/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4474907
"sketch"
>>4474947
don't waste your time your anatomy is fine. Are you able to draw heads from lower / weirder angles? Can you draw figures from top down angles? I think the ability to push the head forward in space will help you.

Individually you did each part quite well, but as a whole it doesn't flow, that's a problem of posing. Try to do a really nice looking pose next time.

That's all you have to do really, just try do a really nice pose, but I want to type more so I will.
You could try getting a strong image for a certain pose; for example, a girl stretching her arms up, legs splayed out kneel on the floor. You probably have some idea of what this looks like already. It's a lot easier to to draw cute if you can imagine something that would look really cute.

Totally unplanned drawings aren't bad per say (it's how I draw usually), but they can often lead to static poses. It really helps to have an idea, some might say inspiration, something you can really imagine to try and draw.

If you have the choice between a pose you know and a pose you're not sure about, just do the pose you know how to do - especially when you aren't working from imagination. I admit I actually kinda just broke the rule because me trying to do what I imagined led me to have to lift arms up, and I'm not 100% sure how to lift arms like this, however when you have a strong image, it puts you in the best position to draw things you aren't quite sure how to do. This is why people are able to draw so many different angles yet do it well - they aren't doing unplanned generic work, they are working from imagination and are just doing the things they are fairly confident they can do - probably something they've seen somewhere. That, and that through practice they have already learned most general angles anyways, so it's not entirely uncertain with each part they are drawing.

anyways tl;dr, just try to do a really cute pose, and you'll do a cute one. That's it.