
lol first one looks like some kinda transgender JJRabbit! The second one sucks.

>> No.2772617

>>2771511
Drawing such autistic shit when you're in your 20s is still unacceptable though.

>> No.2772622

>>2772570
Christ 10 fucking years of no improvement

>> No.2772656

>>2768545
both drawings look so gross

>> No.2772693

>>2768545
Did the artist transition into a faggot or what?

>> No.2772698

>>2772617
>implying dragons and spacemarines aren't autistic manchildren fantasies

>> No.2772701
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2772701

Why do you got to get your schadenfreude by hating on people who don't know or give a fuck about you and just do their own thing?

I mean it's a loaded question but still

Fucking draw and develop your own tastes you fuckin dorks

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2772704

Fresh OC, don't know her but it was on my instagram suggestions.

She's apparently half con, half retarded improvement. Brief googling showed she claims she did a fine arts course, now she literally "teaches" art and shows at galleries for a hefty sum.

>> No.2772708

>>2772701
Because these are usually the ones who laugh at people studying Loomis.

>> No.2772721
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>>2772570
I'm looking at ten years of wasted opportunity.

I'm both triggered by her ignorance and fearful at the same time.

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>>2772708

Alright it that's true and you already convinced that they're dumb and retarded and autistic, etc. Why would you give a fuck about their opinions anyways?

>> No.2772734

>>2772726
It's a good way to keep myself motivated.

To make sure I do not end up like that.

>> No.2772738
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>>2772734
>I ended up like that

>> No.2772752

>>2772701
that's the definition of schadenfreude though, laughing at people's misfortunes, whether you know them or not.

>> No.2773196

>>2772617
Well, the author of those drawings is literally autistic, so you're kind of retarded.

>> No.2773218

Improvement is a myth.

>> No.2773322

>>2771511
>he's really just having fun drawing.
You just projecting. He as well may be crying himself to sleep.
I know I do

>> No.2773325

>>2772573
>that pic
Da or tumblr of creator

>> No.2773343

>>2771044
This. If you -need- the eyebrows to convey the emotion you really need to do some gesture and figure drawing.

>> No.2773385

>>2773322
I think that if he didn't care about improvement, he wouldn't have made the picture to show his.

On the other hand, I can understand people who don't care about improving, but if you really enjoy art, improvement is necessary to be able to fully express yourself.

>> No.2773478

>>2772704
what the fuck

>> No.2773584

>>2768580

Because generic can't ever be shit amirite????

>> No.2773600

>>2772570
>tfw I can't do these memes 'cause I regularly destroy everything older than 6 months

>> No.2773613
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>>2773600
While I think it's okay to destroy the pieces that softly whisper "please kill me" while you sleep, I also believe it's good to save a bunch for future reference on how bad we were.

Like Zandra Rhodes (famous fashion pattern/graphic artist) says, "if you make a mistake you have to live with it". She's one of my art inspos because besides her graphic work, she forces herself to draw at least one decent pic a day and she has kept them all for over 30 years.

For inspo and pic related, a particular piece she made, I love the palette and shapes. She's a quirky old lady but her patterns are drawn by hand and in one big piece (they're as big as a dining table before sewing).

>> No.2773797

>>2771044
>>2773343

You're both idiots.

>>2768545
The right one is objectively better.

>> No.2773800

>>2773196
Lol gottem.

>> No.2773870

>>2773196
im autistic and still not that shit

>> No.2774856
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>> No.2774857

>>2774856
left looks cuter t b h

>> No.2774871

>>2772704
Granted, stippling and watercolors are different mediums and require different abilities.

>> No.2774891

>>2772570
Did she need 10 years to paint it?

>> No.2774898

>>2771399
tits got bigger. 10/10 improvement

>>2772701
I enjoy it and hopefully the artists don't find out, so it's a victimless crime.

>>2774856
that's clear improvement

>>2774891
photoshop is hard man

>> No.2774920

>>2768545
cock
hands

>> No.2774922

>>2768545
those finger tips look like hairy uncut dicks. so fucking gross.

>> No.2774925

>>2768574
They're both generic for their time.

