/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3146199
This is nice. You could try giving the audience a few frames more time to absorb the key poses by easing in and out of the poses slower. Would help to give some of the moves more floaty feeling, it's just slightly erratic at this moment which I understand is kind of the point, how he's "all over the place" but you still want to give the audience moments of rest.

I tried something but I think it could be pushed even further