/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3016280

Thank you for the feedback, I rushed through this one because I just wasn't feeling it and want to reroll. Also ah, I was trying to emulate a style with the shoulder and I think I estimated incorrectly. I'll just nix it when I go over it.

As for the chicken-scratch issue, it's kind of long-running and I hate it. It's a combination of me just unable to get the smooth motion right because I have absolutely no idea how to position my body/elbow/tablet, and some actual hardware nonsense with the tablet, where precise lines end up getting that jagged line thing happening.

What I end up doing to compensate is draw rough lines for the sketch and then clean them up with the erase tool as best as I can and have my fingers on the undo key to practice smooth lines and erase them immediately when they don't hit the right spot. I know it's forming bad habits but, ultimately, I have absolutely no idea what to do to fix it. It'll end up becoming a long-term issue because no matter my grasp of style/anatomy/composition, if I can't execute, all viewers will notice is the chicken scratch.

Others have told me it's just a time and practice issue and it'll go away on its own, but I dunno. I'd love to hear other thoughts.