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>>4696270
overall very nice. You have a lot of wacky proportions, but I think those were intentional. The only criticism I have is that you seem to be very shape oriented when you draw. As a result, many of the contour lines of the bandages around her limbs don't work. Remember there's always always always perspective when you draw, even when drawing characters. Know where you eye level is, and draw the rest of the figure accordingly. Everything is ALWAYS overlapping something, especially when you see the figure as a series of disks stacked on top of each other.

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>>4326541
You would need 4point. The head could be larger if the figure was oriented towards the viewer, but it's certainly not in this set up. You likely feel it needs to be larger because you're merely following the bottom point, but its use ends at the horizon; it can only describe planes below the viewer, not above. The closest point to the viewer would be around the chest , not the head. Try shrinking the head and neck and how that looks to you.

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