/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3471359
im ingraining the rules of construction and expanding my visual library.

>>3470038
i said no such thing

>>3470021
like the iris and hair? yeah i see what you mean.

so i need need real critiques with these. im pretty sure theres so issues with the construction on the face but i havent actually studied this angle much to begin with so im having a hard time telling what, if any. as for the figure, that based off the panel below. my intent is for the blade to be pointed somewhat towards the viewer with the far elbow being extended straight out and the closer elbow arm being straight up and down if that makes sense. NOT swung like a baseball bat, but like a foreward thrust with the hilt being more horizontal