/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4197586
Your eye and nose areas are alright. However once we look at the rest of the head sadly it falls apart. Please study the rest of the building blocks of the face and head, forehead, ears, chin, neck and so on. Ears are pet peeve of mine as so many artists neglect or hide them (Yeah I am looking at animes covering the ears with hair all the time) When ears are one of the core building blocks of the head, they are just as important as hair and eyes to know.

Another advice I can give is to draw the entire head first before adding the individual parts like eyes, that way you will be able to build the whole head before getting into the details.

Side note, having an eyepatch on to cover one eye is something that judgemental individuals can interpret as you covering it because you found that drawing the second eye and make it match the first one to be too difficult so you just hid it instead. But I'll give you the benefit of the doubt that you had a different goal. Remember, drawing the building blocks of the face individually in a vacuum is way easier because they have do not have to fit with every other part from rest of the face/head but if you do need to draw the whole head then everything must fit together or else it won't look right.