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>>2876062
You have different convergence relationships all over the place. These are all features that relate on the mantis horizontally and need to go to a common vanishing point. Your horizon line(i.e. eye line) is currently not working for the above reason as well.

You seem like a smart guy, so you should stop making this beginner mistake as soon as possible, as it's crucial for developing intuition for where the horizon line is (you aren't placing it correctly at all). At this stage in your development, if you want to grind perspective, make everything exactly symmetrical. That is how it's done in those FZD drawings after all. Everything, including points of origin, where forms end; don't miss anything. Antennae symmetrical as well.