/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4950188
Line weight. Your lines are all pretty much the same thickness, change it up a bit. Don't make one line thicker in its entirety, that creates the same problem but from the opposite side. Usually when the line is something pointy (like a V shape) thickening it at the point or at the base and thinning out the opposite side can work. It's a bit tough to explain. Maybe a good look at pic related could help get the point across better.
If you think your sketch looked better than your lineart try following the sketch more closely instead of deviating too much from it. Generally you should avoid having open holes on an outside line like on her right boob. Inside is fine as long as the shape still comes across.