/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4113424
cont.

So if I had to "remake" Tifa, here's how I'd do it. Excuse the /beg/ level drawing but I am /beg/ level so I can't help it.

I'd keep the gentle face and shorten the ridiculously long hair a bit, as well as untie it.
The tank top would be gone, going for a short-sleeved opened shirt over sport bra, while keeping the XXL boobs. Keep the midriff exposed if possible.

The skirt is impractical for kicking, so I'd give her a black denim pants. With one leg expsed for fanservice and to keep her design asymmetrical. Of course, ranger boots to deliver kicks.

When she'sbintroduced she's supposed to be bartending, hence why I gave her the shirt. with that outfit she's supposed to be handling drinks, so biker halfgloves, to keep her finger open to manipulate glasses.
Elbow and knees pads are pretty much the only place left to offer design opportunities so that's where I'd put metalic parts as protection.

And that's pretty much it, but she looks more like a biker girl now, I missed something at some point...