/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>5155897
You're making your ribcages too large. It's good that you're showing the roundness of the ribcage in the form of the torso but try to contain it a bit more. Make the ribcage more narrow and emphasize the roundness with the serratus, lats, etc. higher up on the torso instead.
It's a bit rough since I've been studying male torsos this week as well, but here's a little thing I whipped up to show what I mean. The ribcage is an important form on the body and you can really feel its shape with the right poses but a lot of the masculine contours you want to go for when drawing dudes relies heavily on all the "meat" stacked on top of the ribcage.
Though maybe your models actually just look like that. Hah.

You're on the right track though.