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>>4180032
It's a little distorted and lacking in form, and the shapes don't feel very designed. Her right eye in particular is noticeably smaller than her left, and it doesn't feel intentional because nothing else is quite as distorted. Even with cartoony styles, studying real faces can be useful.

I did a drawover that's not very good but it should convey the idea anyway.
To get to the final drawing, I had to deliberately simplify my shapes from the first drawover. I tried to do everything in as few strokes as possible. I wasn't aiming for your style because I can't draw that way, but I did pick *a* style and I stuck with it, that's the key to getting a design. And I'm applying whatever I do know about perspective and face anatomy. I'd recommend studying faces and thinking more about what you like and dislike in a face, maybe finding some artist interpretations you like. And just experiment.