>> No.2774926
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>>2773325
I think it's this guy and jesus fuck his tumblr layout is atrocious. Also pic related is the original thing I think.
http://iguanamouth.tumblr.com/

>> No.2774935

>>2768593
Sorta. Ugliness /is/ superior to beauty.
>>2772698
Why would anyone imply that.
>>2771510
No one's impressed you dumb nigger. It's socialisation. People -- especially women -- compliment each other as a way of saying "hey, you are a person that I do not hate, I sure hope I am a person that you do not hate". This is one of those "unwritten rules" you've heard so much about.

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>>2774926
>http://iguanamouth.tumblr.com/
kek i like her stuff

>> No.2774981
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2774981

This is the only improvement thread I could find so I hope it's okay if I post OC, I recently found the first "shoujo" drawing I did so I thought it'd be fun to try it again.

>> No.2775008

>>2774981
good job you improved. You probably should have posted it to this thread >>2773452

>> No.2775017

>>2775008
Fuck, didn't think to look up "progress" in the search box, thanks anon.

>> No.2775021

>>2769086
>2006 #3
Is that just a face with legs?

>> No.2775537

this thread made me curious about my old art from 2006 and oh god jesus that was traumatic

but at the same time, wow, good to see that even a shit artist like myself can improve

>> No.2775932

>>2774981
nice

>> No.2776433

>>2774856
das good m8

>> No.2776533

>>2772738
Nobody 'ends up like that' anon. There is always time for more practise.

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>> No.2777594
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>>2774981

>> No.2777603

>>2768574
actually the left looks pretty generic for a cartoon in 2006 ironically
this artist was only able to follow trends

>> No.2777607

>>2769086
sometimes i'm scared i have never improved since i was a teenager since i'm usually just sketching and never really commit to projects but then i look at an old sketch book from high school and damn i have (not drastically)
but what i'm saying is fuck, how does this even happening for that perosn

>> No.2777610

>>2769086
>he draws naruto/hina
HE PREDICTED IT
THE MADMAN

>> No.2780520
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this stupid bitch

>> No.2780572

>>2780520
She got more competent with the tablet, improved her color game and found her own cheesy style. Not saying it's big improvement, but it's at least something. Why do you hate her anyway?

>> No.2780575

>>2773797

THIS
Finally someone with sense. I was feeling alone (and loosing neurons) with all the stupid comments in this thread.

>Ugly or untrendy it's interesting
>Everything that isn't realistic is "cheating"
>Aesthethics don't exist.

>> No.2780581

>>2769086
>Being 15 and drawing like that
I don't care if he/she was just 15, that shit is 10 yro tier.

>> No.2780744

ITT: fat women complain about other more productive fat women

>> No.2780846

>>2768545
>internet style that was popular in 2006
>internet style that is popular now

they didn't improve they just followed art trends

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2780847

>>2772570
imagine having this many people contribute to your stagnation

>> No.2781258

>>2774981
looks like you traced from a ref pic and added shitty animu eyes

whether you did or didn't, i think you should work on making a few darker lines not just on the outline of the body. maybe some on the inside of the arm, for example.

>> No.2781439
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>>2781258
Here's the picture I used for reference.

I usually don't add an outline to my drawings but since the sketch didn't have any color or shadows it was kinda hard to see it in contrast to the background, but yeah I think my lines are too light, I need to add more line weight to my drawings.

>> No.2781451

>>2772570
there IS improvement but, christ, 10 years

>> No.2781647

>>2768873
>>2774925
>>2777603
What was a generic cartoon in 2006?

>> No.2781709

wanna excercise? get in here:
https://safebooru.org/index.php?page=post&s=list&tags=bad_anatomy

once you see every mistake then you've gone past the event horizon.

>> No.2781720

>>2768545
left looks like 99s(+) cartoons. color doesn't make sense (as most cartoons that time) and colors are muddy (even anime at that time)

right one looks like the shitty oversaturation trend and lazy perspective (like the current abomination of Tom and Jerry)

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>>2781647

>> No.2782534
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>>2768545

>> No.2782539

>>2782534
>almost 20 years of fuck all
At this point they should just give up.

>> No.2782543

>>2781720
>Those hands are terrifying.

>> No.2782550

>>2782539
Give up what?
It's obvious they aren't even trying.

>> No.2782553

>>2773600
you must feel very special compared to these people

>> No.2782561

these threads are why you won't make it.

