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This is a very cute character, and you have absolutely nailed the facial expression. That's a massive accomplishment already.

Something I could see to work on, I think (as someone far lesser in skill to yourself), is that her right (our left) shoulder looks a little off. I think it should be a little closer in to her body.

I gave it a (crappy) go, at bringing it in and shrinking it a little, so you can sort of visualize a little better. Of course, I could be way off base about this, but I feel like it might be more on the right track.

Also, like the other guy said, your feet are passable, but a little study on them wouldn't hurt. The toe nail alignment is off for some, and you can really push how a toe might interact with the ground, really pushing in and maybe flattening a little.

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