/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Can I get one based on thumbnails of the last few ones i've kept saved?


>>6495442
Not really anything to work with here, so just low /beg/. Draw something to finished because there's not much to say about a quick sketch and lineart wise quite frankly there is no line art, just scratches.
>>6495457
Higher /beg/ I guess, i like the coloring choices but the figures really need more variation, its all very straight forward basically profile views and lacks anything interesting. Especially when you see the same face 4 times in 1 page it really makes it feel too bland even with the pretty interesting coloring.
>>6495589
more curve to the box, you just increased the side of his hips instead of bending his back more. Its no longer a box, its a trap.