/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

ended up getting my tablet out i guess. did a rough paintover.

>>5035754
1- yours
2- after mesh transform, mostly focused on moving the structure of the face and the eyes into place.
3- rough paintover

you seriously, seriously need to construct your heads. find a head construction method from some artist you like, or some instructional manual, or look at anime and try to remember what it looks like and then try to draw it from memory with basic ball and cross construction. but construct your heads.

try to understand what the shadows are actually supposed to mean, instead of maybe just copying a colouring style from some artist you like. same goes for clothing folds. the shadows you've done indicate some seriously misshapen boobs, and generally make little sense.

pick a construction method for the torso and use it. you can draw boobs that are bigger than the rib cage; this is anime. however, you still have to indicate that said ribcage exists. the lines you've done indicate that her upper arm basically runs straight into her tit. the way you've drawn things right now, if you draw some slightly curved lines down the middle of her clavicles and along her ribcage (purple lines), you can see that she basically has no rib cage to speak of on her right side (our left). it also doesn't align at all with the cleavage or the boobs. in addition, way too much of the far arm and shoulder are visible, to the point where the far shoulder is longer than the close one.
see attached comments and image.