>> No.2782562

>>2782534
>undertale
>dr. who
wowzers what a surprise

>> No.2783134

>>2781439
>for reference
you traced it

>> No.2783138

>>2782534
20 fucking years, fucking what
ok its a hobbyist he probably does some other thing

>> No.2783140

>>2781439
The fact that you heavily reference your work is kind of disappointing.

>> No.2783149

>>2780847
I think it's important not to tear someone apart to the point of telling them to quit or give up but....yeah. These people are not helping them by patting them on the ass for a total lack of improvement. Even when the artist steps in to criticize herself they just ass pat her more.

>> No.2783167

>>2783140
One sketch isn't indicative of what I usually do, I do reference pose and anatomy most of the time and every now and then reference clothes, doing otherwise isn't helping me improve.

>>2783134
I welcome you to scrutinize it.

>> No.2783170

>>2783167
Looks good to me, definitely not traced like they're claiming lol. People just looking to tear another person down

>> No.2783172

>>2780847
This might be a part of of explaining why there are so few great female artists

>> No.2783175

>>2783170
>>2783167
samefag detected.

>> No.2783177

>>2783172
What do you define as great? Fucking sexist.
Ass kissing applies to Male internet artists as well, dumbfuck.

>> No.2783179

>>2774926
>pull the trigger, piglett
My fucking sides

>> No.2783215

>>2783177
Name your 3 favorite female artists without googling

>> No.2783255

>>2768545
>pads on the fingers on the left

Rabbits don't have paw pads like cats or dogs. They have hair. The lack of the most basic anatomical knowledge of the animal they're drawing bothers me immensely, never mind all the rest that's hinky with both sides.

>> No.2783278

>>2781733
Holy fuck, I remember that. How repulsive.

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>>2781258
>>2781439
>>2783167
>>2783170
It didn't look like a trace to me, but just in case I used a little bit of photoshop magic...
I hope the answer has been shown

>> No.2783821

>>2775021
No, its a character from a very cartoony/stylized early 2000s webtoon, Bonus Stage.

>> No.2783827

>>2781439
"reference"

>> No.2783869 [DELETED] 

>>2781439
"""reference"""

>> No.2783893
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>>2783292
>>2783827
Dunno if this means anything but a few years ago my favorite illustrator got caught tracing, her career was absolutely destroyed by this and although her style still resonates with me this hit me pretty hard, it went from me thinking tracing was something people got away with to something that would end any success and recognition you've achieved.

>> No.2783898

>>2783893
That's a pretty warped interpretation of what actually happened.
>deranged fujoshi artist draws for attention
>a single turbo autist nip detective finds her refs
>claims she is tracing
>nobody among her fanbase cares, many of her images were probably not traced but ref'd hard anyways
>fujoshi artist goes full shamefur display, commits honorable internet sudoku because FEMALES BRAIN

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>>2783898
Yeah, most of the stuff people were accusing her for were just reference, but the few pieces like pic related are obviously traces.

>nobody among her fanbase cares
A lot of people did care though, there were countless blogposts about it from the Japanese community, I'm not denying part of the reason why her career was destroyed was because of Japanese culture but still, seeing her go through all that scrutiny and nastiness left a mark in me.

>> No.2783931

>>2783923
She had no "career" going on whatsoever, she was literally a random pixiv artist, which is the equivalent of a random DA artist in the West.
>Japanese culture
Top kek. Actual professional japanese artists (serialized mangakas etc.) get caught tracing every fucking day. The fanbase doesn't give a shit, their editors and publisher don't give a shit and most definitely they don't give a shit either.
For a famous example, the Ikkitousen artist blatantly traced stuff from Tenjou Tenge (which is a manga with the same themes, so the readers overlaps a lot) among other sources. Said manga has now been adapted into multiple anime series, has an endless amount of figurine made every year, gets cosplayed to no end etc.. So much for "tracing ends your career".
The lesson you should have learned is: if you trace, don't be a pussy and do it with extreme impunity.

>> No.2783933

>>2783893
her art was shit regardless. soulless anime

>> No.2783940

>>2782534
the afro lady from '98 is my favorite

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>>2783931
>She had no "career" going on whatsoever, she was literally a random pixiv artist
She published several art books, did many album covers, did art for radio dramas and was commissioned for several MVs. I wouldn't say she was as big as I probably thought she was but within the niche vocaloid fanbase she was well-known.

>if you trace, don't be a pussy and do it with extreme impunity.
I suppose... but I'm sure a lot of people have made it without tracing.

