/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>5129705
Hiya anon. I don't draw much better than you, but I noticed a few things.

I adjusted the height of his shoulder compared to his collar, and I changed the ellipse of the collar to be more curved, making it go higher in perspective. I also adjusted the position of the hand to exaggerate the perspective further. Lowering the hand in the back a bit also dramatizes the perspective more. (its up to you how much you want to lower it. Also, the foreshortening in the arm was a bit fucky so I laid out one possible solution on the right side. The perspective on some of his gear and gun are all also somewhat wonky.