/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2832130
>>2832150
>>2832025

His puppies are not cute. They are very awkward and disgusting. Looking at them make me feel physically uneasy.

The character designs do not have any appeal at all.

Why is Eva's front legs so much longer than her backwards. Why is she always leaning to one side looking like she's going to fall over?

Why is wall-e facing the viewer dead on sos he looks flat, and you can never see the rest of his form? Oh because he can't draw him from other angles. Also Wall-E appears to have 3 different heads he can switch to with different cranium sizes, snouts, eyeshapes, etc. Or did wall-e just get 2 different dogs to help him look for the guns?

Story-wise, it's terrible too. Is that really supposed to be a joke? "poly-gun", seriously? Also Wall-E is apparently to stupid to know what a gangster is, but he knows what polygons are.

And the poses are just terrible.

It's not even fun either. Isn't this supposed to be a cartoon? How about some funny dog poses, jumping around, or doing some kind of fantastic silly actions? No, just have the two dogs just standing next to each other, or crappy portrait views. Through in an awkward 3/4 "action pose" looking down a sewer. I mean c'mon the dogs are just standing around in nearly every panel. C'mon they're dogs, not lawn ornaments. Give them a little life. One of the great things about cartoons is that you can draw things that aren't present in reality, and exaggerate/emphasize reality at will. Knowing this, Proko decided make the dogs stand awkwardly in every shot. What a waste, if he's trying to just do it for fun, how about put a little fun into the drawing?

Ok I'll say something nice now. I like the colors he used.