/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>6398636
I’d say try asking in the next /salt/ thread. I have a few on dicks and one or two on tits myself but I don’t wanna shit up the thread with them

>>4507030
oh i remember your work, but was too tired to comment

things are generally looking okay except for her breasts

unless she has a hefty push up bra her breasts won't be floating like that, they'll lay flat on her ribcage

>>4484181
Is this what you want?

>>4254266
>>4255117
also here's something to help you, found it in my stash

>>3926678
make it line up with the armpit

>>3775514
and this

>>3374978

>>3195682
Tumblr probably complained about larger than life boobs so she had to make disparaging remarks about them.
She's had to delete posts because of people getting offended and attacking her before.

>>2970099
Titties too high, move them down a bit.

Hips are too circular, they're a bit more angular with a dip in the middle.

Ribs are way too tiny, this ties into what the other Anon was saying about not having bendy bones.

The stomach looks like you added squigglies without much thought, reference some muscle anatomy (in the future, for now, listen to >>2970118, run before you jump.)

>>2906032
Look here: >>2889481
And I've got a few of them too.

>>2821975
*Bosoms.

>>2311643
Last one I have