/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3686101
>>3686127
the bent forward head gives the impression that he/she is embarrassed or shy or something. This feels like a bit contradicting of someone who lives from evading the law. I would make him/her more cocky and confident that holds the head high to show the confidence.

The pose pushes to the left with the hand on the hip so I shifted his weight on the left side leg to balance it out and make him look stand more casually.

Also I changed the hand a bit, this is how I would balance something on my finger if my theory is connect and he is balancing a knife on it. If not then just go with what you originally had.