/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3961767
Your'e joking right
Have you seen human skin color?
Your girl looks like she's made of porcelain
Your'e also advising against textured brush cause look muddy yet you go willy nilly with the airbrush and make the girl look like she's bathed in mud
Regardless of color though your first priority in a painting should be to define the shadows right first and in well enough contrast to carry the piece.
The midsection is the only one that's even close to that. everything else is way too flat. This especially hurts the tits, pussy, face, and legs.
You should also not use stylization that you don't understand. If you can't draw nipples, pussy, and legs in a way that fits anime then you don't understand the style in the first place. you tossed a shadow on the nose like the good ol japs but what's it gonna do if you are just gonna ignore the hair casting shadow?