/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4433311
beg redline for a beg thread.

The hair lacks definite shapes and structure, looking like a mop instead. Try to break it down into shapes instead of leaving it an amorphous blob.

Your hair should also have a defined gesture. In yours you have limp braids that tell the viewer nothing about the direction of energy.

Also learn how to draw hands, unlike me. I changed the arm positions to look more deliberate and to improve the silhouette. Keep it up, touhouchad.