/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3678480

Your proportions are pretty good. Eyes are little too high tho - they always should fall middle of the head. You should learn to construct all features too. See the image attached, there are cues what to study. Obviously you don't need to buy plaster casts or asaro head (it's really expensive +$100 usd) - of course studying the real thing is always best, but you can find plenty of images and even 3D models online. Really check asaro head - it's that good.

When constructing head / facial features you need to define planes really good. Which planes are facing towards the light source, which ones are inclined away from it, and which ones are facing completely away from it (three value system). You will smooth the transitions out at the render stage.

I'll post image below step by step feature constructions (three quarters) but you can find plenty of videos about the subject online. Always do the lay in of features lightly, and accent corners and pinches (line weight) to get really solid 3D look before applying any value!