/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

I'm so tired of seeing all this shitposting in my beloved stylization thread, so even though I don't know shit I will offer critique to the few artists who were brave enough to post here. It's sickening to see all this artwork being ignored while this guy who draws traced boobs gets all this vitriol

>>2282116
This is pretty cool if you were going for a different angle originally, but based on your post I think you were going for that exact image, in which case you should make the original image one of the layers, lower the opacity and set it over your drawing to check mistakes.

>>2282202
I can't really tell what the shape of the het is supposed to be, I'd say define the cap and the mouth a little more, otherwise cool stuff. Maybe next time have him doing some kind of action?

>>2282222
I'm worried about this person's feet, are they supposed to look like nubs? If not your foreshortening needs some work. Otherwise nice linework

>>2282227
I don't know much about landscape but to me the clouds need to be defined, more they are really clashing with the transparent guy, I'd say either make the guy more transparent or make the clouds inside him darker, I'd personally go with the latter

i call it "when souls collide"