>>2783933
I hated her style the first time I saw it because it was the first time I had ever seen Josei, but I started to see the appeal and now it's almost exclusively the kind of manga I read.

I always loved the way she did the photobashing even if it seemed lazy, her attention to detail was really nice too.

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>>2782534
21
Years
Of
Fucking
Dogshit

Also, that Asgore warrants eye bleach.

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>>2783215
>ask a friend to name a skilled female artist off the top of their head
>"doxxy"

>> No.2784653

>>2769086
these kind of things keep me awake at night

>> No.2784656

>>2768545
if you spent ten years drawing and you were convinced that everything you make is good but its actually terrible and you didnt get better at all would you want to know the truth or would you rater remain in your bubble?

>> No.2784661

>>2781733
that's, uh ... wow

>> No.2784664

Just wondering if you had the choice.

1. Think your art is great while it's shit and you enjoy it a lot.

2. Hate how bad your art is but you are improving a lot and become very good but still think your art is shit?

>> No.2784673

>>2784664
#1
why even #2, sounds like some soul-sucking office job

>> No.2784679

>>2784664
I think art should be about having fun with it but I'm perfectionist and like to hurt myself, #2.

>> No.2784683

>>2784673
I am the one who asked. I am a #2, not that I am good or think I am, but I made huge jumps in improvement from the start and am still making because I see my mistakes and fix them. But it makes me depressed because everything I do does not meet my expectations..

>> No.2784799

>>2784683
That probably stems from other unresolved issues you have

>> No.2784801

>>2783167
you're right anon, i apologize for being a faggot

>> No.2784879

>>2784799
hmmm not sure, I've always been a perfectionist, maybe a bit too much

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>>2774856
good shit my man

>> No.2785128

>>2784664
I'm a #2 but it's not that I think it's hot garbage but I do need to improve more.

>> No.2786306

>>2774857
Come back when you've deactivated your Myspace, please.

>> No.2786365

>>2782534
2005-2006 looked more interesting than the rest,

>> No.2786607

>>2768545
At least she stopped drawing dicks for fingers.

>> No.2786610

>>2786306
As long as Tom is my friend I won't you faggot

>> No.2786612

>>2771399
>>2771510
It's not hard at all to impress normies that haven't drawn a day in their life if your drawing has tits, and lineart that is at least slightly decent

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>>2768545
>check her twitter
>obese feminist who has been drawing since 1999

what the fuck

>> No.2787011

>>2783893
>makes the hands larger due to the fucking thin wrists
jesus fuck

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>>2787011
that's the same style as pic related

>> No.2787253

>>2787249

what the actual fuck

>> No.2787277

>>2787253
http://knowyourmeme.com/memes/yaoi-hands

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>>2787249

>> No.2787296

>>2787290
BEAUTIFUL

>> No.2790206
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Jeph Jaques has gotten worse

>> No.2790298

>>2790206
201 or 500 was the sweet spot for this style.

>> No.2791303

>>2774926
So the image comes from there. Nice to know.

>> No.2791304

>>2790298
Meh, more like they're all ugly.

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2791337

>>2771044
It's not cheap motherfucker. You're drawing for the big public. Everybody uses the same rules of design. It's not because you now can read them that they don't apply.

>also, you're cursed, you can't see a drawing the same way that used to entertain you.

>> No.2791339

>>2784664

2.

Everybody on the other way around sounds retarded at some level.

>> No.2791937

>>2787249
>shingeki no kyojin

>> No.2792091

>>2790298
looking at it, i would say that 800 is the best of the worst

>> No.2792262

>>2773797
>The right one is objectively better.
Agreed.

>> No.2792282

>>2772738
kekek

>> No.2793380
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>>2787290
>>2787249
this is some darksouls tier spoopy

>> No.2793396
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>>2784622

>> No.2793397

>>2783172
This

>> No.2793496

>>2768545
I'm going to see the left bunny's fingers in my nightmares.

Seriously, fingernails on paw pads, with bulbous fingertips? What the hell.

>> No.2793512
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>> No.2793714

>>2784664
With 2 I at least can get money out of it.

>> No.2793726

>>2772570
When I glanced at this without reading the dates properly, I thought this was one years difference.

>> No.2793836
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>>2781733

Anime Looney Toons???

