/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4106442
You took so many liberties that it's difficult for me to crit, being beg tier myself. To me the posing feels kinda stiff and weightless. The ball is not pushing against her torso at all, and you've straightened out all curves and dulled the dynamics in the ref (the way the left arm pushes away from the torso, the positioning of the legs). You've basically changed the pose completely and I can't say I dig it. Again though, it's so stylized and different from the ref that it's tough to judge.

Cool ref though, gave it a quick shot myself. I think I did fairly decently on the body (correct me if I'm wrong), but how do I draw faces that, /ic/?