/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>5030575
the other guy did the hand already, so I didn't bother, because I don't think I can salvage it without redrawing it tbqhfam desu. anyway, i also did some warping/redrawing, mostly focused on the face. still isn't the most anime, but it's troublesome to do more without redrawing the whole thing (and as it is, I've already redrawn a lot).

hope this helps.

all warping done with mesh transform, mostly the default 4*4 points on CSP, but occasionally less or more, as was convenient. quick summary:

1- warped top of head down and eyes in
2- deleted hand, redrew jaw, approximately traced your hair, shifted mouth up/redrew, moved nose up
3- moved shoulders in. widened neck; anime really doesn't go for the funnel shape that much. tip of jaw was too pointy so i moved that in.
she's extremely cross-eyed in the one you drew, so i went with the direction of her left eye (looking at the viewer) and redrew the right eyeball. can't tell if those are brows or eyelid folds, but removed them anyway. shortened eyelid line of left eye. rounded out both.
4 - did some more mesh warping. moved mouth up slightly. slimmed shoulders. drew eyelids, brows, etc.
5- moved top of head down a little. other edits.

misc:
- the upper part of the head isn't necessarily too low. it'd be workable, since this is anime. however, because you've fucked up the eye sizing and the head shape, it looks wrong.
- the mouth IS too low. not a matter of taste, it just is.

ganbatte