/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

this is a'baddon. i've posted him many times and have more recent drawings, but this one kinda captures his design best i guess. the clothing is a placeholder, because i don't know what he would actually wear, considering he is an outcast who hasn't developed a style or skills in anything social. what he has is strength, curiosity, and a few artifacts at his disposal.

>>5043664
i like its head shape, also cool pose.
>>5056766
favourite itt, i dunno what it is about character who control arms while having no / having their arms bound that gets me going, but this is super cool.
>>5059220
i like character designs with crosses involved in them so this is notable as really cool.
>>5059299
these fuckers are fucking great man.
>>5060944
cute character, looks like she needs a break though.
>>5063120
too slutty for my liking, but you're good at drawing.

anyhow here is my guy posted him before, but here is a'baddon - the main character in my overly ambitious potential webcomic / kinda novel thing I'm writing.

I know I'm /beg/ but what do you guys think of this fellow? What does he need to be cooler.

>>4679059
my main character

>>4626177
the main protag of the webcomic i want to make when i become good at drawing is a shark too.

used xenoblade 1 concepts for reference. i know im /beg/ but still felt like posting.