>> No.2793964

>>2780520
but... there is improvement there

>> No.2793967

>>2783215
I can't even name 3 of my favorite male artists without googling

>> No.2795843
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>> No.2795936

>>2795843
watch out guys, another year and he might learn about drawing cubes

>> No.2796130

>>2795843
Are those grotty smudges ment to be shading?

My sides

>> No.2796429
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>>2774936
I don't think she's the absolute best artistically speaking, but damn is iguanamouth funny. She kinda makes me wanna get a tumblr. But I know /ic/ will just shit all over me if I did.

>> No.2796446

>>2796429
>But I know /ic/ will just shit all over me if I did.
Where did this line of thinking come from? Anyone good that's posted here or continues to post here has a tumblr, and there are 24/7 self promotion threads.

>> No.2796448

>>2796446
I dunno. There are a lot of threads filled with tumblr cringe, and I guess I don't want to be associated with that?

>> No.2796464

>>2774857
What are you a how to draw manga book author or something the other one is clearly better

>> No.2798928
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2798928

If that was my progress, I'd kill myself

>> No.2798936

>>2774856
Very nice

>> No.2799222

>>2796448
yes there's lots of SJW cringe on tumblr, but that's really only a subsection of it. Just ignore that shit. A lot of artists actually use it as a decent platform to blog their stuff. I find it useful as a place to archive some of your work and gain exposure if you don't do any other social media site.

>>2798928
the 2013 one looks the best style-wise

>> No.2799229

>>2798928
How the fuck does someone go from have a decent understanding of negative space and silhouette to not like that?

>> No.2799254

>>2798928
well, she did try to

>> No.2799284

>>2774856
Bad but not cringeworthy.

>> No.2799286

>>2784664
2.

Assuming you stil successfully express ideas, anybody that chooses 1 is a turbo pleb.

>> No.2799398

>>2798928
Aren't the arms in the 2014 one copy-pasted, and like everything in the 2015 one copy-pasted as well?

>> No.2799798

>>2796448
So many people are like this, this is the real cringe. Sorry dude.

>> No.2800387

>>2798928
Whyyyyy i loved the first one

This my biggest fucking fear

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>> No.2800625

>>2787249
fuck you for making me see this i thought this was gone from existence for good

>> No.2800659
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>>2795843
ha... ha hahaha... kill me...

>> No.2800671

>>2795843
That'/ actually pretty decent for three months of essentially starting from nothing if this was just a casual artist.
You see they attempted to gesture the face, but still doesn't understand anything. They probably only learned the lines on the circle trick casually browsing about. Still a start.

>> No.2800684

>>2783898
>fujoshi artist goes full shamefur display, commits honorable internet sudoku because FEMALES BRAIN

I think it is indeed a shame to fully copy a reference.

If you aren't capable of drawing something on your own and you use references as a straight copy source, you're basically admiting you're a shitty artist.

>> No.2800686

>>2800671
nigger it's one year and three months

>> No.2800708
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>like to look at this stuff to feel better
>deep down I know mine's wouldn't be much better

>> No.2800754

Thanks for the anxiety guys

>> No.2800808
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>>2800708
>Not using this to motivate yourself to get better

>> No.2800818

>>2800754

Most of the shitters posted in this thread are probably just amateurs who draw something like once a week and only shitty doodles. There is no way you would improve so little with something like an hour a day. I know because I was like them

>> No.2800821

>>2787249

Is this photoshopped...

>> No.2800872

>>2800708
Understandable but use that as motivation to get better instead of self-pity, anon.

>> No.2800940

>>2800684
Oh boy, here we go.

>> No.2801325

>>2774926
i seriously love the way she does her painting with monsters and shit.

>> No.2801333

>>2800708
I feel something similar, but i also kind of use it to help me get better and it sort of has

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>>2800659
If you look at who commented you won't be surprised why they're so amazed

>> No.2801767

>>2782534
>Anime is harmless they said.

>> No.2802159

>>2801764
Birds of a feather...

>> No.2802251

>>2798928
Holy shit, literally regressing every fucking year

>> No.2802273

>>2780520

Improvement is def there, you sound salty.

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>> No.2805190

>>2805079
I followed this chick for a bit, until I couldn't hold my contempt any longer. She's just another low effort, low energy artist based off of tumblr who stays in a nice comfort zone.

