/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3025356
i'm not very good but i gave it a shot

honestly, your attempt wasn't that bad, but it's clear you aren't too great with proportions or perspective yet. good idea to try to find reference photos next time for help on this, and always think in 3d forms

i lassooed and rotated some stuff around to match things more and it already looks heaps better

your value range is incredibly narrow- you should try to push this
your lighting scheme -seems- to suggest directional lighting but there aren't any highlights or darker shadow regions to really describe form

when choosing colours you'll wanna try to play with colour temperatures. warm lighting + cool shadows or vv.
also skin has a lot of different colours and shit
i didn't really do this well so sorry about that.
for all lighting and colour needs http://www.huevaluechroma.com/index.php is really good but a hefty read, expect to spend a few months digesting this info

specifically on the eye thing though, >>3025431
has the right idea, eyes are fundamentally just inset spheres, and are lit as such. also the whites of your eyes are closer to the value of skin than you'd expect so keep that in mind

i hope my rambling helped mang