/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

bit of weirdness with the pose and connection but it's looking kinda fun

>>4214916
You're not feeling the forms, the body and the cloth which wraps around it
>>4217041
shading on the dude looks weird but the girls and pig look great
>>4216412
looks like he's made of smoke, a bit creepy (but if that isn't what you're going for a harder brush would help)
>>4216273
weird brushes but it reads really well in thumbnail, keep going
>>4215878
really cool aesthetic, anon. Fangi a best