/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4200315
Here is a quick paintover, I hope some of this is helpful.
>she is standing on a ship in open sea in a very sunny weather
I feel if you have a specific setting in mind and aren't just drawing a pin-up on a blank bg it helps a lot to color in the bg first, as it helps you coordinate your colors more easily.
Other than that, the biggest thing that stands out to me is that you use the same hue for all of your shading, which makes the colors less lively.