/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3997640
Sexy stuff Anon, I would advise you to pay attention on overusing the rim light. Some of your rim lights do not makes sense like how are they not blocked by the torso and the boobs and how are they shown from a different angle(?) on the right nipple's bottom an top. I also would put less light on her belly area because ambient occlusion is a thing and it should be way under the boobs. (Although I absolutely hate that huge black mole on the boob, and these "beauty marks"in general, that is my personal taste) Since the floot is nothing but a while background I would add a bit of reflected light on the stockings, the stocking should be just as reflective a the skin if not more

Here is my shitty attempt to overpaint I added a bit bigger shoulder and torso area too but not sure if that is better pr worse
Please never stop!