/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4122382
you have bigger problems, your whole face/head proportions are fucked up. you are not following your own proportions , i know the mouth is supposed to be heavily stylized but even then you still have to make it follow your own proportions by making the middle of the lower lips so pronunced makes it more glaring the distance between the nose and mouth like she has the mouth too deep in her face or the chin is too upward, and the neck should be further inside

you literally need to think in 3D