/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

I was only going to copy a cowgirl pose from a certain porn doujin to understand what makes it so erotic... and somehow it evolved into this when I came to her pelvis. Experimenting with an ink brush proved to be quite fun.

And since I didn't draw any dynamic poses for a while, I think I should probably ask how the sketch (if you can still call that a sketch) looks to you and how does it read (what impression it gives you).