/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

I tried ctrl+paint exercies to smooth out the edges for an apple on the left corner the block version, on the left my attempt on the right ctrl+paint finished version
In the vid he used flat hard brush to go along the form.
But i wanted to limit and challange myself and use round hard brush, with some texture and spacing with low flow when smoothing edges.
The only problem i had is the small values on the edges of the apple which i would assume are the reflected light, i had so much trouble with them, i will definitely redo it again if you guys think there is something wrong with it
How did i do ? i appreciate any help .
Thanks in advance ~