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>>6497966
Line thickness is everywhere. There's no thought to it.
Anatomy needs massive improvement. Flug's abdomen has no depth to it. Just because it's a cartoon doesn't mean it has no form. Heed's anatomy as well. The muscles/forms are slapped on without an idea how they actually are.
There's a lot of things that make it beg. And describing them all wouldn't help you.
But something new cartoonists forget is that they need to know anatomy and how that anatomy wraps around the form.
I say this since I draw fanart of this show a lot. Keep it up though.