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not mine but i saved this to inspire me to pick up drawing again

>> No.2805261

>>2800872

>tfw when i always do both

>> No.2805349
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I feel like my time is running out and no matter what I do, I will slowly slip into the abyss

>> No.2805369

>>2782534
I'm more impressed he's kept his drawings from the 90's

>> No.2806031

>>2805190
It's working for her. She does storyboards or some shit for SU

>> No.2806090

>>2806031
>She does storyboards or some shit for SU
CLEARLY

>> No.2806133

>>2806090
Bunch of lazy cunts throwing away yet another decent story idea with their shitty hands

>> No.2806152

Funniest part is I know this 20 something girl who is legitimately mentally challenged (just relatively low IQ but she can still function in very simple jobs) who doodles cartoon characters for years on end with no teacher and she has a good basic grasp of construction, animation, good line-art, etc. She's probably better than most of /ic/.

I find her very inspiring for that reason.

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>>2806152
>>Probably better than most of /ic/.
I see that you haven't been on /ic/ for that long.

>> No.2806229

>>2805349
I wouldn't be so negative.
That is significantly better art thats being posted in this thread.
I do have to say I like something about the May 2016 drawing more than the newer one for some reason.
They're both pretty good but I think I just like the older one's style better.
I will say for both as well that there's something off about their forms, the dinosaur looks kinda wonky in both of them due to the shape.
I'm no pro but I'm not terrible at art so you can choose how to take this reply!

>> No.2806276

>>2806208
/ic/ is really bad. Most of tumblr is better then /ic/. All /ic/ can do is crude half finished figure drawings and moe anime heads.

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>>2774891
ayy i like this one. /ic/, can we keep him?

>> No.2807055

>>2805079
The old.png art is infinitely more appealing. Kind of like Yotam Perel's old stuff.

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>> No.2807364

>>2807059
hentai is honestly the best path to take for learning anatomy.

>> No.2807367

>>2807059
artist from #2?

>> No.2807382

>>2807364
Haha, that's a good joke. I'll save that one for later.

>> No.2807383

>>2807382
ty

>> No.2807389

>>2807059
>3 years
Don't treat it like it's something impressive. 3 years is a lot of time and yet he's still a subpar artist. Especially considering he did only pornshit, he didn't even manage to master anatomy

>> No.2807394

>>2807059
How did the top artist go from drawing shitty Nintendo porn to that?
How do I go from drawing worse than that to his 3 years art?

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>>2807394
>top artist
bruv that's modeseven

>> No.2807445

>>2807394
>>2807444
also forgot, that nintendo porn isn't his and >>2807444 is his work 3 years ago

>> No.2807454

>>2807059
Mode didn't draw like that 3 years ago, I know this because I've watched him for over 4. He has improved though.

>> No.2807497

>>2807367
incase

>> No.2807502

>>2805190
not everyone have the same artistic goals

>> No.2807519
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>>2768545
I'm still not great, but thinking back on how hard I worked on that first portrait compared to the last one makes me feel kinda good.

>> No.2807618

>>2807519
Dude, I don't want to be rude but your progress is almost inexistent. It's even worse considering you had 3 years. You should start being more serious about art if you want to achieve something. Read the sticky

>> No.2807636

>>2807519
oink oink

>> No.2807665

>>2807618
Thank you for the honesty. I really just draw when I feel like it as opposed to actually pushing myself to learn, as you could see I guess. I post in /beg/ and rarely ever get responses.

I've read the sticky and done some Loomis but I always start shit and never finish it so yeah, I guess the product shows.

All of those are studies from photos, my imagination progress would probably make you vomit.

>>2807636
Yeah the nose is fucked, went way too hard on my measurement lines. My dumbass fault for using a pen.

>> No.2807671

>>2807665
Don't directly jump into Loomis, start with keys to drawing. A basilar thing when drawing from reference photos is measuring and constructing.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AzDGO0LssEM this video gives you an idea of what I'm talking about

>> No.2807707

>>2807519
>>2807665

You kind of need to know what you're doing before you do it with pen, so I'd hold off on that for a while. You're having some basic problems with edges and values that really need to be solved if you don't want your stuff to look like basic beginner work. Just try to make an effort to do some real studies, maybe avoid human subjects for a bit, work through keys to drawing by Bert Dodson, and just do a ton of still life value studies. Work in masses of tone and avoid hard lines around the edges of things unless those actually exist in the subject. Keep lines to very light measurements for your lay-in. Be really patient with your lay-in to make sure you're drawing things exactly as they are, and that you're not cutting corners in favour of a symbol that kind of looks like what you're drawing but isn't really the real shape. If you need to spend hours and hours on something to get it right, put the time in. A lot of those 4-12+ hour efforts I made earlier on were the ones where the real progress was made, it's all attention to detail and patience. Just try that for a few months and I think you'll really start to 'get' some fundamental things that you're missing.

