/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4449687
you should try to think in 3D and about the underlying anatomy as much as possible, a lot of the lines here feel loose and with little thought put into them.
A lot of questions immediately pop out, such as:

- what is the obi wrapping around? if we drew a line through showing the backside of the obi, it should be wrapping around the waist like a cylinder. is it?
- where are her shoulders? we should be able to see their volume through her sleeve, and on how the frills are resting on them
- what volume do the frills have? how are they moving in 3d space? where are they beginning and where are they ending?

don't get lazy. continue to ask yourself these questions as you decide where and how you want to place your lines.