/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

ok so, its GOOD but what i dont like about it personally, first of all i see a lot of proportion x perspective problems. its easy to get things anatomically correct front on but action sequences, especially exaggerated comic poses, need to be on point with this. Its a big part of how the feel and movement etc etc is translated to the reader. Another thing, it looks like fucking ben 10. Now if thats what youre going for go for it dude, otherwise do some face anatomy structure, you can be cartoony while not being a nickelodeon ripoff. Personally i would suggest studying some takehiko inoue, make your face structure more interesting.

This is based off a Vagabond cover. Ive been doing lineart and sketches for like since i was 2, but i only recently picked up color mediums. I think this is around my 10th panting, how much does it look worth?

>>4083377
damn son. good shit. the axe is a e s t h e t i c a s f u c k