You don't want to carry on the way you've been going because you'll be spinning your wheels. Just keep your enthusiasm up and buckle down.

>> No.2807760

>>2807059
who is the bottom artist?

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>>2807671
Thank you, I know what construction is and have studied it a fair bit, but I don't really apply it as much as I should. I started with Fun With a Pencil, but I guess I'll come back to it later.

>>2807707
Thank you for this, it really is what I needed to hear. I've been hoping for a real critique like this for a long time, and I hope to apply it. Commitment scares me, but I'll try to start motivated.

Excuse the giant photo

>> No.2807811

>>2801764
<she/her

>> No.2807934

>>2769086
>>2782534
you gotta tell me who these guys are, I'm SO FRIGGING hyped to see their work in 2017!!

>> No.2807974

sageeee

>> No.2808606

>>2807389
Way to completely miss the point of the image, big boy

>> No.2808607

>>2807445
It was back when he was called nitrotitan

>> No.2808768

>>2807059
Who's the artist on the right

>> No.2808777

>>2772570
This is really the roadblock for young people drawing these days

Instead of learning how to draw, they download photoshit and only practice coloring in special effects, and their basic linework stays shit

>> No.2808779

>>2808606
4u

>> No.2809429

>>2802273
At least in 2013 she didnt draw the left foot as a right

>> No.2809690

I was laughing at this thread until I realized 2010 was 7 years ago and I literally haven't improved a single bit in that time. Just 3 more years and I could find my shitty meme comparisons being laughed at on a Taiwanese image board

>> No.2809717

>>2773343
oh boy

>> No.2809802

>>2780520
3 fucking years just to add shiny knees and cartoony eyes. what a waste

>> No.2809809

>>2807618
>It's even worse considering you had 3 years

Can you not maths? They did a year, year 1/2

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>> No.2809832

>>2784622
but doxxy IS a girl, at least biologically

>> No.2809843

>>2809832
Doxxy looks like Jon Tron iirc.

>> No.2809844

>>2809832

"She "sure has a manly as fuck voice then

>> No.2809849

>>2809844
In the earlier videos couple years ago you can tell it's a female voice that was manually lowered in Audacity. It wasn't a natural male voice. Doxy probably went on HRT because the voice changed and he sounds better now, and it doesn't take too long for testosterone to kick in (going from male to female is much harder).

Not that it makes him less of an artist, but your friend wasn't completely off when he said his favorite female artist was doxy.

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>>2807519
Mate considering no one else wants to say it, you are fucking shit at art. You've wasted a year an a half of your time if you were ever really trying during that time. What you need to do if you want to get good at this is relearn nearly everything. Your perspective is shit, you draw symbolically and you have no sense of light or value.

I'm not going to pussyfoot like those other anons patting you on the back for a job well done when you've clearly haven't payed attention to what ever you've been using to learn.

Do you want to see improvement or do you want your e-dick sucked off? Do yourself a favor and pick up a book, compare your current skills to active artists and strive to become one of them or fuck off to DA.

>> No.2810394

>>2809849

Lol sounds like some conspiracy 9/11 shit

>> No.2810395

>>2809832
Oh fuck if I recall there is an image of him drawing at a con. He had purple hair if I recall.

>> No.2810466

>>2774856
is that simon?

>> No.2810487

>>2769086

I have a feeling that I should laugh at this but it just fills me with fear and insecurity

>> No.2810514

>>2810388
Mate, I appreciate the honesty. I don't know where your getting all this about wanting my epeen sucked off though, I posted in hopes of getting shit on so I can improve. No one has patted me on the back for sure, so thanks, I would rather not be talked down to like a child getting his crayon scribbles put on the fridge.

I haven't dedicated time to actually learning and have just been fucking around I guess, I'm not very driven. Not an excuse, just the truth, and I know I'll never make it unless I rip my ass into routine. Thanks again.

