/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>4890898
it looks solid overall
i think you could get away with less value range on the forms shadows on her skin, but it's a personal taste. The only part that bothers me is her left leg/hip area, I don't see a reason for that deep shadow with such a hard edge on the connection with the pelvis. Maybe it's a cast shadow from her left arm (?) but it doesn't read like that, so i'd get some refference and also try to be more aware about the form planes in that particular region

also the gesture is pretty good