/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2658884
Well then you're at step 2 already! Don't give up now. Practice more diligently and narrow down the exact point/line where it goes wrong, and why. Be very slow and conscious about it. Every line must have a reason for being.

Don't get too frustrated or intent upon it though - if it still doesn't work or improve after several times, let it rest and go do something else (not necessarily drawing) for a while (ranging from a few hours to a day or so). Sometimes the brain needs time for things to click; and frustration only agitates/distracts - no one ever made a great work while gnawing his pencil to bits.