/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4209017
Pump up the colors, most of it looks very muddy, make the green for the grass especially juicy green, do the same for the rest
Exaggeration is very important, no only in color but in figures, emotions, etc.
As for perspective, going along with exaggeration, and line of action, the uh other person, the one I assume has blue hair, should be more over to where the red thing I put is
The extra of the canvas beyond the red thing should be cut off, unless you want to make another panel and make this a two panel comic, Mayne a close up of the blue haired chicks face
This is a really shitty edit because I'm on mobile right now, but you get the just I hope

And also, the most obvious, clean up your lines