>> No.2811723
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>>2768545
This is by a 17 year old. How to you manage to make so little progress in so much time at such an age? How is it even humanly possible?

>> No.2811802

>>2811723

shitty improvement, but improvement

not everyone is neet, has access to loomis, and torrents anon, quit being a prick

>> No.2811804

>>2811723
I was not much better at 17

>> No.2811831

>>2774856
Not the greatest for 10 years, but that's obvious improvement.

>> No.2811837

>>2808768
>not knowing Shad by now
Underage b&

>> No.2811842

>>2811723
Just link him the sticky. Tell him to do Keys. He'll get better.

>> No.2811843

>>2811804
Why not? It's easy to surpass that when you have tons of time in school to draw.

>> No.2811853

>>2811837
>mediocre
>into stupid meme fetishes
>seems to refuse to make genuine improvement
Is he ourguy?

>> No.2811855

>>2805197
bretty gud

>> No.2812057

>>2783893
If you want to trace, might as well use Daz Studio or DesignDoll and Marvelous Designer than getting caught

>> No.2812071

>>2768574
The left looks like a bad 90s cartoon

>> No.2812100

>>2807444
I wish mode did more of these environmental pieces,

>> No.2812699

>>2811723
What does their current art look like?

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>> No.2812885

>>2811843
I think the key factor is that wile they may have infinite time, they may have zero direction. At ic we all know about loomis and have tons of books on anatomy, figures, and so on. A teenager won't have any of that unless they have support from parents or school.

>> No.2812904

>>2812885
>A teenager won't have any of that unless they have support from parents or school.

Unless they are not a literal retard and have a bus pass and a library card, or even a phone with internet access.

>> No.2812930

>>2812904
You'd be surprised. In HS the kids that were maniac drawers just never considered getting external high level advice/help. I don't know why, but it's just not something they did.

>> No.2812933

>>2812930
Most of the 'artsy' kids at my HS never knew how to draw a single goddamn figure. But they could do 'cute' drawings of wolf.

>> No.2812954

>>2774857
maybe its "cuter" to you but objectively its shit and poorly drawn
chibi drawns are cuter than say van gough but objectively chibi is shit

>> No.2812969

>>2783964
now i see why most anime artists dont draw lips

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The fact that this artist got compliments for "improvement" astounds me.

>> No.2813256

>>2769086
his 2004 pixel art looks alright wtf

>> No.2813280

>>2809849
>he
>him

Pumping yourself full of hormones does not effect a sex change, you misguided child. I pity these people who fuck their bodies up so badly chasing a fad and then either have to double down on it when the realization starts kicking in or face the music and probably kill themselves.

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>>2813229
Fuck, I can't believe I lamenting the loss of animu, but that devolution into tumblr goblin is grotesque.

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>>2769086
He's still going.

>> No.2813307

>>2813229
Assuming it goes like:

1 2
3 4

And not in some weird other layout... It's just like the artist doesn't give a fuck anymore. They just don't care.

>> No.2813313

>>2813229
Such a waste, the first drawing was nice too

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2813338

i found a goldmine
the upper two are both from 2011
the lower two are from 2016
her whole account is just pure entertainment

>> No.2813343

I'd laugh at these people but I'm not any better than I was 7 years ago.

>> No.2813345

>>2813229
Riibrego is such a waste, she actually knows her color theory and has nice line work, but fuck if her style doesn't make me question art schools.

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this thread is making me lose my braincells and my time which i could've spent to git gud

>> No.2813843
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2813843

>>2768545
I think I've seen this posted here but, if not here we go.
She is still active on deviant art.

>> No.2813901

>>2813843
Isn't that the girl who refuses to listen to any critique?

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I keep telling this dude that he should ditch the anime and take on a more serious art style, to no avail. It's almost painful.

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>>2813229

>> No.2814387

Yall know about this ?
http://ben-the-looney.deviantart.com/gallery/

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2814494

>>2813229
>""""improvement""""

They had potential, but chose the ugly Tumblr route instead. What a shame.

>> No.2814563

>>2813901
Yes. She's so cheery outside of that for some reason as well.

>> No.2814727

>>2814494
This brought tears of anguish to my eyes

>> No.2814739

>>2814269
Their art isn't BAD just incredibly, painfully generic. If it keeps looking this way, the artist will never hope to stand out.